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* TheCakeIsALie: Odoacer's ''casus belli'' with Orestes was that Odoacer's was promised a piece of the former empire where the Goths would settle in exchange for backing Orestes' son as emperor. Orestes never meant to keep his word, and tragedy ensues.
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* TheCakeIsALie: Odoacer's ''casus belli'' with Orestes was that Odoacer's was promised a piece of the former empire where the Goths would settle in exchange for backing Orestes' Orestes’ son as emperor. Orestes never meant to keep his word, and tragedy ensues.
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* DecoyAntagonist: Odoacer seemed to be the main antagonist during the first part, until he sends Wulfila on his quest for Romulus (and partially to [[UriahGambit get rid of Wulfila himself]]) and never appears again on page. Wulfila takes over as the real villain.
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* DecoyAntagonist: Odoacer seemed to be the main antagonist during the first part, until he sends Wulfila on his quest for Romulus (and partially to [[UriahGambit get rid of Wulfila himself]]) and never appears again on page. [[DragonInChief Wulfila takes over as the real villain.villain. ]]
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* IronicName: Romulus the last Roman emperor was named after the founder of Rome. TruthInTelevision.
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* IronicName: Romulus Augustus, the last Roman emperor emperor, was named after the founder of Rome.Rome and the first Roman emperor. TruthInTelevision.
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* TokenMinority: Batiatus is black, and Ambrosinus is a Celtic Briton.
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* SugarWiki/TearJerkerMoments: fate of POWs from Legion Nova Invicta after battle; death of Romulus’ parents, with Romulus himself witnessing it; and [[spoiler: Aurelius’ DarkAndTroubledPast during Sack of Aquileia]].
* TokenMinority: Batiatus isblack, black African, and Ambrosinus is a Celtic Briton.
* TokenMinority: Batiatus is
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* YouKilledMyFather: Wulfila killed Romulus's parents , Romulus vows to avenge them [[spoiler: and succeeds]]. [[spoiler: Wulfila ALSO killed Aurelius’ parents, after brutal torture, during Siege of Aquileia(452)]]
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* YouKilledMyFather: Wulfila killed Romulus's parents , Romulus vows to avenge them [[spoiler: and succeeds]]. [[spoiler: Wulfila ALSO killed Aurelius’ parents, after brutal torture, during Siege Sack of Aquileia(452)]]Aquileia]]
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* GildedCage: Romulus' life is spared and he's sent to the beautiful island of Capri, in an ancient and luxurious ''villa''. Obviously he can't ever leave the place.
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* GildedCage: Romulus' Romulus’ life is spared and he's sent to the beautiful island of Capri, in an ancient and luxurious ''villa''. Obviously he can't ever leave the place.
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* GoodScarsEvilScars: Ambrosinus has a scar on his chest shaped like a pentacle, which adds to his mysterious air. Vortgyn, who gave him that scar, hides his diseased or burned face behind a gold mask. Wulfila gets his face scarred after Aurelius slams it onto his own axe.
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* GoodScarsEvilScars: Ambrosinus has a scar on his chest shaped like a pentacle, which adds to his mysterious air. Vortgyn, who gave him that scar, hides his diseased or burned face behind a gold mask. Wulfila gets his face scarred after Aurelius slams it onto his own axe.
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** Flavius Orestes is the father of Romulus, the kid protagonist, seemingly AFatherToHisMen and a good husband and father, he did some cutthroat plotting to seize power putting his son in a dangerous situation. Also Odoacer claims that Orestes deceived him by making promises that he did not intend to keep, and Orestes' conversation with his wife implies that Odoacer was telling the truth.
* GrimUpNorth: The protagonists travel from sunny, decadent Naples to war-torn Britannia, crossing un unstable continent during a particularly cold winter.
* GrimUpNorth: The protagonists travel from sunny, decadent Naples to war-torn Britannia, crossing un unstable continent during a particularly cold winter.
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** Flavius Orestes is the father of Romulus, the kid protagonist, seemingly AFatherToHisMen and a good husband and father, he did some cutthroat plotting to seize power putting his son in a dangerous situation. Also Odoacer claims that Orestes deceived him by making promises that he did not intend to keep, and Orestes' Orestes’ conversation with his wife implies that Odoacer was telling the truth.
