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* ReplacementGoldfish: Marilyn recalls that when she was six years old her kitten Flossy was killed by a car, and her brother Gerry told her that Flossy [[LiesToChildren had only gone away for the night to grow a new fur coat]] and would be back in the morning. She believed the story and accepted the kitten that appeared the next day as her own, but would find out years later that Gerry had woken up the owner of the local pet store at four in the morning and strongarmed him into selling him a kitten that resembled the one that had died.
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Barton, the pilot of an Emergency Dispatch Ship (EDS) dropped from the Hyperspace cruiser ''Stardust'', discovers there's a stowaway on board, a young girl named Marilyn. His ship is taking a load of vaccines to the planet Woden, it has just enough precious fuel to make the deceleration and landing with no reserve, and if they don't land safely, an eight-man survey team will die. The EDS is designed to already be as light as possible, and there is no way to reduce the weight of the ship to compensate for Marilyn's mass. Typical practice as required by regulations is to immediately jettison stowaways. However, the situation is complicated because Marilyn is an innocent who just wanted to see her brother (who is stationed on Woden) and didn't know that stowing away on an EDS would carry a penalty any worse than a stiff fine.

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Barton, the pilot of an Emergency Dispatch Ship (EDS) dropped from the Hyperspace cruiser ''Stardust'', discovers there's a stowaway on board, a young girl named Marilyn. His ship is taking a load of vaccines to the planet Woden, it has just enough precious fuel to make the deceleration and landing with no reserve, and if they don't land safely, an eight-man a six-man survey team will die. The EDS is designed to already be as light as possible, and there is no way to reduce the weight of the ship to compensate for Marilyn's mass. Typical practice as required by regulations is to immediately jettison stowaways. However, the situation is complicated because Marilyn is an innocent who just wanted to see her brother (who is stationed on Woden) and didn't know that stowing away on an EDS would carry a penalty any worse than a stiff fine.



* ShootTheDog: Either Barton spaces Marilyn, or she dies anyway, along with him and eight other people. He spaces her.

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* ShootTheDog: Either Barton spaces Marilyn, or she dies anyway, along with him and eight six other people. He spaces her.
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* SwissCheeseSecurity: The whole situation could have been avoided by a 30-second pre-launch check. Or, you know, maybe a lock on the door?

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* SwissCheeseSecurity: When Marilyn is asked how she boarded the ship, she says, “I just sort of walked in when no one was looking my way." The whole situation could have been avoided by a 30-second pre-launch check. Or, you know, maybe a lock on the door?

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* DownerEnding: There's no solution to the problem that does not result in Marilyn having to be executed.

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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Apart from the factors that force Marilyn to be ThrownOutTheAirlock, she doesn't consider that she might be easily discovered on a ship that small, that the ship might not be going to the part of the planet her brother is on, or how she'll get back.
* DownerEnding: There's no solution to the problem that does not result in Marilyn having to be executed. In fact, there's no explicit confirmation that Barton actually reaches his destination and delivers the vaccines, so the entire thing could end up being AllForNothing.


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* MacGuffin: The vaccines that Barton is delivering. They could be substituted with anything else that's necessary to save several lives, and the story wouldn't change.

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* PoorCommunicationKills: Civilians apparently aren't made aware of the reason sneaking aboard a ship is punished with being put into space and the only caution Marilyn is given is a big UNAUTHORIZED PERSONNEL KEEP OUT! sign. Spelling out for civilians '''why''' they are to keep out probably would have saved Marilyn's life.



* TooDumbToLive: Subverted. Marilyn ''appears'' to be this for stowing away aboard an emergency vehicle where all stowaways are as a mandatory rule spaced, but apparently civilians aren't made aware of this rule and the only caution she is given is a big UNAUTHORIZED PERSONNEL KEEP OUT! sign. Spelling out for civilians '''why''' they are to keep out probably would have saved Marilyn's life.
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* {{Zeerust}}: The EDS navigates by receiving trajectory calculations from the cruiser's computers... which would have been perfectly plausible if they were still using computers from the 1950's. Even the Apollo lunar landers (which started flying less than two decades after this story was published) had [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Apollo_Guidance_Computer their own onboard guidance computers]].
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* LittleStowaway: Deconstructed. Marilyn is an eighteen year old girl who wants to join her brother in creating new space colonies. When the ship she's stationed on makes a stop by the planet he's on, she hides on the ship that's sent to land. The pilot is forced to send her out the airlock, because they don't have enough fuel to make it to their destination with an extra person on board.
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* MohsScaleOfScienceFictionHardness: Very Hard (with the exception of hyperspace aircraft carriers), as the fuel dilemma is based around the application of the Rocket Equation, which can be simplified to: In space, you need fuel to lift the fuel, and more fuel to lift that fuel, so every gram counts.
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->''H amount of fuel will not power an EDS with a mass of m plus x safely to its destination.'' To himself and her brother and parents she was a sweet-faced girl in her teens; to the laws of nature she was ''x'', the unwanted factor in a cold equation. Also, ''Film/Stowaway2021'' is based on the same premise.

"The Cold Equations" is a {{Novelette}} by Tom Godwin, first published in ''Magazine/AstoundingScienceFiction'' in 1954, which has been done as a radio play for the ''Radio/XMinusOne'' radio drama of the 1950s, an episode of ''Series/TheTwilightZone1985'', and a 1996 made-for-TV movie for the [[Creator/{{Syfy}} Sci Fi Channel]].

