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Crosswicking example from Bathhouse Blitz.

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* BathhouseBlitz: In ''Oath of Fealty'', Kieri Phelan faces an assassin while naked in the bathtub. The assassin kills the bath attendant, but Kieri throws a bar of soap to distract the assassin and then runs across the room, grabs a metal water pitcher, and kills the assassin by hitting him on the head with it.

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* FearIsNormal: This is an important plot point in ''Oath of Gold''. As a mercenary and then as a paladin-in-training, Paks loved to fight and felt no fear in battle. After being cursed by the kuaknom, she loses this, and instead becomes scared of everyone and everything, completely unable to fight any kind of attacker. It takes a long time, and some careful counseling by Master Oakhallow, but eventually Paks comes to understand that courage is not the absence of fear, but rather the ability to go on despite the fear. Feeling and understanding the fear that normal peasants feel is an essential step on her journey to becoming a paladin.



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* KnightInShiningArmorKnightInShiningArmor: Most paladins are this, complete with armor and magic=born warhorse.



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%%* ThePaladin* ThePaladin: Several, including Paks. Paladins of Gird are selected by the Order from among the best of their knight-trainees, trained to be extremely good warriors, then granted magical powers by Gird. However, every now and then the gods decide to choose and empower one on their own. Paks is such a one; she has all the skills and powers of a paladin, but received them directly from the gods rather than through her training as a Girdsman.



* ReligionOfEvil: Liart the god of torment; the Webmistress Achrya
%%* TheResenter: [[spoiler:Barra.]]

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* ReligionOfEvil: Liart the god of torment; the Webmistress Achrya
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TheResenter: [[spoiler:Barra.]]]] She starts out as just another recruit alongside Paks, and for a while they're good friends. But for whatever reason, she loses the sense of fun that Paks first saw in her, and becomes insanely jealous of Paks's success.

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* FourLinesAllWaiting: An issue in the Paladin's Legacy series, which jumps around between a dozen viewpoints trying to show concurrent developments in the world. With so many different people moving on different naturalistic plotlines, it becomes impossible to draw it all together into a meaningful greater whole. There is no shared climax, everyone is simply too far apart.



* OneSteveLimit: Subverted. Plenty of throwaway characters share a name with major characters. There are, however, no main charaters with the same name. It is tocuhed on when Paks is asked to take care of a new recruit who has the same name as a friend of hers who died in battle.

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* OneSteveLimit: Subverted. Plenty of throwaway characters share a name with major characters. There (There are, however, no main charaters characters with the same name. name.) It is tocuhed touched on when Paks is asked to take care of a new recruit who has the same name as a friend of hers who died in battle.

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All three books are available in a compiled omnibus edition. Moon would later write a pair of prequel books about Gird himself, ''Surrender None'' and ''Liar's Oath'', collectively titled ''Literature/TheLegacyOfGird''. A second series of a projected five books, set after ''The Deed of Paksenarrion'' and entitled ''Paladin's Legacy'' is also in progress. ''Oath of Fealty'', ''Kings of the North'', ''Echoes of Betrayal'' (formerly announced as ''Crisis of Vision'') and ''Limits of Power'' have already been published.

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All three books are available in a compiled omnibus edition. Moon would later write a pair of prequel books about Gird himself, ''Surrender None'' and ''Liar's Oath'', collectively titled ''Literature/TheLegacyOfGird''.

A second series of a projected five books, set after ''The Deed of Paksenarrion'' and entitled ''Paladin's Legacy'' is also was released in progress. ''Oath of Fealty'', ''Kings of the North'', ''Echoes of Betrayal'' (formerly announced as ''Crisis of Vision'') and ''Limits of Power'' have already been published.
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%%* AlwaysChaoticEvil: The kuaknom.

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%%* * AlwaysChaoticEvil: The kuaknom.dark elves (called "iynisin" by good elves and "kuaknom" by most others) who are basically drow by another name. They worship a twisted and evil goddess, ally themselves with a spider-like lesser goddess (Achrya), use orcs as soldiers, and use both psychological warfare and very dark magic to break Paks's spirit.


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* ATasteOfTheLash: After committing serious crimes against the Company, two recruits are flogged and then branded for their crimes before being banished from the Duke's lands. The one charged with minor crimes gets five strokes that hurt but do little real damage; the one who led the conspiracy and then tried to escape by force is given forty strokes "well-marked", the last five with extra force. When it's over, his whole back is covered in blood and he's fainted from the pain of it. However, the guardsman wielding the lash is careful not to inflict lethal or even crippling damage.