* GrimUpNorth: The protagonists travel from sunny, decadent Naples through Alps, Gaul to war-torn Britannia, crossing un unstable continent during a particularly cold winter.
* GrimUpNorth: The protagonists travel from sunny, decadent Naples through Alps, Gaul to war-torn Britannia, crossing un unstable continent during a particularly cold winter.
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* UriahGambit: Odoacer sends Wulfila to his quest for Romolus hoping that if he fails he won't come back, as Wulfila disapproves his increasing [[NoTrueScotsman assimilation to Roman ways]] and Odoacer wants to get rid of that noise.
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* UriahGambit: Odoacer sends Wulfila to his quest for Romolus Romulus hoping that if he fails he won't come back, as Wulfila disapproves his increasing [[NoTrueScotsman assimilation to Roman ways]] and Odoacer wants to get rid of that noise.
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* Villainous Crush: Odoacer on Flavia Serena; [[spoiler: Stephanus on Livia]]
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now, Roman! Time has passed, but you haven’t changed enough. You’re the
one who opened the gates of Aquileia to me!’'' - Wulfila to [[spoiler: Aurelius]] , chapter 26
now, Roman! Time has passed, but you haven’t changed enough. You’re the
one who opened the gates of Aquileia to me!’'' - Wulfila to [[spoiler: Aurelius]] , chapter 26
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--->''‘I know you
you now, Roman! Time has passed, but you haven’t changed enough. You’re the
the one who opened the gates of Aquileia to me!’'' - Wulfila to [[spoiler: Aurelius]] , chapter 26
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* YouKilledMyFather: Wulfila killed Romulus's parents , Romulus vows to avenge them [[spoiler: and succeeds]]. [[Spoiler: Wulfila ALSO killed Aurelius’ parents during Hunnic Siege of Aquileia]]
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* YouKilledMyFather: Wulfila killed Romulus's parents , Romulus vows to avenge them [[spoiler: and succeeds]]. [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: Wulfila ALSO killed Aurelius’ parents parents, after brutal torture, during Hunnic Siege of Aquileia]]Aquileia(452)]]
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* YouKilledMyFather: Wulfila killed Romulus's parents , Romulus vows to avenge them [[spoiler: and succeeds]]. [[Spoiler: Wulfila ALSO killed Aurelius’ parents during Hunnic Siege of Aquileia. ]]
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* YouKilledMyFather: Wulfila killed Romulus's parents , Romulus vows to avenge them [[spoiler: and succeeds]]. [[Spoiler: Wulfila ALSO killed Aurelius’ parents during Hunnic Siege of Aquileia. ]]Aquileia]]
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Odoacer, King of the Goths, offers to Romulus' mother Flavia Serena ([[VillainousCrush whom he has admired for years]]) to become his queen, but since he has killed her husband and annihilated her home she flatly refuses.
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Odoacer, King of the Goths, offers to Romulus' mother Flavia Serena ([[VillainousCrush whom he has admired for years]]) to become his queen, but since he has killed her husband husband, dethroned & captured her son and annihilated her home she flatly refuses.refuses.
* WhamLine:
--->''‘The ship isn’t coming any more.’'' '- Stephanus to Livia chapter 21
--->''‘I know you
now, Roman! Time has passed, but you haven’t changed enough. You’re the
one who opened the gates of Aquileia to me!’'' - Wulfila to [[spoiler: Aurelius]] , chapter 26
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--->''‘The ship isn’t coming any more.’'' '- Stephanus to Livia chapter 21
--->''‘I know you
now, Roman! Time has passed, but you haven’t changed enough. You’re the
one who opened the gates of Aquileia to me!’'' - Wulfila to [[spoiler: Aurelius]] , chapter 26
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* YouKilledMyFather: Wulfila killed Romulus's parents , Romulus vows to avenge them [[spoiler: and succeeds]].
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* YouKilledMyFather: Wulfila killed Romulus's parents , Romulus vows to avenge them [[spoiler: and succeeds]]. [[Spoiler: Wulfila ALSO killed Aurelius’ parents during Hunnic Siege of Aquileia. ]]
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Now the title of Caesar, highest office in Rome, must fall to the shoulders of a young boy, Romulus Augustus. Scared, naive, and unprepared, he is barely on the throne for a few days when the dreaded [[HordesFromTheEast Goths]] supporting the chieftain Odoacer descend upon Ravenna and kill everyone except the Emperor, his mother Flavia and his tutor, the Briton druid Meridius Ambrosius, AKA [[{{Myth/Merlin}} Myrdin Emreis]]. Deposed and exiled to the island of Capri, Romulus is rescued by a small band of loyal soldiers, the only survivors of the legion Nova Invicta, an elite force recruited by his father Orestes. But not before uncovering an ancient sword and the prophecy attached to it. Pursued by the Goths, the heroes are led by the prophecy to the faraway lands of Britain where Romulus must find his destiny.
