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* TheLoinsSleepTonight: The prince tries to spend a night with the queen, but can't get it up because he's a necrophiliac who doesn't find living women arousing.
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* RiddleForTheAges: Even in-universe, no one knows how Snow White, a vampire child, was born to two normal parents.
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* RiddleForTheAges: Even in-universe, no one knows how Snow White, a vampire child, was born to two parents who by all appearances are perfectly normal parents.people.
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* {{Grimmification}}: An extremely dark version of the old fairy tale, this one turns Snow White into not just a ruthless vampire, but also an incestuous abuser of her own father (who ends up [[SelfMadeOrphan dying from her draining of his blood]]).
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* WickedStepmother: Utterly inverted; the Queen is trying to save her kingdom from the ravenous vampire that is her stepdaughter.
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* WickedStepmother: Utterly inverted; the Queen is trying to save her kingdom from the ravenous vampire that is her stepdaughter.
stepdaughter. That being said, it is hinted that there were more people who were beginning to view her in this light when her inner dialogue revealed that rumors were flying around that she wanted to eat Snow's heart.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Instead of a jealous, vain WickedStepmother, the queen is a {{Seer}} attempting to kill her evil, vampiric stepdaughter to save the kingdom from the ruin she knows she will bring.
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* SelfMadeOrphan: When Snow White is just a little girl, she kills her father by slowly draining him of all his blood.
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* SelfMadeOrphan: When Snow White is just a little girl, she kills her father by slowly draining him of all his blood. She may have also killed her mother [[DeathByChildbirth during her birth]].
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* OurVampiresAreDifferent: Snow White is actually born a vampire; whether she actually is living or undead is ambiguous (especially considering she grows up and matures), but she is capable of surviving having her heart cut out. She is [[UndeathlyPallor extremely pale]] and cold, and seems to have some sort of MindControl or CharmPerson powers.
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* RedRightHand: Snow White is very beautiful. From the outside, her only unusual feature is her sharp yellow teeth.
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* RagsToRiches: The queen was once a simple peasant lass who the king fell in love with after [[DroitDuSeigneur taking the best of what she had.]]
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* StupidEvil: Snow White kills her father by using him as a juice box, leaving no one to protect her from her stepmother the queen, who knows exactly what she is capable of and swiftly takes steps to have her removed as an active threat.
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* StupidEvil: Snow White kills her father by using him as a juice box, leaving no one to protect her from her stepmother the queen, who knows exactly what she is capable of (because Snow bit her earlier) and swiftly takes steps to have her removed as an active threat.
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* IdiotBall: The queen takes steps to protect herself from Snow White after the girl bites and drinks from her, but ''doesn't'' think to do the same for her husband. Even if they don't share the same rooms, she doesn't even try to warn him. Inevitably, the king falls prey to his daughter's thirst.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Instead of a kind, innocent young girl, Snow White is a cold-blooded vampire seductress whose only concerns are finding her next meal and removing any threats to her power.
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* StupidEvil: Snow White kills her father by draining using him of all his blood, as a juice box, leaving no one to protect her from her stepmother the queen, who knows exactly what she is capable of and swiftly takes steps to have her removed as an active threat.
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* StupidEvil: Snow White kills her father by draining him of all his blood, leaving no one to protect her from her stepmother the queen, who knows exactly what she is capable of and swiftly takes steps to have her removed as an active threat.
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* FilleFatale: While living in the forest, young Snow White seduces unwitting travelers to prey on them and drink their blood. In the magic mirror the queen sees her seduce a traveling monk and then drain him dry.
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* FilleFatale: While living in the forest, young Snow White seduces unwitting travelers to prey on them and drink their blood. In the magic mirror the queen sees her seduce a traveling monk and then drain him dry. It's implied that this is how she, er, "persuades" the seven dwarves to let her stay with them.
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* CarpetOfVirility: The monk that Snow White meets in the forest has "a body as hairy as a bear's."
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* CarpetOfVirility: The monk that Snow White meets in the forest has "a body as hairy as a bear's."
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* CarpetOfVerility: The monk that Snow White meets in the forest has "a body as hairy as a bear's."
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* CarpetOfVerility: CarpetOfVirility: The monk that Snow White meets in the forest has "a body as hairy as a bear's."
