Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Being cut per TRS.
Deleted line(s) 22 (click to see context) :
* DefiniteArticleTitle
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* DefiniteArticleTitle
Changed line(s) 39,40 (click to see context) from:
* TeamMom: Amber seems to enjoy this role. While outwardly cold, she does things like cooking dinner for the team [[spoiler: when they go into hiding]], or cleaning and dressing Kelly's wounds after [[spoiler: they get into a brawl with Byzantium Black]].
* TheTheTitle
* TheTheTitle
to:
* TeamMom: Amber seems to enjoy this role. While outwardly cold, she does things like cooking dinner for the team [[spoiler: when they go into hiding]], or cleaning and dressing Kelly's wounds after [[spoiler: they get into a brawl with Byzantium Black]].
* TheTheTitleBlack]].
* TheTheTitle
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Badass Gay isn't a trope anymore.
Deleted line(s) 21 (click to see context) :
* BadassGay: Amber, the tactical and gun-toting professional soldier of the team, confirms this to Juliette.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
While the author originally intended to continue the story into several books, the work has been completed as a single novella-length piece.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 6,7 (click to see context) from:
''[[https://welcometothecrush.wordpress.com/ The Crush]]'' is an urban fantasy WebSerialNovel by azcetera. It revolves around Kelly Rose and Amber Sorrel, two friends with ElementalPowers who work for a magic-oriented branch of the United Nations.
to:
''[[https://welcometothecrush.wordpress.com/ com/thecrush-toc The Crush]]'' is an urban fantasy WebSerialNovel by azcetera. It revolves around Kelly Rose and Amber Sorrel, two friends with ElementalPowers who work for a magic-oriented branch of the United Nations.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 6,7 (click to see context) from:
''[[https://welcometothecrush.com/ The Crush]]'' is an urban fantasy WebSerialNovel by azcetera (also known as R. E. Sullivan). It revolves around Kelly Rose and Amber Sorrel, two friends with ElementalPowers who work for a magic-oriented branch of the United Nations.
to:
''[[https://welcometothecrush.wordpress.com/ The Crush]]'' is an urban fantasy WebSerialNovel by azcetera (also known as R. E. Sullivan).azcetera. It revolves around Kelly Rose and Amber Sorrel, two friends with ElementalPowers who work for a magic-oriented branch of the United Nations.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 38 (click to see context) from:
* TeamMom: Amber seems to enjoy this role. While outwardly cold, she does things like cooking dinner for the team [[spoiler: when they go into hiding]], or cleaning and dressing Kelly's wounds after [[spoiler: they get into a brawl with Byzantium Black]].
to:
* TeamMom: Amber seems to enjoy this role. While outwardly cold, she does things like cooking dinner for the team [[spoiler: when they go into hiding]], or cleaning and dressing Kelly's wounds after [[spoiler: they get into a brawl with Byzantium Black]].Black]].
* TheTheTitle
* TheTheTitle
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 6,7 (click to see context) from:
''[[https://welcometothecrush.com/ The Crush]]'' is an ongoing urban fantasy WebSerialNovel by azcetera (also known as R. E. Sullivan). It revolves around Kelly Rose and Amber Sorrel, two friends with ElementalPowers who work for a magic-oriented branch of the United Nations.
to:
''[[https://welcometothecrush.com/ The Crush]]'' is an ongoing urban fantasy WebSerialNovel by azcetera (also known as R. E. Sullivan). It revolves around Kelly Rose and Amber Sorrel, two friends with ElementalPowers who work for a magic-oriented branch of the United Nations.
Deleted line(s) 10,11 (click to see context) :
''The Crush'' began in August of 2016, and continues to update regularly on Fridays.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 1,3 (click to see context) :
[[quoteright:350:http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/map_peregrinecity_2.png]]
[[caption-width-right:350:[[TheCity Peregrine City]], nicknamed 'the Crush'.]]
