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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Jordan vs. Belladonna. Jordan very nearly dies, but manages to get the upperhand and kills Belladonnna.]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Jordan vs. Belladonna. Jordan very nearly dies, but manages to get the upperhand and kills Belladonnna.Belladonna.]]
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* RewardedAsATraitorDeserves: [[spoiler: Once Jordan finally gets the upperhand during their fight, Belladonna begs for mercy and then reveals to Jordan that Gabriel's soul is now in Hell and she can help her get him out. Jordan still kills her anyway, but then leaves to make a plan to break into Hell and get Gabriel out with the other archangels.]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Jordan vs. Belladonna.]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Jordan vs. Belladonna. Jordan very nearly dies, but manages to get the upperhand and kills Belladonnna.]]
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* WrongNameOutburst: [[spoiler: Jordan finds out the main reason that Belladonna hates her so much is that Belial once seduced her, but when they had sex--mind you, this is an ''angel'' having sex with a ''demon'' and that is ''very much not allowed''--Belial ends up saying Jordan's name instead of Belladonna's, enraging her that she just fell from grace for a guy ''who wasn't even thinking of her in the moment she fell from grace for him.'' Needless to say, it makes her hate Jordan with a passion and even Jordan acknowledges that was fucked up of Belial.]]
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* TakeThat: Jordan makes one at ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' when she finds out what Michael had been doing the day he met her (mainly creeping around her apartment while she slept.)
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* TakeThat: Jordan makes one at ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' ''Literature/TheTwilightSaga'' when she finds out what Michael had been doing the day he met her (mainly creeping around her apartment while she slept.)
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** Also one to ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' in "Gluttony II." "I'm an archangel, not Edward Cullen. I don't sulk."
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** Also one to ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' ''Literature/TheTwilightSaga'' in "Gluttony II." "I'm an archangel, not Edward Cullen. I don't sulk."
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* FantasticRacism: [[spoiler: Belladonna absolutely ''despises'' human beings and turns on the angels solely to commit genocide and be relieved of duty protecting them, as those were God's orders before He decided not to intervene on Earth any longer.]]
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* KatanasAreJustBetter: [[spoiler: Belial has a katana in his full demon form in hell. It tracks, as his first appearance in '"The Black Parade'' has him in the body of a handsome Japanese man. Belial seems to like Japanese culture in general, even wearing a yukata in Hell.]]
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* ActionDuo: Jordan and Michael, even moreso than in ''The Black Parade.''
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* ActionDuo: Jordan and Michael, even moreso than in ''The Black Parade.'''' They go on several missions together and most of them are dangerous.
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* AlmostKiss: "Pride II" is centered around it.
** There's also one serious near miss in the bonus chapter.
* AloneWithThePsycho: Michael and Liz in "Greed III."
* BadAssNormal: Jordan. Two words, "Hey, fur-face!"
** There's also one serious near miss in the bonus chapter.
* AloneWithThePsycho: Michael and Liz in "Greed III."
* BadAssNormal: Jordan. Two words, "Hey, fur-face!"
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* AlmostKiss: "Pride II" is centered around it.one between Michael and Jordan.
** There's also one serious near miss between them in the bonus chapter.
* AloneWithThePsycho: Michael and Liz in "Greed III."
" Liz is an assassin and sees fit to torture Michael before waiting for Jordan to arrive so she can kill her. She was hired by one of the demons Michael's been hunting.
* BadAssNormal: Jordan. Two words, "Hey,fur-face!"fur-face!" ''(cue slamming a tree branch into a hellhound)''
** There's also one serious near miss between them in the bonus chapter.
* AloneWithThePsycho: Michael and Liz in "Greed III.
* BadAssNormal: Jordan. Two words, "Hey,
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* CelibateHero: Michael. Discussed in detail in "Envy II."
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* CelibateHero: Michael. Discussed in detail in "Envy II."" He's an archangel in a human body and angels aren't allowed to mix with humans.
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* InnocentInnuendo: The entire point of "Lust II."
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* InnocentInnuendo: The entire point of "Lust II."" Michael accidentally turns himself and Jordan on while licking caramel off her fingers. It makes sense in context.
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* IKissYourHand: Michael to Jordan In "Sloth III."
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* IKissYourHand: Michael to Jordan In "Sloth III." It's during a moment where she needs reassurance as she's worried about him.
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* PrecisionFStrike: By a demon in "Sloth III."
