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* {{Foreshadowing}}: In the first book, it is a mentioned, as a once off, that Orantium was mined at a now lost location known as Mount Allowat. This, along with TheProphecy describing hope [[spoiler: as a 'flash of white']] set up for how [[spoiler: Maldor his defeated.]] It turns out that [[spoiler: the mountain upon which his otherwise impentrable fortress stands is Mount Allowat.]] Take a gander.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: In the first book, it is a mentioned, as a once off, that Orantium was mined at a now lost location known as Mount Allowat. This, along with TheProphecy describing hope [[spoiler: as a 'flash of white']] set sets up for how [[spoiler: Maldor his defeated.]] It turns out that [[spoiler: the mountain upon which his otherwise impentrable fortress stands is Mount Allowat.]] Take a gander.wild guess as to what ends up happening.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: In the first book, it is a mentioned, as a once off, that Orantium was mined at a now lost location known as Mount Allowat. This, along with TheProphecy describing hope [[spoiler: as a 'flash of white']] set up for how [[spoiler: Maldor his defeated.]] It turns out that [[spoiler: the mountain upon which his otherwise impentrable fortress stands is Mount Allowat.]] Take a gander.
"The place where Felrook was built was once called Mount Allowat." Or, as the wise reader might remember it, the place where orantium was once mined.
"The place where Felrook was built was once called Mount Allowat." Or, as the wise reader might remember it, the place where orantium was once mined.
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: Ferrin]], alongside [[spoiler: Tark]], ignites [[spoiler: the long lost Orantium mines beneath Maldor's fortress]], killing them while also saving the day. This more than makes up for the misdeeds he initially committed.
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: Ferrin]], alongside [[spoiler: Tark]], ignites [[spoiler: the long lost Orantium mines beneath Maldor's fortress]], killing them both while also saving the day. This more than makes up for the misdeeds he initially committed.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: In the end, this is why [[spoiler: Ferrin]] betrays Maldor. The PowerOfFriendship the heroes demonstrated changed him for the better.
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* RetiredBadass: Galloran.
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* SendMeBack: Jason does this after [[spoiler: Ferrin forces him to go home.]]
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* TomeOfEldritchLore: The Book of Salzared--bound in the man's ''own skin,'' no less.
* TorturedMonster: [[spoiler: Orruck.]]
* TorturedMonster: [[spoiler: Orruck.]]
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* TomeOfEldritchLore: The Book of Salzared--bound Salzared -- bound in the man's ''own skin,'' no less.
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