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''The Man who Evolved'', first published in 1931 in the ''Wonder Stories'' magazine, is a short story by Creator/EdmondHamilton and one of the earliest examples of an [[DevolutionDevice evolution-speeding machine]] in fiction.
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* EvolutionPowerup: As is common in this type of stories, it shows evolution as something that can happen to an ''individual'' instead of something that by its nature takes place over multiple generations.
* GoalOrientedEvolution: Future evolution seems to be preset, and in fact Pollard's goal is to find out where it will lead. [[spoiler:In a twist on the trope, evolution turns out to be cyclical.]]
* GoalOrientedEvolution: Future evolution seems to be preset, and in fact Pollard's goal is to find out where it will lead. [[spoiler:In a twist on the trope, evolution turns out to be cyclical.]]
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** EvolutionPowerup: As is common in this type of stories, it shows evolution as something that can happen to an ''individual'' instead of something that by its nature takes place over multiple generations.
** GoalOrientedEvolution: Future evolution seems to be preset, and in fact Pollard's goal is to find out where it will lead. [[spoiler:In a twist on the trope, evolution turns out to be cyclical.]]
** GoalOrientedEvolution: Future evolution seems to be preset, and in fact Pollard's goal is to find out where it will lead. [[spoiler:In a twist on the trope, evolution turns out to be cyclical.]]
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** GoalOrientedEvolution: Future evolution seems to be preset, and in fact Pollard's goal is to find out where it will lead. [[spoiler:In a twist on the trope, evolution turns out to be cyclical.]]
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* ILoveNuclearPower: [[UnbuiltTrope Predating nuclear power]], no less. Pollard’s machine harnesses naturally-occurring cosmic rays to speed up evolution. Compare Hamilton’s other short story "Devolution", where mutations (and therefore evolution) are caused by Earth’s radioactive elements.
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* BrainMonster: Pollard's brain growth and the shriveling of his body reach their logical conclusions when [[spoiler:he becomes a giant brain with tentacles, and then a pure brain with no visible organs.]]
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* PhlebotinumDuJour: This is not the only story in TheThirties to use cosmic rays -- then a relatively recent discovery -- as a scientific gimmick.
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[[caption-width-right:300:‘’The Man who Evolved’’ as it appeared on the cover of ''Wonder Stories'', April 1931]]
‘’The Man who Evolved’’, first published in 1931 in the ‘’Wonder Stories’’ magazine, is a short story by Creator/EdmondHamilton and one of the earliest examples of an [[DevolutionDevice evolution-speeding machine]] in fiction.
‘’The Man who Evolved’’, first published in 1931 in the ‘’Wonder Stories’’ magazine, is a short story by Creator/EdmondHamilton and one of the earliest examples of an [[DevolutionDevice evolution-speeding machine]] in fiction.
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* ILoveNuclearPower: [[UnbuiltTrope Predating nuclear power]], no less. Pollard’s machine harnesses naturally-occurring cosmic rays to speed up evolution. Compare Hamilton’s other short story "Devolution”, where mutations (and therefore evolution) are caused by Earth’s radioactive elements.
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* ILoveNuclearPower: [[UnbuiltTrope Predating nuclear power]], no less. Pollard’s machine harnesses naturally-occurring cosmic rays to speed up evolution. Compare Hamilton’s other short story "Devolution”, "Devolution", where mutations (and therefore evolution) are caused by Earth’s radioactive elements.
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* SerialEscalation: Pollard goes through his machine no less than ‘’six’’ times, each time coming out far smarter — and somewhat less human — than he went in. [[spoiler:Subverted in the end, when the last step devolves him into protoplasm]].
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* SerialEscalation: Pollard goes through his machine no less than ‘’six’’ ''six'' times, each time coming out far smarter — and somewhat less human — than he went in. [[spoiler:Subverted in the end, when the last step devolves him into protoplasm]].
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* ArtisticLicenseChemistry: At some point, Pollard shows off his increased intelligence by making ''gold'' out of common chemicals. Since gold is an ‘’element’’, it can’t be made chemically if it’s not already there.
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* GoneHorriblyRight: Pollard's goal is to evolve into the future forms of man. He succeeds -- and becomes a supergenius with PsychicPowers and a God complex, then a BrainMonster whose recognizable are dwindling to nonexistence, and finally a [[spoiler:blob of primordial ooze]]. His metamorphosis drives one of his friends mad and his lab is destroyed in the process.
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* ProfessorGuineaPig: Pollard uses his untested machine on himself.
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** EvolutionPowerup: As is common in this type of stories, it shows evolution as something that can happen to an ''individual'' instead of something that by its nature takes place over multiple generations.