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->''H amount of fuel will not power an EDS with a mass of m plus x safely to its destination.'' To himself and her brother and parents she was a sweet-faced girl in her teens; to the laws of nature she was ''x'', the unwanted factor in a cold equation. Also, ''Film/Stowaway2021'' is based on the same premise.\n\n

"The Cold Equations" is a {{Novelette}} by Tom Godwin, first published in ''Magazine/AstoundingScienceFiction'' in 1954, which has been done as a radio play for the ''Radio/XMinusOne'' radio drama of the 1950s, an episode of ''Series/TheTwilightZone1985'', and a 1996 made-for-TV movie for the [[Creator/{{Syfy}} Sci Fi Channel]].
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->''H amount of fuel will not power an EDS with a mass of m plus x safely to its destination.'' To himself and her brother and parents she was a sweet-faced girl in her teens; to the laws of nature she was ''x'', the unwanted factor in a cold equation.

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->''H amount of fuel will not power an EDS with a mass of m plus x safely to its destination.'' To himself and her brother and parents she was a sweet-faced girl in her teens; to the laws of nature she was ''x'', the unwanted factor in a cold equation. \n Also, ''Film/Stowaway2021'' is based on the same premise.
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* HardTruthAesop: [[TheNeedsOfTheMany There are times when you must make sacrifices for the greater good]], [[ShootTheDog including letting a girl whose only crime was trespassing die]].
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* BigBrotherWorship: Marilyn's motive. She has a big brother who works out on the frontier, she only sees him once every few years, and so she saves up money and sneaks aboard a ship she thinks is on its way to where he is. The irony is that even if the Cold Equation hadn't been in play, the shuttle was on its way to a different survey team on an entirely different continent of Woden, not to where her brother was stationed.

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* BigBrotherWorship: Marilyn's motive. She has a big brother who works out on the frontier, she only sees him once every few years, and so she saves up money and sneaks aboard a ship she thinks is on its way to where he is. The irony is that even if the Cold Equation hadn't been in play, the shuttle ship was on its way to a different survey team on an entirely different continent of Woden, not to where her brother was stationed.



** While the Rocket Equation does limit the amount of fuel to be used in the EDS, the idea that a futuristic space shuttle would have fewer fail-safes or backups than a 20th century airplane (modern aircraft are always given a large enough fuel supply that, even if there's a delay due to weather or problems at the landing site, they can typically circle the runway for several minutes, or possibly even hours, regardless of the distance of the trip) is more than a little strange. Either the OSHA does not exist in the future, or someone decided that a shuttle that can literally hold only one person and a small amount of cargo, and just barely enough fuel to get them from point A to point B, is a good idea, something that in the 20th and 21st century would never leave the design phase. Possibly justified in that it's stated the EDS is a small emergency vehicle meant to be disposable, not for regular passenger service. [[note]] It's mentioned that the EDS has ''a little'' extra fuel, which is why Barton can give Marilyn an hour before she has to be spaced. The extra fuel that would be used to maneuver if there were a storm at his destination or some other complication was instead used to prolong the time before deceleration would start and the mass of the ship would have to be reduced in order to safely land. The computations for the changes were made on the main ship's computers and relayed back to the EDS with a combination of disapproval and understanding on their end. [[/note]]

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** While the Rocket Equation does limit the amount of fuel to be used in the EDS, the idea that a futuristic space shuttle would have fewer fail-safes or backups than a 20th century airplane (modern aircraft are always given a large enough fuel supply that, even if there's a delay due to weather or problems at the landing site, they can typically circle the runway for several minutes, or possibly even hours, regardless of the distance of the trip) is more than a little strange. Either the OSHA does not exist in the future, or someone decided that a shuttle that can literally hold only one person and a small amount of cargo, and just barely enough fuel to get them from point A to point B, is a good idea, something that in the 20th and 21st century would never leave the design phase. Possibly justified in that it's stated the EDS is a small emergency vehicle meant to be disposable, not intended for regular passenger service. [[note]] It's mentioned that the EDS has ''a little'' extra fuel, which is why Barton can give Marilyn an hour before she has to be spaced. The extra fuel that would be used to maneuver if there were a storm at his destination or some other complication was instead used to prolong the time before deceleration would start and the mass of the ship would have to be reduced in order to safely land. The computations for the changes were made on the main ship's computers and relayed back to the EDS with a combination of disapproval and understanding on their end. [[/note]]



* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: Every quality about Marilyn [[note]]Her name is a variation on "Mary Cross", a pretty spot-on name for a martyr[[/note]] and every word she speaks is meant to evoke reader sympathy for her. She didn't sneak aboard the shuttle for nefarious reasons, she just wanted to see her brother who is providing for her family with his high-paying job on the frontier. She's not a spoiled rich girl who thinks she can buy her way out of trouble, she's a hardworking girl from a poor family who saved up because she thought she would just get in trouble and have a fine to pay. She even offers to work and cook once they get to Woden for her upkeep.

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* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: Every quality about Marilyn [[note]]Her name is a variation on "Mary Cross", a pretty spot-on name for a martyr[[/note]] and every word she speaks is meant to evoke reader sympathy for her. She didn't sneak aboard the shuttle EDS for nefarious reasons, she just wanted to see her brother who is providing for her family with his high-paying job on the frontier. She's not a spoiled rich girl who thinks she can buy her way out of trouble, she's a hardworking girl from a poor family who saved up because she thought she would just get in trouble and have a fine to pay. She even offers to work and cook once they get to Woden for her upkeep.
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* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: Every quality about Marilyn [[note]]Her name is basically "Mary Cross", a pretty spot-on name for a martyr[[//note]] and every word she speaks is meant to evoke reader sympathy for her. She didn't sneak aboard the shuttle for nefarious reasons, she just wanted to see her brother who is providing for her family with his high-paying job on the frontier. She's not a spoiled rich girl who thinks she can buy her way out of trouble, she's a hardworking girl from a poor family who saved up because she thought she would just get in trouble and have a fine to pay. She even offers to work and cook once they get to Woden for her upkeep.

