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* ExpospeakGag: Several involving the robots. Particularly neat is the scene where Isaac defeats a gang of other robots, which outnumber him but have less sophisticated electronic brains, by informing them that they're not robots, they're "recumbent waterfowl of the genus ''Anatidae''", and then knocking them out while they're trying to work out what he just said. ("I repeat, you are all [[spoiler:sitting ducks]].")
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* ExpospeakGag: Several involving the robots. Particularly neat is the scene where Isaac defeats a gang of other robots, which outnumber him but have less sophisticated electronic brains, by informing them that they're not robots, they're "recumbent waterfowl of the genus ''Anatidae''", and then knocking them out while they're trying to work out what he just said. ("I repeat, you are all [[spoiler:sitting ducks]].")
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* FantasticRacism: Referred to as "shape hatred." Most prominent example is a {{Jerkass}} human character who calls phnobes "[[FantasticSlur gecky frogs]]", ''then'' enters a buruku (phnobic colony) with a gun, which is strictly forbidden. See NeverBringAGunToAKnifeFight.
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* FantasticRacism: Referred to as "shape hatred." Most prominent example is a {{Jerkass}} human character who calls phnobes "[[FantasticSlur gecky frogs]]", ''then'' enters a buruku (phnobic colony) with a gun, [[GunsInChurch which is strictly forbidden. See NeverBringAGunToAKnifeFight.forbidden]].
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* HyperspaceIsAScaryPlace: Interspace contains infinite possibilities, meaning unless your ship is shielded you get constant glimpses of distant universes and timelines.
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* HyperspaceIsAScaryPlace: Interspace contains infinite possibilities, meaning unless your ship is shielded you get constant glimpses of distant universes and timelines. Dom's ship isn't shielded.
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* MechanicalInsects: The planet Laoth is deliberately kept sterile, so its inhabitants created an ecosystem of robot life, including insects.
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* MechanicalInsects: The planet Laoth is deliberately kept sterile, so its inhabitants created an ecosystem of robot robotic life, including insects.
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* NeverBringAGunToAKnifeFight: Never bring a single-shot stun gun into a place where every [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy alpha male]] is armed with a two-foot long knife. See also: TooDumbToLive.
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* NeverBringAGunToAKnifeFight: Never bring a single-shot stun gun into a place where every [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy alpha male]] is armed with a two-foot long knife. See also: TooDumbToLive.Your career will be cut short. Along with some other bits of you.
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* SimpleYetOpulent: As described under ComicallyMissingThePoint, Dom's simple coronation breakfast is an insanely expensive simple coronation breakfast.
* SinglePreceptReligion: The religion of Arte Sadhim has the One Commandment, which is eventually stated to be "You Will Not Waste".
* SinglePreceptReligion: The religion of Arte Sadhim has the One Commandment, which is eventually stated to be "You Will Not Waste".
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* SimpleYetOpulent: As described under ComicallyMissingThePoint, Dom's simple coronation breakfast is an insanely expensive simple coronation breakfast.
breakfast. This is generally how Sadhimist ruling families tend to live - Keya, Dom's sister who married the ruler of another planet comments that her new husband flaunts his riches more, despite actually having less than the Sabalos do.
* SinglePreceptReligion: The religion of Arte Sadhim has the One Commandment, which is eventually stated to be [[spoiler: "You Will NotWaste".Waste"]].
* SinglePreceptReligion: The religion of Arte Sadhim has the One Commandment, which is eventually stated to be [[spoiler: "You Will Not
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* {{Sssssnaketalk}}: The reptilian phnobes speak with extended hissing on s sounds.
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* {{Sssssnaketalk}}: The reptilian phnobes speak with extended hissing on s sounds.ssssibilantssss.
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* StealthPun: the elite robot assassin's name, Ways. [[spoiler: As in, "We have our..."]]
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* StealthPun: the The elite robot assassin's name, Ways. [[spoiler: As in, "We have our..."]]
