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* ImperialStormtrooperMarksmanshipAcademy: Unusually applies to the protagonist, who over the course of the adventure misses opportunities to kill his targets at a distance through inexpert marksmanship (Attel Malagate once, Howard Treesong ''twice'').
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* StormtrooperMarksmanshipAcademy: Unusually applies to the protagonist, who over the course of the adventure misses opportunities to kill his targets at a distance through inexpert marksmanship (Attel Malagate once, Howard Treesong ''twice'').
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* FiveManBand: The Demon Princes during the Mount Pleasant raid.
** TheBigBad: Howard Alan Treesong.
** TheDragon: Attel Malagate.
** TheEvilGenius: Kokor Hekkus.
** TheBrute: Lens Larque.
** TheDarkChick: Viole Falushe.
** TheBigBad: Howard Alan Treesong.
** TheDragon: Attel Malagate.
** TheEvilGenius: Kokor Hekkus.
** TheBrute: Lens Larque.
** TheDarkChick: Viole Falushe.
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* ReunionRevenge: Howard Alan Treesong does this in ''The Book of Dreams'', with his former classmates.
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* ReunionRevenge: Howard Alan Treesong does this in ''The Book of Dreams'', with his former classmates. Each and every one of them is an AssholeVictim to some degree and the revenge takes the form of cruel and painful pranks that are contextual to the original slight, rather than mindless torture or execution, to the point where it's not all that difficult to identify with Treesong.
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** It's hard to tell who is worse. Howard's brother describes him liking "young, little girls", Gersen deduces that he murdered at least one of them and it's reasonable to imply that [[spoiler:Alice Wroke would have been next]], but Falushe's lifelong obsession with one girl is an extreme monomania and there are rumours about him which suggest that he too engages in sex followed immediately by murder for his entertainment.
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* TakeAThirdOption: Lens Larque, after Gersen has arranged that he can either show up in court (where Gersen plans to kill him) or forfeit his ship. [[spoiler: He blows it up and collects on the insurance... the policy for which is held by a company owned by Gersen.]]
* TalkingToThemself: [[spoiler: Howard Alan Treesong]] just before his death.
* TalkingToThemself: [[spoiler: Howard Alan Treesong]] just before his death.
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* TakeAThirdOption: Lens Larque, after Gersen has arranged that he can either show up in court (where Gersen plans to kill him) or forfeit his ship. [[spoiler: He blows it up and collects on the insurance... the policy for which is held underwritten by a company owned by Gersen.]]
* TalkingToThemself: [[spoiler: Howard AlanTreesong]] Treesong's multiple personalities]] after he is wounded early in the hunt, and also just before his death.
* TalkingToThemself: [[spoiler: Howard Alan
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* TransplantedHumans: Through colonization of the Oikumene, and to the extent that HumanSubspecies exist. Apart from the Star Kings (a race of [[AdaptiveAbility adaptable aliens]] to which the first Demon Prince, Attel Malagate, belongs), no other sapient aliens are seen in the entire series.
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* TransplantedHumans: Through colonization of the Oikumene, and to the extent that HumanSubspecies exist. Apart from the Star Kings (a race of [[AdaptiveAbility adaptable aliens]] to which the first Demon Prince, Attel Malagate, belongs), no other sapient aliens are seen in the entire series.
** Thereseries, though here are hints of extinct sapient races whose extinction predated human arrival on their planet.
** There
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* GotOverRapeInstantly: In "The Face", Kirth Gersen rescues Jerdian Chanseth, the girl he has a crush on, from AttemptedRape. They end up spending the night together.
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* WorldsMostBeautifulWoman: Alusz Iphigenia is regarded as this.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Or blue (red, gold, green, etc.) skin — cosmetic dyeing is very fashionable throughout the Oikumene.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Or blue (red, gold, green, etc.) skin — cosmetic dyeing is very fashionable throughout the Oikumene.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Or blue (red, gold, green, etc.) skin — cosmetic dyeing is very fashionable throughout the Oikumene.
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* BizarreSexualDimorphism: The HumanSubspecies known as the Darsh have women who are larger and hairier than the men (who are usually hairless after puberty) to the point of often growing {{Badass Mustache}}s.
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* BizarreSexualDimorphism: The HumanSubspecies known as the Darsh have women who are larger and hairier than the men (who are usually hairless after puberty) to the point of often growing {{Badass Mustache}}s.mustaches.
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* CounterfeitCash: Used in an ''epic'' scam in ''The Killing Machine'' [[spoiler: The in-universe equivalent of 10,000,000,000,000 dollars]].
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* CounterfeitCash: Used in an ''epic'' scam in ''The Killing Machine'' [[spoiler: The in-universe equivalent of 10,000,000,000,000 10 ''trillion'' dollars]].