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* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: Every quality about Marilyn [[note]]Her name is basically a variation on "Mary Cross", a pretty spot-on name for a martyr[[//note]] martyr[[/note]] and every word she speaks is meant to evoke reader sympathy for her. She didn't sneak aboard the shuttle for nefarious reasons, she just wanted to see her brother who is providing for her family with his high-paying job on the frontier. She's not a spoiled rich girl who thinks she can buy her way out of trouble, she's a hardworking girl from a poor family who saved up because she thought she would just get in trouble and have a fine to pay. She even offers to work and cook once they get to Woden for her upkeep.
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** While the Rocket Equation does limit the amount of fuel to be used in the EDS, the idea that a futuristic space shuttle would have fewer fail-safes or backups than a 20th century airplane (modern aircraft are always given a large enough fuel supply that, even if there's a delay due to weather or problems at the landing site, they can typically circle the runway for several minutes, or possibly even hours, regardless of the distance of the trip) is more than a little strange. Either the OSHA does not exist in the future, or someone decided that a shuttle that can literally hold only one person and a small amount of cargo, and just barely enough fuel to get them from point A to point B, is a good idea, something that in the 20th and 21st century would never leave the design phase. Possibly justified in that it's stated the EDS is a small emergency vehicle meant to be disposable, not for regular passenger service. [[note]] It's mentioned that the EDS has ''a little'' fuel, which is why Barton can give Marilyn an hour before she has to be spaced. The extra fuel that would be used to maneuver if there were a storm at his destination or some other complication was instead used to prolong the time before deceleration would start and the mass of the ship would have to be reduced in order to safely land. The computations for the changes were made on the main ship's computers and relayed back to the EDS with a combination of disapproval and understanding on their end. [[/note]]

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** While the Rocket Equation does limit the amount of fuel to be used in the EDS, the idea that a futuristic space shuttle would have fewer fail-safes or backups than a 20th century airplane (modern aircraft are always given a large enough fuel supply that, even if there's a delay due to weather or problems at the landing site, they can typically circle the runway for several minutes, or possibly even hours, regardless of the distance of the trip) is more than a little strange. Either the OSHA does not exist in the future, or someone decided that a shuttle that can literally hold only one person and a small amount of cargo, and just barely enough fuel to get them from point A to point B, is a good idea, something that in the 20th and 21st century would never leave the design phase. Possibly justified in that it's stated the EDS is a small emergency vehicle meant to be disposable, not for regular passenger service. [[note]] It's mentioned that the EDS has ''a little'' extra fuel, which is why Barton can give Marilyn an hour before she has to be spaced. The extra fuel that would be used to maneuver if there were a storm at his destination or some other complication was instead used to prolong the time before deceleration would start and the mass of the ship would have to be reduced in order to safely land. The computations for the changes were made on the main ship's computers and relayed back to the EDS with a combination of disapproval and understanding on their end. [[/note]]



* SettlingTheFrontier: Gerry Cross and the other colonists Barton is on his way to do are doing this, and in keeping with the trope's description, the dangers colonists face out on the frontier are fierce.

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* SettlingTheFrontier: Gerry Cross and the other colonists members of the survey team Barton is on his way to do save are doing this, and in keeping with the trope's description, the dangers colonists face out on the frontier are fierce.



* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: Every quality about Marilyn [[note]]Her name is basically "Mary Cross", a pretty spot-on name for a martyr[//note]] and every word she speaks is meant to evoke reader sympathy for her. She didn't sneak aboard the shuttle for nefarious reasons, she just wanted to see her brother who is providing for her family with his high-paying job on the frontier. She's not a spoiled rich girl who thinks she can buy her way out of trouble, she's a hardworking girl from a poor family who saved up because she thought she would just get in trouble and have a fine to pay. She even offers to work and cook once they get to Woden for her upkeep.

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* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: Every quality about Marilyn [[note]]Her name is basically "Mary Cross", a pretty spot-on name for a martyr[//note]] martyr[[//note]] and every word she speaks is meant to evoke reader sympathy for her. She didn't sneak aboard the shuttle for nefarious reasons, she just wanted to see her brother who is providing for her family with his high-paying job on the frontier. She's not a spoiled rich girl who thinks she can buy her way out of trouble, she's a hardworking girl from a poor family who saved up because she thought she would just get in trouble and have a fine to pay. She even offers to work and cook once they get to Woden for her upkeep.
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Throwing the girl out the airlock is necessary to get the vaccines to the colony. Barton doesn't want to do it but there is no other way.

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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Throwing the girl out the airlock is necessary to get the vaccines to the colony.survey team. Barton doesn't want to do it but there is no other way.

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Barton, the pilot of an Emergency Dispatch Ship (EDS) dropped from a Hyperspace cruiser, discovers there's a stowaway on board, a young girl named Marilyn. His ship is taking a load of vaccines to the planet Woden, it has just enough fuel to make the deceleration and landing with no reserve, and if they don't get there, 8 colonists will die. Also, there is no way to reduce the weight of the ship to compensate for Marilyn's mass. Typical practice as required by regulations is to jettison stowaways, as these vessels do not have any reserve fuel to allow a safe landing with the extra weight. However, the situation is complicated because Marilyn is an innocent who just wanted to see her brother (who is stationed on Woden) and didn't know that stowing away on an EDS would carry a penalty worse than a stiff fine.

