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* LadyLand: Right there in the title. While a few males are permitted to remain (in a servile position) in Women's Country, the majority leave at age fifteen to join the all-male Warriors outside. Up to the age of 25, young men may choose to return to Women's Country as Servitors...but after that, any man who attempts to enter the city is killed.
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* LadyLand: Right there in "Women's Country" of the title. While a few males title. Boys are permitted exiled at age five to remain (in a servile position) in Women's Country, the majority leave male Warriors outside. Starting at age fifteen and up to join the all-male Warriors outside. Up to the age of 25, twenty-five, young men may choose to return to Women's Country as Servitors...but after that, any man who attempts to enter the city is killed. Servitors.
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Twice a year, each city throws a carnival, when the men are allowed to visit inside the walls for a few weeks--and during which time all children are conceived. When a boy turns five, he goes to live with his father in the warriors' garrison. Then, when he turns fifteen, he must make a choice: stay in the garrison, and become a full-fledged warrior, or return to the city and live as a [[NonActionGuy servitor]] (a domestic worker subservient to the women). In [[RatedMForManly the macho culture of the warriors]], becoming a servitor is seen as [[DirtyCoward cowardly]] and dishonorable--not surprisingly, few boys choose to do it.
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Twice a year, each city throws a carnival, when the men are allowed to visit inside the walls for a few weeks--and during which time all children are conceived. When a boy turns five, he goes to live with his father in the warriors' garrison. Then, when he turns fifteen, he must make a choice: stay in the garrison, and become a full-fledged warrior, or return to the city and live as a [[NonActionGuy servitor]] (a domestic worker subservient to the women). In [[RatedMForManly the macho culture of the warriors]], warriors, becoming a servitor is seen as [[DirtyCoward cowardly]] and dishonorable--not surprisingly, few boys choose to do it.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Joshua,and the servitors in general. At first, they're presented as willing servants to the women and described as "calm and judicious men", but as the story goes along, we find out that [[spoiler: not only are many of the servitors gifted with psychic abilities that cause those in the garrisons to hate and fear them, but the servitors are also trained in martial arts and will ruthlessly kill any threat to Women's Country).
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Joshua,and the servitors in general. At first, they're presented as willing servants to the women and described as "calm and judicious men", but as the story goes along, we find out that [[spoiler: not only are many of the servitors gifted with psychic abilities that cause those in the garrisons to hate and fear them, but the servitors are also trained in martial arts and will ruthlessly kill any threat to Women's Country).Country.]]