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* TooDumbToLive: "Intelligence is humanity's prime survival trait. Therefore it is well that those who do not possess it do not procreate."
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* TooDumbToLive: "Intelligence After the GunsInChurch incident, Hrssh-hggn comments:
-->Intelligence is humanity's prime survival trait. Therefore it is well that those who do not possess it do not procreate."
-->Intelligence is humanity's prime survival trait. Therefore it is well that those who do not possess it do not procreate.
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Dom Sabalos is the heir to the throne of the planet Widdershins, a human colony in a galaxy where there are 52 intelligent races - but oddly all of them inside a sphere 200 light-years in diameter, centred on Wolf 429. Besides this, there are also bizarre stellar phenomena and mysterious towers strewn across the region that speak of {{Precursors}}, known as the Jokers. The mystery underlying the setting is where the Jokers went, the only clue being the poem shown above, which was found on one of the towers.
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Dom Sabalos is the heir to the throne of the planet Widdershins, a human colony in a galaxy where there are 52 fifty-two intelligent races - -- but oddly all of them inside a sphere 200 light-years in diameter, centred on Wolf 429. Besides this, there are also bizarre stellar phenomena and mysterious towers strewn across the region that speak of {{Precursors}}, known as the Jokers. The mystery underlying the setting is where the Jokers went, the only clue being the poem shown above, which was found on one of the towers.
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* ShiplessFasterThanLightTravel: The Sundogs are sapient {{Space Whale}}s who possess a natural ability to travel through [[SubspaceOrHyperspace Interspace]]. Some of them will accept payments to carry small spaceships with them.
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* AffluentAstetic: As Dom puts it, it takes a great amount of wealth to be able to afford to live simply at this point in the future. When he finds himself in a home that is even simpler he realizes they must be even wealthier than his own family.
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* AffluentAstetic: AffluentAscetic: As Dom puts it, it takes a great amount of wealth to be able to afford to live simply at this point in the future. When he finds himself in a home that is even simpler he realizes they must be even wealthier than his own family.
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* AffluentAstetic: As Dom puts it, it takes a great amount of wealth to be able to afford to live simply at this point in the future. When he finds himself in a home that is even simpler he realizes they must be even wealthier than his own family.
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** The satirical play Dom attends features a chorus of robots with a refrain inspired by the chorus of frogs in Creator/{{Aristophanes}}'s ''The Frogs''.
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* MechanicalInsects: The planet Laoth is deliberately kept sterile, so its inhabitants created an ecosystem of robot life, including insects.
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* ExtremophileLifeforms: The Creapi's homeworld saw them evolve in molten phosphorous sulphides. When they spread into space, they simply redesigned themselves to fit the changing situations they encountered. Half a million years of forced evolution has created the middle-degree Creaps, who are happy at a mere 500 degrees C. The divergent High-Degree Creapii live on the outer surfaces of relatively cool stars. Wherever a star pushes the ambient temperature to beyond the melting point of tin, there you will find Creapii. In fact, they bartered with the human race, who were happy to sign over squatters' rights to the planet Mercury in exchange for Creap technology. To interact with humans they wear "spacesuits" that preserve life at habitable temperatures in what to them is a freezingly sub-zero hostile environment.
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* ExpendableAlternateUniverse: After studying probability-math (which is like [[Literature/{{Foundation}} psychohistory]] but less so), Dom acquires an ability to sense the {{Alternate Universe}}s where he dies, and take steps not to be in them.
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* ExpendableAlternateUniverse: After studying probability-math (which is like [[Literature/{{Foundation}} psychohistory]] but less so), probability-math, Dom acquires an ability to sense the {{Alternate Universe}}s where he dies, and take steps not to be in them.
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* StealthPun: the elite robot assassin's name, Ways. [[spoiler: As in, "We have our...]]
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* StealthPun: the elite robot assassin's name, Ways. [[spoiler: As in, "We have our...]]"]]