[[caption-width-right:350:[[TheCity Peregrine City]], nicknamed 'the Crush'.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* HonorBeforeReason: This makes up a lot of Kelly's drive for going after [=McTavish=]. She's willing to risk life and career to go after the man who killed her friends. To her, it's about restoring her honour and proving she can keep her promises.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 30 (click to see context) from:
** TheLancer: Brand fits this role, despite not being particularly experienced or seasoned. He contrasts Kelly in several ways: they both wield swords (albeit differently), and Brand is charismatic and outgoing where Kelly is reserved and serious.
to:
** TheLancer: Brand fits this role, despite not being particularly experienced or seasoned. He contrasts Kelly in several ways: they both wield swords (albeit differently), and Brand is charismatic and outgoing where Kelly is reserved and serious. Brand is also the first person Kelly recruits for [[spoiler: going after [=McTavish=] after she finds out he's in the city]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 30 (click to see context) from:
** TheLancer: Brand fits this role, despite not being particularly experienced or seasoned, contrasts Kelly in several ways. They both wield swords (albeit differently), and Brand is charismatic and outgoing where Kelly is reserved and serious.
to:
** TheLancer: Brand fits this role, despite not being particularly experienced or seasoned, seasoned. He contrasts Kelly in several ways. They ways: they both wield swords (albeit differently), and Brand is charismatic and outgoing where Kelly is reserved and serious.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
->'''Madi:''' Look, Kel, I—I don't want you to take this the wrong way.
->'''Kelly:''' What's going on?
->'''Madi:''' I adore you too much. I'm worried you're going to go on some kind of revenge quest to redeem yourself.
->'''Kelly:''' Sounds like something I might do.
->'''Kelly:''' What's going on?
->'''Madi:''' I adore you too much. I'm worried you're going to go on some kind of revenge quest to redeem yourself.
->'''Kelly:''' Sounds like something I might do.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
Zero relation to the [[Film/TheCrush 1993 film of the same name]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 33 (click to see context) from:
* SpicyLatina: Discussed. Amber is Hispanic, and cultivates a cold, calculating demeanor. She mentions this trope by name, saying she does not want to fall into it.
to:
* SpicyLatina: Discussed.Played with. Amber is Hispanic, and cultivates a cold, calculating demeanor. She mentions this trope by name, saying she does not want to fall into it.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 21 (click to see context) from:
* Five-Man Band: The remaining members of squad Dragon Saffron.
to:
* Five-Man Band: FiveManBand: The remaining members of squad Dragon Saffron.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AlternateHistory: The world seems to more-or-less be Earth, but with some changes likely owing to the presence of element-manipulating magic. Among other things, Boston was destroyed at some point in the past, with Peregrine City being built over the ruins.
Added DiffLines:
* BadassGay: Amber, the tactical and gun-toting professional soldier of the team, confirms this to Juliette.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 18 (click to see context) :
* EvilIsSexy: Kelly herself remarks that [=McTavish=] is handsome. This coming from the person who probably hates him more than anyone on the planet.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 6,7 (click to see context) from:
Kelly and Amber work for the United Nations Guardian Council (UNGC), which enlists magic-users (called 'chosen') to deal with natural disasters, rogue chosen, and other miscellaneous threats.
to:
Kelly and Amber work for the United Nations Guardian Council (UNGC), which enlists magic-users (called 'chosen') to deal with natural disasters, rogue chosen, and other miscellaneous threats.
threats. A year ago, they suffered a devastating defeat which killed three of their rangers and left one paralyzed. A year later, the story kicks off with Kelly and Amber embarking on a RedemptionQuest to make things right.
*BladeSpam: Essentially [=McTavish=]'s fighting style. He uses metal-magic to fence with four rapiers at once.
*EvilIsSexy: Kelly herself remarks that [=McTavish=] is handsome. This coming from the person who probably hates him more than anyone on the planet.
