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* AliensSpeakingEnglish: Though not ''all'' of them, and fairly [[JustifiedTrope|justified]] when they do.

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* AliensSpeakingEnglish: Though not ''all'' of them, and fairly [[JustifiedTrope|justified]] [[JustifiedTrope justified]] when they do.

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* EatsBabies: [[spoiler: The adorably puppy-like infants of the Nerba are the favored food of high-ranking Korozhets]].

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* EatsBabies: [[spoiler: The adorably puppy-like infants of the Nerba are the favored food of high-ranking Korozhets]].the alien bad guys.



* GetTheeToANunnery: The rats, with their Shakespearean download.



* LiteralMinded: The uplifted animals suffer from this, resulting in many a case of IThoughtItMeant.



* ThePowerOfLove: [[spoiler: Ariel is able to defy a Korozhet command and, in fact, defiantly plants herself on her helpless human love-interest's chest, threatening one to stay away from him, simply because she cares about him that strongly it overrides her programming. Cruelly averted when it simply lasers her dead for trying.]]

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* PortalCut: The slow-shield provides a variant, where triggering the slow-shield will cause it to cut off anything stuck through it at the time.
* ThePowerOfLove: [[spoiler: Ariel is able to defy a Korozhet command and, in fact, defiantly plants herself on her helpless human love-interest's chest, threatening one to stay away from him, simply because she cares about him One of the things that strongly it overrides her programming. Cruelly averted when it simply lasers her dead for trying.]]can overcome the soft-cyber RestrainingBolt.



* PrivatelyOwnedSociety: Although technically, it's commonly owned and the vat-grown citizens or their heirs can buy a share after [[ImpossibleTask they're done]] paying the bill for growing and educating them. That, and [[AllDevouringBlackHoleLoanSharks interest]].

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* PrivatelyOwnedSociety: Although technically, it's commonly owned and the vat-grown citizens or their heirs can buy a share after [[ImpossibleTask they're done]] paying the bill for growing and educating them. That, and [[AllDevouringBlackHoleLoanSharks [[LoanShark interest]].



* RestrainingBolt: [[spoiler: What the Soft-Cybers really are. Other features include a highly-accurate timepiece, one-way radio, UniversalTranslator...]]

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* RestrainingBolt: [[spoiler: What A feature of the Soft-Cybers really are. Other features include a highly-accurate timepiece, one-way radio, UniversalTranslator...]]soft-cyber.
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* ZombieAdvocate: The rats and the bats are considered non-persons, and the bats have several pro-bat parties.
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* CourtroomAntic: To be expected when a rat is called to testify.


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* MakeTheDogTestify: Invoked, to keep the rats and bats from testifying.


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* SurpriseWitness: Ginny busting through the door with a chainsaw.
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* ExactWords: How the Doc resists the RestrainingBolt; sure, he'll follow the good, wonderful [[spoiler: Korozhet]]'s instructions. The CompleteMonster [[spoiler: Crotchet]] might as well order a wall around, though.

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* ExactWords: How the Doc resists the RestrainingBolt; sure, he'll follow the good, wonderful [[spoiler: Korozhet]]'s instructions. The CompleteMonster [[spoiler: Crotchet]] might as well order a wall around, though.

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* AliensSpeakingEnglish: Though not ''all'' of them, and fairly [[JustifiedTrope|justified]] when we do.

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* AliensSpeakingEnglish: Though not ''all'' of them, and fairly [[JustifiedTrope|justified]] when we they do.



* BigEater: the uplifted Rats; thanks to a large dose of shrew genes, they have extremely demanding metabolisms, to the point where it is mentioned repeatedly that they eat their enemies after every fight if it all possible, and if hungry enough they are compelled to turn on their allies.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Bat and Rat moralities are quite different to human morality. For example, Bats are highly sociable towards each other, but also very politically fractious, whilst Rats are unrepentantly promiscuous and coarse, not to mention casually amoral towards killing and eating anything and anyone.