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* PrecisionFStrike: By a demon in "Sloth III."" Michael is interrogating a demon and takes off the duct tape to hear an answer. Instead of that, the demon tells him, "Go fuck yourself, pretty boy."
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* ActionGirlfriend: Jordan. Or, more precisely, Action Wife.
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* ActionGirlfriend: Jordan. Or, more precisely, Action Wife. She gets elbow deep in the case and has to survive several nasty fights.
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* BattleCouple: Jordan and Michael, who are married.
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* BattleCouple: Jordan and Michael, who are married. They team up at the end to face [[spoiler: the Leviathan.]]
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** Michael asks if Jordan ever has a normal day and she replies with, "Once. It was a Thursday." The same question-and-answer occurred between Dr Calvin and Det Spooner in ''Film/IRobot''.
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** Michael asks if Jordan ever has a normal day and she replies with, "Once. It was a Thursday." The same question-and-answer occurred between Dr Dr. Calvin and Det Det. Spooner in ''Film/IRobot''.
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* TreacherousAdvisor: Belial.
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* TreacherousAdvisor: Belial. He advises her on how to catch the rogue angel, but he has his own agenda too.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler: Avriel the rogue angel.]]
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler: Avriel the rogue angel.]] He is afraid that the [[spoiler: Leviathan's awakening will eventually bring about the end of the world, but since the prophecy basically says it can't happen unless a Seer helps it happen, he goes down to Earth to hunt down Seers before it's too late.]]
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* HelloAgainOfficer: Jordan’s encounter with Det. Hughes.
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* HelloAgainOfficer: Jordan’s encounter with Det. Hughes. He works out that she's involved with the demons (though he thinks they're just drug dealers) and is trying to flip her into a witness, but she can't tell him the truth so she has to avoid him instead.
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Both Dustin and Belial.
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Both Dustin and Belial.Belial are impressed and even turned on that Jordan can be absolutely ruthless.
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* KnightInSourArmor: Most definitely Jordan.
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* KnightInSourArmor: Most definitely Jordan. She doesn't want to keep fighting, but since Michael and the angels abandoned her, she has little choice left.
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* TheTease: Belial. For God’s sake, he makes Jordan play strip poker with him.
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* TheTease: Belial. For God’s sake, he makes Jordan play strip poker ''strip poker'' with him.
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* WouldHitAGirl: Unsurprisingly, the demons.
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* WouldHitAGirl: Unsurprisingly, the demons. Hit, kill, enslave, they do it all to women with no qualms.
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%%* ArchangelGabriel: One of the main protagonists.
%%* ArchangelMichael: One of the main protagonists/love interests.
%%* ArchangelRaphael: One of the minor protagonists.
%%* ArmorPiercingQuestion: "Michael... are you jealous?"
%%* ArchangelMichael: One of the main protagonists/love interests.
%%* ArchangelRaphael: One of the minor protagonists.
%%* ArmorPiercingQuestion: "Michael... are you jealous?"
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%%* ArchangelMichael: One of the main protagonists/love interests.
%%* ArchangelRaphael: One of the minor protagonists.
* ArchangelRaphael: One of the minor protagonists. He also specializes in healing abilities.
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: "Michael... are you jealous?"
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* AudienceSurrogate: Michael in the first third of the novel.
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* AudienceSurrogate: Michael in the first third of the novel. Jordan explains how things work in the normal and supernatural world as she investigates his case.
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* BadassInDistress: Michael in the hospital scene.
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* BadassInDistress: Michael in the hospital scene. Jordan has to confront Mulciber and challenge her to a fight to get him free.
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* CasualDangerDialogue: Usually Jordan.
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* CasualDangerDialogue: Usually Jordan. She will quickly pop off a one-liner even though she's up to her eyeballs in danger.
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%%zce* Catapult Nightmare: Jordan has a few of them.
%%zce* Celibate Hero: Gabriel, Raphael, and Michael [[spoiler:(initially)]]. They are angels, after all.
%%zce* Catapult Nightmare: Jordan has a few of them.
%%zce* Celibate Hero: Gabriel, Raphael, and Michael [[spoiler:(initially)]]. They are angels, after all.
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%%zce* Chaste Hero: Jordan, by choice, and the angels by duty.
%%zce* Chekhovs Gun: Gabriel's feather.
%%zce* Chekhovs Gun: Gabriel's feather.