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* CaptainErsatz: Much of the setting was inspired by ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' (in fact, the story was inspired by Moon seeing how a D&D group played paladins, and deciding that she could do a better job). The dark elves' goddess Achrya the Webspinner in particular is essentially Lolth with the serial numbers filed off.



* {{Expy}}: Much of the setting was inspired by ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' (in fact, the story was inspired by Moon seeing how a D&D group played paladins, and deciding that she could do a better job). The dark elves' goddess Achrya the Webspinner in particular is essentially Lolth with the serial numbers filed off.
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%%RepairDontRespond. Someone else who's read this part can determine what's correct here.** Barranyi is much more prominent as a character. Natzlin isn't so much a LipstickLesbian as just quiet.

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%%RepairDontRespond.%%Administrivia/RepairDontRespond. Someone else who's read this part can determine what's correct here.** Barranyi is much more prominent as a character. Natzlin isn't so much a LipstickLesbian as just quiet.



* TheMunchkin: Macenion.

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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished

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* ThePaladin

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* TheResenter: [[spoiler:Barra.]]

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** Barranyi is much more prominent as a character. Natzlin isn't so much a LipstickLesbian as just quiet.

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* RunawayBride: Paks runs away from home and joins the Duke's mercenary company to avoid an arranged marriage. She doesn't actively hate her groom-to-be, but she doesn't have any romantic interest in him ([[{{Asexuality}} or anyone else]]). For a while she sends part of her pay home to reimburse her father for her dowry.

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* RunawayBride: Paks runs away from home and joins the Duke's mercenary company to avoid an arranged marriage. She doesn't actively hate her groom-to-be, but she doesn't have any romantic interest in him ([[{{Asexuality}} or anyone else]]).him. For a while she sends part of her pay home to reimburse her father for her dowry.

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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: The kuaknom.
* AnyoneCanDie: Except Paks.
* ArrangedMarriage - Paks flees one. Unlike other examples it's noted she didn't actually hate her groom-to-be, she just didn't want to marry him. She also sent part of her earnings as a mercenary home to pay her family back for her dowry.
* {{Asexuality}}: Paks just isn't interested. She's even asked at one point if she prefers women (she doesn't), having rejected the advances of men in her cohort, and she maintains her disinterest through the whole story. [[spoiler:It even plays a part in her torture by the followers of Liart. She's repeatedly raped, but because she has no sexual desire it becomes just another form of pain to endure.]]

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* %%* AlwaysChaoticEvil: The kuaknom.
* %%* AnyoneCanDie: Except Paks.
* ArrangedMarriage - ArrangedMarriage: Paks flees one. Unlike other examples it's noted she didn't actually hate her groom-to-be, she just didn't want to marry him. She also sent part of her earnings as a mercenary home to pay her family back for her dowry.
* {{Asexuality}}: Paks just isn't interested. She's even asked at one point if she prefers women (she doesn't), having rejected the advances of men in her cohort, and she maintains her disinterest through the whole story. [[spoiler:It even plays a part in her torture by the followers of Liart. She's repeatedly raped, but because she has no sexual desire it becomes just another form of pain to endure.]]
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* BoisterousBruiser: Mal the forester.

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* CelibateHero: Paladins in the setting never marry and rarely take lovers, and then only between quests. Paks in particular [[{{Asexuality}} never developed a sex drive]].

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* CelibateHero: Paladins in the setting never marry and rarely take lovers, and then only between quests. Paks in particular [[{{Asexuality}} never developed a sex drive]].



* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Averted in book three. [[spoiler: Paks does get raped during her torture at the end of the series, but it's only mentioned in passing. [[{{Asexuality}} She has no sex drive herself]] and therefore doesn't view it as any worse than the rest of the torture, and justifiably so - it really is one of the ''least'' horrific things done to her during that time.]]
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* DirkDastardlyStopsToCheat: {{Invoked}} in ''Oath of Gold''. [[spoiler:The cult of Liart actually manages to capture Duke Phelan with the intention of killing him to set off a SuccessionCrisis in Lyonya, to whose recently deceased king Paks has recently discovered Phelan is the legitimate heir. [[VillainBall They are willing to give all that up]] in exchange for getting to torture a paladin of the High Lord and Gird, i.e. Paks herself, for a few days. She brokers this deal to buy Phelan the time he needs to reach the capital safely, [[HeroicSacrifice not expecting to survive]].]]