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* StealthPun: the elite robot assassin's name, Ways. [[spoiler]]As in, "We have our..."[[/spoiler]]
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* StealthPun: the elite robot assassin's name, Ways. [[spoiler]]As [[spoiler: As in, "We have our..."[[/spoiler]]]]
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* GrewBeyondTheirProgramming: [[spoiler:Class One robots are the lowest grade of android, which can perform basic tasks but don't have anything approaching human-level intelligence. Except for Charles Sub-Lunar, a Class One who somehow ended up as the galaxy's greatest poet and polymath.]]
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* AssassinOutclassin: An important element of the plot. Due to probability mathematics (see the ExpendableAlternateUniverse example below) Dom can do this. His meetings with Ways are often borderline [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments CMOFs]] as a result of this, as Ways is pretty much unstoppable, but ''can't quite kill him''
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* AssassinOutclassin: An important element of the plot. Due to probability mathematics (see the ExpendableAlternateUniverse example below) Dom can do this. His meetings with Ways are often borderline [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments CMOFs]] as As a result of this, as Ways is pretty much unstoppable, but ''can't quite kill him''him''.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Dom's coronation breakfast is supposed to be the same as the simple, austere one that the puritan, anti-waste religious figure Arte Sadhim ate before he became Lord of Earth.[[labelnote:menu]]A quarter-loaf of brown bread, a strip of salted fish, an apple and a glass of water.[[/labelnote]] However, inevitably each simple item is acquired by some enormously expensive means as he's royal (for example, the glass of water was melted off a comet).
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Dom's coronation breakfast is supposed to be the same as the simple, austere one that the puritan, anti-waste religious figure Arte Sadhim ate before he became Lord of Earth.[[labelnote:menu]]A Earth: A quarter-loaf of brown bread, a strip of salted fish, an apple and a glass of water.[[/labelnote]] water. However, inevitably each simple item is acquired by some enormously expensive means as he's royal (for example, the glass of water was melted off a comet).
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* PlayingCardMotifs: The novel's themes of probability and chance are echoed in the number of sentient races
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** Dom's robot sidekick is named [[Creator/IsaacAsimov Isaac]].
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** Dom's robot sidekick is named [[Creator/IsaacAsimov Isaac]].Isaac]] and runs on a parody of [[ThreeLawsCompliant the Three Laws of Robotics]].
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** After an assassination attempt, Dom has a dream where Isaac tries to explain the situation using what appear to be the plot outlines of several well-known series (all of which are shot down by Dom), including {{Literature/Dune}} and [[Literature/TheLordoftheRings The Lord of the Rings]].
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** After an assassination attempt, Dom has a dream where Isaac tries to explain the situation using what appear to be the plot outlines of several well-known series (all of which are shot down by Dom), including {{Literature/Dune}} ''{{Literature/Dune}}'' and [[Literature/TheLordoftheRings The Lord of the Rings]].''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''.
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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: Invoked when it's mentioned that "Human" is a legally defined term for a limited subset of intelligent species, including some robots and a planet-sized computer known as the First Sirian Bank. Essentially it's a clear measure of what a Non-Human is. A large number of nom-human beings are still considered ''people'', though.
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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: Invoked when it's mentioned that "Human" is a legally defined term for a limited subset of intelligent species, including some robots and a planet-sized computer known as the First Sirian Bank. Essentially it's a clear measure of what a Non-Human is. A large number of nom-human non-human beings are still considered ''people'', though.
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* GreenAesop: Sadhim's teachings are based on late-seventies-early-eighties environmentalism, although his followers have largely forgotten the significance of this.
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* HappinessInSlavery: When Dom attempts to release Isaac, the robot explains that humans might strive for freedom, but robots know exactly why they exist and don't need to angst about it.
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* FlashSideways: Travellers in Interspace will get glimpses of alternate universes.
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* BizarreAlienBiology: Explored quite a bit.