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* DirtyOldMonk: Living in the forest, [[FilleFatale twelve-year-old]] Snow White encounters a monk who is all too happy to respond to her sexual advances.
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* CarpetOfVerility: The monk that Snow White meets in the forest has "a body as hairy as a bear's."
* DirtyOldMonk: Living in the forest, [[FilleFatale twelve-year-old]] Snow White encounters a monk who is all toohappy pleased to respond to her sexual advances.
* DirtyOldMonk: Living in the forest, [[FilleFatale twelve-year-old]] Snow White encounters a monk who is all too
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* AlienBlood: Well, not blood exactly, but a black liquid trickles down Snow White's thighs every time she drinks someone's blood.
* DirtyOldMonk: Living in the forest, [[FilleFatale twelve-year-old]] Snow White encounters a monk who is all too happy to respond to her sexual advances.
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* FilleFatale: While living in the forest, young Snow White seduces unwitting travelers to prey on them and drink their blood. In the magic mirror the queen sees her seduce a traveling monk and then drain him dry.
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* {{Seer}}: The queen possesses magical abilities that allow her to see the future or the present in reflective surfaces, including glass and pools of still water. As a young girl, she told fortunes for fairgoers at the Spring Fair using this ability.
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* GroinAttack: Snow White drains her father of all his blood, turning him into a withered husk of a man and eventually killing him. When he finally dies, he has scars all over his body, [[{{Squick}} including on his genitals.]]
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* GroinAttack: Snow White drains her father of all his blood, turning him into a withered husk of a man and eventually killing him. When he finally dies, he has scars all over his body, [[{{Squick}} including on his genitals.]]
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* GroinAttack: Snow White drains her father of all his blood, turning him into a withered husk of a man and eventually killing him. When he finally dies, he has scars all over his body, [[{{Squick}} including on his private areas.]]
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* GroinAttack: Snow White drains her father of all his blood, turning him into a withered husk of a man and eventually killing him. When he finally dies, he has scars all over his body, [[{{Squick}} including on his private areas.genitals.]]
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* GoodIsNotSoft: Or maybe it was, but shouldn’t have been so. The queen thinks about how instead of simply cutting out Snow’s heart or poisoning her, she should have had the girl’s head and hands and arms and legs chopped off and every part of her incinerated until she was reduced to ashes and scattered to the cold winds.
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* GoodIsNotSoft: Or maybe it was, but shouldn’t have been so. The queen thinks about how instead of simply cutting out Snow’s heart or poisoning her, she should have had the girl’s head and hands and arms and legs chopped off and every part of her incinerated until she was reduced to ashes and scattered to the cold winds. She strongly regrets not doing this.
* GroinAttack: Snow White drains her father of all his blood, turning him into a withered husk of a man and eventually killing him. When he finally dies, he has scars all over his body, [[{{Squick}} including on his private areas.]]
* GroinAttack: Snow White drains her father of all his blood, turning him into a withered husk of a man and eventually killing him. When he finally dies, he has scars all over his body, [[{{Squick}} including on his private areas.]]
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* CharmPerson: In addition to being a vampire, Snow White seems to have some level of supernatural ability to bring people under her control by drinking their blood. Even as a little girl, the king is unable to stop her from slowly draining him of all his blood over the course of several months, and the queen is similarly unable to stop Snow White from biting her hand (though she has the sense to put iron bars over her windows and door after the first time it happens).
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* CharmPerson: In addition to being a vampire, Snow White seems to have some level of supernatural ability to bring people under her control by drinking their blood. Even as a little girl, the king is unable to stop her from slowly draining him of all his blood over the course of several months, until he's a lifeless husk, and the queen is similarly unable to stop Snow White from biting her hand (though she has the sense to put iron bars over her windows and door after the first time it happens).
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* CharmPerson: In addition to being a vampire, Snow White seems to have some level of supernatural ability to bring people under her control by drinking their blood. Even as a little girl, the king is unable to stop her from slowly draining him of all his blood over the course of several months, and the queen is similarly unable to stop Snow White from biting her hand (though she has the sense to put iron bars over her windows and door after the first time it happens).
* DeathByChildbirth: Snow White "killed her mother in the birthing."
* DeathByChildbirth: Snow White "killed her mother in the birthing."
