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* StarCrossedLovers: Simone’s parents.
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* HostageForMacGuffin: Briefly. Thorolf threatens to kill Marcus unless Sonia hands over the locket. [[spoiler: Unusually, Sonia complies. Even more unusually, Thorolf let’s Marcus go.]]
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* HostageForMacGuffin: Briefly. Thorolf threatens to kill Marcus unless Sonia hands over the locket. [[spoiler: Unusually, Sonia complies. Even more unusually, Thorolf let’s complies and they lose the locket but manage to save Marcus go.in the process.]]
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* TheVirus: Anyone killed by a draugr comes back as a draugr.
* WordOfGod: The author occasionally posts info on ''Website/TheCommentSection'' under the screen name Gash. There is a thread specifically for The Saints [[http://thecommentsection.org/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=3478 here]].
* WordOfGod: The author occasionally posts info on ''Website/TheCommentSection'' under the screen name Gash. There is a thread specifically for The Saints [[http://thecommentsection.org/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=3478 here]].
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* WordOfGod: The author occasionally posts info on ''Website/TheCommentSection'' under the screen name Gash. There is a thread specifically for The Saints [[http://thecommentsection.org/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=3478 here]].draugr.
* WordOfGod: The author occasionally posts info on ''Website/TheCommentSection'' under the screen name Gash. There is a thread specifically for The Saints [[http://thecommentsection.org/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=3478 here]].
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* {{Badass}}: Simone was able to defeat both Sonia and Tori without either landing a hit.
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* AuraVision: The Oracle path allows people to see magic energies and see through illusions.
* {{Badass}}: Simone was able to defeat both Sonia and Tori without either landing a hit. [[spoiler: She also delivers the killing blow on Thorolf.]]
** Thorolf as well. He fought off all of The Saints, multiple times, as well as surviving an encounter with [[TheMenInBlack the PCD.]]
* {{Badass}}: Simone was able to defeat both Sonia and Tori without either landing a hit. [[spoiler: She also delivers the killing blow on Thorolf.]]
** Thorolf as well. He fought off all of The Saints, multiple times, as well as surviving an encounter with [[TheMenInBlack the PCD.]]
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* BlowYouAway: Thorolf uses gusts of winds to counter Marcus’s fire.
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* DishingOutDirt: After his normal, [[PlayingWithFire playing with fire]], abilities fail to do any harm to Thorolf, Marcus switches over to this.
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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Katrina stabs Thorolf’s eye with a pick.]]
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* HostageForMacGuffin: Briefly. Thorolf threatens to kill Marcus unless Sonia hands over the locket. [[spoiler: Unusually, Sonia complies. Even more unusually, Thorolf let’s Marcus go.]]
* HumanShield: Thorolf uses Sonia, and later Marcus, as shields against their friends. He doesn’t actually need to [[ForTheEvulz but he enjoys toying with the.]]
* HumanShield: Thorolf uses Sonia, and later Marcus, as shields against their friends. He doesn’t actually need to [[ForTheEvulz but he enjoys toying with the.]]
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* {{Macguffin}}: Simone’s locket.
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* MasterOfIllusion: Tori keeps Thorolf distracted, and buys the rest of The Saints time to rest, by sending wave after wave of illusions at him.
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* SacrificialLamb: [[spoiler: John, the helpful spirit seen in the first chapter, gets [[OffWithHisHead decapitated]] by Thorolf.]]
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* ShockAndAwe: Both Sonia and Thorolf use electricity several times during their fight.
* SummonMagic: Jason, along with being [[TheBigGuy the big guy]], is also able to summon spirits to aid The Saints.
* SummonMagic: Jason, along with being [[TheBigGuy the big guy]], is also able to summon spirits to aid The Saints.
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* TimeMaster: One of the [[TheMenInBlack Parnormal Crime Division]] is able to do this.
* TrackingDevice: A magical variant, Thorolf enchanted the locket so he always knows where it is.
* TrackingDevice: A magical variant, Thorolf enchanted the locket so he always knows where it is.
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* TheUnmasquedWorld: Seems to be. There’s a police division specifically for handling paranormal events, public warnings are made when supernatural threats are running loose, and a draugr attack is discussed, by name, on the evening news in the same way a drive-by would be.
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* AnAxeToGrind: Jason’s thrilled to add an axe to his arsenal.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Thorolf’s knife keeps its victims alive as long as it remains in their heart. He uses it to keep people alive as he [[HorrorHunger eats them]].
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* SarcasticConfession: Jason uses this to explain why he needs to purchase a shopping cart filled with [[BatterUp baseball bats]], [[PowerfulPick pickaxes]], [[KnifeNut knives]], [[AnAxeToGrind and an axe]].
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* {{Shapershifting}}: Draugr can do this. Katrina has a more limited form, allowing her to gain animal characteristics.
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* IKnowYouAreInThereFight: Discussed and averted. Simone outright says to avoid trying this tactic on Thorolf.
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* ItOnlyWorksOnce: Draugrs, like all undead, have specific weaknesses. Unlike other undead, draugr will quickly overcome their weaknesses.
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* ThatManIsDead: According to Simone, Harold Evergreen is dead. Only Thorolf the Draugr remains.
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* VampiricDraining: Sonia absorbs some of a ghosts essence to heal herself.
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* AnOfferYouCantRefuse: Simone captures Sonia and Tori trying to rob her house. She forces them to rob the draugr for her or else spend four years as [[IndenturedServitude indentured servants]].
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* TheUndead: The draugr, though what type remains to be seen.
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* BuffySpeak: Tori refers to theft as "robberate." Sonia calls it "house breaking" in the same chapter.
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* CharmPerson: The Connection Path of Magic allows a mage to influence people. Combined with the Passion Path below allows for a powerful tool.
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* BerserkButton: The Bone Eclipse series series, an in-universe book and film series, is one for Sonia.
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The Saints is a web novel by NoFaceCitizen that can be found here:http://arcanenetwork.wordpress.com/
The plot follows The Saints, a coven that uses their supernatural abilities to commit crimes.
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* BeserkButton: The Bone Eclipse series is one for Sonia.
* TheCaper: The story starts in the middle of one.
* TheHero: Sonia.
* InMediasRes: How the story starts.
* RavenHairIvorySkin: Sonia is described as such.
The plot follows The Saints, a coven that uses their supernatural abilities to commit crimes.
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!! The Saints contains examples of:
* BeserkButton: The Bone Eclipse series is one for Sonia.
* TheCaper: The story starts in the middle of one.
* TheHero: Sonia.
* InMediasRes: How the story starts.
* RavenHairIvorySkin: Sonia is described as such.
