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An unnamed convenience store worker is given the store's security tapes by his boss and told to watch them to determine if his co-worker [[EvilLaugh Jeremy]] is stealing gallons of oil. After seeing things start to repeat themselves and finding that Jeremy doesn't show up to work the next day he and his boss make plans to call the police...again and again and [[GroundhogDayLoop again.]] And things only get worse from there.
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An unnamed convenience store worker is given the store's security tapes by his boss and told to watch them to determine if his co-worker [[EvilLaugh Jeremy]] is stealing gallons of motor oil. After seeing things start to repeat themselves and finding that Jeremy doesn't show up to work the next day he and his boss make plans to call the police...again and again and [[GroundhogDayLoop again.]] And things only get worse from there.
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* MundaneUtility: Considering the vast powers to control time and space he possesses, its kinda anticlimactic that Jeremy uses his abilities to just steal a few gallons of oil from the store.
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* MundaneUtility: Considering the vast powers to control time and space he possesses, its kinda anticlimactic that Jeremy uses his abilities to just control of time and space to... steal a few gallons of oil from the store.motor oil.
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-->[[spoiler:I have some errands to run today, and then I have to go in to work to [[HereWeGoAgain pick up some tapes.]] My boss and I think this new guy [[GroundhogDayLoop Jeremy (he's a complete creep)]] is stealing motor oil and I have to watch the security footage to see if I can catch him doing it.]]
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-->"Oh Christ, [[spoiler:we've got another one on our hands]]."
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* HereWeGoAgain: The story ends with the protagonist complaining about a weird new coworker named Jeremy, meaning that he has succeeded in trapping the protagonist in a time loop. [[FridgeHorror Then you wonder how many times he's done this to him...]]
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* HereWeGoAgain: The story ends with the protagonist complaining about a [[spoiler:a weird new coworker named Jeremy, meaning that he has succeeded in trapping the protagonist in a time loop. [[FridgeHorror Then you wonder how many times he's done this to him...]]]]]]
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** [[spoiler: After the narrator explains the situation to the FBI agents interviewing him, one of them says, "Oh Christ, we've got another one on our hands."]]
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** [[spoiler: After the narrator explains the situation to the FBI agents interviewing him, one of them says, "Oh Christ, we've got another one on our hands."]]"]]
** The note the story ends on?
-->[[spoiler:I have some errands to run today, and then I have to go in to work to [[HereWeGoAgain pick up some tapes.]] My boss and I think this new guy [[GroundhogDayLoop Jeremy (he's a complete creep)]] is stealing motor oil and I have to watch the security footage to see if I can catch him doing it.]]
** The note the story ends on?
-->[[spoiler:I have some errands to run today, and then I have to go in to work to [[HereWeGoAgain pick up some tapes.]] My boss and I think this new guy [[GroundhogDayLoop Jeremy (he's a complete creep)]] is stealing motor oil and I have to watch the security footage to see if I can catch him doing it.]]
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* {{Anticlimax}}: Considering the vast powers to control time and space he possesses, its kinda anticlimactic that Jeremy uses his abilities to just steal a few gallons of oil from the store.
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* TimeStandsStill: Happened to everyone except for the narrator, who wondered about the gas station before heading home. When he was halfway home time started back up again.
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* TimeStandsStill: Happened to everyone except for the narrator, who wondered about the gas station before heading home. When he was halfway home home, time started back up again.
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* WhamLine: [[spoiler: After the narrator explains the situation to the FBI agents interviewing him, one of them says, "Oh Christ, we've got another one on our hands."]]
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** "No sign of Jeremy. Tried calling him, but his phone has been disconnected. We're calling the police." Or rather, more to the point, the fact that it begins to ''repeat''.
** [[spoiler: After the narrator explains the situation to the FBI agents interviewing him, one of them says, "Oh Christ, we've got another one on our hands."]]
** "No sign of Jeremy. Tried calling him, but his phone has been disconnected. We're calling the police." Or rather, more to the point, the fact that it begins to ''repeat''.
** [[spoiler: After the narrator explains the situation to the FBI agents interviewing him, one of them says, "Oh Christ, we've got another one on our hands."]]
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* SlasherSmile: Jeremy gives a pretty unsettling one when he realizes he's being filled by the security camera.
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* SlasherSmile: Jeremy gives a pretty unsettling one when he realizes he's being filled filmed by the security camera.
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* UselessSecurityCamera: Considering that Jeremy is a TimeMaster anything involving him and security cameras becomes this.
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* UselessSecurityCamera: Considering that Jeremy is a TimeMaster TimeMaster, anything involving him and security cameras becomes this.