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Now the title of Caesar, highest office in Rome, AncientRome, must fall to the shoulders of a young boy, Romulus Augustus. Scared, naive, and unprepared, he is barely on the throne for a few days when the dreaded [[HordesFromTheEast Goths]] supporting the chieftain Odoacer descend upon Ravenna and kill everyone except the Emperor, his mother Flavia and his tutor, the Briton druid Meridius Ambrosius, AKA [[{{Myth/Merlin}} Myrdin Emreis]]. Deposed and exiled to the island of Capri, Romulus is rescued by a small band of loyal soldiers, the only survivors of the legion Nova Invicta, an elite force recruited by his father Orestes. But not before uncovering an ancient sword and the prophecy attached to it. Pursued by the Goths, the heroes are led by the prophecy to the faraway lands of Britain where Romulus must find his destiny.
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: {{Zigzagged}}. Aurelius and Livia are attracted to each other and make love in the woods halfway in the book believing that they will be separated, but they haven't resolved yet their divergences about Aurelius' past. [[spoiler: TheyDo just before the final battle.]]
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: {{Zigzagged}}. Aurelius and Livia are attracted to each other and make love in the woods halfway in the book believing that they will be separated, but they haven't resolved yet their divergences about Aurelius' past. [[spoiler: TheyDo [[RelationshipUpgrade They become a couple]] just before the final battle.]]
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* ArchEnemy: Wulfila to Aurelius, and Odoacer to Orestes.
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* AnAxeToGrind: Wulfila, the Barbarian villain, obviously carries one.
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** It's VeryLooselyBasedOnATrueStory since the the last Emperor of the Western Roman Empire was indeed a boy who did disappear from history. [[spoiler:But then it ends up being a prequel to the [[KingArthur Arthurian legend.]]]]
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** It's VeryLooselyBasedOnATrueStory since the the last Emperor of the Western Roman Empire was indeed a boy who did disappear from history. [[spoiler:But then it ends up being a prequel to the [[KingArthur Arthurian legend.]]]]Myth/ArthurianLegend.]]
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* DeadlyDecadentCourt: Constantinople. They start with sending a rescuing mission for the deposed child emperor Romulus, [[spoiler: but end up settling in an agreement with Odoacer instead and actively hunting for the main heroes.]] Ambrosinus also fears that in Constantinople, Romulus will be held as a glorified hostage to be sacrificed as soon as it benefits the court, and wants him to get as far as possible from that place.
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* DeadlyDecadentCourt: DecadentCourt: Constantinople. They start with sending a rescuing mission for the deposed child emperor Romulus, [[spoiler: but end up settling in an agreement with Odoacer instead and actively hunting for the main heroes.]] Ambrosinus also fears that in Constantinople, Romulus will be held as a glorified hostage to be sacrificed as soon as it benefits the court, and wants him to get as far as possible from that place.
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** Ambrosinus theorises that Constantinople would be another GildedCage for Romolus, living in luxury but at the mercy of a DeadlyDecadentCourt that would sacrifice him the time he's not useful anymore.
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** Ambrosinus theorises that Constantinople would be another GildedCage for Romolus, living in luxury but at the mercy of a DeadlyDecadentCourt DecadentCourt that would sacrifice him the time he's not useful anymore.
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* GildedCage: Romulus' life is spared and he's sent to the beautiful island of Capri, in an ancient and luxurious ''villa''. Obviously he's can't ever leave the place.
** Ambrosinus theorises that Constantinople would be another GildedCage, even more luxurious but at the mercy of a DeadlyDecadentCourt that would sacrifice his life at the first chance.
** Ambrosinus theorises that Constantinople would be another GildedCage, even more luxurious but at the mercy of a DeadlyDecadentCourt that would sacrifice his life at the first chance.