The primary ship informs Barton there is no way the primary ship can retrieve Marilyn (other lives depend on their strict timetable as well), that there's no other ships in the area, and he knows there's no planetary launch available, either. He must reduce the ship's mass, but he lacks the appropriate means to, for example, seriously strip the ship of unnecessary components. (There's nothing on the ship that ''isn't'' necessary.) She can't land the ship either as it's not computer-piloted, so Barton can't sacrifice himself. Barton doesn't like the only choice available, and realizes that he's going to have to live with the thought of what he's going to have to do for the rest of his life.

Failing to reduce the ship's mass -- by spacing Marilyn -- will mean the ship will crash, and Barton, Marilyn and the colonists will die. Marilyn eventually accepts that there is no alternative, so after being able to reach her brother over the radio to say goodbye, Marilyn walks into the airlock, and Barton ejects her into space.

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Barton, the pilot of an Emergency Dispatch Ship (EDS) dropped from a the Hyperspace cruiser, cruiser ''Stardust'', discovers there's a stowaway on board, a young girl named Marilyn. His ship is taking a load of vaccines to the planet Woden, it has just enough precious fuel to make the deceleration and landing with no reserve, and if they don't get there, 8 colonists land safely, an eight-man survey team will die. Also, The EDS is designed to already be as light as possible, and there is no way to reduce the weight of the ship to compensate for Marilyn's mass. Typical practice as required by regulations is to immediately jettison stowaways, as these vessels do not have any reserve fuel to allow a safe landing with the extra weight. stowaways. However, the situation is complicated because Marilyn is an innocent who just wanted to see her brother (who is stationed on Woden) and didn't know that stowing away on an EDS would carry a penalty any worse than a stiff fine.

The primary ship cruiser informs Barton there is no way the primary ship it can retrieve Marilyn (other lives depend on their strict timetable as well), and that there's no other ships in the area, and he area. He already knows there's no planetary launch available, either. He must reduce the ship's mass, but he lacks the appropriate means to, for example, seriously strip the ship of unnecessary components. (There's ships on Woden that can come out to meet him. There's nothing on the ship that ''isn't'' necessary.) She necessary and can be jettisoned. Marilyn can't land the ship by herself either as it's not computer-piloted, she's no pilot, so Barton can't sacrifice himself. Barton doesn't like the only choice available, and realizes that he's going to have to live with the thought of what he's going to have to do for the rest of his life.

Failing to reduce the ship's mass -- by spacing Marilyn -- will mean the ship will crash, and Barton, Marilyn and the colonists survey team will die. Marilyn eventually accepts that there is no alternative, so after being able to reach alternative. After calling her brother over the radio to say goodbye, Marilyn goodbye she walks willingly into the airlock, and Barton ejects her into space.



* BigBrotherWorship: Marilyn's motive. She has a big brother who works out on the frontier, she only sees him once every few years, and so she saves up money and sneaks aboard a ship she thinks is on its way to where he is. The irony is that even if the Cold Equation hadn't been in play, the shuttle was on its way to a different group on an entirely different continent of Woden, not to where her brother was stationed.

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* BigBrotherWorship: Marilyn's motive. She has a big brother who works out on the frontier, she only sees him once every few years, and so she saves up money and sneaks aboard a ship she thinks is on its way to where he is. The irony is that even if the Cold Equation hadn't been in play, the shuttle was on its way to a different group survey team on an entirely different continent of Woden, not to where her brother was stationed.



* EmotionsVsStoicism: Explored. On Earth people have achieved sedentary comfort and can afford to indulge tawdry displays of emotion like MissingWhiteWomanSyndrome. But out in the frontier where mankind is still exploring and conditions are much more hostile, only those who are or achieve the mindset of TheStoic survive long and those who make a living out on the frontier accept that there are certain... well, ''cold equations'' that cannot be bent or exempted because of sentiment. The reactions of Marilyn's family nicely highlight this: her parents, being from Earth, are predicted to hate Barton and not understand why he killed their daughter, while Marilyn's brother Gerry is reached and, despite his horror, understands at once that Marilyn is doomed and that no one can save her.

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* EmotionsVsStoicism: Explored. On Earth people have achieved sedentary comfort and can afford to indulge tawdry displays of emotion like MissingWhiteWomanSyndrome. But out in the frontier where mankind is still exploring and conditions are much more hostile, only those who are or achieve the mindset of TheStoic survive long and those who make a living out on the frontier accept that there are certain... well, ''cold equations'' that cannot be bent or exempted because of sentiment. The reactions of Marilyn's family nicely highlight this: her parents, being from Earth, are predicted to hate Barton and not understand why he killed their daughter, while Marilyn's brother Gerry is reached contacted over the radio and, despite his horror, understands at once that Marilyn is doomed and that no one can save her.



* InformedAttribute: Many of the issues raised on the "Headscratchers" page boil down to the fact that the ship is ''stated'' to be a bare-bones emergency delivery vehicle, but has many features (an airlock, a closet big enough for a stowaway to hide in, a cabin big enough to walk around in) that simply don't square with that label.

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* InformedAttribute: Many of the issues raised on the "Headscratchers" page boil down to the fact that the ship is ''stated'' to be a bare-bones emergency delivery vehicle, but has many features (an airlock, a closet big enough for a stowaway to hide in, a cabin big enough to walk around in) that simply don't square with that label.might appear to be superfluous, and the story doesn't go into detail to explain them.



