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* BittersweetEnding: The bakers and beasts of the mountains begin to coexist peacefully, with the latter helping the former bake and distribute their goods to the Lower World in exchange for free food. However, thieves are still robbing the elves blind on a regular basis. The beasts help the elves with this by taking care of the thieves while the elves bake... but considering they're wild, hungry animals, it isn't hard to imagine they aren't just scaring the thieves off.

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* BittersweetEnding: The bakers and beasts Mayor of the mountains begin Mountains decrees that the elves shall cater to coexist peacefully, the animals of the mountains, under the condition that the animals help the elves with the latter helping the former bake baking and distribute their goods distributing food to the Lower World in exchange for free food.exchange. However, thieves are still robbing the elves blind on a regular basis. The beasts animals help the elves with this by taking care of the thieves while the elves bake... but considering they're wild, hungry animals, it isn't hard to imagine they aren't just scaring the thieves off.


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* CunningLikeAFox: Yufka's a fox and is the craftiest and most cunning of all the thieves the elves deal with.


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* HiddenElfVillage: Downplayed with the village the elves call home. It's situated near the top of a mountain in a mountain range, but the elves trade with the people of the Lower World regularly, and thieves from said Lower World constantly steal from them.
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* BittersweetEnding: The bakers and beasts of the mountains begin to coexist peacefully, with the latter helping the former bake and distribute their goods to the Lower World in exchange for free food. However, there are thieves still rob the elves blind on a regular basis. The beasts help the elves with this by taking care of the thieves while the elves bake... but considering they're wild, hungry animals, it isn't hard to imagine they aren't just scaring the thieves off.

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* BittersweetEnding: The bakers and beasts of the mountains begin to coexist peacefully, with the latter helping the former bake and distribute their goods to the Lower World in exchange for free food. However, there are thieves are still rob robbing the elves blind on a regular basis. The beasts help the elves with this by taking care of the thieves while the elves bake... but considering they're wild, hungry animals, it isn't hard to imagine they aren't just scaring the thieves off.
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The elves that live atop the titular Sourdough Mountains make a living baking and selling their delicious breads and pastries to the people of the "Lower World" (a.k.a. at the base of the mountains). Unfortunately for the elves, there are many people and animals that like stealing their baked goods, with Yufka the Fox being the most infamous thief of them all. Yufka, however, always tosses the goods she steals into a cave located ever higher in the mountains, presumably to let the food rot.

The elves have grown tired of Yufka doing this and ask their leader, the "Mayor of the Mountains", what they should do about her. The mayor decides that Yufka must be killed, and to make that happen, he has his people bake a giant pie and have it sit on the windowsill of his house. One night, when Yufka's about, she catches a whiff of the pie and snatches it instantly, then hurries to her cave. The mayor and a group of elves, all armed with giant forks and knives, follow Yufka inside her cave, intent on killing her. But they reconsider immediately when they see the ''real'' reason Yufka has been stealing from them:

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The elves that live atop the titular Sourdough Mountains make a living baking and selling their delicious breads and pastries to the people of the "Lower World" (a.k.a. at the base of the mountains). Unfortunately for the elves, there are many people and animals that like stealing their baked goods, with Yufka the Fox being the most infamous thief of them all. Yufka, however, all for her speed and cunning. However, Yufka seems to steal purely for the thrill of it, as she always tosses the goods what she steals into a cave located ever higher in the mountains, where the food's presumably left to let the food rot.

The elves have grown tired of Yufka doing this and ask their leader, the "Mayor Mayor of the Mountains", Mountains, what they should do about her. [[DisproportionateRetribution The mayor decides that Yufka must be killed, killed]], and to make that happen, he has his people bake a giant pie and have it sit on the windowsill of his house. One night, when Yufka's about, scurrying about the village, she catches a whiff of the pie and snatches it instantly, then hurries to her cave. The mayor and a group of elves, all armed with giant forks and knives, follow Yufka inside her cave, intent on killing her. But they reconsider immediately when they see the ''real'' reason Yufka has been stealing from them:
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* SweetBaker: Downplayed with the elves. They're all bakers and are a very sweet people, but have no qualms getting violent towards those who dare to steal from them.

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The mayor, touched by this, orders the group of elves to stand down, and they all leave Yufka's cave without a fuss. The next day, the mayor announces to all the village that, from hereon in, they shall cater to not only the people of the Lower World, but to the animals of the Sourdough Mountains, as well, under the condition the animals help the elves with baking and getting food to the people of the Lower World.

