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* BlackMarket: Persus and the Broken Wheel company, they dispose of goods for the various bandit bands in the Iron Teeth mountains
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* BlackMarket: Persus All of Daggerpoint is basically one big black market. Bandits and the Broken Wheel company, they dispose of thieves gather there to sell goods for the various bandit bands in the Iron Teeth mountainsthat are illegal or stolen.
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* TheSyndicate: Persus and the Broken Wheel company, they dispose of goods for the various bandit bands in the Iron Teeth mountains
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*HideYourOtherness: Post-transformation Blacknail keeps his large [[HornedHumanoid horns]] filed down. He misses the intimidating look of the horns, but filing them off lets him pass as human with just [[InTheHood a hooded cloak]], and that offers possibilities too fun to pass up.
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*InTheHood: If he keeps his horns filed down and smooths his voice a bit, Blacknail can easily pass as human with a good hooded cloak. It helps that the only human city he's been to is [[OutlawTown Daggerpoint]], where a good chunk of the populace goes around hooded.
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*OutlawTown: Daggerpoint, a city founded by and for bandits, black marketeers and other criminals.
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* Sao: This is a great story that have a variety of cool monsters, the plot is nice and the way it´s currently going are refreshing.
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* Sao: This is a great story that have a variety of cool monsters, the plot is nice and the way it´s currently going are refreshing.
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* TheInformant: Blacknail's contact Luphera is used to gather information about the location of people in the city.
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* VillainProtagonist: Blacknail frequently murders and steals, and does not even comprehend why any action that doesn't further his or his master's interests might be morally wrong.
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* CrypticBackgroundReference: Blacknail's and pretty much any other's backstory is pretty much unknown and will most likely only be referenced faintly.
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War ... War never changes... unlike this trope page
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* GreatOffscreenWar: The warring states Offscreen lead to an increase of banditry due to Derserters and some new characters.
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* The Oldest Profession: Blacknail meets a naked woman named Luphera. Her room just happens to be filled with flowery aprodisiac scent.
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* The Oldest Profession: TheOldestProfession: Blacknail meets a naked woman named Luphera. Her room just happens to be filled with flowery aprodisiac scent.
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Well it just happened in the new chapter Den of Beasts 2
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* The Oldest Profession: Blacknail meets a naked woman named Luphera. Her room just happens to be filled with flowery aprodisiac scent.
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*PoisonedWeapons: Saeter and Blacknail occasionally use weapons coated with paralytic [[GiantSpider timber spider]] venom.
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* BreathWeapon: Myagnoir the Great Drake is basically a flightless dragon, and has ice breath. He uses it destroy an entire city and the people in it.
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* DinosaursAreDragons: Both Drakes and Harpies are feathered lizard like creatures, and have been referred to as Saurans.
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* EvilTastesGood: Blacknail will occasionally think or make remarks about how human's taste or smell. He is excited by the scent of blood and the act of killing.
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*EliteMooks: Mages and Vessels in the military. And they're treated like elites, too, cause Herad to correctly conclude that Basghus and Mehedium deserted for reasons other than mere discontent .
* EvilTastesGood: Blacknail will occasionally think or make remarks about how human's taste or smell. He is excited by the scent of blood and the act of killing.
* EvilTastesGood: Blacknail will occasionally think or make remarks about how human's taste or smell. He is excited by the scent of blood and the act of killing.
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* TheDreaded: The City Killer, a near-invincible magical drake, and the ever-present possibility of finding another crystal host with a similar level of power.
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* TheDreaded: The TheDreaded:
**The City Killer, a near-invincible magical drake, and the ever-present possibility of finding another crystal host with a similar level ofpower.power.
**Blacknail's new "dominate everything!" hobgoblin instincts [[ShuttingUpNow shut up real quickly]] when confronted with the thought of challenging [[AsskickingEqualsAuthority Herad]].
**The City Killer, a near-invincible magical drake, and the ever-present possibility of finding another crystal host with a similar level of
**Blacknail's new "dominate everything!" hobgoblin instincts [[ShuttingUpNow shut up real quickly]] when confronted with the thought of challenging [[AsskickingEqualsAuthority Herad]].
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*AmuletOfConcentratedAwesome: Amulets are made to hold particularly fine magic crystals, and seem to allow multiple uses of those crystals somehow.
* TheDreaded: The City Killer, a near-invincible magical drake, and the ever-present possibility of finding another crystal host with a similar level of power.
*IcyBlueEyes: Herad has a particularly scary pair.
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* KingMook: Crystal Hosts are monsters that bonded with naturally occurring PowerCrystals, giving them great strength and magical abilities. [[BlobMonster Slimes]] are ''formed'' by crystal hosting.