* MenAreTheExpendableGender: A secondary theme of the story. Barton is fully prepared to jettison the stowaway before he realizes it's a girl, and he spends a fair bit of time afterward angsting about what he will have to do solely because of Marilyn's gender. He states flat-out that he would have no issue with jettisoning a male, regardless of their age or reasons or the promise they had ahead of them, but because Marilyn is ''not'' of the expendable gender he does everything in his power to spare her, and when he realizes he can't, treats her graciously (gives her time to prepare, connects her with her brother so they can say goodbye) in a manner he certainly wouldn't have treated a male.

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* MenAreTheExpendableGender: A secondary theme of the story. Barton is fully prepared to jettison the stowaway before he realizes it's a girl, and he spends a fair bit of time afterward angsting about what he will have to do solely because of Marilyn's gender. He states flat-out that he would have no issue with jettisoning a male, regardless of their age or reasons or the promise they had ahead of them, but because Marilyn is ''not'' of the expendable gender he does everything in his power to spare her, and when he realizes he can't, he treats her graciously (gives her time to prepare, connects her with her brother so they can say goodbye) in a manner he certainly wouldn't have treated a male.



** While the Rocket Equation does limit the amount of fuel to be used in the shuttle, the idea that a futuristic space shuttle would have fewer fail-safes or backups than a 20th century airplane (modern aircraft are always given a large enough fuel supply that, even if there's a delay due to weather or problems at the landing site, they can typically circle the runway for several minutes, or possibly even hours, regardless of the distance of the trip) is more than a little strange. Either the OSHA does not exist in the future, or someone decided that a shuttle that can literally hold only one person and a small amount of cargo, and just barely enough fuel to get them from point A to point B, is a good idea, something that in the 20th and 21st century would never leave the design phase. [[note]] It's mentioned that the pod had a ''little'' fuel, which is why there was a certain amount of time before the girl had to be spaced. The extra fuel that would be used to maneuver if there were a storm at his destination or some other complication, was instead used to prolong the time before deceleration would start, the amount of time Marilyn had to live. The computations for the change were made on the main ship's computers and relayed back to the EDS with a combination of disapproval and understanding on their end. [[/note]]
** It's mentioned that the flight in question is an emergency flight being conducted at the absolute outer limit of the spacecraft's fuel range, with very little margin for error. Of course, this still doesn't excuse the total lack of a preflight inspection (as even the most cursory one would still have found the girl before takeoff), so OSHA still has lots of citations to hand out here. [[note]] At the same time, real life disasters such as the one that befell the Challenger show that such measures [[RealityIsUnrealistic are taken all the time.]] In that case, the Challenger's design flaw had been known about, but ignored because it had never caused a problem to the mission before. There is a reason why [[NoOSHACompliance this trope]] has a RealLife section on its page. However, missing a girl hiding in a closet would definitely be noted as a problem. [[/note]]

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** While the Rocket Equation does limit the amount of fuel to be used in the shuttle, EDS, the idea that a futuristic space shuttle would have fewer fail-safes or backups than a 20th century airplane (modern aircraft are always given a large enough fuel supply that, even if there's a delay due to weather or problems at the landing site, they can typically circle the runway for several minutes, or possibly even hours, regardless of the distance of the trip) is more than a little strange. Either the OSHA does not exist in the future, or someone decided that a shuttle that can literally hold only one person and a small amount of cargo, and just barely enough fuel to get them from point A to point B, is a good idea, something that in the 20th and 21st century would never leave the design phase. Possibly justified in that it's stated the EDS is a small emergency vehicle meant to be disposable, not for regular passenger service. [[note]] It's mentioned that the pod had a ''little'' EDS has ''a little'' fuel, which is why there was a certain amount of time Barton can give Marilyn an hour before the girl had she has to be spaced. The extra fuel that would be used to maneuver if there were a storm at his destination or some other complication, complication was instead used to prolong the time before deceleration would start, start and the amount mass of time Marilyn had the ship would have to live. be reduced in order to safely land. The computations for the change changes were made on the main ship's computers and relayed back to the EDS with a combination of disapproval and understanding on their end. [[/note]]
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** It's mentioned that the flight in question is an emergency flight being conducted at the absolute outer limit of the spacecraft's rocket fuel range, with very little margin takes up a lot of space on the cruisers, that they can only carry a limited amount, and that they have to ration precisely in order to reserve it for error.future emergencies, so the lack of a fuel reserve on the EDS is perhaps justified. Of course, this still doesn't excuse the total lack of a preflight inspection (as even the most cursory one would still have found the girl before takeoff), so OSHA still has lots of citations to hand out here. [[note]] At the same time, real life disasters such as the one that befell the Challenger show that such measures [[RealityIsUnrealistic are taken all the time.]] In that case, the Challenger's design flaw had been known about, but ignored because it had never caused a problem to the mission before. There is a reason why [[NoOSHACompliance this trope]] has a RealLife section on its page. However, missing a girl hiding in a closet would definitely be noted as a problem. [[/note]]



* ShootTheDog: Either Barton spaces Marilyn, or she dies anyway, along with him and six other people. He spaces her.

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* ShootTheDog: Either Barton spaces Marilyn, or she dies anyway, along with him and six eight other people. He spaces her.