The bakers and beasts of the mountains then work alongside each other, spreading their baked goods--which are now even more delicious than usual--all around the world, and they all lived HappilyEverAfter...

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The mayor, touched by this, orders the group of elves to stand down, and they all leave Yufka's cave without a fuss. The next day, the mayor announces to all the village that, from hereon in, they shall cater to not only the people of the Lower World, but to the animals of the Sourdough Mountains, as well, under the condition the animals help the elves with baking and getting food to the people of the Lower World.

World. The bakers and beasts of the mountains then work alongside each other, spreading their baked goods--which are now even more delicious than usual--all around the world, and they all lived HappilyEverAfter...
HappilyEverAfter.
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* TalkingAnimal: Yufka and presumably every other animal that lives in the mountains (and the Lower World).

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* TalkingAnimal: Yufka and presumably every other animal that lives in the mountains (and in the Lower World).
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* BittersweetEnding: The bakers and beasts start coexisting peacefully, with the latter helping the former bake and distribute their goods in exchange for free food. But at the same time, there are ''still'' countless thieves that rob the elves blind, which still forces the elves to resort to violent measures to deal with them. The beasts are at least helping the elves with this by taking care of the thieves while the elves bake... but considering they're ultimately wild (and ''very'' hungry) animals, it isn't hard to imagine how they're "taking care" of them.

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* BittersweetEnding: The bakers and beasts start coexisting of the mountains begin to coexist peacefully, with the latter helping the former bake and distribute their goods to the Lower World in exchange for free food. But at the same time, However, there are ''still'' countless thieves that still rob the elves blind, which still forces the elves to resort to violent measures to deal with them. blind on a regular basis. The beasts are at least helping help the elves with this by taking care of the thieves while the elves bake... but considering they're ultimately wild (and ''very'' hungry) wild, hungry animals, it isn't hard to imagine how they're "taking care" of them.they aren't just scaring the thieves off.
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* ChekhovsGun: The Mayor of the Mountains mentions that Yufka once stole his red pillow. Cut to the mayor and his group of elves in Yufka's cave, watching her place her tired children on top of a "big red cushion".

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* ChekhovsGun: The Mayor of the Mountains mentions that Yufka once stole his red pillow. Cut to When the mayor and his group of elves are in Yufka's cave, watching cave and allow her place to put her tired children kids to bed, she places her kids on top of a "big red cushion".
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* DisproportionateRetribution: The Mayor of the Mountains pretty much instantly decides that the only way to stop Yufka from stealing his people's food is to ''kill'' her.

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* DisproportionateRetribution: The It's hinted the Mayor of the Mountains pretty much instantly decides that the only way wants to stop kill Yufka from stealing less because of her thievery of his people's food is to ''kill'' her.and more because of her thievery of his ''pillow''.

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* {{Expy}}: The elves are pretty much the Keebler elves if they lived on a mountaintop and baked pastries instead of cookies. Yufka herself is basically a female [[Literature/FantasticMrFox Mr. Fox]].

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* {{Expy}}: The elves are pretty much the Keebler elves if they lived on a mountaintop and baked pastries instead of cookies. cookies.
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Yufka herself is basically a female [[Literature/FantasticMrFox Mr. Fox]].
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* TalkingAnimal: Yufka and presumably every other animal that lives in the mountains.

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* TalkingAnimal: Yufka and presumably every other animal that lives in the mountains.mountains (and the Lower World).
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* TheFairFolk: The elves. They love baking and are cheerful to a fault, but the fact they beat up the people and animals they catch stealing their baked goods, and fact the mayor's wanted ''kill'' Yufka for it, shows that they really shouldn't be messed with.

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* TheFairFolk: The elves. They love baking and are cheerful to a fault, but the fact they beat up the people and animals they catch stealing their baked goods, and the fact the mayor's wanted mayor was fully prepared and willing to ''kill'' Yufka for it, Yufka, shows that they really shouldn't be messed with.
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* TheFairFolk: The elves. They love baking and are cheerful to a fault, but they've no problem beating up the people and animals who dare to steal their baked goods. Not to mention the group of elves that were going to outright ''kill'' Yufka in her own home.