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* GildedCage: Romulus' life is spared and he's sent to the beautiful island of Capri, in an ancient and luxurious ''villa''. Obviously he's he can't ever leave the place.
** Ambrosinus theorises that Constantinople would be anotherGildedCage, even more luxurious GildedCage for Romolus, living in luxury but at the mercy of a DeadlyDecadentCourt that would sacrifice his life at him the first chance.time he's not useful anymore.
** Ambrosinus theorises that Constantinople would be another
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** Also the entire scheme [[spoiler: of smuggling Romulus to Constantinople. They finally saved the boy when the Eastern emperor decided that after all, it's more convenient letting Odoacer ruling Italy, so he won't protect Romolus. The crew decides ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight and flees flee to Britain with the boy.]]
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Zigzagged. Aurelius and Livia are attracted to each other and make love in the woods halfway in the book believing that they will be separated, but they haven't resolved yet their divergences about Aurelius' past. [[spoiler: TheyDo just before the final battle.]]
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Zigzagged.{{Zigzagged}}. Aurelius and Livia are attracted to each other and make love in the woods halfway in the book believing that they will be separated, but they haven't resolved yet their divergences about Aurelius' past. [[spoiler: TheyDo just before the final battle.]]
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* LanguageDrift: In their traveling across Europe the party note how much different the Latin dialect from Italy to Haul sound. It was pretty much TruthInTelevision, as Vulgar Latin was different from Classical Latin (the one still taught in schools) and was starting to fragment in different languages long before the fall of the Western Empire.
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* RoadTripPlot: The crew travels from Naples across Europe to seek refuge in Britain.
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* [[ApocalypseHow/Class0 Apocalypse How: Class 0]]: The novel depicts the troubled times of the final death.of the Western Empire. Western Europe is torn apart by wars and famine, the Roman infrastructures are dilapidated or faded into oblivion, Germanic tribes have all but divided a former empire into smaller kingdoms.
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* [[ApocalypseHow/Class0 Apocalypse How: Class 0]]: The novel depicts the troubled times of the final death.death of the Western Empire. Western Europe is torn apart by wars and famine, the Roman infrastructures are dilapidated or faded are fading into oblivion, Germanic tribes that formerly were mercenaries of the Roman emperors have all but divided a the former empire into smaller kingdoms.kingdoms for themselves.
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* NoTrueScotsman: Wulfila holds in contempt Odoacer's increasing assimilation to Roman ways. Odoacer instead thinks that Wulfila could never rule a country, as all he knows about is fighting and killing without seeing a bigger picture.
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* UriahGambit: Odoacer sends Wulfila to his quest for Romolus hoping that if he fails he won't come back, as Wulfila disapproves his increasing [[NoTrueScotman assimilation to Roman ways]] and Odoacer wants to get rid of that noise.
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* UriahGambit: Odoacer sends Wulfila to his quest for Romolus hoping that if he fails he won't come back, as Wulfila disapproves his increasing [[NoTrueScotman [[NoTrueScotsman assimilation to Roman ways]] and Odoacer wants to get rid of that noise.
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* UriahGambit: Odoacer sends Wulfila to his quest for Romolus hoping that if he fails he won't come back, as Wulfila disapproves his increasing [[NoTrueScotman assimilation to Roman ways]] and Odoacer wants to get rid of that noise.
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* BlackDudeDiesFirst: [[spoiler: {{Subverted}}. Batiatus is the only one of the [[SoleSurvivor crew that survives]] save for Livia and Aurelius.]]
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* GentleGiant: Batiatus. One of the very few barbarians admitted on Nova Invicta, and one of the most feared soldiers in it.
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* GentleGiant: Batiatus. One Batiatus is a Scary Blackman to those who don't know him, but he's actually one of the nicest characters, and one of the very few barbarians admitted on Nova Invicta, and one of the most feared soldiers in it.
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** Also the entire scheme [[spoiler: of smuggling Romulus to Constantinople. They finally saved the boy when the Eastern emperor decided that after all, he trusted Odoacer more with ruling Italy. The crew decides ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight and flees to Britain with the boy.]]
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** Also the entire scheme [[spoiler: of smuggling Romulus to Constantinople. They finally saved the boy when the Eastern emperor decided that after all, he trusted it's more convenient letting Odoacer more with ruling Italy.Italy, so he won't protect Romolus. The crew decides ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight and flees to Britain with the boy.]]
