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In recognition of the tenth's anniversary, a from-the-ground-up remake of the second Enhancegirl story was released. The old version remains up, but is no longer canon. The remake of the second story finishes with an epilogue set after the rest of the main series.
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In recognition of the tenth's series' tenth anniversary, a from-the-ground-up remake of the second Enhancegirl story was released. The old version remains up, but is no longer canon. The remake of the second story finishes with an epilogue set after the rest of the main series.
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The series, much like ''Comicbook/{{Empowered}}'' before it, has a VERY heavy focus on bondage themes. Indeed, one of Enhancegirl's weaknesses is that her superpowered sense of smell makes her very vulnerable to being drugged or chloroformed, and she is routinely captured and tied up in a variety of ways. Despite its heavy focus on fanservice in this manner, it is not without its elements of genuine characterisation. The sixteenth chapter concludes the story.
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The series, much like ''Comicbook/{{Empowered}}'' before it, has a VERY heavy focus on bondage themes. Indeed, one of Enhancegirl's weaknesses is that her superpowered sense of smell makes her very vulnerable to being drugged or chloroformed, and she is routinely captured and tied up in a variety of ways. Despite its heavy focus on fanservice in this manner, it is not without its elements of genuine characterisation. The sixteenth chapter concludes the story.
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A spin-off prequel named ''The Perils of Valora'' which starts the FlyingBrick superheroine Valora, was released shorty after the final chapter of Enhancegirl. Set 10 years before the events of ''The Perils of Enhancegirl'', it describes Valora's rise to fame in the west coast and focuses of the business and PR side of superhero-ing.
In August 2021, writer Damselbinder announced that with the completition of ''The Perils of Valora'' that they have finally put the "Enhanceverse" to rest.
In August 2021, writer Damselbinder announced that with the completition of ''The Perils of Valora'' that they have finally put the "Enhanceverse" to rest.
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A spin-off prequel named ''The Perils of Valora'' which starts the FlyingBrick superheroine Valora, was released shorty after the final chapter of Enhancegirl. Set 10 years before the events of ''The Perils of Enhancegirl'', it describes Valora's rise to fame in the west coast and focuses of the business and PR side of superhero-ing.
In August 2021, writer Damselbinder announced that with the completition of ''Thesuperhero-ing. Another series, set between Perils of Valora'' that they have finally put Enhancegirl and Perils of Valora, stars Hypatia, a secondary character from Valora's story.
In recognition of the"Enhanceverse" to rest.
tenth's anniversary, a from-the-ground-up remake of the second Enhancegirl story was released. The old version remains up, but is no longer canon. The remake of the second story finishes with an epilogue set after the rest of the main series.
In August 2021, writer Damselbinder announced that with the completition of ''The
In recognition of the
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Often said by villanesess who claim this to complement their helpless bound and gagged captive heroines.
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Often said by villanesess who claim this to complement compliment their helpless bound and gagged captive heroines.
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* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Many females are attracted to Sophie a.k.a Enhancegirl, some of them include [[spoiler: Spectra and Ocelot]].
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* KnightOfCerebus: The moment [[TheCollector Hades]] is introduced, most of the humor and the '''dammit, i got bound and gagged again!''' moments stop and everything becomes personal, with most of the cast fearing for the lives or [[AFateWorseThanDeath worse]] when dealing with [[InvincibleVillain Hades]] and his cronies.
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* KnightOfCerebus: The moment [[TheCollector Hades]] is introduced, most Most of the humor and the '''dammit, i got bound and gagged again!''' moments stop and everything becomes personal, villains are treated with most a degree of seriousness, but Hades' entrance into the cast fearing for story alters the lives or [[AFateWorseThanDeath worse]] when dealing with [[InvincibleVillain Hades]] and his cronies.tone in a fairly dark direction.
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* NobleBigot: Sophie's Dad has shades of this. While he doesn't hold any negative feelings towards Sophie's relationship with [[spoiler:Mariko]], he finds homosexual couples strange and likes to joke about it at their expense.
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* NobleBigot: Sophie's Dad dad has shades of this. While he doesn't hold any negative feelings towards Sophie's relationship with [[spoiler:Mariko]], he finds homosexual couples strange and likes to joke about it at their expense.makes some insensitive remarks.
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--> '''Enhancegirl 6-2: A Thief's Allure''': Ocelot giggled, feeling her lovely captive's long, supple legs against her scarcely-covered skin. This was one of her favourite parts of her entanglements with Aerogirl, getting to feel her soft, feminine body draped over her shoulder, to appreciate her shapely curves in that uniquely intimate fashion.
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* LegFocus: The author frequently draws attention to the heroines' legs, especially Enhancegirl's and Spectra's.
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* ShesGotLegs: The author frequently draws attention to the heroines' legs, especially Enhancegirl's and Spectra's.