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* TheFairFolk: The elves. They love baking and are cheerful to a fault, but they've no problem beating the fact they beat up the people and animals who dare to steal they catch stealing their baked goods. Not to mention goods, and fact the group of elves that were going to outright mayor's wanted ''kill'' Yufka in her own home.for it, shows that they really shouldn't be messed with.
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* ChekhovsGun: The Mayor of the Mountains mentions that Yufka once stole his red pillow. Cut to the mayor and his group of elves in Yufka's cave, watching her place her tired children on top of a "big red cushion"...
* DisproportionateRetribution: The Mayor of the Mountains decides that the only way to stop Yufka from stealing his people's food is to ''kill'' her.

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* ChekhovsGun: The Mayor of the Mountains mentions that Yufka once stole his red pillow. Cut to the mayor and his group of elves in Yufka's cave, watching her place her tired children on top of a "big red cushion"...
cushion".
* DisproportionateRetribution: The Mayor of the Mountains pretty much instantly decides that the only way to stop Yufka from stealing his people's food is to ''kill'' her.
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* BittersweetEnding: The bakers and beasts start coexisting peacefully, with the latter helping the former bake and distribute their goods in exchange for free food. But at the same time, there are ''still'' countless thieves that rob the elves blind, forcing the elves to steal resort to violent measures to deal with them. The beasts are at least helping the elves with this by taking care of the thieves while the elves bake... but considering they're ultimately wild (and ''very'' hungry) animals, it isn't hard to imagine how they're "taking care" of them.

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* BittersweetEnding: The bakers and beasts start coexisting peacefully, with the latter helping the former bake and distribute their goods in exchange for free food. But at the same time, there are ''still'' countless thieves that rob the elves blind, forcing which still forces the elves to steal resort to violent measures to deal with them. The beasts are at least helping the elves with this by taking care of the thieves while the elves bake... but considering they're ultimately wild (and ''very'' hungry) animals, it isn't hard to imagine how they're "taking care" of them.

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The titular Sourdough Mountains is home to a race of elves that are world-renowned for how delicious the pastries they bake are. The elves make a living by selling these goods to the people of the "Lower World" (the elves' name for pretty much everything below their home).

But there are many people and animals, both in the mountains and in the Lower World, that steal the food the elves work so hard to make. The most infamous of these thieves is Yufka, a big red fox that's known to steal whole heaps of baked goods, but never eats them. Instead, Yufka takes the food she steals to a save high in the mountains, presumably to let the food rot.

Why exactly she does this is unclear, but the elves have grown tired of this practice of hers and go to their leader, the "Mayor of the Mountains", with their grievances. The mayor decides to have her people bake a giant pie and have it sit on the windowsill of his house to lure Yufka out in the open.

One night when Yufka's about, she catches a whiff of the pie and snatches it instantly, then hurries to her cave. The mayor and ga group of elves, all armed with giant forks and knives, follow Yufka inside her cave, intent on killing her...

But the reconsider when they see the reason Yufka--and apparently many of the other animals in the mountains--have been stealing from them:

Yufka's a mother with three kids, and she's been feeding them the food she's been stealing from the elves. The mayor, touched by this, orders the elves to stand down, and they all leave Yufka's cave without a fuss.

The next day, the mayor announces to all the village that, from hereon in, they shall cater to not only the people of the Lower World, but the animals of the Sourdough Mountains, as well, under the condition that the animals help the elves with baking and getting food to the people of the Lower World.

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The elves that live atop the titular Sourdough Mountains is home to a race of elves that are world-renowned for how delicious the pastries they bake are. The elves make a living by baking and selling these goods their delicious breads and pastries to the people of the "Lower World" (the elves' name (a.k.a. at the base of the mountains). Unfortunately for pretty much everything below their home).

But
the elves, there are many people and animals, both in the mountains and in the Lower World, animals that steal like stealing their baked goods, with Yufka the food Fox being the elves work so hard to make. The most infamous thief of these thieves is them all. Yufka, a big red fox that's known to steal whole heaps of baked goods, but never eats them. Instead, Yufka takes however, always tosses the food goods she steals to into a save high cave located ever higher in the mountains, presumably to let the food rot.