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** At first, you can easily stereotype the Roman protagonists as the good guys and the barbaric Goths as the villains. Then you learn that there are Germanic people who are willing to adapt to Roman customs and that the Eastern Roman empire (along with the Western, to tell the truth) is corrupt, greedy and suffers heavily from ChronicBackstabbingDisorder.
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** At first, you can easily stereotype the Roman protagonists as the good guys and the barbaric Goths as the villains. Then you learn that there are Germanic people who are willing to adapt to Roman customs customs, and that the Eastern Roman empire (along with the Western, to tell the truth) is corrupt, greedy and suffers heavily from ChronicBackstabbingDisorder.
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* GrimUpNorth: The protagonists travel from warm, decadent Naples to war-torn Britannia, crossing un unstable continent during a particularky cold winter.
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* GrimUpNorth: The protagonists travel from warm, sunny, decadent Naples to war-torn Britannia, crossing un unstable continent during a particularky particularly cold winter.
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* EndOfAnAge: The novel depicts the final Naik in the coffin of the Western Roman empire. Rome is no longer capitol and after Romulus is deposed, there won't be another Emperor again and in the following centuries, the former empire will be ruled by one Germanic tribe after the other.
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* EndOfAnAge: The novel depicts the final Naik nail in the coffin of the Western Roman empire. Rome is no longer capitol and after Romulus is deposed, there won't be another Emperor again and in the following centuries, the former empire will be ruled by one Germanic tribe after the other.
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* HordesFromTheEast: Livia recalls the destruction of Aquileia by the Guns. Also the Goths can qualify since they came Eastern Europe (and according to History, they were escaping the Huns as well).
* HordesFromTheEast: Livia recalls the destruction of Aquileia by the Huns. Also the Goths can qualify since they came Eastern Europe (and according to [[RealLife History]], they were escaping the Huns as well, although some of them joined the Huns).
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Odoacer, King of the Goths, offers to Romulus' mother Flavia Serena ([[VillainousCrush whom he has admired for years]]) to become his queen, but since he has killed her husband and annihilated her home she flatly refuses.l
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Odoacer, King of the Goths, offers to Romulus' mother Flavia Serena ([[VillainousCrush whom he has admired for years]]) to become his queen, but since he has killed her husband and annihilated her home she flatly refuses.l
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** Beyond this, numerous details on the nature of the Roman Empire during its twilight years (and for that matter, its hereditary nature or lack thereof) are right, as with the conflict between the official Christian bishops and the dying pagan religion still present in the countryside the intrigue around Constantinopla and their nomineés to the Occident throne, and the tension between the barbarian forces of Odoacer and the Eastern Empire.
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** Beyond this, numerous details on the nature of the Roman Empire during its twilight years (and for that matter, its hereditary nature or lack thereof) are right, as with the conflict between the official Christian bishops and the dying pagan religion still present in the countryside the intrigue around Constantinopla Constantinople and their nomineés to the Occident Western throne, and the tension between the barbarian forces of Odoacer and the Eastern Empire.Empire.
** Odoacer was king of the Herules, not the Goths. It is not know if the Herules were a subgroup of the Ostrogoths, but they were probably of Germanic origin like most of the invading tribes.
** Odoacer was king of the Herules, not the Goths. It is not know if the Herules were a subgroup of the Ostrogoths, but they were probably of Germanic origin like most of the invading tribes.
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* TheCakeIsALie: Odoacer's ''casus belli'' with Orestes was that Odoacer's was promised a piece of the former empire where the Goths would settle in exchange for backing Orestes' son as emperor. Orestes never meant to keep his word, and tragedy ensues.
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* ArtisticLicenseHistory: It's VeryLooselyBasedOnATrueStory since the the last Emperor of the Western Roman Empire was indeed a boy who did disappear from history. [[spoiler:But then it ends up being a prequel to the [[KingArthur Arthurian legend.]]]]
** Beyond this, numerous details on the nature of the Roman Empire during its twilight years (and for that matter, its hereditary nature or lack thereof) are right, as the conflict between the official Christian bishops and the dying pagan religion still present on the countryside; the intrigue around Constantinopla and their nomineés to the Occident throne, and the tension between the barbarian forces of Odoacer and the Eastern Empire.