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%%zce* Chekhovs Gun:
* ChekhovsGun: Gabriel's feather. [[spoiler: Jordan hides the feather we saw in an opening chapter in the lining of her bra, so when Belial tries to initiate sex when he has her captured, she whips it out and stabs him with it, eventually freeing herself.]]
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* ClosedDoorRapport: Jordan and Michael in Book Three.
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* ClosedDoorRapport: Jordan and Michael in Book Three. She can't face him without crying, so she locks herself in her bedroom and talks to him through the door.
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* EmpoweredBadassNormal: The archangels.
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* EmpoweredBadassNormal: The archangels. They are super strong, super fast, and they can use defense, healing, or attack energy.
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* FemmeFatale: Mulciber.
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* FemmeFatale: Mulciber. Being the only female archdemon doesn't slow her down one bit--she is a particularly vicious and smart archdemon who has been plotting humanity's downfall even during Jordan's mother's lifetime. She also has a habit of picking dark-haired, beautiful women for her disguises.
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Terrell.]]
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Terrell. It turns out Belial found him, killed him, and took over his body to trap Jordan.]]
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* LikeBrotherAndSister: Gabriel and Jordan.
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* LikeBrotherAndSister: Gabriel and Jordan. He even kisses her on the forehead each time he departs to show how much he cares for her.
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* LongHairedPrettyBoy: Belial [[spoiler: in his second body.]]
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* LongHairedPrettyBoy: Belial [[spoiler: in his second body.]]]] He has long black hair.
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* MissingMom: Catalina Amador, Jordan's late mother.
* TheMole: [[spoiler:Jacob; Belial’s cat to a lesser extent.]]
* TheMole: [[spoiler:Jacob; Belial’s cat to a lesser extent.]]
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* MissingMom: Catalina Amador, Jordan's late mother.
mother. She was taken away from Jordan after her sister convinces the state that she's mentally unstable and can't take care of Jordan. [[spoiler: It turns out the demons had her locked away with future plans to use her Seer blood for an EvilPlan, but the angels send in Andrew Bethsaida to break her out. She sacrifices herself to save him in the end.]]
* TheMole: [[spoiler:Jacob; Belial’s cat to a lesser extent. Jacob lures Jordan and Michael to a psychiatric hospital where the archdemon Mulciber is waiting to spring a trap.]]
* TheMole: [[spoiler:Jacob; Belial’s cat to a lesser extent. Jacob lures Jordan and Michael to a psychiatric hospital where the archdemon Mulciber is waiting to spring a trap.]]
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* MuggleBestFriend: Lauren, a fellow waitress and Jordan's best friend.
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* MuggleBestFriend: Lauren, a fellow waitress and Jordan's best friend. [[spoiler: But she does find out the truth in the second novel.]]
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* MyNameIsInigoMontoya: Jordan to Mulciber.
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* MyNameIsInigoMontoya: Jordan to Mulciber.Mulciber, shortly before killing her [[spoiler: with Gabriel's feather.]]
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Michael vs. Luka.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Michael vs. Luka. Michael gets particularly irritated that Luka requested an unwilling kiss from Jordan, so he doesn't hold back even slightly during the fight.
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* PsychoPsychologist: Mulciber.
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* PsychoPsychologist: Mulciber. She is posing as a psychiatrist when she lures Jordan and Michael into a deadly trap.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: Hellhounds.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: Hellhounds. They are huge and extremely vicious and hard to kill. Jordan finds that out the hard way.
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%%* SealedWithAKiss: The ending.
* SexGoddess: [[spoiler:Good enough that Michael remarks that he's impressed that Jordan doesn't have sex all day, every day because their first time was just that enjoyable. It's also implied they did it several times before Jordan fell asleep as it's been hours when she wakes up.]]
* SexGoddess: [[spoiler:Good enough that Michael remarks that he's impressed that Jordan doesn't have sex all day, every day because their first time was just that enjoyable. It's also implied they did it several times before Jordan fell asleep as it's been hours when she wakes up.]]
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* SexGoddess: [[spoiler:Good enough that Michael remarks that he's impressed that Jordan doesn't have sex all day, every day because their first time was just that enjoyable. It's also implied they did it
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* SiblingTeam: Michael, Gabriel, and Raphael.
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* SiblingTeam: Michael, Gabriel, and Raphael.Raphael are all siblings.