Why exactly she does this is unclear, but the The elves have grown tired of Yufka doing this practice of hers and go to ask their leader, the "Mayor of the Mountains", with their grievances. what they should do about her. The mayor decides that Yufka must be killed, and to have her make that happen, he has his people bake a giant pie and have it sit on the windowsill of his house to lure Yufka out in the open.

house. One night night, when Yufka's about, she catches a whiff of the pie and snatches it instantly, then hurries to her cave. The mayor and ga a group of elves, all armed with giant forks and knives, follow Yufka inside her cave, intent on killing her...

her. But the they reconsider immediately when they see the ''real'' reason Yufka--and apparently many of the other animals in the mountains--have Yufka has been stealing from them:

Yufka's She's a mother with three kids, and she's been feeding them the food baked goods she's been stealing from the elves. elves all along.

The mayor, touched by this, orders the group of elves to stand down, and they all leave Yufka's cave without a fuss.

fuss. The next day, the mayor announces to all the village that, from hereon in, they shall cater to not only the people of the Lower World, but to the animals of the Sourdough Mountains, as well, under the condition that the animals help the elves with baking and getting food to the people of the Lower World.



That, and a certain big red fox...

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That, and with advice from a certain big red fox...
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* FilchingFoodForFun: The elves assume Yufka is doing this, as they always see her fling the food she steals in a cave for no particular reason. Once they follow her into the cave, however, they see she's been feeding her children the food all along.

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* FilchingFoodForFun: The elves assume Yufka is doing this, as they always see her fling the food she steals in into a cave for no particular reason. Once they follow her into the cave, however, they see she's been feeding her children the food all along.
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* BittersweetEnding: The bakers and beasts start coexisting peacefully, with the latter helping the former bake and distribute their goods in exchange for free food. But at the same time, there are ''still'' countless thieves that rob the elves blind, forcing the elves to steal resort to violent measures to deal with them. The beasts are at least helping the elves with this by taking care of the thieves while the elves bake... but considering they're ultimately wild (and ''very'' hungry) animals, it isn't hard to imagine how they're take care of them.

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* BittersweetEnding: The bakers and beasts start coexisting peacefully, with the latter helping the former bake and distribute their goods in exchange for free food. But at the same time, there are ''still'' countless thieves that rob the elves blind, forcing the elves to steal resort to violent measures to deal with them. The beasts are at least helping the elves with this by taking care of the thieves while the elves bake... but considering they're ultimately wild (and ''very'' hungry) animals, it isn't hard to imagine how they're take care "taking care" of them.
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* FilchingFoodForFun: The elves assume Yufka is doing this, as they always see her fling the food she steals in a cave for no particular reason. Once they follow her into the cave, however, they see she's been feeding her children all along.

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* FilchingFoodForFun: The elves assume Yufka is doing this, as they always see her fling the food she steals in a cave for no particular reason. Once they follow her into the cave, however, they see she's been feeding her children the food all along.
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* FilchingFoodForFun: The elves assume Yufka is doing this, as they always see her fling the food she steals in a cave for no particular reason. Once they follow her into the cave, however, they see she'd been feeding her children all along.

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* FilchingFoodForFun: The elves assume Yufka is doing this, as they always see her fling the food she steals in a cave for no particular reason. Once they follow her into the cave, however, they see she'd she's been feeding her children all along.
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* ChekhovsGun: The Mayor of the Mountains mentions that Yufka once stole his red pillow. Cut to the mayor and his group of elves watching Yufka place her tired children on a "big red cushion"...

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* ChekhovsGun: The Mayor of the Mountains mentions that Yufka once stole his red pillow. Cut to the mayor and his group of elves in Yufka's cave, watching Yufka her place her tired children on top of a "big red cushion"...
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* ChekhovsGun: The Mayor of the Mountains mentions that Yufka once stole his red pillow. Cut to the mayor and his group of elves watching Yufka place her tired children on a "big red cushion"...


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* FilchingFoodForFun: The elves assume Yufka is doing this, as they always see her fling the food she steals in a cave for no particular reason. Once they follow her into the cave, however, they see she'd been feeding her children all along.
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* BittersweetEnding: The bakers and beasts start coexisting peacefully, with the latter helping the former bake an distribute their goods in exchange for free food. But at the same time, there are ''still'' countless thieves that rob the elves blind, forcing the elves to steal resort to violent measures to deal with them. The beasts are at least helping the elves with this by taking care of the thieves while the elves bake... but considering they're ultimately wild (and ''very'' hungry) animals, it isn't hard to imagine how they're take care of them.