Changed line(s) 23 (click to see context) from:
** TheChick: Madi, while no longer in active service due to her disability, is the most emotionally in-tune of the group. She constantly urges caution when the others want to go on their revenge quest against McTavish.
to:
** TheChick: Madi, while no longer in active service due to her disability, is the most emotionally in-tune of the group. She constantly urges caution when the others want to go on their revenge quest against McTavish.[=McTavish=].
Added DiffLines:
*TheGunslinger: Amber, who dual-wields a fictional Walther model, has a lot of feelings about her guns. When she finally picks them up again after being out of service for a while, she feels "electric". She uses her metal-magic to get a lot of mileage out of her guns—even doing things like having them orbit her like defense satellites.
Added DiffLines:
*NeverBringAKnifeToAGunFight: Amber calls [=McTavish=] on this at St Kilda. [[spoiler: He still killed three people with a knife that wasn't even his.]]
Added DiffLines:
*SwordPointing: A favourite threat of Kelly's.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
*TheBabyOfTheBunch: Brand is only nineteen, making him the youngest member of Dragon Saffron. He's also the newest recruit. The others tend to make a point of teaching him how to do things, or correcting him on things.
*BadassCrew: The four fighting members of Dragon Saffron consider each other family, and it's for that reason they're willing to risk their lives and careers to get back at the guy who killed their friends a year before the events of the serial. Plus, each of them is a trained soldier with magical abilities. Kelly, notably, manages to get away with using a katana in modern combat.
*BadassCrew: The four fighting members of Dragon Saffron consider each other family, and it's for that reason they're willing to risk their lives and careers to get back at the guy who killed their friends a year before the events of the serial. Plus, each of them is a trained soldier with magical abilities. Kelly, notably, manages to get away with using a katana in modern combat.
*Five-Man Band: The remaining members of squad Dragon Saffron.
**TheLeader: Kelly, the captain of the team.
**TheLancer: Brand fits this role, despite not being particularly experienced or seasoned, contrasts Kelly in several ways. They both wield swords (albeit differently), and Brand is charismatic and outgoing where Kelly is reserved and serious.
**TheSmartGuy: Amber serves this role on the team. Other characters, such as Yancy and Mr. Vinier, remark that she "thinks the most like a soldier" out of anyone on the team. She often serves as Kelly's tactical adviser in battles.
**TheBigGuy: Hana, who can create and manipulate fire, can clear a room pretty fast.
**TheChick: Madi, while no longer in active service due to her disability, is the most emotionally in-tune of the group. She constantly urges caution when the others want to go on their revenge quest against McTavish.
**TheLeader: Kelly, the captain of the team.
**TheLancer: Brand fits this role, despite not being particularly experienced or seasoned, contrasts Kelly in several ways. They both wield swords (albeit differently), and Brand is charismatic and outgoing where Kelly is reserved and serious.
**TheSmartGuy: Amber serves this role on the team. Other characters, such as Yancy and Mr. Vinier, remark that she "thinks the most like a soldier" out of anyone on the team. She often serves as Kelly's tactical adviser in battles.
**TheBigGuy: Hana, who can create and manipulate fire, can clear a room pretty fast.
**TheChick: Madi, while no longer in active service due to her disability, is the most emotionally in-tune of the group. She constantly urges caution when the others want to go on their revenge quest against McTavish.
** Amber is Phlegmatic, Brand is Sanguine, Kelly is Choleric, and Hana is Melancholic.
*TheMedic: Layla Darwin is a paramedic who occasionally hops in to help out Dragon Saffron. She's friends with Brand, but doesn't know the others as well.
*TheMedic: Layla Darwin is a paramedic who occasionally hops in to help out Dragon Saffron. She's friends with Brand, but doesn't know the others as well.
Changed line(s) 18,19 (click to see context) from:
* TheHero: Kelly seems to be this, for the most part. Amber, naturally, as the other point-of-view character, gets a good share of it as well.