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* SlapSlapKiss: Jordan and Belial, quite literally too.
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* SlapSlapKiss: Jordan and Belial, quite literally too. They have an entire fight sequence before Belial attempts to seduce her.
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* TheSnarkKnight: Jordan; Michael in his poltergeist form.
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* TheSnarkKnight: Jordan; Michael in his poltergeist form. She is extremely sarcastic at all times as part of a distancing tactic.
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* SophisticatedAsHell: Belial and Mulciber, [[IncrediblyLamePun no pun intended.]]
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* SophisticatedAsHell: Belial and Mulciber, [[IncrediblyLamePun no pun intended.]]]] Both are always inhabiting incredibly beautiful bodies and are almost always dressed to the nines.
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* TalkingInYourDreams: Jordan speaks with Belial for the first time in a nightmare, but its also shown that it’s a form of communication used by angels and demons alike. Catalina mentioned speaking to Gabriel in a dream after her capture.
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* TalkingInYourDreams: Jordan speaks with Belial for the first time in a nightmare, but its it’s also shown that it’s a form of communication used by angels and demons alike. Catalina mentioned speaking to Gabriel in a dream after her capture.
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* UrbanFantasy: with hints of ParanormalRomance.
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* UrbanFantasy: with hints of ParanormalRomance. The story is mostly set in Albany, New York with a trip to New Jersey later on.
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* VillainousCrush: Jordan for Belial.
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* VillainousCrush: Jordan for Belial. He likes her spirit and hopes to be able to break it someday. Brr.
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* WickedCultured: Belial and Mulciber.
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* WickedCultured: Belial and Mulciber. They are both well-read and scarily intelligent.
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* YouAreWorthHell: Jordan to Michael, though subverted.
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* YouAreWorthHell: Jordan to Michael, though subverted. [[spoiler: Jordan agrees not to let the angels save her after Belial stabs her with the Spear of Longinus since it would shut the portal that would allow Michael's soul to return to his body. She is ready to accept rotting in hell after becoming close to him. Lucky for her, saving his life counts as her 100th soul, so she is no longer damned.]]
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Belial wasnt a fan of [[spoiler: his daughter Juliana, but it was clear he didn’t want her to come to harm.]]
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Belial wasnt wasn’t a fan of [[spoiler: his daughter Juliana, but it was clear he didn’t want her to come to harm.]]
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** Michael has the same background screensaver of "You should be writing" as [[Series/{{Castle}} Richard Castle.]]
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** Michael has the same background screensaver of "You should be writing" as [[Series/{{Castle}} [[Series/Castle2009 Richard Castle.]]
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-->'''Michael''': Were you just going to let me get half-naked in front of you?
-->'''Jordan''': ''(shrugs)'' [[BlatantLies Didn't want to break your concentration.]]
-->'''Jordan''': ''(shrugs)'' [[BlatantLies Didn't want to break your concentration.]]
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-->'''Michael''': Were you just going to let me get half-naked in front of you?
-->'''Jordan''':you?\\
'''Jordan''': ''(shrugs)'' [[BlatantLies Didn't want to break your concentration.]]
-->'''Jordan''':
'''Jordan''': ''(shrugs)'' [[BlatantLies Didn't want to break your concentration.]]
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** To the season three episode "[=3XK=]" of the crime dramedy ''Series/{{Castle}}'', when Michael is able to convey something is wrong to Jordan by telling her he loves her. See CovertDistressCode above.
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** To the season three episode "[=3XK=]" of the crime dramedy ''Series/{{Castle}}'', ''Series/{{Castle|2009}}'', when Michael is able to convey something is wrong to Jordan by telling her he loves her. See CovertDistressCode above.
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** To ''Series/{{Castle}}''. She mentions Castle and Beckett by name.
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** To ''Series/{{Castle}}''.''Series/{{Castle|2009}}''. She mentions Castle and Beckett by name.
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* SaltAndPepper: Jordan and Michael. She is black and Spanish, he is Caucasian.
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: Belial tries to imply that it's possible Jordan's chronic dreams about him are a figment of her own imagination, so "having incredibly rough, but utterly satisfying sex with me right now wouldn't be cheating so much as masturbation."
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As if that weren’t bad enough, two days before her deadline a handsome pain-in-the-ass poltergeist named Michael strolls into her life. His soul is the key to her salvation, but the cost just might be more than she can handle. Solving his death puts her right in the crosshairs of Belial: a vain, bloodthirsty archdemon who won’t rest until she’s his slave. Can she rescue Michael and save her own soul, or will they both be dragged down into the clutches of the eternal black parade?