* TooDumbToLive: Subverted. Marilyn ''appears'' to be this for stowing away aboard a shuttle where all stowaways are as a mandatory rule spaced, but apparently civilians aren't made aware of this rule and the only caution she is given is a big KEEP OUT sign. Spelling out for civilians '''why''' they are to keep out probably would have saved Marilyn's life.
* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: Every quality about Marilyn and every word she speaks is meant to evoke reader sympathy for her. She didn't sneak aboard the shuttle for nefarious reasons, she just wanted to see her brother. She's not a spoiled rich girl who thinks she can buy her way out of trouble, she's a hardworking girl from a poor family who saved up because she thought she would just get in trouble and have a fine to pay. She even offers to work and cook for her upkeep.

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* TooDumbToLive: Subverted. Marilyn ''appears'' to be this for stowing away aboard a shuttle an emergency vehicle where all stowaways are as a mandatory rule spaced, but apparently civilians aren't made aware of this rule and the only caution she is given is a big UNAUTHORIZED PERSONNEL KEEP OUT OUT! sign. Spelling out for civilians '''why''' they are to keep out probably would have saved Marilyn's life.
* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: Every quality about Marilyn [[note]]Her name is basically "Mary Cross", a pretty spot-on name for a martyr[//note]] and every word she speaks is meant to evoke reader sympathy for her. She didn't sneak aboard the shuttle for nefarious reasons, she just wanted to see her brother.brother who is providing for her family with his high-paying job on the frontier. She's not a spoiled rich girl who thinks she can buy her way out of trouble, she's a hardworking girl from a poor family who saved up because she thought she would just get in trouble and have a fine to pay. She even offers to work and cook once they get to Woden for her upkeep.
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->''H amount of fuel will not power an EDS with a mass of m plus x safely to its destination.'' To himself and her brother and parents she was a sweet-faced girl in her teens; to the laws of nature she was ''x'', the unwanted factor in a cold equation.
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* BigBrotherWorship: Marilyn's motive. She has a big brother who works out on the frontier, she only sees him once every few years, and so she saves up money and sneaks aboard a ship she thinks is on its way to where he is. The irony is that even if the Cold Equation hadn't been in play, the shuttle was on its way to a different group.

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* BigBrotherWorship: Marilyn's motive. She has a big brother who works out on the frontier, she only sees him once every few years, and so she saves up money and sneaks aboard a ship she thinks is on its way to where he is. The irony is that even if the Cold Equation hadn't been in play, the shuttle was on its way to a different group.group on an entirely different continent of Woden, not to where her brother was stationed.
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* IdiotPlot: Originally intended as a subversion of '50s tropes about scientists, that point is now lost on most readers and instead one wonders why the ship was designed to work with ''only'' the exact amount of fuel needed, and how Marilynn was able to sneak onboard (see NoOSHACompliance and SwissCheeseSecurity below).
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* IdiotPlot: Originally intended as a subversion of '50s tropes about scientists, that point is now lost on most readers and instead one wonders why the ship was designed to work with ''only'' the exact amount of fuel needed, and how Marilynn was able to sneak onboard (see NoOSHACompliance and SwissCheeseSecurity below).
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* AnthropicPrinciple: The premise of "The Cold Equations" is that a character finds himself in a situation where he has no choice but to ShootTheDog. Thus, a requirement of the story is that it is set up such that there is no [[TakeAThirdOption Third Option]].
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* TakeAThirdOption: The fact that there isn't one is the entire point. The story was written to be a [[http://zoo.nightstar.net/viewtopic.php?p=335078#p335078 subversion]] of early [[TheFifties 1950s]] ScienceFiction and its omnipotent men of ''SCIENCE!'' optimism.

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* TakeAThirdOption: The fact that there isn't one is the entire point. The story was written to be a [[http://zoo.nightstar.net/viewtopic.php?p=335078#p335078 subversion]] subversion of early [[TheFifties 1950s]] ScienceFiction and its omnipotent men of ''SCIENCE!'' optimism.
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* {{Deconstruction}}: Of a type of {{Invincible|Hero}} ScienceHero common in literature of the day. He'd get himself in trouble, then TechnoBabble up a DeusExMachina solution to the problem. Barton, placed in a similar scenario, tries his utmost to science up an answer, but the simple fact is the numbers don't work out that way. [[SomeoneHasToDie Marilyn has to die]], and there's nothing he can do about it. Unsurprisingly, ''The Cold Equations'' ended up [[GenreKiller contributing to the death of the archetype it subverted]].

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"The Cold Equations" is a {{Novelette}} by Creator/TomGodwin, first published in ''Magazine/AstoundingScienceFiction'' in 1954, which has been done as a radio play for the ''Radio/XMinusOne'' radio drama of the 1950s, an episode of ''Series/TheTwilightZone1985'', and a 1996 made-for-TV movie for the [[Creator/{{Syfy}} Sci Fi Channel]].

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"The Cold Equations" is a {{Novelette}} by Creator/TomGodwin, Tom Godwin, first published in ''Magazine/AstoundingScienceFiction'' in 1954, which has been done as a radio play for the ''Radio/XMinusOne'' radio drama of the 1950s, an episode of ''Series/TheTwilightZone1985'', and a 1996 made-for-TV movie for the [[Creator/{{Syfy}} Sci Fi Channel]].



The primary ship informs Barton there is no way the primary ship can retrieve Marilyn (other lives depend on their strict timetable as well), that there's no other ships in the area, and he knows there's no planetary launch available, either. He must reduce the ship's mass, but he lacks the appropriate means to, for example, seriously strip the ship of unnecessary components. (There's nothing on the ship that ''isn't'' necessary.) She can't land the ship either as it's not computer-piloted, so Barton can't sacrifice himself. Barton doesn't like the only choice available, and realises that he's going to have to live with the thought of what he's going to have to do for the rest of his life.