** Beyond this, numerous details on the nature of the Roman Empire during its twilight years (and for that matter, its hereditary nature or lack thereof) are right, as the conflict between the official Christian bishops and the dying pagan religion still present on the countryside; the intrigue around Constantinopla and their nomineés to the Occident throne, and the tension between the barbarian forces of Odoacer and the Eastern Empire.
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* ArtisticLicenseHistory: ArtisticLicenseHistory:
** It's VeryLooselyBasedOnATrueStory since the the last Emperor of the Western Roman Empire was indeed a boy who did disappear from history. [[spoiler:But then it ends up being a prequel to the [[KingArthur Arthurian legend.]]]]
** Beyond this, numerous details on the nature of the Roman Empire during its twilight years (and for that matter, its hereditary nature or lack thereof) are right, as with the conflict between the official Christian bishops and the dying pagan religion still presenton in the countryside; countryside the intrigue around Constantinopla and their nomineés to the Occident throne, and the tension between the barbarian forces of Odoacer and the Eastern Empire.
** It's VeryLooselyBasedOnATrueStory since the the last Emperor of the Western Roman Empire was indeed a boy who did disappear from history. [[spoiler:But then it ends up being a prequel to the [[KingArthur Arthurian legend.]]]]
** Beyond this, numerous details on the nature of the Roman Empire during its twilight years (and for that matter, its hereditary nature or lack thereof) are right, as with the conflict between the official Christian bishops and the dying pagan religion still present
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Badass Grandpa cleaning
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[[caption-width-right:236:The eagle flies for one last time]]The Roman Empire is falling, crumbling into disrepair. In the last five years there have been five Caesars, and every one was murdered. Now the title of Caesar, highest office in Rome, must fall to the shoulders of a young boy, Romulus Augustus. Scared, naive, and unprepared, he is barely on the throne for a few days when the dreaded [[AlwaysChaoticEvil Goths]] supporting the chieftain Odoacer descend upon Ravenna and kill everyone except the emperor, his mother Flavia and his tutor, the Briton druid Meridius Ambrosius, AKA [[{{Myth/Merlin}} Myrdin Emreis]]. Deposed and exiled to the island of Capri, Romulus is rescued by a small band of loyal soldiers, the only survivors of the legion Nova Invicta, an elite force recruited by his father Orestes. But not before uncovering an ancient sword and the prophecy attached to it. Pursued by the Goths, the heroes are led by the prophecy to the faraway lands of Britain where Romulus must find his destiny.
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[[caption-width-right:236:The eagle flies for one last time]]The Roman Empire is falling, crumbling into disrepair. In the last five years there have been five Caesars, and every one was murdered.
Now the title of Caesar, highest office in Rome, must fall to the shoulders of a young boy, Romulus Augustus. Scared, naive, and unprepared, he is barely on the throne for a few days when the dreaded[[AlwaysChaoticEvil [[HordesFromTheEast Goths]] supporting the chieftain Odoacer descend upon Ravenna and kill everyone except the emperor, Emperor, his mother Flavia and his tutor, the Briton druid Meridius Ambrosius, AKA [[{{Myth/Merlin}} Myrdin Emreis]]. Deposed and exiled to the island of Capri, Romulus is rescued by a small band of loyal soldiers, the only survivors of the legion Nova Invicta, an elite force recruited by his father Orestes. But not before uncovering an ancient sword and the prophecy attached to it. Pursued by the Goths, the heroes are led by the prophecy to the faraway lands of Britain where Romulus must find his destiny.
Now the title of Caesar, highest office in Rome, must fall to the shoulders of a young boy, Romulus Augustus. Scared, naive, and unprepared, he is barely on the throne for a few days when the dreaded
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* EndOfAnAge: The novel depicts the final Naik in the coffin of the Western Roman empire. Rome is no longer capitol and after Romulus is deposed, there won't be another Emperor again and in the following centuries, the former empire will be ruled by one Germanic tribe after the other.
* HordesFromTheEast: Livia recalls the destruction of Aquileia by the Guns. Also the Goths can qualify since they came Eastern Europe (and according to History, they were escaping the Huns as well).
* HordesFromTheEast: Livia recalls the destruction of Aquileia by the Guns. Also the Goths can qualify since they came Eastern Europe (and according to History, they were escaping the Huns as well).
