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* SupernormalBindings: Wesley is able to literally bind up spirits and creatures that attack him and his friends with magical chains that appear out of nowhere, called by command.
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* MagicIsEvil: Brother Gabriel tells Peter, Wesley, and Ginger that the Luciferian Academy teaches its students how to dabble in the "unholy arts", which he says the Bible warns God's people against.
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* MagicIsEvil: Brother Gabriel tells Peter, Wesley, and Ginger that the Luciferian Academy teaches its students how to dabble in the "unholy arts", which he says the Bible warns God's people against. The TerribleTrio of Arthur, Rudy, and Artemis use their magic to intimidate Peter, Wesley, and Ginger, but Peter with his God-given ElementalPowers easily defeats them and sends them away.
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* TerribleTrio: Arthur, Rudy, and Artemis, who are first-year Luciferian Academy students, are evil expies of Harry, Ron, and Hermione from ''Harry Potter'' who harass the main character and his two friends.
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* ElementalPowers: Peter is gifted with the ability to manipulate earth, fire, air, and water, which he uses against the three magic-wielding students of Luciferian Academy.
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* MeaningfulName: Fred Blaynes (as in 'blains', meaning a skin sore) and Derek Murrayne (as in 'murrain', a plague), Malthorne's two friends that he picks up along the way to torment Peter, Wesley, and Ginger.
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* LaserBlade: Two students at the school fight each other with non-lethal "light swords", which only inflict pain on whoever gets pierced by one.
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Lucien Morgenstern has such good relations with the outside world that he has invited the President of the United States to visit the Luciferian Academy.
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Lucien Morgenstern has such good relations with the outside world that he has invited the President of the United States to visit the Luciferian Academy.Academy.
* WaifProphet: The school is full of children called to be prophets at age 11.
* WaifProphet: The school is full of children called to be prophets at age 11.
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* DeathByOriginStory: Peter's parents supposedly died in an accident when Peter was a baby. However, it was in a dream when Peter saw that his parents were killed by Morgenstern.
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The story has been inspired by the ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' series, and is meant to be [[TheMoralSubstitute a Christian version of that series]].
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The story has been inspired by the ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' series, series (and also by ''Fanfic/HogwartsSchoolOfPrayerAndMiracles''), and is meant to be [[TheMoralSubstitute a Christian version of that series]].
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* StayInTheKitchen: Malthorne taunts Ginger by saying that women shouldn't be prophets, but that they should be housewives and mothers, like his own mother. Peter responds by saying that his parents most likely bought his way into the school, and that his mother is probably busy ordering the servants around.
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* StayInTheKitchen: Malthorne taunts Ginger by saying that women shouldn't be prophets, but that they should be housewives and mothers, like his own mother. Peter responds by saying that his parents most likely bought his way into the school, and that his mother is probably busy ordering the servants around.around.
* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Lucien Morgenstern has such good relations with the outside world that he has invited the President of the United States to visit the Luciferian Academy.
* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Lucien Morgenstern has such good relations with the outside world that he has invited the President of the United States to visit the Luciferian Academy.
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* GoodRunningEvil: When Peter, Wesley, and Ginger talk to Brother Gabriel about whether someone like Morgenstern would ever be allowed to visit the Jeremiah Academy, Gabriel says that Morgenstern can't do anything unless the Lord permits him to do it.
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* GoodRunningEvil: When Peter, Wesley, and Ginger talk to Brother Gabriel about whether someone like Morgenstern would ever be allowed to visit the Jeremiah Academy, School, Gabriel says that Morgenstern can't do anything unless the Lord permits him to do it.
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* GoodRunningEvil: When Peter, Wesley, and Ginger talk to Brother Gabriel about whether someone like Morgenstern would ever be allowed to visit the Jeremiah Academy, Gabriel says that Morgenstern can't do anything unless the Lord permits him to do it.
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* AsTheGoodBookSays: There are Bible verses aplenty in this story.
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* AcademyOfEvil: The Luciferian Academy teaches its students how to dabble in "the unholy arts".
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* MagicIsEvil: Brother Gabriel tells Peter, Wesley, and Ginger that the Luciferian Academy teaches its students how to dabble in the "unholy arts", which he says the Bible warns God's people against.
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* AnimalEspionage: Morgenstern uses a raven to spy on the children of the Jeremiah School, and finds out that Peter, the son of Thomas and Susan Stone (whom he killed), is a student of that school.
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* JustAKid: Presumably like Jeremiah the prophet, Peter responds in a similar manner to God calling him out to be a prophet, saying that he doesn't know how to speak for he is only a child. God thought otherwise.
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* JustAKid: Presumably like Jeremiah the prophet, Peter responds in a similar manner to God calling him out to be a prophet, saying that he doesn't know how to speak for he is only a child. God thought otherwise.otherwise and anoints him with power.
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* FlyingDutchman: Wesley hints that Jeremiah Xavier may really be John the apostle, according to what Jesus said about some standing among Him during His first coming that won't taste death until they see the Son of Man coming in His Kingdom.