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The primary ship informs Barton there is no way the primary ship can retrieve Marilyn (other lives depend on their strict timetable as well), that there's no other ships in the area, and he knows there's no planetary launch available, either. He must reduce the ship's mass, but he lacks the appropriate means to, for example, seriously strip the ship of unnecessary components. (There's nothing on the ship that ''isn't'' necessary.) She can't land the ship either as it's not computer-piloted, so Barton can't sacrifice himself. Barton doesn't like the only choice available, and realises realizes that he's going to have to live with the thought of what he's going to have to do for the rest of his life.



* ColdEquation: This is the trope namer: the ship can handle X weight and has Y fuel and no amount of technobabble or heroic spirit is going to balance the equation when Marilyn is added in.

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* BigBrotherWorship: Marilyn's motive. She has a big brother who works out on the frontier, she only sees him once every few years, and so she saves up money and sneaks aboard a ship she thinks is on its way to where he is. The irony is that even if the Cold Equation hadn't been in play, the shuttle was on its way to a different group.
* ColdEquation: This is the trope namer: TropeNamer: the ship can handle X weight and has Y fuel and no amount of technobabble or heroic spirit is going to balance the equation when Marilyn is added in.



* EmotionsVsStoicism: Explored. On Earth people have achieved sedentary comfort and can afford to indulge tawdry displays of emotion like MissingWhiteWomanSyndrome. But out in the frontier where mankind is still exploring and conditions are much more hostile, only those who are or achieve the mindset of TheStoic survive long and those who make a living out on the frontier accept that there are certain... well, ''cold equations'' that cannot be bent or exempted because of sentiment. The reactions of Marilyn's family nicely highlight this: her parents, being from Earth, are predicted to hate Barton and not understand why he killed their daughter, while Marilyn's brother Gerry is reached and, despite his horror, understands at once that Marilyn is doomed and that no one can save her.
* FaceDeathWithDignity: Marilyn is able to achieve this and by the end walks calmly into the airlock, having accepted her fate.



* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Throw the girl out the airlock is necessary to get the vaccines to the colony. Barton doesn't want to do it but there is no other way.

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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Throw Throwing the girl out the airlock is necessary to get the vaccines to the colony. Barton doesn't want to do it but there is no other way.



* MissingWhiteWomanSyndrome: Barton notes that "On Earth [Marilyn's] plight would have filled the newscasts...Everyone, everywhere, would have known of Marilyn Lee Cross and no effort would have been spared to save her life." In space, however, there's no room for that kind of emotion.

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* KillTheCutie: Marilyn is killed by necessity.
* MenAreTheExpendableGender: A secondary theme of the story. Barton is fully prepared to jettison the stowaway before he realizes it's a girl, and he spends a fair bit of time afterward angsting about what he will have to do solely because of Marilyn's gender. He states flat-out that he would have no issue with jettisoning a male, regardless of their age or reasons or the promise they had ahead of them, but because Marilyn is ''not'' of the expendable gender he does everything in his power to spare her, and when he realizes he can't, treats her graciously (gives her time to prepare, connects her with her brother so they can say goodbye) in a manner he certainly wouldn't have treated a male.
* MissingWhiteWomanSyndrome: Barton notes that "On Earth [Marilyn's] plight would have filled the newscasts... Everyone, everywhere, would have known of Marilyn Lee Cross and no effort would have been spared to save her life." In space, however, there's no room for that kind of emotion.



* MyGreatestFailure: It is implied at the end that Barton will be forever haunted by the events of this story.



* SettlingTheFrontier: Gerry Cross and the other colonists Barton is on his way to do are doing this, and in keeping with the trope's description, the dangers colonists face out on the frontier are fierce.



* TakeAThirdOption: The fact that there isn't one is the entire point. The story was originally [[http://zoo.nightstar.net/viewtopic.php?p=335078#p335078 subversion]] of early [[TheFifties 1950s]] ScienceFiction and its omnipotent men of ''SCIENCE!''.

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* TakeAThirdOption: The fact that there isn't one is the entire point. The story was originally written to be a [[http://zoo.nightstar.net/viewtopic.php?p=335078#p335078 subversion]] of early [[TheFifties 1950s]] ScienceFiction and its omnipotent men of ''SCIENCE!''.''SCIENCE!'' optimism.


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* TooDumbToLive: Subverted. Marilyn ''appears'' to be this for stowing away aboard a shuttle where all stowaways are as a mandatory rule spaced, but apparently civilians aren't made aware of this rule and the only caution she is given is a big KEEP OUT sign. Spelling out for civilians '''why''' they are to keep out probably would have saved Marilyn's life.
* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: Every quality about Marilyn and every word she speaks is meant to evoke reader sympathy for her. She didn't sneak aboard the shuttle for nefarious reasons, she just wanted to see her brother. She's not a spoiled rich girl who thinks she can buy her way out of trouble, she's a hardworking girl from a poor family who saved up because she thought she would just get in trouble and have a fine to pay. She even offers to work and cook for her upkeep.

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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: The whole point of the story is to avert this trope.
* ColdEquation: The Trope Namer.

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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: The whole point of the story is to avert this trope.
trope. Marilyn can't be saved and attempting something risky when much more is at stake than just her is irresponsible and irrational.
* ColdEquation: The Trope Namer.This is the trope namer: the ship can handle X weight and has Y fuel and no amount of technobabble or heroic spirit is going to balance the equation when Marilyn is added in.



* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Throw the girl out the airlock to get the vaccines to the colony.

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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Throw the girl out the airlock is necessary to get the vaccines to the colony.colony. Barton doesn't want to do it but there is no other way.



** It's mentioned that the flight in question is an emergency flight being conducted at the absolute outer limit of the spacecraft's fuel range, with very little margin for error. Of course, this still doesn't excuse the total lack of a preflight inspection (as even the most cursory one would still have found the girl before takeoff), so OSHA still has lots of citations to hand out here.
** At the same time, real life disasters such as the one that befell the Challenger show that such measures [[RealityIsUnrealistic are taken all the time.]] In that case, the Challenger's design flaw had been known about, but ignored because it had never caused a problem to the mission before. There is a reason why [[NoOSHACompliance this trope]] has a RealLife section on its page.

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** It's mentioned that the flight in question is an emergency flight being conducted at the absolute outer limit of the spacecraft's fuel range, with very little margin for error. Of course, this still doesn't excuse the total lack of a preflight inspection (as even the most cursory one would still have found the girl before takeoff), so OSHA still has lots of citations to hand out here.
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here. [[note]] At the same time, real life disasters such as the one that befell the Challenger show that such measures [[RealityIsUnrealistic are taken all the time.]] In that case, the Challenger's design flaw had been known about, but ignored because it had never caused a problem to the mission before. There is a reason why [[NoOSHACompliance this trope]] has a RealLife section on its page. However, missing a girl hiding in a closet would definitely be noted as a problem. [[/note]]
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* ShootTheDog: Either Barton spaces Marilyn, or she dies anyway, along with him and six other people. He spaces her.
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** While the Rocket Equation does limit the amount of fuel to be used in the shuttle, the idea that a futuristic space shuttle would have fewer fail-safes or backups than a 20th century airplane (modern aircraft are always given a large enough fuel supply that, even if there's a delay due to weather or problems at the landing site, they can typically circle the runway for several minutes, or possibly even hours, regardless of the distance of the trip) is more than a little strange. Either the OSHA does not exist in the future, or someone decided that a shuttle that can literally hold only one person and a small amount of cargo, and just barely enough fuel to get them from point A to point B, is a good idea, something that in the 20th and 21st century would never leave the design phase. [[note]] It's mentioned that the pod had a ''little'' fuel, which is why there was a certain amount of time before the girl had to be spaced. The extra fuel that would be used to maneuver if there were a storm at his destination or some other complication, was instead used to prolong the time before deceleration would start, the amount of time Marilyn had to live. The computations for the change were made on the main ship's computers and relayed back to the EDS with a combination of disapproval and understanding on their end [[/note]].

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** While the Rocket Equation does limit the amount of fuel to be used in the shuttle, the idea that a futuristic space shuttle would have fewer fail-safes or backups than a 20th century airplane (modern aircraft are always given a large enough fuel supply that, even if there's a delay due to weather or problems at the landing site, they can typically circle the runway for several minutes, or possibly even hours, regardless of the distance of the trip) is more than a little strange. Either the OSHA does not exist in the future, or someone decided that a shuttle that can literally hold only one person and a small amount of cargo, and just barely enough fuel to get them from point A to point B, is a good idea, something that in the 20th and 21st century would never leave the design phase. [[note]] It's mentioned that the pod had a ''little'' fuel, which is why there was a certain amount of time before the girl had to be spaced. The extra fuel that would be used to maneuver if there were a storm at his destination or some other complication, was instead used to prolong the time before deceleration would start, the amount of time Marilyn had to live. The computations for the change were made on the main ship's computers and relayed back to the EDS with a combination of disapproval and understanding on their end [[/note]].end. [[/note]]
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"The Cold Equations" is a {{Novelette}} by Creator/TomGodwin, first published in ''{{Magazine/Astounding}}'' in 1954, which has been done as a radio play for the ''Radio/XMinusOne'' radio drama of the 1950s, an episode of ''Series/TheTwilightZone1985'', and a 1996 made-for-TV movie for the [[Creator/{{Syfy}} Sci Fi Channel]].

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"The Cold Equations" is a {{Novelette}} by Creator/TomGodwin, first published in ''{{Magazine/Astounding}}'' ''Magazine/AstoundingScienceFiction'' in 1954, which has been done as a radio play for the ''Radio/XMinusOne'' radio drama of the 1950s, an episode of ''Series/TheTwilightZone1985'', and a 1996 made-for-TV movie for the [[Creator/{{Syfy}} Sci Fi Channel]].
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"The Cold Equations" is a short story by Tom Godwin, first published in ''Astounding'' in 1954, which has been done as a radio play for the ''Radio/XMinusOne'' radio drama of the 1950s, an episode of ''Series/TheTwilightZone1985'', and a 1996 made-for-TV movie for the [[Creator/{{Syfy}} Sci Fi Channel]].

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"The Cold Equations" is a short story {{Novelette}} by Tom Godwin, Creator/TomGodwin, first published in ''Astounding'' ''{{Magazine/Astounding}}'' in 1954, which has been done as a radio play for the ''Radio/XMinusOne'' radio drama of the 1950s, an episode of ''Series/TheTwilightZone1985'', and a 1996 made-for-TV movie for the [[Creator/{{Syfy}} Sci Fi Channel]].
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* GeniusThriller: Played with. Barton does everything he can to try to figure out how to save Marilyn with the resources he has on hand, but unfortunately the science facts are completely against him.

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