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* BittersweetEnding: The bakers and beasts start coexisting peacefully, with the latter helping the former bake an and distribute their goods in exchange for free food. But at the same time, there are ''still'' countless thieves that rob the elves blind, forcing the elves to steal resort to violent measures to deal with them. The beasts are at least helping the elves with this by taking care of the thieves while the elves bake... but considering they're ultimately wild (and ''very'' hungry) animals, it isn't hard to imagine how they're take care of them.
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* TalkingAnimal: Yufka and presumably every other animal that lives in the mountains.
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* BittersweetEnding: The bakers and beasts start coexisting peacefully, with the latter helping the former bake an distribute their goods in exchange for free food. But at the same time, there are ''still'' countless thieves that rob the elves blind, forcing the elves to steal resort to violent measures to deal with them. The beasts are at least helping the elves with this by taking care of the thieves while the elves bake... but considering they're ultimately wild (and ''very'' hungry) animals, it isn't hard to imagine how they're take care of them.

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* AntiHero: Yufka. She sneaks around every night to steal the pastries the elves bake, but does so because she's got children to feed.



* {{Expy}}: The elves are pretty much the Keebler elves if they lived on a mountaintop and baked pastries instead of cookies. Yufka herself is basically [[Literature/FantasticMrFox Mr. Fox]] if he were a woman.

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* {{Expy}}: The elves are pretty much the Keebler elves if they lived on a mountaintop and baked pastries instead of cookies. Yufka herself is basically a female [[Literature/FantasticMrFox Mr. Fox]] if he were a woman. Fox]].

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Except there are still people and animals that steal the elves' food. It's being taken care of, though, with a little help from the animals... That, and a certain big red fox.

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Except there are still people and animals that steal the elves' food. It's being taken care of, though, with a little help from the animals... mountain animals.

That, and a certain big red fox.
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** DisproportionateRetribution: The Mayor of the Mountains decides that the only way to stop Yufka from stealing his people's food is to ''kill'' her.
* {{Expy}}: The elves are pretty much the Keebler elves if they lived on a mountaintop and baked pastries instead of cookies. Yufka herself is basically [[Literature/FantasticMrFox Mr. Fox]] if he were a woman.
* TheFairFolk: The elves. They love baking and are cheerful to a fault, but they've no problem beating up the people and animals who dare to steal their baked goods. Not to mention the group of elves that were going to outright ''kill'' Yufka in her own home.
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''[[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3366802/1/The-Bakers-and-Beasts-of-the-Sourdough-Mountains The Bakers and Beasts of the Sourdough Mountains]]'' is a WebOriginalFiction short story, written by Yookee-Mookee and uploaded to [[https://www.fictionpress.com/ FictionPress]].

The titular Sourdough Mountains is home to a race of elves that are world-renowned for how delicious the pastries they bake are. The elves make a living by selling these goods to the people of the "Lower World" (the elves' name for pretty much everything below their home).

But there are many people and animals, both in the mountains and in the Lower World, that steal the food the elves work so hard to make. The most infamous of these thieves is Yufka, a big red fox that's known to steal whole heaps of baked goods, but never eats them. Instead, Yufka takes the food she steals to a save high in the mountains, presumably to let the food rot.

Why exactly she does this is unclear, but the elves have grown tired of this practice of hers and go to their leader, the "Mayor of the Mountains", with their grievances. The mayor decides to have her people bake a giant pie and have it sit on the windowsill of his house to lure Yufka out in the open.

One night when Yufka's about, she catches a whiff of the pie and snatches it instantly, then hurries to her cave. The mayor and ga group of elves, all armed with giant forks and knives, follow Yufka inside her cave, intent on killing her...

But the reconsider when they see the reason Yufka--and apparently many of the other animals in the mountains--have been stealing from them:

Yufka's a mother with three kids, and she's been feeding them the food she's been stealing from the elves. The mayor, touched by this, orders the elves to stand down, and they all leave Yufka's cave without a fuss.

The next day, the mayor announces to all the village that, from hereon in, they shall cater to not only the people of the Lower World, but the animals of the Sourdough Mountains, as well, under the condition that the animals help the elves with baking and getting food to the people of the Lower World.

The bakers and beasts of the mountains then work alongside each other, spreading their baked goods--which are now even more delicious than usual--all around the world, and they all lived HappilyEverAfter...

Except there are still people and animals that steal the elves' food. It's being taken care of, though, with a little help from the animals... That, and a certain big red fox.

!! ''The Bakers and Beasts of the Sourdough Mountains'' contains examples of the following tropes:

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