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As if that weren’t weren't bad enough, two days before her deadline a handsome pain-in-the-ass poltergeist named Michael strolls into her life. His soul is the key to her salvation, but the cost just might be more than she can handle. Solving his death puts her right in the crosshairs of Belial: a vain, bloodthirsty archdemon who won’t won't rest until she’s she's his slave. Can she rescue Michael and save her own soul, or will they both be dragged down into the clutches of the eternal black parade?
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* AboveTheInfluence: Michael manages not to take advantage of the drunken Jordan, but even he can’t resist kissing her before she falls asleep.
* AccidentalMurder: Jordan accidentally kills [[spoiler: Andrew]], mistaking him for a demon.
* AboveTheInfluence: Michael manages not to take advantage of the drunken Jordan, but even he can’t resist kissing her before she falls asleep.
* AccidentalMurder: Jordan accidentally kills [[spoiler: Andrew]], mistaking him for a demon.
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* AboveTheInfluence: Michael manages not to take advantage of the drunken Jordan, but even he
* AccidentalMurder: Jordan accidentally kills
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* ActionGirl: Jordan. [[spoiler: Turns out it's in her blood, as her mother, Catalina, was quite the ActionGirl too.]]
* AffablyEvil: Belial and Mulciber. They’ll tear you limb from limb, but they’ll be polite about it.
* AffablyEvil: Belial and Mulciber. They’ll tear you limb from limb, but they’ll be polite about it.
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* ActionGirl: Jordan. [[spoiler: Turns [[spoiler:Turns out it's in her blood, as her mother, Catalina, was quite the ActionGirl too.]]
* AffablyEvil: Belial and Mulciber.They’ll They'll tear you limb from limb, but they’ll they'll be polite about it.
* AffablyEvil: Belial and Mulciber.
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* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: Played with, as Michael (while human/poltergeist) has some bad boy charm to him and Jordan likes him more than she's willing to admit, but once he [[spoiler: gets his body back,]] he's much more responsible and level-headed. It's ultimately averted with Belial, who manages to tempt her, but fails in winning her soul.
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* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: Played with, as Michael (while human/poltergeist) has some bad boy charm to him and Jordan likes him more than she's willing to admit, but once he [[spoiler: gets [[spoiler:gets his body back,]] he's much more responsible and level-headed. It's ultimately averted with Belial, who manages to tempt her, but fails in winning her soul.
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* AngelUnaware: [[spoiler: Michael. After securing the Spear, Belial essentially erased him from history entirely, causing a borderline AlternateUniverse until Michael and Gabriel meet again face-to-face. Gabriel's recognition undoes the spell and they're able to figure things out from there.]]
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* AngelUnaware: [[spoiler: Michael.[[spoiler:Michael. After securing the Spear, Belial essentially erased him from history entirely, causing a borderline AlternateUniverse until Michael and Gabriel meet again face-to-face. Gabriel's recognition undoes the spell and they're able to figure things out from there.]]
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** One of the climatic moments of Book Three is [[spoiler: Jordan and Michael's hotel makeout session after he admits he's jealous of her going out on a "not-date" with her ex-boyfriend. It's implied that if Gabriel hadn't showed up, they would have slept together.]]
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** One of the climatic moments of Book Three is [[spoiler: Jordan [[spoiler:Jordan and Michael's hotel makeout session after he admits he's jealous of her going out on a "not-date" with her ex-boyfriend. It's implied that if Gabriel hadn't showed up, they would have slept together.]]
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* BlackGalOnWhiteGuyDrama: Jordan gets a taste of this when she attends [[spoiler:Terrell’s funeral with Michael as Terrell’s mother disapproves of interracial dating]].
* BlackEyesOfEvil: [[spoiler: The false angel.]]
* BloodMagic: Mentioned as Belial needs Jordan’s blood to open a portal into Michael’s body.
* BodyguardCrush: Michael explains that his reason for becoming Jordan's bodyguard is that he owes her for [[spoiler: her sacrifice]] to restore his life, but that's not quite the whole story as their friendship continues. It's clear that he has some sort of feelings for her at that point, but neither of them have figured it out just yet so they leave the issue be.
* BlackEyesOfEvil: [[spoiler: The false angel.]]
