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* SoLastSeason: Palal Seedia unleashes a swarm of Buzz Droids in a attempt to destroy the New Republic Star Destroyer ''Deliverance'', though unlike their time in the Clone Wars, they only managed to kill an engineer and the captain.
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* LovingAShadow: [[spoiler: "Love" is too strong a word, but Wyl Lark's mental image of "Blink" as a decent Imperial pilot who warned him about Shadow Wing's attack in the Cerberon system and was willing to defect to the New Republic does not match the real woman, Palal Seedia, a fanatically loyal soldier whose "warning" was a distraction and is willing to die to sabotage the ''Deliverance.'']]
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* LovingAShadow: [[spoiler: "Love" is too strong a word, but Wyl Lark's mental image of "Blink" as a decent Imperial pilot who warned him about Shadow Wing's attack in the Cerberon system and was willing to defect to the New Republic does not match the real woman, Palal Seedia. When Wyl finally encounters Seedia, she attacks him and he learns that she is a fanatically loyal soldier whose "warning" at Cerberon was a distraction distraction, and she is willing to die to sabotage the ''Deliverance.'']]
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* ScamReligion: Nath Tensent reveals to Chass na Chadic, the founder of the cult she infiltrated in [[Literature/StarWarsShadowFall Shadow Fall]] was founded by a known criminal under an assumed name.
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* ScamReligion: Nath Tensent reveals to Chass na Chadic, Chadic that the founder of the cult she infiltrated in [[Literature/StarWarsShadowFall Shadow Fall]] was founded by is a known criminal operating under an assumed name.
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* BefriendingTheEnemy: During the lulls between the fighting in the Chadawa system, the New Republic and Imperial pilots chat on the radio.
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* BefriendingTheEnemy: During the lulls between the fighting in the Chadawa system, the New Republic and Imperial pilots chat on the radio. [[spoiler: After Wyl's escape pod crashlands on Jakku, an Imperial pilot rescues the injured Wyl from the wreck after recognizing Wyl from the radio call.]]
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** The ''Panaka'' is one of Star Destroyers defending Coruscant, named for the [[Literature/LeiaPrincessOfAlderaan Imperial Moff]]. Colonel Keize wryly notes that Moff Panaka [[Film/ThePhantomMenace once broke the blockade of his homeworld instead of enforcing one]].
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** The ''Panaka'' is one of Star Destroyers defending Coruscant, named for the [[Literature/LeiaPrincessOfAlderaan Imperial Moff]].Moff]] from [[Film/ThePhantomMenace Naboo]]. Colonel Keize wryly notes that Moff Panaka [[Film/ThePhantomMenace once broke the blockade of his homeworld instead of enforcing one]].
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* ChekhovsGun: The contents of Wyl Lark's second call to Polyneus before the Battle of Jakku are not revealed until several chapters later where Polyneans riding sur-avkas come to Jakku to aid in search and rescue after the battle.
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* StrangerInAFamiliarLand: Wyl Lark and the other survivors of the 120 feel this way when they return to Polyneus.
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* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler: Kairos buries her old outfit on her home planet when she accepts that she can no longer return to her people.]]
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* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler: Kairos Kairos, twice. First she buries her old outfit on her home planet when she accepts that she can no longer return to her people.people. On Coruscant she begins sheds her chitinous exoskeleton and tells Quell she is becoming a new person before leaving.]]
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* TheDeadHaveNames: During the Battle of Jakku, the New Republic pilots from the ''Deliverance'' and Shadow Wing recite the names of their dead comrades over the radio. [[spoiler: Also during the fight between Wyl Lark and Palal Seedia aboard the ''Deliverance'', Seedia recites the names of her dead comrades, and is offended at the nicknames the New Republic pilots had given them.]]
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* TheDeadHaveNames: During the Battle of Jakku, the New Republic pilots from the ''Deliverance'' and Shadow Wing recite the names of their dead comrades over the radio. [[spoiler: Also during the fight between Wyl Lark and Palal Seedia aboard the ''Deliverance'', Seedia recites the names of her dead comrades, and is offended at the nicknames the New Republic pilots had given them. In the epilogue during their reunion six years after the Battle of Jakku, Yrica, Wyl, and Chass recite the names of their dead comrades while reminiscing about the war.]]