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* ChekhovsGunman: subverted. [[spoiler: Charles Sub-Lunar and his assistant are lurking in the background of a number of scenes, but do very little.]]
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* ChekhovsGunman: subverted.Subverted. [[spoiler: Charles Sub-Lunar and his assistant are lurking in the background of a number of scenes, but do very little.]]
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* SimpleYetOpulent: As described under ComicallyMissingThePoint, Dom's simple coronation breakfast is an insanely expensive simple coronation breakfast.
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* AssassinOutclassin: An important element of the plot. Due to probability mathematics (see the ExpendableAlternateUniverse example below) Dom can do this. His meetings with Ways are often borderline [[CrowningMomentOfFunny CMOFs]] as a result of this, as Ways is pretty much unstoppable, but ''can't quite kill him''
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* AssassinOutclassin: An important element of the plot. Due to probability mathematics (see the ExpendableAlternateUniverse example below) Dom can do this. His meetings with Ways are often borderline [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments CMOFs]] as a result of this, as Ways is pretty much unstoppable, but ''can't quite kill him''
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* SdrawkcabName:
** A star called 'Rats' with a planet called 'Tenalp' is briefly mentioned - aside from being very strange ([[NoodleIncident and not the sort of thing you mention in mixed company]]), we don't hear exactly why they're so called. There's a brief mention of them having "negative entropy", which could suggest that natural processes work in reverse, hence the names.
** A star called 'Rats' with a planet called 'Tenalp' is briefly mentioned - aside from being very strange ([[NoodleIncident and not the sort of thing you mention in mixed company]]), we don't hear exactly why they're so called. There's a brief mention of them having "negative entropy", which could suggest that natural processes work in reverse, hence the names.
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**SdrawkcabName: A star called 'Rats' with a planet called 'Tenalp' is briefly mentioned - aside from being very strange ([[NoodleIncident and not the sort of thing you mention in mixed company]]), we don't hear exactly why they're so called. There's a brief mention of them having "negative entropy", which could suggest that natural processes work in reverse, hence the names.
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* FantasticRacism: Referred to as "shape hatred." Most prominent example is a {{Jerkass}} human character who calls phnobes "[[FantasticSlur gecky frogs]]", ''then'' enters a buruku (phnobic colony) with a gun, which is strictly forbidden. See NeverBringAKnifeToAGunfight (except in reverse).
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* FantasticRacism: Referred to as "shape hatred." Most prominent example is a {{Jerkass}} human character who calls phnobes "[[FantasticSlur gecky frogs]]", ''then'' enters a buruku (phnobic colony) with a gun, which is strictly forbidden. See NeverBringAKnifeToAGunfight (except in reverse).NeverBringAGunToAKnifeFight.
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* NeverBringAKnifeToAGunfight: Never bring a single-shot stun gun into a place where every [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy alpha male]] is armed with a two-foot long knife. See also: TooDumbToLive.
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* NeverBringAKnifeToAGunfight: NeverBringAGunToAKnifeFight: Never bring a single-shot stun gun into a place where every [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy alpha male]] is armed with a two-foot long knife. See also: TooDumbToLive.
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there's no indication that the Creapii treat each other any different according to their living temperature - it might just be a biological requirement thing
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** Referred to as "shape hatred." Despite being a SuperiorSpecies, the Creapii are divided by caste depending on their living temperature and their size.
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** Referred to as "shape hatred." Despite being a SuperiorSpecies, theFantasticCasteSystem: The Creapii are divided by caste depending on their living temperature and their size.
** Some humans refer * FantasticRacism: Referred to as "shape hatred." Most prominent example is a {{Jerkass}} human character who calls phnobes as "gecky frogs". This "[[FantasticSlur gecky frogs]]", ''then'' enters a buruku (phnobic colony) with a gun, which is not a good thing to say.strictly forbidden. See NeverBringAKnifeToAGunfight (except in reverse).
** Referred to as "shape hatred." Despite being a SuperiorSpecies, the