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* NotSoDifferent: In ''The Face'', [[spoiler:Kirth Gersen decides to carry out Lens Larque's final plan — and for pretty much the exact same reason]]. That said, Gersen [[spoiler: lets Lens Larque die without seeing it done, [[KickTheSonOfABitch despite the begging]] of the dying man.]]
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** Part of this comes from Gersen having studied poisons on Suthiro's home world and having an appreciation of his culture; it ironically gives the two men common ground.
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* SystematicVillainTakedown: The five titular crime lords are described in the beginning chapter in the first novel (with one even making an appearance in disguise) but only one is eliminated by the end of the first novel and each subsequent novel focuses on the hunt and elimination of a single Prince. It is also a recurring theme that the minions of each Prince are eliminated one by one over the course of each novel.
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* InformedAbility: Lens Larque is ''supposedly'' quite an artist with his whip, Panak.
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* InformedAbility: Lens Larque is ''supposedly'' quite an artist with his whip, Panak. Though given what this artistry [[FlayingAlive could ensue,]] maybe we're better off not seeing it.
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* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: The protagonist trains since childhood to avenge his parents' deaths and his DoomedHomeTown, but after finally taking revenge on all of the titular princes, he realizes he no longer has any purpose in life and is devastated.
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* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: The protagonist trains since childhood to avenge his parents' deaths and his DoomedHomeTown, but after finally taking revenge on all of the titular princes, he realizes he no longer has any purpose in life and is devastated.feels a bit numb.
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* BadassGrandpa: Kirth Gersen's grandfather, who trains him and is hinted to have had criminal ties in the past.
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** Specifically, it's being kept in medieval stasis by Kokor Hekkus for his personal playground.
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* ImprobableAimingSkills: Averted. Marksmanship is Gersen's weakest point compared to his ninja-like hand-to-hand skills; in ''The Book of Dreams'' he has two opportunities to shoot at Howard Alan Treesong, and fails to deal a killing blow both times.
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* ImprobableAimingSkills: Averted. Marksmanship is Gersen's weakest point compared to his ninja-like hand-to-hand skills; in ''The Book of Dreams'' he has two opportunities to shoot at Howard Alan Treesong, Treesong and fails to deal a killing blow both times.
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* JackBauerInterrogationTechnique: Gersen, on several occasions. Somewhat mitigated by the fact that many of the people he does it to were trying to kill him at the time.
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* LoveMakesYouEvil: Demon Princes Howard Alan Treesong (''The Book of Dreams'') and Viole Falushe (''The Palace of Love''). ''Especially'' Viole Falushe; losing the ''Book of Dreams'' that symbolically contained Treesong's dreams of a greater future was a just as big, if not bigger catalyst for his evil.
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* LoveMakesYouEvil: Demon Princes Howard Alan Treesong (''The Book of Dreams'') and Viole Falushe (''The Palace of Love''). ''Especially'' Viole Falushe; losing the ''Book of Dreams'' that symbolically contained Treesong's dreams of a greater future was a just as big, if not bigger catalyst for his evil.Falushe.
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* WifeHusbandry: [[spoiler: Viole Falushe's motivation in ''The Palace of Love'', horribly mixed with TrulySingleParent.]] Subverted, though: after all the effort he's put into [[spoiler: raising clones of the girl he wanted to love him, it all falls flat: one is terrified of him, another falls for his nemesis on sight, and a third laughs in his face and regards him as something of a bad joke.]]
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* WifeHusbandry: [[spoiler: Viole Falushe's motivation in ''The Palace of Love'', horribly mixed with TrulySingleParent.]] Subverted, though: after all the effort he's put into [[spoiler: raising clones of the girl he wanted to love him, him,]] it all falls flat: one is terrified of him, another falls for his nemesis on sight, and a third laughs in his face and regards him as something of a bad joke.]]joke. Worst of all, Gersen uses them to reveal his identity, and that consequently costs him his life.
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** Similarly, one of the footnotes in ''Star King'' makes reference to an article by [[Creator/FrankHerbert Frerb Hankbert]].
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** ''The Killing Machine'' - Overnighting with the Tadusko-Oi, Gersen realizes why Alusz Iphegenia is so despondent: [[spoiler: according to their customs, ''all'' of the men that so wish are entitled to sleep with the only available woman, meaning her.]] He promptly challenges their leader to combat, earning himself a severe beating but managing to win and so [[spoiler: officially, reserve her use to himself; in fact, keep her safe in his tent.]]
