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One day, an anonymous user of Reddit met a mysterious person on the internet that simply referred to himself as "Claverhouse". He had seen Claverhouse on numerous online message boards back when they were a student. While other posters disliked him, the user and Claverhouse struck up a friendship, and the two exchanged email addresses.
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One day, an anonymous user of Reddit Website/{{Reddit}} met a mysterious person on the internet that simply referred to himself as "Claverhouse". He had seen Claverhouse on numerous online message boards back when they were a student. While other posters disliked him, the user and Claverhouse struck up a friendship, and the two exchanged email addresses.
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* KillEmAll: Every single mentioned character in [[spoiler: "A Caress"]] is dead by the end.
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Being cut per TRS.
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* DefiniteArticleTitle: "The White Room", "The Summer House", "The Treehouse", "The Sleep Clinic", and "The Accident".
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* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler: The children's abusive father]] in "Snow".
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* AssholeVictim: AssholeVictim:
** [[spoiler: The children's abusive father]] in "Snow".
** [[spoiler: The children's abusive father]] in "Snow".
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* DefiniteArticleTitle: "The White Room", "The Summer House", "The Treehouse", "The Sleep Clinic", and "The Accident".
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* TheTheTitle: "The White Room", "The Summer House", "The Treehouse", "The Sleep Clinic", and "The Accident".
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* DomesticAbuser: The father in "Snow" takes the cake, as he [[spoiler: ''ties his kids to poles and whips them'']].
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* DomesticAbuser: DomesticAbuse: The father in "Snow" takes the cake, as he [[spoiler: ''ties his kids to poles and whips them'']].
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* MagnumOpus: "The White Room" received the most upvotes out of all the stories on {{Website/Reddit}}, but most readers agree that "Snow", "The Treehouse" and "The Sleep Clinic" are the best of the whole collection.
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One day, an anonymous user of Reddit met a mysterious person on the internet that simply referred to himself as "Claverhouse". The user had seen Claverhouse on numerous online message boards back when they were a student. While other posters disliked him, the user and Claverhouse struck up a friendship, and the two exchanged email addresses.
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One day, an anonymous user of Reddit met a mysterious person on the internet that simply referred to himself as "Claverhouse". The user He had seen Claverhouse on numerous online message boards back when they were a student. While other posters disliked him, the user and Claverhouse struck up a friendship, and the two exchanged email addresses.
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Also unknown was just how true the stories were. Though they were presented to the user as truth, they found some of them hard to believe, even completely made up in some parts. But Claverhouse was adamant that at their core they all illustrate a deeper, more universal truth: that the world is not the way people think it is.
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Also unknown was just how true the stories were. Though they were presented to the user as truth, they he found some of them hard to believe, even completely made up in some parts. But Claverhouse was adamant that at their core they all illustrate a deeper, more universal truth: that the world is not the way people think it is.
is,and that it didn't matter if they were true or not.
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* NoNameGiven: There are only six characters that are named in the entire collection.
** Julia in "Hives".
** Felix and Edgar and Lilith Cayce in "A Caress".
** Danny and Jules in "The Treehouse".
** Julia in "Hives".
** Felix and Edgar and Lilith Cayce in "A Caress".
** Danny and Jules in "The Treehouse".
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* NoNameGiven: There are only six characters that are named in the entire collection.
** Julia in "Hives".
** Felixcollection, and Edgar and Lilith Cayce two of them don't physically appear in "A Caress".
** Danny and Jules in "The Treehouse".the story they are mentioned in.
** Julia in "Hives".
** Felix
** Danny and Jules in "The Treehouse".
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* DoubleMeaningTitle: "Hives". It could:
** 1) Refer to the strange red bumps that grow all over the narrator's girlfriend, or...
** 2) [[spoiler: Refer to the fact that the girlfriend has insects living inside of her, making her, essentially, a ''hive''.]]
** 1) Refer to the strange red bumps that grow all over the narrator's girlfriend, or...
** 2) [[spoiler: Refer to the fact that the girlfriend has insects living inside of her, making her, essentially, a ''hive''.]]
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* MagnumOpus: "The White Room" received the most upvotes out of all the stories on {{Reddit}}, but most readers agree that "Snow", "The Treehouse" and "The Sleep Clinic" are the best of the whole collection.
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* MagnumOpus: "The White Room" received the most upvotes out of all the stories on {{Reddit}}, {{Website/Reddit}}, but most readers agree that "Snow", "The Treehouse" and "The Sleep Clinic" are the best of the whole collection.
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* HearingVoices: The narrators of "The Treehouse", "Last Words", and "The Summer House".
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** The mysterious stranger's pistol in "Still Waters".
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** Played straight again in "Echoes", where the serial killer describes his murdered victims.
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** Played straight again in "Echoes", where the serial killer describes his murdered victims.
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** Played straight again in "Echoes", where the serial killer describes his murdered victims.
* ChekhovsGun: The snowmen in the front yard of the abandoned house in "Snow".
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** Played straight again in "Echoes", where the serial killer describes his murdered victims.
* ChekhovsGun:The snowmen mysterious stranger's pistol in the front yard of the abandoned house in "Snow"."Still Waters".
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** Played straight again in "Echoes", where the serial killer describes his murdered victims.
* ChekhovsGun: The snowmen in the front yard of the abandoned house in "Snow".
* ChekhovsGun: The snowmen in the front yard of the abandoned house in "Snow".
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* BottleEpisode: "Last Words" takes place entirely in the kitchen of an abandoned house.
** "Footsteps" takes place on a mountain path.
** "Snow" takes place in an abandoned cabin.
** "The Summer House" takes place in the living room, sun room, and bedroom of the titular house.
** "Footsteps" takes place on a mountain path.
** "Snow" takes place in an abandoned cabin.
** "The Summer House" takes place in the living room, sun room, and bedroom of the titular house.
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler: The children living in the abandoned house]] in "Snow" [[spoiler: are tied to poles and left outside in subzero weather to die of exposure.
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler: The children living in the abandoned house]] in "Snow" [[spoiler: are tied to poles and left outside in subzero weather to die of exposure.exposure]].
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler: The children living in the abandoned house]] in "Snow" [[spoiler: are tied to poles and left outside in subzero weather to die of exposure.
** [[spoiler: The man inside the tree]] in "The Treehouse" [[spoiler: apparently handcuffed himself to the inside of the tree and swallowed the key (after wrapping it in barbed wire) to commit suicide by starvation]].
** [[spoiler: Lilith Cayce]] in "A Caress" [[spoiler: is voluntarily flayed to death by her sculptor husband just so he can make a perfect marble likeness of her]].
** [[spoiler: The man inside the tree]] in "The Treehouse" [[spoiler: apparently handcuffed himself to the inside of the tree and swallowed the key (after wrapping it in barbed wire) to commit suicide by starvation]].
** [[spoiler: Lilith Cayce]] in "A Caress" [[spoiler: is voluntarily flayed to death by her sculptor husband just so he can make a perfect marble likeness of her]].
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* KillTheCuite: This happens to [[spoiler: the children living in the abandoned house]] in "Snow".
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* KillTheCuite: KillTheCutie: This happens to [[spoiler: the children living in the abandoned house]] in "Snow".
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* KillTheCuite: This happens to [[spoiler: the children living in the abandoned house]] in "Snow".