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* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: The graphic novel portrays the queen with beautiful blonde hair, contrasting the dark-haired Snow White.
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* SelfMadeOrphan: When Snow White is just a little girl, she kills her father by slowly draining him of all his blood.
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* TeenyWeenie: The queen describes the manhood of Snow White's prince as "a tiny, slippery thing."
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* BloodMagic: The queen uses some of her own blood as an ingredient in a spell to create the poisoned apples that will tempt Snow White.
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* BeatStillMy Heart: Snow White’s heart continues to beat and pulse even after being cut from her chest. Hanging in the queen’s bedchamber, it stops beating after Snow White eats the poisoned apple, and returns to life after the prince’s kiss washes the poison away.
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* BeatStillMy Heart: BeatStillMyHeart: Snow White’s heart continues to beat and pulse even after being cut from her chest. Hanging in the queen’s bedchamber, it stops beating after Snow White eats the poisoned apple, and returns to life after the prince’s kiss washes the poison away.
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* AcheyScars: As a young girl, Snow White bites the queen’s hand and drinks the blood from it, leaving a wound that heals quickly but leaves an old scar. This scar throbs painfully every time the queen is in the presence of Snow White.
* BeatStillMy Heart: Snow White’s heart continues to beat and pulse even after being cut from her chest. Hanging in the queen’s bedchamber, it stops beating after Snow White eats the poisoned apple, and returns to life after the prince’s kiss washes the poison away.
* GoodIsNotSoft: Or maybe it was, but shouldn’t have been so. The queen thinks about how instead of simply cutting out Snow’s heart or poisoning her, she should have had the girl’s head and hands and arms and legs chopped off and every part of her incinerated until she was reduced to ashes and scattered to the cold winds.
* ILoveTheDead: The prince is a necrophiliac who swiftly loses interest in the living queen and falls in love with Snow White, a vampire with cold skin.
* RiddleForTheAges: Even in-universe, no one knows how Snow White, a vampire child, was born to two normal parents.
* RiddleForTheAges: Even in-universe, no one knows how Snow White, a vampire child, was born to two normal parents.
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"Snow, Glass, Apples" is a short story by Creator/NeilGaiman. It is a FracturedFairytale of "Snow White" that flips the script.
A nameless queen doesn't know what to think when her stepdaughter bites her hand and sucks blood. When she realizes the girl needs prey, the queen sends her to be executed to save the kingdom. Unfortunately, taking out a vampire's heart is not enough to kill them.
!! Tropes for this story include
* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: In-universe, the queen's stepdaughter is a vampire and she preys on victims until they've lost all her blood. The queen kills her to save the kingdom, only to fail when a prince saves Snow and sees the power in her, executing the queen. Snow and her Prince tell the story so that the roles are reversed.
* DownerEnding: The queen is burned alive in an oven, knowing the kingdom will fall to ruin into Snow's carnivorous rule.
* EveryoneHasStandards: We are reassured that the queen didn't eat Snow's heart; she's not a monster! Instead, she hung it up with garlic to protect her from its evil influence.
* GuileHeroine: The queen isn't physically strong. She has to use her wits to poison Snow when the heartless girl starts preying on those in the forest.
* SchmuckBait: The apple, especially when prepared with blood and poison.
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A nameless queen doesn't know what to think when her stepdaughter bites her hand and sucks blood. When she realizes the girl needs prey, the queen sends her to be executed to save the kingdom. Unfortunately, taking out a vampire's heart is not enough to kill them.
!! Tropes for this story include
* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: In-universe, the queen's stepdaughter is a vampire and she preys on victims until they've lost all her blood. The queen kills her to save the kingdom, only to fail when a prince saves Snow and sees the power in her, executing the queen. Snow and her Prince tell the story so that the roles are reversed.
* DownerEnding: The queen is burned alive in an oven, knowing the kingdom will fall to ruin into Snow's carnivorous rule.
* EveryoneHasStandards: We are reassured that the queen didn't eat Snow's heart; she's not a monster! Instead, she hung it up with garlic to protect her from its evil influence.
* GuileHeroine: The queen isn't physically strong. She has to use her wits to poison Snow when the heartless girl starts preying on those in the forest.
* SchmuckBait: The apple, especially when prepared with blood and poison.
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