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** ''The Killing Machine'' - Overnighting with the Tadusko-Oi, Gersen realizes why Alusz Iphegenia is so despondent: [[spoiler: according to their customs, ''all'' of the men that so wish are entitled to sleep with the only available woman, meaning her.]] He promptly challenges their leader to combat, earning himself a severe beating but managing to win and so [[spoiler: officially, officially reserve her use to himself; himself but in fact, keep fact give her safe sanctuary in his tent.]]
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* FiveBadBand: The Demon Princes during the Mount Pleasant raid.
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* ImmortalityImmorality: A "hormagaunt" (not [[TabletopGames/Warhammer40000 that kind]]) is a being who has achieved immortality from a substance extracted from children. [[spoiler:Like Kokor Hekkus.]]
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* ImmortalityImmorality: A "hormagaunt" (not [[TabletopGames/Warhammer40000 [[TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 that kind]]) is a being who has achieved immortality from a substance extracted from children. [[spoiler:Like Kokor Hekkus.]]
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* AffablyEvil: While Sivij Suthiro is happy to call himself evil ("I am a man; I am a Sarkoy"), he is pleasant enough to Pallis Atwrode when he meets her while not "on duty", warns Gersen that Tristano (whom Gersen savagely beat a chapter or two previously) is going to be coming after him for revenge, and points out that he kills "only when I must, or when it profits me" -- and when he points out that Hildemar Dasce "surpasses me as grandly as I surpass you", he isn't kidding. He even passes off a mild jibe from Gersen as not worth rising to, and bears no grudge at having been tricked by Gersen earlier in the story.
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* SpoilerTitle: Part of the plot of ''Star King'' revolves around the fact that the villain is a member of a non-human alien race -- a fact that Gersen does not know for half the story, but which the reader's attention is inescapably drawn to.
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** ''Star King'' - When Pallis Atwrode is kidnapped, Gersen immediately factors a rescue mission into his revenge plan.
** ''The Killing Machine'' - Overnighting with the Tadusko-Oi, Gersen realizes why Alusz Iphegenia is so despondent: [[spoiler: according to their customs, ''all'' of the men that so wish are entitled to sleep with the only available woman, meaning her.]] He promptly challenges their leader to combat, earning himself a severe beating but managing to win and so [[spoiler: officially, reserve her use to himself; in fact, keep her safe in his tent.]]
** ''The Killing Machine'' - Overnighting with the Tadusko-Oi, Gersen realizes why Alusz Iphegenia is so despondent: [[spoiler: according to their customs, ''all'' of the men that so wish are entitled to sleep with the only available woman, meaning her.]] He promptly challenges their leader to combat, earning himself a severe beating but managing to win and so [[spoiler: officially, reserve her use to himself; in fact, keep her safe in his tent.]]
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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: A subtle example with Howard Alan Treesong and his [[SplitPersonality Split Personalities]]: [[spoiler:one of his captors says that it should have been impossible for him to commit suicide that way without help.]]
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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: A subtle example with Howard Alan Treesong and [[spoiler:and his [[SplitPersonality Split Personalities]]: [[spoiler:one one of his captors says that it should have been impossible for him to commit suicide that the way he did without help.]]
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* LoveMakesYouEvil: Demon Princes Howard Alan Treesong (''The Book of Dreams'') and Viole Falushe (''The Palace of Love''). ''Especially'' Viole Falushe; losing the ''Book of Dreams'' that literally contained Treesong's dreams of a greater future was a just as big, if not bigger catalyst for his evil.
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* LoveMakesYouEvil: Demon Princes Howard Alan Treesong (''The Book of Dreams'') and Viole Falushe (''The Palace of Love''). ''Especially'' Viole Falushe; losing the ''Book of Dreams'' that literally symbolically contained Treesong's dreams of a greater future was a just as big, if not bigger catalyst for his evil.
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* LoveMakesYouEvil: Demon Princes Howard Alan Treesong (''The Book of Dreams'') and Viole Falushe (''The Palace of Love''). ''Especially'' Viole Falushe.
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* LoveMakesYouEvil: Demon Princes Howard Alan Treesong (''The Book of Dreams'') and Viole Falushe (''The Palace of Love''). ''Especially'' Viole Falushe.Falushe; losing the ''Book of Dreams'' that literally contained Treesong's dreams of a greater future was a just as big, if not bigger catalyst for his evil.
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* ReunionRevenge: Howard Alan Treesong does this in ''The Book of Dreams''.
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** Immir (no colour), who seems to be an {{Expy}} of [[spoiler:Treesong]] himself.
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** Immir (no colour), who seems to be an idealized {{Expy}} of [[spoiler:Treesong]] himself.
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* SpiderTank: built to resemble a ''dnazd'', a monster native to Thamber (''The Killing Machine'').
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* SpiderTank: built Built to resemble a ''dnazd'', a monster native to Thamber (''The Killing Machine'').