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* KingMook: Crystal Hosts are monsters that bonded with naturally occurring PowerCrystals, {{Power Crystal}}s, giving them great strength and magical abilities. [[BlobMonster Slimes]] are ''formed'' by crystal hosting.
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* MagicStaff: In order to use magic a person needs to have an affinity for it and a magical staff with a specialised crystal.
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* MagicStaff: In order Mages use complex staffs to use magic a person needs to have an affinity one-shot crystals for it greater efficiency and a magical staff with a specialised crystal.control.
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* MuggedForDisguise: Blacknail's concealing cloak got trashed while on the road to Daggerpoint, so he lured a guy away from a merchant caravan and robbed him for one.
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* MuggedForDisguise: Blacknail's concealing cloak got trashed while on the road to Daggerpoint, so he lured a guy away from a merchant caravan and robbed him for a new one.
*OurOgresAreHungrier: These ones are actually vegetarians, not man-eaters, although it's a very bad idea to startle them.
*RedBaron: Herad the Black Snake, and her rival Werick the Wolf.
*SufferTheSlings: Blacknail is taught to use one to give him his first ranged capability. He later teaches the skill to a tribe of feral goblins, since he killed their hobgoblin protector.
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* SuperSerum: People known as Vessels, or more informally as Sloshers, consume a special elixir created and sold by mages to gain superhuman abilities. The power granted by an elixir needs to be replenished by consuming more. Not everyone can use it though as most people who take it die and even successful Vessels can become addicted.
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* SuperSerum: People known as Vessels, or more informally as Sloshers, consume a special elixir created and sold by mages to gain superhuman abilities. The power granted by an elixir needs to be replenished by consuming more. Not everyone can use it though though, as most people who take it die and even successful Vessels can become addicted.
*StickyFingers: Goblins don't ''steal''. Humans are just really touchy about people rescuing shinies they leave lying around.
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* TechnologyUplift: Blacknail spends some time commanding a goblin tribe while recovering from a fight with their former leader, and passes the time by teaching them skills like cooking, snare-setting and [[SufferTheSlings sling use]].
* TheDreaded: Myagnoir the Doom of Coroulis. A giant drake with the power to suck the heat from things around it; a nigh invincible monster.
* TheDreaded: Myagnoir the Doom of Coroulis. A giant drake with the power to suck the heat from things around it; a nigh invincible monster.
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* TechnologyUplift: Blacknail spends some time commanding a goblin tribe while recovering from a fight with their former leader, and passes the time by teaching them skills like cooking, snare-setting and [[SufferTheSlings sling use]].
* TheDreaded: Myagnoir the Doom of Coroulis. A giant drake with the power to suck the heat from things around it; a nigh invincible monster.use.
* TheDreaded: Myagnoir the Doom of Coroulis. A giant drake with the power to suck the heat from things around it; a nigh invincible monster.
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* TheVirus: Ghouls are monsters that spread through an infection. Bites and contact with their bodily fluids are the usual vectors.
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* TheVirus: Ghouls are monsters that spread through an infection. Bites and contact with their bodily fluids are the usual vectors. When ghouls attacked Herad's camp, she had a giant pit dug ahead of time, and even the soil that the ghouls bled on and the clothes worn while killing them were buried in it.
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: After transformation Blacknail couldnt control his thoughts, because of that he attacked Saeter. Only long training helped him. Still, the beast inside is powerful and is waiting for his time, the time of carnage and blood.
* WizardingSchool: Cervassa Mas Dhallia, a mage from Endless Heavens Guild is working near one.
* WizardingSchool: Cervassa Mas Dhallia, a mage from Endless Heavens Guild is working near one.
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: After transformation Blacknail couldnt couldn't control his thoughts, because of that he attacked new instincts, and wound up attacking Saeter. Only long training helped him. Still, the beast inside is powerful and is waiting for his time, the time of carnage and blood.
* WizardingSchool: Cervassa Mas Dhallia, a mage from Endless HeavensGuild Guild, is working near one.at one as a researcher.
* WizardingSchool: Cervassa Mas Dhallia, a mage from Endless Heavens
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* CulturalUplift: Blacknail spends some time commanding a goblin tribe while recovering from a fight with their former leader, and teaches them skills like cooking, snare-setting and [[SufferTheSlings sling use]] to pass the time.
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* BeneathTheEarth: Blacknail was born in tunnels beneath a human city. His tribe used to live there for generations. A large monster filled network of caves called the Deep has also been mentioned, but only briefly explored. Small insects called Harvesters live there and build vast mushroom farms.
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* BeneathTheEarth: Blacknail was born in tunnels beneath a human city. His tribe used to live there for generations. A large monster filled monster-filled network of caves called the Deep Dark Roads has also been mentioned, but only briefly explored. Small insects called Harvesters live there and build vast mushroom farms.