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* AmbiguouslyHuman: He certainly ''looks'' human, but his godlike power over time itself makes one wonder about [[spoiler:Jeremy]]. Not helped at all by what the FBI has to say about him...
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* AmbiguouslyHuman: He certainly ''looks'' human, but his godlike power over time itself makes one wonder about [[spoiler:Jeremy]].Jeremy. Not helped at all by what the FBI has to say about him...
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* {{Anticlimax}}: Considering the vast powers to control time and space he possesses, its kinda anticlimactic that [[spoiler: Jeremy]] uses his abilities to just steal a few gallons of oil from the store.
* BigBad: [[spoiler:Jeremy]] is the story's antagonist and the reason the protagonist ends up in a GroundhogDayLoop.
* BigBad: [[spoiler:Jeremy]] is the story's antagonist and the reason the protagonist ends up in a GroundhogDayLoop.
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* {{Anticlimax}}: Considering the vast powers to control time and space he possesses, its kinda anticlimactic that [[spoiler: Jeremy]] Jeremy uses his abilities to just steal a few gallons of oil from the store.
* BigBad:[[spoiler:Jeremy]] Jeremy is the story's antagonist and the reason the protagonist ends up in a GroundhogDayLoop.
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* HereWeGoAgain: The story ends with the protagonist complaining about a weird new coworker named Jeremy, meaning that he has succeeded in trapping the protagonist in a time loop. [[FridgeHorror Then you wonder how many times he's done this to him...]]
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* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler:Jeremy]] is implied to have murdered his family by setting their house on fire.
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* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler:Jeremy]] Jeremy is implied to have murdered his family by setting their house on fire.
* SlasherSmile: Jeremy gives a pretty unsettling one when he realizes he's being filled by the security camera.
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* SlasherSmile: Jeremy gives a pretty unsettling one when he realizes he's being filled by the security camera.
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* UselessSecurityCamera: Considering that [[spoiler: Jeremy]] Jeremy is a TimeMaster anything involving him and security cameras becomes this.
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You can read it [[https://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/u0ymh/the_strangest_security_tape_ive_ever_seen/ here]] or
listen to a narration of it [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wMPt7kCNAuc here]].
listen to a narration of it [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wMPt7kCNAuc here]].
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You can read it [[https://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/u0ymh/the_strangest_security_tape_ive_ever_seen/ here]] or
or listen to a narration of it [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wMPt7kCNAuc here]].
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You can listen to a narration of it [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wMPt7kCNAuc here]].
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You can read it [[https://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/u0ymh/the_strangest_security_tape_ive_ever_seen/ here]] or
listen to a narration of it [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wMPt7kCNAuc here]].
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"The Strangest Security Tape I've Ever Seen" is a {{Creepypasta}} written by [[{{Website/Reddit redditor]] ''powerhawkmash'', originally posted to the Nosleep subreddit in May 2012.
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"The Strangest Security Tape I've Ever Seen" is a {{Creepypasta}} written by [[{{Website/Reddit [[{{Website/Reddit}} redditor]] ''powerhawkmash'', originally posted to the Nosleep subreddit in May 2012.
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"The Strangest Security Tape I've Ever Seen" is a {{Creepypasta}} by powerhawkmash about a convenience store worker who's given some tapes to watch and determine if his co-worker [[EvilLaugh Jeremy]] is stealing from the store. After seeing things start to repeat themselves and finding that Jeremy doesn't show up to work the next day he and his boss make plans to call the police...again and again and [[GroundhogDayLoop again.]] And things only get worse from there.
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"The Strangest Security Tape I've Ever Seen" is a {{Creepypasta}} written by powerhawkmash about a [[{{Website/Reddit redditor]] ''powerhawkmash'', originally posted to the Nosleep subreddit in May 2012.
An unnamed convenience store workerwho's is given some the store's security tapes by his boss and told to watch and them to determine if his co-worker [[EvilLaugh Jeremy]] is stealing from the store.gallons of oil. After seeing things start to repeat themselves and finding that Jeremy doesn't show up to work the next day he and his boss make plans to call the police...again and again and [[GroundhogDayLoop again.]] And things only get worse from there.
An unnamed convenience store worker
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* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler:Jeremy]] is implied to have murdered his family by setting their house on fire.
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* AmbiguouslyHuman: He certainly ''looks'' human, but his godlike power over time itself makes one wonder about [[spoiler:Jeremy]]. Not helped at all by what the FBI has to say about him...
-->"Oh Christ, [[spoiler:we've got another one on our hands]]."
-->"Oh Christ, [[spoiler:we've got another one on our hands]]."