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* BigEater: the uplifted Rats; thanks due to a large dose of shrew genes, being primarily shrews by genetics, they have extremely demanding metabolisms, to the point where it is mentioned repeatedly that they eat their enemies after every fight if it all possible, and if hungry enough they are compelled to turn on their allies.
allies. In the prequel, Fitzhugh pioneers a unit organization where humans carrying sizable loads of sugar and rations are attached to squads of rats; the Rats exhaust themselves after a few frenzied minutes of killing, and so these supply troopers dole out the high-energy boosting food to restore the Rats and get them straight back into the fight.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Bat and Rat moralities are quite different to human morality. For example, Bats are highly sociable towards each other, but also very politically fractious, fractious and quite withdrawn towards humans, whilst Rats are unrepentantly promiscuous and coarse, not to mention casually amoral towards killing and eating anything and anyone.



* CrapsackWorld: The idea behind the colony was a SocialistUtopia. Shareholders have all the money, Vats (the underclass) have to pay not just for their education, but the mandatory fieldtrips Shareholders might force them to be sent on, and the cost of cloning them. There's an alien invasion creating WarIsHell, and, in the second book, it's revealed that the "Special Branch" of the police is regularly getting away with murder to intimidate the Vats into compliance. WhatMeasureIsANonHuman means the newly-created intelligent species are used as CannonFodder. One of the major plots of the second book is a XanatosGambit to break the system enough that it can be fixed.

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* CrapsackWorld: The idea behind the colony was a SocialistUtopia. Shareholders have all the money, Vats (the underclass) have to pay not just for their education, but the mandatory fieldtrips Shareholders might force them to be sent on, and the cost of cloning them. There's an alien invasion creating WarIsHell, and, in the second book, it's revealed that the "Special Branch" of the police is regularly getting away with murder to intimidate the Vats into compliance. WhatMeasureIsANonHuman means the newly-created intelligent species are used as CannonFodder.CannonFodder, and the prequel mention is made of repeatedly ''executing'' the Rats because they refuse to follow human conventions for military organisation. One of the major plots of the second book is a XanatosGambit to break the system enough that it can be fixed.



* ExactWords: How the Doc resists the RestrainingBolt; sure, he'll follow the good, wonderful [[spoiler: Korozhet]]'s instructions. The Complete Monster [[spoiler: Crotchet]] might as well order a wall around, though.

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* ExactWords: How the Doc resists the RestrainingBolt; sure, he'll follow the good, wonderful [[spoiler: Korozhet]]'s instructions. The Complete Monster CompleteMonster [[spoiler: Crotchet]] might as well order a wall around, though.



** Attempting the same process with bats, but using Irish revolutionary songs and "Wobbly" songs in an attempt to increase their loyalty created a mock-Irish race who fight the Magh' but are all secretly plotting against humanity, due to having imprinted upon them as "the oppressors".

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** Attempting the same process with bats, but using Irish revolutionary songs and "Wobbly" the 1970s-ish worker's union political/support songs known as "Wobbly music" in an attempt to increase their loyalty created a mock-Irish race who fight the Magh' but are all secretly plotting against humanity, due to having imprinted upon them as "the oppressors".



* InterspeciesRomance: Ariel the rattess has a fierce affection for her human partner, Major Fitzhugh, and he reciprocates despite the fact she, for example, has to ride around in his pocket. [[spoiler: When she ends up being transplanted into a human body, she wastes ''very'' little time, even by Rat standards, in jumping him, and is openly willing to stay monogamously mated to him despite the fact casual promiscuity is her natural instinct.]]

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* InterspeciesRomance: Ariel the rattess has a fierce affection for her human partner, Major Fitzhugh, and he reciprocates despite the fact she, for example, has to ride around in his pocket. [[spoiler: When she ends up being transplanted into a human body, body by the end of the second book, she wastes ''very'' little time, even by Rat standards, in jumping him, and is openly willing to stay monogamously mated to him despite the fact casual promiscuity is her natural instinct.]]



* LanguageEqualsThought: An important plot point. [[spoiler: Because their soft-cybers use English, which is "very twisty", Bats and Rats are able to think around their implanted commands to obey Korozhets.]]

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* LanguageEqualsThought: An Not only is this part of the reason behind the BlueAndOrangeMorality of the {{Uplifted Animal}}s, it's an important plot point. [[spoiler: Because their soft-cybers use English, which is "very twisty", Bats and Rats are able to think around their implanted commands to obey Korozhets.]]



