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* WeightWoe: The other thing Mellie is bullied for at her old school. Her classmates call her Fairy Fat.
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* WeightWoe: The other thing Mellie is bullied for at her old school. Her classmates call her Fairy Fat. Gigi almost gets Mellie to hand over the moonstone by promising to make her thin.
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* SenseLossSadness: Centuries of Artificia Magica use have caused the Parvi to lose the ability to smell, taste, or make facial expressions. They decide to give up the Artificia Magica and return to the Artificia Vera, which would help them build non-illusory homes, even though they wouldn't have as many luxuries.
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* SenseLossSadness: Centuries of Magica Artificia Magica use have caused the Parvi to lose the ability to smell, taste, or make facial expressions. They decide to give up the Magica Artificia Magica and return to the Artificia Magica Vera, which would help them build non-illusory homes, even though they wouldn't have as many luxuries.
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* SneakingOutAtNight: Timmo sneaks out to join the Turpins for the midnight ceremony in which they [[spoiler:return the moonstone to the Parvi]].
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* FreudianExcuse: [[spoiler:Fidius was once captured by two human children who put him in a jar. The experience traumatized him and made him obsessed with combining all three magics in order to become so powerful that humans will never be a threat to Parvi again. He resorts to mind control, kidnapping, forced transformation, and attempted murder.]]
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* FreudianExcuse: [[spoiler:Fidius was once captured by two human children who put him in a jar. The experience traumatized him and made him obsessed with combining all three magics in order to become so powerful that humans will never be a threat to Parvi again. In order to do that, he needs to get the Turpins to give the moonstone to him instead of to all the Parvi. He resorts to mind control, kidnapping, forced transformation, and attempted murder.]]
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* SenseLossSadness: Centuries of Artificia Magica use have caused the Parvi to lose the ability to smell, taste, or make facial expressions. They decide to give up the Artificia Magica and return to the Artificia Vera, which would help them build non-illusory homes, even though they wouldn't have as many luxuries.