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* DestroyTheEvidence: [[spoiler: Colonel Keize plans to destroy the Emperor's database on Coruscant used to [[JustFollowingOrders select personal for Operation Cinder]] so that [[KarmaHoudini former Imperials can disappear after the war and escape New Republic persecution]].]]
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* DestroyTheEvidence: [[spoiler: Colonel Keize plans to destroy the [[BigBrotherIsWatching Emperor's database of Imperial personnel]] on Coruscant used to [[JustFollowingOrders select personal for Operation Cinder]] so that [[KarmaHoudini former Imperials can disappear after the war and escape New Republic persecution]].]]
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* LovingAShadow: [[spoiler: "Love" is too strong a word, but Wyl Lark's mental image of "Blink" as a decent Imperial pilot who warned him about Shadow Wing's attack in the Cerberon system and was willing to defeat to the New Republic does not match the real woman, Palal Seedia, a fanatically loyal soldier whose "warning" was a distraction and is willing to die to sabotage the ''Deliverance.'']]
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* LovingAShadow: [[spoiler: "Love" is too strong a word, but Wyl Lark's mental image of "Blink" as a decent Imperial pilot who warned him about Shadow Wing's attack in the Cerberon system and was willing to defeat defect to the New Republic does not match the real woman, Palal Seedia, a fanatically loyal soldier whose "warning" was a distraction and is willing to die to sabotage the ''Deliverance.'']]
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* NotActuallyTheUltimateQuestion: [[spoiler: When Wyl Lark discovers Palal Seedia aboard the ''Deliverance'', he asks her "how are you here?" meaning how did she get onboard that ship. [[DeadpanSnarker She responds]] that [[ParentalSexualitySquick her parents were intimate]] and [[OffingTheOffspring they didn't kill her and her twin sister shortly after birth]].]]
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* ScamReligion: Nath Tensent reveals to Chass na Chadic, the founder of the cult she infiltrated in [[Literature/StarWarsShadowFall Shadow Fall]] was founded by a known criminal under an assumed name.
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* LovingAShadow: [[spoiler: "Love" is too strong a word, but Wyl Lark's mental image of "Blink" as a decent Imperial pilot who warned him about Shadow Wing's attack in the Cerberon system and was willing to defeat to the New Republic does not match the real woman, Palal Seedia, a fanatically loyal soldier whose "warning" was a distraction and is willing to die to sabotage the ''Deliverance.'']]
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* DoNotCallMePaul: [[spoiler: When Palal Seedia reveals her true identity to Wyl Lark, she refers to the nickname the New Republic pilots gave her "Blink." Later she says "I'm not Blink. I'm Palal Seedia."]]
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* TheDeadHaveNames: During the Battle of Jakku, the New Republic pilots from the ''Deliverance'' and Shadow Wing recite the names of their dead comrades over the radio. [[spoiler: Also during the fight between Wyl Lark and Palal Seedia aboard the ''Deliverance'', Seedia recites the names of her dead comrades.]]
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* TheDeadHaveNames: During the Battle of Jakku, the New Republic pilots from the ''Deliverance'' and Shadow Wing recite the names of their dead comrades over the radio. [[spoiler: Also during the fight between Wyl Lark and Palal Seedia aboard the ''Deliverance'', Seedia recites the names of her dead comrades.comrades, and is offended at the nicknames the New Republic pilots had given them.]]
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** Hera recalls training cadets aboard the ''[[ComicBook/StarWarsDoctorAphra Lucrehulk Prime]]''.
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* StealthInSpace: The ship Quell found on the asteroid in the Cerberon system has a cloaking device. [[spoiler: Also, Shadow Wing figured out how to harvest/replicate the radioactive particles from the Chadawa system and uses them to jam sensors during the Battle of Jakku, allowing Shadow Wing to ambush several New Republic ships. Colonel Keize uses a mine filled with these particles to slip through the Imperial blockade above Coruscant.]]
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* CargoShip: Hera describes her relationship with her freighter ''[[WesternAnimation/StarWarsRebels Ghost]]'' as a decade-long marriage.