* BloodMagic: Mentioned as Belial needs Jordan’s blood to open a portal into Michael’s body.
* BodyguardCrush: Michael explains that his reason for becoming Jordan's bodyguard is that he owes her for [[spoiler: her sacrifice]] to restore his life, but that's not quite the whole story as their friendship continues. It's clear that he has some sort of feelings for her at that point, but neither of them have figured it out just yet so they leave the issue be.
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* BlackGalOnWhiteGuyDrama: Jordan gets a taste of this when she attends [[spoiler:Terrell’s [[spoiler:Terrell's funeral with Michael as Terrell’s Terrell's mother disapproves of interracial dating]].
* BlackEyesOfEvil:[[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The false angel.]]
* BloodMagic: Mentioned as Belial needsJordan’s Jordan's blood to open a portal into Michael’s Michael's body.
* BodyguardCrush: Michael explains that his reason for becoming Jordan's bodyguard is that he owes her for[[spoiler: her [[spoiler:her sacrifice]] to restore his life, but that's not quite the whole story as their friendship continues. It's clear that he has some sort of feelings for her at that point, but neither of them have figured it out just yet so they leave the issue be.
* BlackEyesOfEvil:
* BloodMagic: Mentioned as Belial needs
* BodyguardCrush: Michael explains that his reason for becoming Jordan's bodyguard is that he owes her for
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* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Mulciber’s reaction to having a hand in Catalina’s death.
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* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Mulciber’s Mulciber's reaction to having a hand in Catalina’s Catalina's death.
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** Jordan learns to open up and stop rejecting human contact because of the nature of her job. She also forgives herself for killing [[spoiler: Andrew]] and falls in love.
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** Jordan learns to open up and stop rejecting human contact because of the nature of her job. She also forgives herself for killing [[spoiler: Andrew]] [[spoiler:Andrew]] and falls in love.
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%%zce* Chekhovs Gun: Gabriel’s feather.
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%%zce* Chekhovs Gun: Gabriel’s Gabriel's feather.
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: The angels’ wings all have white bases with metallic sheens to them (Gabriel is gold, Michael is silver, Raphael is bronze) while the demons’ wings are dark, earthy colors (Belial is black, Mulciber is brown).
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: The angels’ angels' wings all have white bases with metallic sheens to them (Gabriel is gold, Michael is silver, Raphael is bronze) while the demons’ demons' wings are dark, earthy colors (Belial is black, Mulciber is brown).
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Jordan spent her entire childhood being physically and emotionally abused by her aunt. As a result, she rarely discusses anything regarding before she accidentally killed [[spoiler: Andrew.]] It's also the main reason she refuses to let anyone in as she's afraid of being hurt again.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Jordan spent her entire childhood being physically and emotionally abused by her aunt. As a result, she rarely discusses anything regarding before she accidentally killed [[spoiler: Andrew.[[spoiler:Andrew.]] It's also the main reason she refuses to let anyone in as she's afraid of being hurt again.
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* DeadPersonConversation: [[spoiler: When Mulciber strangles Jordan, she enters a near-death state and ascends to the astral plane, where she finds her mother, Catalina, and Andrew Bethsaida. Both of them tell her the truth of what happened the night Catalina died and help Jordan figure out a way to stop the false angel.]]
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* DeadPersonConversation: [[spoiler: When [[spoiler:When Mulciber strangles Jordan, she enters a near-death state and ascends to the astral plane, where she finds her mother, Catalina, and Andrew Bethsaida. Both of them tell her the truth of what happened the night Catalina died and help Jordan figure out a way to stop the false angel.]]
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* DeathByOriginStory: [[spoiler: Andrew Bethsaida and Catalina Amador.]] A minor example with Diana, the cute store clerk saleswoman Michael met who was the first human he connected with after his memory loss.
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* DeathByOriginStory: [[spoiler: Andrew [[spoiler:Andrew Bethsaida and Catalina Amador.]] A minor example with Diana, the cute store clerk saleswoman Michael met who was the first human he connected with after his memory loss.
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* DemonicPossession: Discussed. Demons cannot possess living human beings because two souls cannot share a body. They almost never attempt possessions because it is a violent process that rarely works out. [[spoiler: However, Belial skirts the rules a bit by first killing Jordan’s ex and using his body to lure her into his clutches. This only worked because he stayed far away enough from Michael that he didn’t know he was around.]]