** GoalOrientedEvolution: Future evolution seems to be preset, and in fact Pollard's goal is to find out where it will lead. [[spoiler:In a twist on the trope, evolution turns out to be cyclical.]]
** GoalOrientedEvolution: Future evolution seems to be preset, and in fact Pollard's goal is to find out where it will lead. [[spoiler:In a twist on the trope, evolution turns out to be cyclical.]]
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* UltimateLifeForm: Pollard’s goal is to become this, not out of a desire for power, but due to scientific curiosity. [[spoiler:Subverted in that evolution leads back to its own beginning]].
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* UltimateLifeForm: Pollard’s goal is to become this, not out of a desire for power, but due to scientific curiosity. [[spoiler:Subverted in that evolution leads back to its own beginning]].beginning]].
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* MyBrainIsBig: After his second session in the machine, Pollard gains a huge head while the rest of his body shrinks. Further session increase his brain size even further [[spoiler:until he becomes just a giant brain.]]
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* ScienceMarchesOn: That mutation-inducing cosmic rays could speed up evolution made (slightly) more sense in the early XX century idea, when [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_eclipse_of_Darwinism#Mutationism evolution was seen as series of mutations]]. In the current understanding of evolution, while mutations still play a role, they are not sufficient without natural selection (see also UsefulNotes/Evolution).
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‘’The Man who Evolved’’, first published in 1931 in the ‘’Wonder Stories’’ magazine, is a short story by Creator/EdmondHamilton and one of the earliest examples of an [[DevolutionDevice evolution-speeding machine]] in fiction.
[[TheProfessor Doctor John Pollard]] invites his two friends, Arthur and Hugh, to show them the coronation of years of work — a machine which uses cosmic rays to accelerate evolution ([[ScienceMarchesOn this sounded less crazy in 1931]]). As narrated from Arthur’s [=POV=], Pollard uses the machine to [[EvolutionPowerUp evolve himself]] — in 50-million-year steps — to discover once and for all what mankind will be like in the future.
Despite starting out well — the first dose of cosmic rays turns Pollard into a physically perfect, [[SuperIntelligence superintelligent]] demigod — the experiment takes a quick turn for the ugly when Pollard evolves further and [[MyBrainIsBig his head enlarges monstrously]], while his body and [[SuperSupremacist sense of morals]] shrivel away.
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!!This short story contains examples of:
* ArtisticLicenseChemistry: At some point, Pollard shows off his increased intelligence by making ''gold'' out of common chemicals. Since gold is an ‘’element’’, it can’t be made chemically if it’s not already there.
* ArtisticLicensePhysics: Pollard’s machine collects and concentrates cosmic rays but “removes from them their harmful properties”, which makes as much sense as removing poisonousness from cyanide.
* BrainCriticalMass: Pollard gains PsychicPowers (see below) when his brain gets large enough.
* ChemistryCanDoAnything: As noted under ArtisticLicenseChemistry, evolved!Pollard makes gold out of common chemicals, which should be impossible. Unless it’s a subtle sign that [[WhatWeNowKnowToBeTrue physics and chemistry as we know them today are wrong…]]
* HollywoodEvolution: The story is built around this.
* ILoveNuclearPower: [[UnbuiltTrope Predating nuclear power]], no less. Pollard’s machine harnesses naturally-occurring cosmic rays to speed up evolution. Compare Hamilton’s other short story "Devolution”, where mutations (and therefore evolution) are caused by Earth’s radioactive elements.
* PsychicPowers: Pollard gains MindReading and [[PeoplePuppets control over others’ actions]] as his brain grows, which is why his friends can’t forcibly stop him from continuing the experiment. [[spoiler:Pollard’s “pure brain” form is implied to have [[MindOverMatter telekinesis]] and a variety of non-physical senses]].
* SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale: Pollard’s evolution progresses in 50 million year steps, and at least the first two “stages” of his transformation are recognizably human. That’s a ludicrously long period for humans to remain around, considering that 5 million years ago we were practically chimps.[[note]]For the punctilious: all right, not chimps in the modern sense, but a non-zoologist wouldn’t see much of a difference[[/note]]
* ScienceMarchesOn: That mutation-inducing cosmic rays could speed up evolution made (slightly) more sense in the early XX century idea, when [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_eclipse_of_Darwinism#Mutationism evolution was seen as series of mutations]]. In the current understanding of evolution, while mutations still play a role, they are not sufficient without natural selection (see also UsefulNotes/Evolution).
* SerialEscalation: Pollard goes through his machine no less than ‘’six’’ times, each time coming out far smarter — and somewhat less human — than he went in. [[spoiler:Subverted in the end, when the last step devolves him into protoplasm]].