* RatMen: The Rats are an odd variant; they have human level intelligence, and are capable tool users, but aren't quite the RodentsOfUnusualSize usually seen here; they average about the size of a Siamese Cat. There's also the fact that they are actually genetically engineered chimeras; the base animal is an elephant shrew, with implanted genes from common shrews and rats.



* {{Uplifted Animal}}s: the Rats and Bats are genetically engineered bipedal [[HollywoodCyborg cyborgs]] that require Soft-Cyber and vocal implants to soldier and talk.

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* {{Uplifted Animal}}s: the Rats and Bats are genetically engineered (the Rats are actually elephant shrew/garden shrew/rat chimeras) bipedal [[HollywoodCyborg cyborgs]] that require Soft-Cyber and vocal implants to soldier and talk.

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* BroughtDownToNormal: Ginny fears this will happen to her if a head wound [[spoiler: damages the Soft-Cyber chip that repaired the brain damage she suffered as a child. Fortunately, those chips can survive blows that would reduce the brains they're installed in to goo.]]



* CassandraTruth: Fitzhugh spends the entire first book trying to get his superiors to act on the information he's providing them in his briefings, or even to just ''read'' them. Eventually he gives up, commandeers a regiment, and exploits the opening in the enemy's defenses himself.



* {{J'accuse}}: In the second book, Sanjay Devi has read about Dreyfus.

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* {{J'accuse}}: {{Jaccuse}}: In the second book, Sanjay Devi has read about Dreyfus.



* ReassignedToAntarctica: Fitzhugh

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* ReassignedToAntarctica: FitzhughFitzhugh - for being competent and successfully holding the line when all the other sector commanders had retreated. Normally being promoted to head of Military Intelligence wouldn't qualify for this, but his department consists of four people including him, one of whom is never around, and the people he briefs never pay any attention to the information he's providing, much less act on it.






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\n\n* ThatWasObjectionable: Used on a question that was so obtusely phrased that one has parse it several times to figure out what it means.
-->'''Prosecuting Attorney''': You claim that the accused attempted to persuade Ms. Shaw not to accompany you. When he went, had you not gone and had she, if she had wanted to and were able, and if there were no restraints on her to go, would Ms. Shaw not have been brought forcibly, meaning along with the Korozhet that you state was carried, netted to the tractor?\\
'''Defense Attorney''': Objection! That question should be taken out and shot, Your Honor. It's a traitor to the English language.\\
'''Judge''': Indeed. Rephrase it please, Captain Tesco.

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* IndenturedServitude: Vats have to start their adult life with paying off the debts accrued from being "[g]rown in a Company Vat, raised in a Company Nursery, and educated in a Company School".
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* GeneralFailure: Part of the reason humanity is doing so poorly against the Magh is that all of their military higher-ups are incompetents who wouldn't be too out of place amongst the more useless specimens of FirstWorldWar leadership.

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* KangarooCourt: Part of a XanatosGambit to let the evil conspirators get ''exactly what they want'', because a fair trial without trumped-up charges would actually have worked.

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* KangarooCourt: Part of a XanatosGambit to let the evil conspirators get ''exactly what they want'', because a fair trial without trumped-up charges would actually have worked. Fitzhugh was a all too willing to make a HeroicSacrifice out of sense of honour.

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* {{J'accuse}}: In the second book, Sanjay Devi has read about Dreyfus.



* KangarooCourt: Part of a XanatosGambit to let the evil conspirators get ''exactly what they want''.

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* BluffingTheMurderer: [[spoiler: See ThanatosGambit. Sanjay Devi had the murderer (and far worse) convinced she was on his side, then reveals she tricked him in order to be stabbed to death just before the people who could have rescued her arrived, because he was too good at manipulating the system not to pull a KarmaHoudini otherwise.]]



* CorruptCop: The entire "Special Branch", to the point of murder. Repeatedly.
* CrapsackWorld: The idea behind the colony was a SocialistUtopia. Shareholders have all the money, Vats (the underclass) have to pay not just for their education, but the mandatory fieldtrips Shareholders might force them to be sent on, and the cost of cloning them. There's an alien invasion creating WarIsHell, and, in the second book, it's revealed that the "Special Branch" of the police is regularly getting away with murder to intimidate the Vats into compliance. WhatMeasureIsANonHuman means the newly-created intelligent species are used as CannonFodder. One of the major plots of the second book is a XanatosGambit to break the system enough that it can be fixed.