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* DemonicPossession: Discussed. Demons cannot possess living human beings because two souls cannot share a body. They almost never attempt possessions because it is a violent process that rarely works out. [[spoiler: However, [[spoiler:However, Belial skirts the rules a bit by first killing Jordan’s Jordan's ex and using his body to lure her into his clutches. This only worked because he stayed far away enough from Michael that he didn’t didn't know he was around.]]
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* BookEnds: [[spoiler: The book begins and ends with Jordan and Michael kissing in the kitchen of her apartment.]]
* BorrowedCatchPhrase: [[spoiler: Michael borrows Jordan's signature line in the climax before killing Belial, adding his own spin on it.]]
-->'''Michael''': ''Vaya con dios'', you son of a bitch. ''(Cue stabbing)''
* BorrowedCatchPhrase: [[spoiler: Michael borrows Jordan's signature line in the climax before killing Belial, adding his own spin on it.]]
-->'''Michael''': ''Vaya con dios'', you son of a bitch. ''(Cue stabbing)''
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* BookEnds: [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The book begins and ends with Jordan and Michael kissing in the kitchen of her apartment.]]
* BorrowedCatchPhrase:[[spoiler: Michael [[spoiler:Michael borrows Jordan's signature line in the climax before killing Belial, adding his own spin on it.]]
-->'''Michael''': -->'''Michael:''' ''Vaya con dios'', you son of a bitch. ''(Cue stabbing)''
* BorrowedCatchPhrase:
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* YouGotSpunk: A portion of the reason why Belial desires Jordan’s soul.
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* InnocentCohabitation: A subversion occurs with Jordan and Michael—he hasn’t moved in but he does spend most of his time taking care of her while she recovers in Book Two.
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%%* CatScare: Twice. By the same cat, no less.
%%* CatapultNightmare: Jordan has a few of them.
* CelibateHero: Gabriel, Raphael, and Michael [[spoiler:(initially)]]. They are angels, after all.
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* CelibateHero: Gabriel, Raphael, and Michael [[spoiler:(initially)]]. They are angels, after all.
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* ChasteHero: Jordan, by choice, and the angels by duty.
* ChekhovsGun: Gabriel’s feather.
* ChekhovsGun: Gabriel’s feather.
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* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Belladonna.]]
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* FiveManBand:
** TheHero: Jordan
** TheLancer: Michael
** TheBigGuy: Myra
** TheSmartGuy: Faust
** TheChick: Avriel
** TheHero: Jordan
** TheLancer: Michael
** TheBigGuy: Myra
** TheSmartGuy: Faust
** TheChick: Avriel
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* [[EvilUncle Evil Aunt]]: Jordan's aunt Carmen was unmatched in her cruelty to Jordan when her mother was declared unfit to raise her and she was sent to live with their family instead. She beat Jordan at every available opportunity, to the point of scarring her back, and spent every waking moment telling her how worthless she was. Michael is so incensed on Jordan's behalf that he bestows one hell of a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech on her when they meet.
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* [[EvilUncle Evil Aunt]]: EvilAunt: Jordan's aunt Carmen was unmatched in her cruelty to Jordan when her mother was declared unfit to raise her and she was sent to live with their family instead. She beat Jordan at every available opportunity, to the point of scarring her back, and spent every waking moment telling her how worthless she was. Michael is so incensed on Jordan's behalf that he bestows one hell of a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech on her when they meet.
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* LegFocus: Michael's biggest turn on for Jordan is her legs.
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* ShesGotLegs: We find out Michael’s biggest turn on for Jordan is her legs, apparently.
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* CoolPet: I mean, who ''wouldn't'' want a hellhound for a pet?
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* HornyDevils: Belial. Demons can draw energy from humans through any sort of sin, but Belial enjoys doing so through sex. There are rumors that he’s sired literally ''thousands'' of children in his time.
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* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: [[spoiler:Good enough that Michael remarks that he's impressed that Jordan doesn't have sex all day, every day because their first time was just that enjoyable. It's also implied they did it several times before Jordan fell asleep as it's been hours when she wakes up.]]
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* SealedWithAKiss: The ending.
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* SexGoddess: [[spoiler:Good enough that Michael remarks that he's impressed that Jordan doesn't have sex all day, every day because their first time was just that enjoyable. It's also implied they did it several times before Jordan fell asleep as it's been hours when she wakes up.]]