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* OhNoNotAgain: [[spoiler:The response from one of the FBI agents the narrator is interviewed by, implying that the feds have dealt with someone (or some''thing'') like Jeremy before]].
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* BigBad: [[spoiler:Jeremy]] is the story's antagonist and the reason the protagonist ends up in a GroundhogDayLoop.
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* UselessSecurityCamera: Considering that [[spoiler: Jeremy]] is a TimeMaster anything involving him and security cameras becomes this.
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* UselessSecurityCamera: Considering that [[spoiler: Jeremy]] is a TimeMaster anything involving him and security cameras becomes this.this.
* WhamLine: [[spoiler: After the narrator explains the situation to the FBI agents interviewing him, one of them says, "Oh Christ, we've got another one on our hands."]]
* WhamLine: [[spoiler: After the narrator explains the situation to the FBI agents interviewing him, one of them says, "Oh Christ, we've got another one on our hands."]]
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"The Strangest Security Tape I've Ever Seen" is a {{Creepypasta}} by powerhawkmash about a convenience store worker who's given some tapes to watch and determine if his co-worker [[TheQuietOne Jeremy]] is stealing from the store. After seeing things start to repeat themselves and finding that Jeremy doesn't show up to work the next day he and his boss make plans to call the police...again and again and [[GroundhogDayLoop again.]] And things only get worse from there.
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"The Strangest Security Tape I've Ever Seen" is a {{Creepypasta}} by powerhawkmash about a convenience store worker who's given some tapes to watch and determine if his co-worker [[TheQuietOne [[EvilLaugh Jeremy]] is stealing from the store. After seeing things start to repeat themselves and finding that Jeremy doesn't show up to work the next day he and his boss make plans to call the police...again and again and [[GroundhogDayLoop again.]] And things only get worse from there.
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"The Strangest Security Tape I've Ever Seen" is a {{Creepypasta}} by powerhawkmash about a convenience store worker who's given some tapes to watch and determine if his co-worker Jeremy is stealing from the store. After seeing things start to repeat themselves and finding that Jeremy doesn't show up to work the next day he and his boss make plans to call the police...again and again and [[GroundhogDayLoop again.]] And things only get worse from there.
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"The Strangest Security Tape I've Ever Seen" is a {{Creepypasta}} by powerhawkmash about a convenience store worker who's given some tapes to watch and determine if his co-worker Jeremy [[TheQuietOne Jeremy]] is stealing from the store. After seeing things start to repeat themselves and finding that Jeremy doesn't show up to work the next day he and his boss make plans to call the police...again and again and [[GroundhogDayLoop again.]] And things only get worse from there.
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"The Strangest Security Tape I've Ever Seen" is a {{Creepypasta}} by powerhawkmash about a convenience store worker who's given some tapes to watch and determine if his co-worker Jeremy is stealing from the store. After seeing things start to repeat themselves and finding that Jeremy doesn't show up to work the next day he and his boss make plans to call the police...again and again and [[GroundhogDayLoop again.]] And things only get worse from there.
You can listen to a narration of it [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wMPt7kCNAuc here]].
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!!This story provides examples of:
* CaughtOnTape: The narrator's boss gives him the surveillance tapes in hopes that he'll catch Jeremy stealing. Instead he sees...[[SlasherSmile something entirely different.]]
* FirstPersonPerspective:
* GroundhogDayLoop: The narrator gets stuck in a few of these throughout the story.
* PoliceAreUseless: The police seem to be more concerned with the stolen goods than Jeremy himself.
* TimeMaster: [[spoiler:Jeremy]]
* TimeStandsStill: Happened to everyone except for the narrator, who wondered about the gas station before heading home. When he was halfway home time started back up again.
* UselessSecurityCamera: Considering that [[spoiler: Jeremy]] is a TimeMaster anything involving him and security cameras becomes this.
You can listen to a narration of it [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wMPt7kCNAuc here]].
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!!This story provides examples of:
* CaughtOnTape: The narrator's boss gives him the surveillance tapes in hopes that he'll catch Jeremy stealing. Instead he sees...[[SlasherSmile something entirely different.]]
* FirstPersonPerspective:
* GroundhogDayLoop: The narrator gets stuck in a few of these throughout the story.
* PoliceAreUseless: The police seem to be more concerned with the stolen goods than Jeremy himself.
* TimeMaster: [[spoiler:Jeremy]]
* TimeStandsStill: Happened to everyone except for the narrator, who wondered about the gas station before heading home. When he was halfway home time started back up again.
* UselessSecurityCamera: Considering that [[spoiler: Jeremy]] is a TimeMaster anything involving him and security cameras becomes this.