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* HappilyAdopted: The Dressers seem like decent people to their nephew Peter, even as they despise people who call themselves Christians and don't permit any religious literature to be in their house.
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* OurAngelsAreDifferent: The Jeremiah School's angels are said to be humanlike creatures made out of pure light.
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* AloneAmongFamilies: After the Dressers drop Peter off at the train station to get on the Jeremiah Express, he's the only one there all by himself.
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* AlliterativeName: Dottie Dresser, the aunt of Peter Stone.
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''[[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3370174/1/The-Jeremiah-School The Jeremiah School]]'' is a Christian fantasy story written by Vic George, the author of ''Fanfic/EmpathTheLuckiestSmurf''. It is published in chapters on [=FictionPress.com=].
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''[[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3370174/1/The-Jeremiah-School The Jeremiah School]]'' is a an on-going Christian fantasy story written by Vic George, the author of ''Fanfic/EmpathTheLuckiestSmurf''. It is published in chapters on [=FictionPress.com=].
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* BoardingSchool: The Jeremiah School Of Young Prophets, which is where Peter and all the Jeremiahs go to.
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''[[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3370174/1/The-Jeremiah-School The Jeremiah School]]'' is a Christian fantasy story written by Vic Georgem the author of ''Fanfic/EmpathTheLuckiestSmurf''. It is published in chapters on [=FictionPress.com=].
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''[[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3370174/1/The-Jeremiah-School The Jeremiah School]]'' is a Christian fantasy story written by Vic Georgem George, the author of ''Fanfic/EmpathTheLuckiestSmurf''. It is published in chapters on [=FictionPress.com=].
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''[[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3370174/1/The-Jeremiah-School The Jeremiah School]]'' is a Christian fantasy story written by Vic George.Georgem the author of ''Fanfic/EmpathTheLuckiestSmurf''. It is published in chapters on [=FictionPress.com=].
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* FantasticSlurs: Peter's cousin Donald refers to him and other precocious Christian children like him as "Jerrys", which is short for Jeremiah.
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''[[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3370174/1/The-Jeremiah-School The Jeremiah School]]'' is a Christian fantasy story written by Vic George. It is published in chapters on [=FictionPress.com=].
In the story, a young boy named Peter Stone is given a dream by God that he has been called to be "a prophet to the nations". In the world he inhabits, Christians who are called to be prophets as children are called Jeremiahs, named for the titular prophet from the Literature/BookOfJeremiah, and these young prophets are called to assemble together at a special school called the Jeremiah School Of Young Prophets, which is led by its founder and headmaster Reverend Jeremiah Xavier. It is here at this school where Peter makes friends with Wesley Ronell, an African/American who is born in a family of Jeremiahs, and Ginger Harmony, a young girl who is a total bookworm. He also meets a rival named Malthorne Draconius, a young prophet who comes off as a complete know-it-all, and in a dream encounters the mysterious Lucien Morgenstern, the headmaster of Luciferian Academy.
The story has been inspired by the ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' series, and is meant to be a Christian version of that series.
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!!This story provides examples of:
* JustAKid: Presumably like Jeremiah the prophet, Peter responds in a similar manner to God calling him out to be a prophet, saying that he doesn't know how to speak for he is only a child. God thought otherwise.
* LightIsNotGood: The figure known as Morgenstern appears within a bright light, taunting Peter with a coming reunion before he turns into a seven-headed dragon from the Literature/BookOfRevelation.
* StayInTheKitchen: Malthorne taunts Ginger by saying that women shouldn't be prophets, but that they should be housewives and mothers, like his own mother. Peter responds by saying that his parents most likely bought his way into the school, and that his mother is probably busy ordering the servants around.
In the story, a young boy named Peter Stone is given a dream by God that he has been called to be "a prophet to the nations". In the world he inhabits, Christians who are called to be prophets as children are called Jeremiahs, named for the titular prophet from the Literature/BookOfJeremiah, and these young prophets are called to assemble together at a special school called the Jeremiah School Of Young Prophets, which is led by its founder and headmaster Reverend Jeremiah Xavier. It is here at this school where Peter makes friends with Wesley Ronell, an African/American who is born in a family of Jeremiahs, and Ginger Harmony, a young girl who is a total bookworm. He also meets a rival named Malthorne Draconius, a young prophet who comes off as a complete know-it-all, and in a dream encounters the mysterious Lucien Morgenstern, the headmaster of Luciferian Academy.
The story has been inspired by the ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' series, and is meant to be a Christian version of that series.
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!!This story provides examples of:
* JustAKid: Presumably like Jeremiah the prophet, Peter responds in a similar manner to God calling him out to be a prophet, saying that he doesn't know how to speak for he is only a child. God thought otherwise.
* LightIsNotGood: The figure known as Morgenstern appears within a bright light, taunting Peter with a coming reunion before he turns into a seven-headed dragon from the Literature/BookOfRevelation.
* StayInTheKitchen: Malthorne taunts Ginger by saying that women shouldn't be prophets, but that they should be housewives and mothers, like his own mother. Peter responds by saying that his parents most likely bought his way into the school, and that his mother is probably busy ordering the servants around.