* ShrunkenOrgan: For reasons left unexplained, Pollard’s nose, ears and mouth shrink as his brain enlarges, until they’re mere pinpricks. {{Inverted}} with his eyes, which for equally mysterious reasons grow until they’re the size of saucers [[spoiler:but later [[DoubleSubversion also shrink, and then vanish entirely]], when Pollard becomes a giant brain]].
* SuperIntelligence: Pollard’s evolved forms, natch!
* SuperSupremacist: Pollard’s third “stage” states normal humans are no more than animals to him, and he intends to take over Earth and use it as a laboratory. The protagonist stops him by [[spoiler:convincing him to evolve further. It works; the next stage is beyond such desires]].
* UltimateLifeForm: Pollard’s goal is to become this, not out of a desire for power, but due to scientific curiosity. [[spoiler:Subverted in that evolution leads back to its own beginning]].
[[TheProfessor Doctor John Pollard]] invites his two friends, Arthur and Hugh, to show them the coronation of years of work — a machine which uses cosmic rays to accelerate evolution ([[ScienceMarchesOn this sounded less crazy in 1931]]). As narrated from Arthur’s [=POV=], Pollard uses the machine to [[EvolutionPowerUp evolve himself]] — in 50-million-year steps — to discover once and for all what mankind will be like in the future.
Despite starting out well — the first dose of cosmic rays turns Pollard into a physically perfect, [[SuperIntelligence superintelligent]] demigod — the experiment takes a quick turn for the ugly when Pollard evolves further and [[MyBrainIsBig his head enlarges monstrously]], while his body and [[SuperSupremacist sense of morals]] shrivel away.
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!!This short story contains examples of:
* ArtisticLicenseChemistry: At some point, Pollard shows off his increased intelligence by making ''gold'' out of common chemicals. Since gold is an ‘’element’’, it can’t be made chemically if it’s not already there.
* ArtisticLicensePhysics: Pollard’s machine collects and concentrates cosmic rays but “removes from them their harmful properties”, which makes as much sense as removing poisonousness from cyanide.
* BrainCriticalMass: Pollard gains PsychicPowers (see below) when his brain gets large enough.
* ChemistryCanDoAnything: As noted under ArtisticLicenseChemistry, evolved!Pollard makes gold out of common chemicals, which should be impossible. Unless it’s a subtle sign that [[WhatWeNowKnowToBeTrue physics and chemistry as we know them today are wrong…]]
* HollywoodEvolution: The story is built around this.
* ILoveNuclearPower: [[UnbuiltTrope Predating nuclear power]], no less. Pollard’s machine harnesses naturally-occurring cosmic rays to speed up evolution. Compare Hamilton’s other short story "Devolution”, where mutations (and therefore evolution) are caused by Earth’s radioactive elements.
* PsychicPowers: Pollard gains MindReading and [[PeoplePuppets control over others’ actions]] as his brain grows, which is why his friends can’t forcibly stop him from continuing the experiment. [[spoiler:Pollard’s “pure brain” form is implied to have [[MindOverMatter telekinesis]] and a variety of non-physical senses]].
* SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale: Pollard’s evolution progresses in 50 million year steps, and at least the first two “stages” of his transformation are recognizably human. That’s a ludicrously long period for humans to remain around, considering that 5 million years ago we were practically chimps.[[note]]For the punctilious: all right, not chimps in the modern sense, but a non-zoologist wouldn’t see much of a difference[[/note]]
* ScienceMarchesOn: That mutation-inducing cosmic rays could speed up evolution made (slightly) more sense in the early XX century idea, when [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_eclipse_of_Darwinism#Mutationism evolution was seen as series of mutations]]. In the current understanding of evolution, while mutations still play a role, they are not sufficient without natural selection (see also UsefulNotes/Evolution).
* SerialEscalation: Pollard goes through his machine no less than ‘’six’’ times, each time coming out far smarter — and somewhat less human — than he went in. [[spoiler:Subverted in the end, when the last step devolves him into protoplasm]].
* ShrunkenOrgan: For reasons left unexplained, Pollard’s nose, ears and mouth shrink as his brain enlarges, until they’re mere pinpricks. {{Inverted}} with his eyes, which for equally mysterious reasons grow until they’re the size of saucers [[spoiler:but later [[DoubleSubversion also shrink, and then vanish entirely]], when Pollard becomes a giant brain]].
* SuperIntelligence: Pollard’s evolved forms, natch!
* SuperSupremacist: Pollard’s third “stage” states normal humans are no more than animals to him, and he intends to take over Earth and use it as a laboratory. The protagonist stops him by [[spoiler:convincing him to evolve further. It works; the next stage is beyond such desires]].
* UltimateLifeForm: Pollard’s goal is to become this, not out of a desire for power, but due to scientific curiosity. [[spoiler:Subverted in that evolution leads back to its own beginning]].