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* DirkDastardlyStopsToCheat: DickDastardlyStopsToCheat: {{Invoked}} in ''Oath of Gold''. [[spoiler:The cult of Liart actually manages to capture Duke Phelan with the intention of killing him to set off a SuccessionCrisis in Lyonya, to whose recently deceased king Paks has recently discovered Phelan is the legitimate heir. [[VillainBall They are willing to give all that up]] in exchange for getting to torture a paladin of the High Lord and Gird, i.e. Paks herself, for a few days. She brokers this deal to buy Phelan the time he needs to reach the capital safely, [[HeroicSacrifice not expecting to survive]].]]
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* DirkDastardlyStopsToCheat: {{Invoked}} in ''Oath of Gold''. [[spoiler:The cult of Liart actually manages to capture Duke Phelan with the intention of killing him to set off a SuccessionCrisis in Lyonya, to whose recently deceased king Paks has recently discovered Phelan is the legitimate heir. [[VillainBall They are willing to give all that up]] in exchange for getting to torture a paladin of the High Lord and Gird, i.e. Paks herself, for a few days. She brokers this deal to buy Phelan the time he needs to reach the capital safely, [[HeroicSacrifice not expecting to survive]].]]

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* {{Asexuality}}: Paks just isn't interested, she's even asked at one point if she prefers women (she doesn't), having rejected the advances of men in her cohort, and she maintains her disinterest through the whole story. [[spoiler:It even plays a part in her torture by the followers of Liart. She's repeatedly raped, but because she has no sexual desire it becomes just another form of pain to endure.]]

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* {{Asexuality}}: Paks just isn't interested, she's interested. She's even asked at one point if she prefers women (she doesn't), having rejected the advances of men in her cohort, and she maintains her disinterest through the whole story. [[spoiler:It even plays a part in her torture by the followers of Liart. She's repeatedly raped, but because she has no sexual desire it becomes just another form of pain to endure.]]



* AFatherToHisMen: Duke Phelan. Certainly some of the other mercenary dukes as well, but Phelan takes a fatherly interest in Paks' development above and beyond the call of duty, even after she leaves his company.
** At least partly because Paks is [[spoiler:roughly the same age as his daughter would have been.]]

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* AFatherToHisMen: Duke Phelan. Certainly some of the other mercenary dukes as well, but Phelan takes a fatherly interest in Paks' development above and beyond the call of duty, even after she leaves his company.
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* FantasyPantheon: The High Lord and his saints, a bevy of regional gods and goddesses.

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* FantasyPantheon: The On the side of Good, the High Lord and his saints, a bevy of regional gods and goddesses.goddesses including Gird (patron of peasants and rural communities), Falk, and the Windsteed (a horse god worshiped by plainsdwellers). On the side of evil, Liart (pretty much a GenderFlip of Loviatar from ''TabletopGame/ForgottenRealms''), and Achrya (worshiped by the evil kuaknom elves, making her the equivalent of Lolth).



* MosesInTheBulrushes

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* MosesInTheBulrushesMosesInTheBulrushes: [[spoiler:Duke Kieri Phelan is the heir to the throne of Lyonya, who went missing as a child when his family was attacked during an outing.]]



* OverlyLongName: Yes, "Paksenarrion Dorthansdotter" is a mouthful, as remarked by the recruiter who signs her on with Duke Phelan's mercenaries (he's surprised she can even spell it and asks her if there's a shorter form, and she picks Paks over the girlier Pakse favored by her father). Her given name is (apparently mildly corrupted) Elvish, her surname is a patronymic.

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* OverlyLongName: Yes, "Paksenarrion Dorthansdotter" is a mouthful, as remarked by the recruiter who signs her on with Duke Phelan's mercenaries (he's mercenaries: he's surprised she can even spell it and asks her if there's a shorter form, and she picks Paks over the girlier Pakse favored by her father). father. Her given name is (apparently mildly (mildly corrupted) Elvish, her surname is a patronymic.



* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Averted. [[spoiler: Paks does get raped during her torture at the end of the series, but it's only mentioned in passing. [[{{Asexuality}} She has no sex drive herself]] and therefore doesn't view it as any worse than the rest of the torture, and justifiably so - it really is one of the ''least'' horrific things done to her during that time.]]

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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Averted.Averted in book three. [[spoiler: Paks does get raped during her torture at the end of the series, but it's only mentioned in passing. [[{{Asexuality}} She has no sex drive herself]] and therefore doesn't view it as any worse than the rest of the torture, and justifiably so - it really is one of the ''least'' horrific things done to her during that time.]]



** [[CrystalDragonJesus Luap]] is "Paul" backwards (as in Saint Paul), though {{Word of God}} states this was accidental and [[http://gamerstavern.org/gamers-tavern-ep-46-the-deed-of-paksenarrion-or-elizabeth-moon-corrects-darryl-and-ross/ Elizabeth Moon would've changed the name if she'd noticed at the time]].

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** [[CrystalDragonJesus Luap]] is "Paul" backwards (as in Saint Paul), though {{Word of God}} WordOfGod states this was accidental and [[http://gamerstavern.org/gamers-tavern-ep-46-the-deed-of-paksenarrion-or-elizabeth-moon-corrects-darryl-and-ross/ Elizabeth Moon would've changed the name if she'd noticed at the time]].



* StarterVillain: Siniava.

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* StarterVillain: Siniava.Siniava, "Honeycat", a brutal warlord who arises in the South during the summer campaigning season and forces several top companies to team up to bring him down. One of the deals they make to achieve this leads to Paks quitting early in ''Divided Allegiance'': she didn't sign up to conquer a duchy for a pirate.


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* VowOfCelibacy: Paladins in the setting are celibate while on quest, and while they're permitted to take lovers between quests they rarely do. Being ace, this isn't much of a hurdle for Paks.

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* WordOfGod: Elizabeth Moon maintains a [[http://www.paksworld.com/ Paksenarrion website]].
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* HollywoodTactics: Averted. Creator/ElizabethMoon went through [[SemperFi UMSC Officer Candidate School]] and did four years in the Corps, and has degree in history. She knows what she's doing when it comes to battles.

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* HollywoodTactics: Averted. Creator/ElizabethMoon went through [[SemperFi UMSC Officer Candidate School]] and did four years in the Corps, and has a degree in history. She knows what she's doing when it comes to battles.
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** Sib, a warming and revitalizing beverage. It's bags of bitter herbs steeped in hot water, often mixed with honey -- a lot like tea -- except that tea also exists in this universe, and sib is different.

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** Sib, a warming and revitalizing beverage. It's bags of bitter herbs steeped in hot water, often mixed with honey -- a lot like tea -- except that tea also exists in this universe, and sib is different.different (for starters, sib is cheap enough that mercenaries get it in their rations, but tea is a rare and expensive luxury).
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* AdaptationExpansion: The second arc of ''Divided Allegiance'' is essentially a play-through of the classic Dungeons and Dragons module "The Village of Hommlett" with the names changed. Many of the major characters are fleshed out considerably and given more background particularly Marshall Kedfer and Yeoman Marshall Ambros (Canon Terjon and Calmert in the module) and the thief Arvid Seminson (Fernok of Ferd in the module).

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* AdaptationExpansion: The second arc of ''Divided Allegiance'' is essentially a play-through of the classic Dungeons and Dragons module "The Village of Hommlett" with the names changed. Many of the major characters are fleshed out considerably and given more background particularly Marshall Kedfer Cedfer and Yeoman Marshall Yeoman-marshall Ambros (Canon Terjon and Calmert in the module) and the thief Arvid Seminson (Fernok of Ferd in the module).



* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Paks quits Phelan's mercenary company at the start of ''Divided Allegiance'' after deciding [[EveryoneHasStandards she doesn't want to be a part of conquering a barony for a former pirate]] (to pay him back for helping the northern mercenaries take out Honeycat in the previous book).

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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Paks quits Phelan's mercenary company at the start of ''Divided Allegiance'' after deciding [[EveryoneHasStandards she doesn't want to be a part of conquering a barony duchy for a former pirate]] (to pay him back for helping the northern mercenaries take out Honeycat in the previous book).book). It should be noted that said pirate terrorizes the towns in his new duchy, killing and torturing people who he claims "opposes his rule".

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