*CulturalUplift: Blacknail spends some time commanding a goblin tribe while recovering from a fight with their former leader, and teaches them skills like cooking, snare-setting and [[SufferTheSlings sling use]] to pass the time.
*KingMook: Crystal Hosts are monsters that bonded with naturally occurring PowerCrystals, giving them great strength and magical abilities. [[BlobMonster Slimes]] are ''formed'' by crystal hosting.
* MagicEnhancement: Herad, the Black Snake, can enhance herself with magical elixirs to give herself superhuman speed and strength.
*MonsterLord: A particularly strong, smart and well-fed goblin can metamorphose into a hobgoblin: bigger, smarter, more territorial and bearing horns, and often found commanding goblin tribes.
*MoreCriminalsThanTargets: After the fall of Coroulis, the North is becoming infested with so many bandits that trade is drying up and the bands are turning on each other. Herad plans to centralize them all and eventually turn them into a nation under her rule.
*MuggedForDisguise: Blacknail's concealing cloak got trashed while on the road to Daggerpoint, so he lured a guy away from a merchant caravan and robbed him for one.
*RandomEffectSpell: According to Mahedium, badly grown magic crystals are this. Given how the odds stack up, using them is almost certainly suicide.
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*SuperpowerLottery: The City Killer is a drake (already one of the strongest monsters in the setting) that's also a powerful crystal host, sporting [[GiantMook enhanced size]], deadly [[AnIcePerson ice breath]] and possibly even [[ItCanThink an intellect]]. The combination allowed it to casually tear apart Coroulis, a major city.
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* MagicEnhancement: Herad, the Black Snake, can enhance herself with magical elixirs to give herself superhuman speed and strength.
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* OurMonstersAreDifferent: Harpies are predatory birds with human like faces, and slimes are dangerous creatures powered by magical crystals.
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* TheDreaded: Myagnoir the Doom of Coroulis. A giant drake with the power to suck the heat from things around it. Nigh invincible monster.
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* UnstoppableRage: When trolls are in rage there are few beings in the forest, who can stop them.
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* TheHorde: While trying to follow Herad and Saeter Blacknail met an older hobgoblin, who was leading a little horde of goblins. In order to survive Blacknail had to ignore the horde and go directly after their leader.
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* PlotThreads: There are few of those in The Iron Teeth. Main plot thread follows life of goblin named Blacknail.
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* PlotThreads: There are few of those in The Iron Teeth. Main main plot thread follows life of goblin named Blacknail.Blacknail the goblin, but the story also has various interludes. These interludes follow different characters and can even take place in the past. They are used to expand the world and show different viewpoints.
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* {{Transhuman}}: Herad, the Black Snake, can enhance herself with magical elixirs to give herself superhuman speed and strength.
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* TheStoic: No matter how dangerous situation is, Saeter always is calm and focused.
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* SwordOverHead: Blacknail was taught different stances for sword fight. Some of them require to have sword over your head.
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* {{Angst}}: After evolution, Blacknail started to think about a lot more topics. Of course, it happened only when his life wasn’t in danger.
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* AssholeVictim: A certain goblin in this story killed the bandit who was harassing him. He was definitely a asshole.
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* BladeLock: At any given time during a Sword Fight, expect the two blades to lock together, especially when you are teaching young hobgoblin.
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* DirtyOldMan: Who would have thought that Saeter is one of them ?
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* GoldFever: Even though he doesn’t use them, still, Blacknail likes them a lot. Those small shiny objects..
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* Lust: When female goblin starts to lick you, it means she is interested.
* LustObject: When Saeter saw her beauty, he immediately took actions.
* LustObject: When Saeter saw her beauty, he immediately took actions.
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* {{Pride}}: Blacknail has a lot of pride. So does Herad. She's been known to kill people for even the slightest insult.
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* {{Revenge}}: There was bandit, who was harassing Blacknail. After goblin had his revenge, Herads band became a little bit smaller.
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* {{Revenge}}: There was bandit, bandit who was harassing Blacknail. After The goblin had his revenge, Herads apparently holds a grudge, because soon Herad's band became a little bit smaller.
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* TheCasanova: Blacknails master is one .
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* BizarreTasteinFood: Goblins like food to be slimy.
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* BizarreTasteinFood: BizarreTasteInFood: Goblins like food to be slimy.slimy and somewhat rotten.
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* [[Angst]]: After evolution, Blacknail started to think about a lot more topics. Of course, it happened only when his life wasn’t in danger.
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* AssholeVictim: A certain goblin in this story killed the bandit, bandit who was harassing him.him. He was definitely a asshole.