* SpicyLatina: Discussed. Amber is Hispanic, and cultivates a cold, calculating demeanor. She mentions this trope by name, saying she does not want to fall into it.
* SpicyLatina: Discussed. Amber is Hispanic, and cultivates a cold, calculating demeanor. She mentions this trope by name, saying she does not want to fall into it.
to:
*TeamMom: Amber seems to enjoy this role. While outwardly cold, she does things like cooking dinner for the team [[spoiler: when they go into hiding]], or cleaning and dressing Kelly's wounds after [[spoiler: they get into a brawl with Byzantium Black]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
[[quoteright:350:http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/map_peregrinecity_2.png]]
[[caption-width-right:350:[[TheCity Peregrine City]], nicknamed 'the Crush'.]]
[[caption-width-right:350:[[TheCity Peregrine City]], nicknamed 'the Crush'.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
*ExperiencedProtagonist: Both Kelly and Amber are experienced and well-known UNGC rangers. Other rangers and UNGC staff have a lot of respect for them. Some people, such as Maxime Vinier's secretary, are even starstruck by them.
Added DiffLines:
*PersonalityPowers: Kelly and Amber, both metal-chosen, are loyal, headstrong, and unyielding. Brand, the team's water-chosen, is much more go-with-the-flow and adaptable. Hana, a fire-chosen, is hotheaded, willful, and spontaneous.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 13 (click to see context) from:
* TheHero: Kelly seems to be this, for the most part. Amber, naturally, as the other point-of-view character, gets a good share of it as well.
to:
* TheHero: Kelly seems to be this, for the most part. Amber, naturally, as the other point-of-view character, gets a good share of it as well.well.
*SpicyLatina: Discussed. Amber is Hispanic, and cultivates a cold, calculating demeanor. She mentions this trope by name, saying she does not want to fall into it.
*SpicyLatina: Discussed. Amber is Hispanic, and cultivates a cold, calculating demeanor. She mentions this trope by name, saying she does not want to fall into it.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 12 (click to see context) from:
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Kelly, Amber, Brand, and Hana—the main gang from Dragon Saffron—form this.
to:
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Kelly, Amber, Brand, and Hana—the main gang from Dragon Saffron—form this.this.
*TheHero: Kelly seems to be this, for the most part. Amber, naturally, as the other point-of-view character, gets a good share of it as well.
*TheHero: Kelly seems to be this, for the most part. Amber, naturally, as the other point-of-view character, gets a good share of it as well.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
''[[https://welcometothecrush.com/ The Crush]]'' is an ongoing urban fantasy WebSerialNovel by azcetera (also known as R. E. Sullivan). It revolves around Kelly Rose and Amber Sorrel, two friends with ElementalPowers who work for a magic-oriented branch of the United Nations.
Kelly and Amber work for the United Nations Guardian Council (UNGC), which enlists magic-users (called 'chosen') to deal with natural disasters, rogue chosen, and other miscellaneous threats.
''The Crush'' began in August of 2016, and continues to update regularly on Fridays.
----
!! ''The Crush'' contains examples of:
*ElementalPowers: Magic-users, officially known as divergents, but colloquially called chosen, can manipulate one of five elements: air, earth, fire, metal, or water.
*FourTemperamentEnsemble: Kelly, Amber, Brand, and Hana—the main gang from Dragon Saffron—form this.
Kelly and Amber work for the United Nations Guardian Council (UNGC), which enlists magic-users (called 'chosen') to deal with natural disasters, rogue chosen, and other miscellaneous threats.
''The Crush'' began in August of 2016, and continues to update regularly on Fridays.
----
!! ''The Crush'' contains examples of:
*ElementalPowers: Magic-users, officially known as divergents, but colloquially called chosen, can manipulate one of five elements: air, earth, fire, metal, or water.
*FourTemperamentEnsemble: Kelly, Amber, Brand, and Hana—the main gang from Dragon Saffron—form this.