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Odoacer, King of the Heules, offers to Romulus' mother Flavia Serena ([[VillainousCrush whom he has admired for years]]) to become his queen, but since he has killed her husband and annihilated her home she flatly refuses.l
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Odoacer, King of the Heules, Goths, offers to Romulus' mother Flavia Serena ([[VillainousCrush whom he has admired for years]]) to become his queen, but since he has killed her husband and annihilated her home she flatly refuses.l
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* DarkAgeEurope: Being set at the final death of the Roman Empire, the novel does a good job in depicting how culture was steadily shifting towards proto-medieval ways:
** Latin language is starting to fragment in vulgar dialects, as the characters note traveling from Southern to Northern Italy;
** Breeches wore by the Barbarians are actually more comfortable for horse-riding, and the pattern would keep going in the following centuries;
** Barbarians are not one-sided characters (save for Wulfila, maybe) but some like Odoacer are willing to adapt to Roman customs and do understand that they need to compromise with the Church and the Roman institution if they want to rule in the long run.
* DecoyAntagonist: Odoacer seemed to be the main antagonist during the first part, until he sends Wulfila on his quest for Romulus (and partially to get rid of him) and never appears again on page. Wulfila fills the shoes of the real villain.
** Latin language is starting to fragment in vulgar dialects, as the characters note traveling from Southern to Northern Italy;
** Breeches wore by the Barbarians are actually more comfortable for horse-riding, and the pattern would keep going in the following centuries;
** Barbarians are not one-sided characters (save for Wulfila, maybe) but some like Odoacer are willing to adapt to Roman customs and do understand that they need to compromise with the Church and the Roman institution if they want to rule in the long run.
* DecoyAntagonist: Odoacer seemed to be the main antagonist during the first part, until he sends Wulfila on his quest for Romulus (and partially to get rid of him) and never appears again on page. Wulfila fills the shoes of the real villain.
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* DarkAgeEurope: Being set at during the final death days of the Western Roman Empire, the novel does a good job in depicting how culture was steadily shifting towards proto-medieval ways:
** Latin spoken language is starting tofragment in vulgar collapse into different dialects, as the characters note traveling from Southern to Northern Italy;
Italy. Said dialects would form the Romance languages;
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** Barbarians are not one-sided characters (save for Wulfila, maybe) but some like Odoacer are willing to adapt to Roman customs and do understand that they need to compromise with the Church and the Romaninstitution institutions if they want to rule in the long run.
* DecoyAntagonist: Odoacer seemed to be the main antagonist during the first part, until he sends Wulfila on his quest for Romulus (and partially to [[UriahGambit get rid ofhim) Wulfila himself]]) and never appears again on page. Wulfila fills the shoes of takes over as the real villain.
** Latin spoken language is starting to
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** Barbarians are not one-sided characters (save for Wulfila, maybe) but some like Odoacer are willing to adapt to Roman customs and do understand that they need to compromise with the Church and the Roman
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* GrimUpNorth: The protagonists travel from warm, congenial Naples to war-torn Britannia, crossing un unstable continent during a particularky cold winter.
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* GrimUpNorth: The protagonists travel from warm, congenial decadent Naples to war-torn Britannia, crossing un unstable continent during a particularky cold winter.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: TheSquad consist of [[OldSoldier some veterans]], an ActionGirl, a Scary Blackman, an old guy and the boy emperor. They know they are easy recognizable and avoid traveling all together for a while.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: TheSquad consist of [[OldSoldier some veterans]], veterans]] of different ethnicities, an ActionGirl, a Scary Blackman, ScaryBlackMan, an old guy druid and the boy emperor. They know they are easy recognizable and avoid traveling all together for a while.
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* RescueRomance: Livia believes Aurelio was the man who saved her life during the Sack of Aquileia, and it's partially the reason why she fell for him. [[spoiler: She's right, but for most of the plot he's amnesiac about those events, out of guilt and trauma as it turns out.]]
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* RescueRomance: Livia believes Aurelio Aurelius was the man who saved her life during the Sack of Aquileia, and it's partially the reason why she fell for him. [[spoiler: She's right, but for most of the plot he's amnesiac about those events, out of guilt and trauma as it turns out.]]
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** Also the entire scheme [[spoiler: of smuggling Romulus to Constantinople. They finally saved the boy when the Eastern emperor decided that after all, he trusted Odoacer more with ruling Italy. The crew decides ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight and flees to Britain with the boy.]]