* EngineeredPublicConfession: At the end of an ill-fated attempt to intimidate IntrepidReporter Lynne Stark: "Thank you for appearing live on our program, Talbot Cartup. And the answer is 'No.'"



* MakeAnExampleOfThem: Besides the trumped-up charges against Chip and Fitz in the second book, it's revealed in the prequel that the suicidal incompetence of the military command stretches to '''killing off uplifted rats for acting like the not-humans they are when it comes to obeying orders.'''



The second book (and parts of the prequel) involve the bureaucracy striking back against the heroes that made them look bad by succeeding. This brings in a whole host of Lawyer Tropes.

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* ClearTheirName: Of course.
* CrusadingLawyer: Mike Capra, of the repeated CrowningMomentOfAwesome.
* FakingAndEntering (prequel): InvertedTrope: Fitzhugh is accused of having attacked Talbot Cartup by having broken into his girlfriend's apartment after she had revealed she was marrying Talbot instead. [[spoiler: He had a key, and owned the apartment. She had forgotten in her panic of almost having killed him as part of a sex game.]]
* FalseRapeAccusation: The Doctor holding her hostage knows Ginny had (consensual) sex with Chip. She would never make a false accusation. He would on her behalf, though, and then keep her from contradicting it.
* KangarooCourt: Part of a XanatosGambit to let the evil conspirators get ''exactly what they want''.


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* AliensSpeakingEnglishAliensSpeakingEnglish: Though not ''all'' of them, and fairly [[JustifiedTrope|justified]] when we do.
* ArrestedForHeroism: A '''recurring theme''' in the second book. The heroism made the incompetent military look bad. This leads to whole hosts of legal tropes, listed in their own section below.



* BadBoss: [[spoiler: Korozhets routinely kill any slave that fails them, for any reason, and "slave" is also synonymous with "food"..]]

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* BadBoss: [[spoiler: Korozhets routinely kill any slave that fails them, for any reason, and "slave" is also synonymous with "food".."food"...]]


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* AmoralAttorney: Lots of them, but especially Tana Gainor (Not only an AmoralAttorney, but also an outright Criminal Ringleader) and Tesco.
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* OffOnATechnicality: Used to deal with technically true, but ridiculously trumped up charges in the second book.

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* GoneHorriblyRight: Where to begin?
** The social system the humans brought with them to [=HAR=], intended to be a form of social communism, has instead evolved into an oppressive plutocratic structure.
** Genetically engineered and uplifted rodents turned out to be natural rogues who made horrible soldiers (in the sense of being disciplined, obedient and loyal). Plus, the shrew genes used made them so hyper-metabolic that there is always a chance of a hungry Rat turning on its human comrades for food.
** Attempting the same process with bats, but using Irish revolutionary songs and "Wobbly" songs in an attempt to increase their loyalty created a mock-Irish race who fight the Magh' but are all secretly plotting against humanity, due to having imprinted upon them as "the oppressors".



* LanguageEqualsThought: An important plot point. [[spoiler: Because their soft-cybers use English, which is "very twisty", Bats and Rats are able to think around their implanted commands to obey Korozhets.]]



* {{Prequel}}: Genie Out of the Bottle is a short story taking place shortly before the main plot, detailing the backstory of Fitz, among other things. Available at the Baen Free Online Library [[http://www.wattpad.com/486908-genie-out-of-the-bottle-by-eric-flint-%26-dave-freer here]].

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* {{Prequel}}: Genie Out of the Bottle is a short story taking place shortly before the main plot, detailing the backstory of Fitz, among other things. Available at the Baen Free Online Library [[http://www.wattpad.com/486908-genie-out-of-the-bottle-by-eric-flint-%26-dave-freer here]].

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* BadBoss: [[spoiler: Korozhets routinely eat their Magh slaves whenever they feel hungry.]]

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* BadBoss: [[spoiler: Korozhets routinely eat their Magh slaves whenever they feel hungry.kill any slave that fails them, for any reason, and "slave" is also synonymous with "food"..]]



* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Bat and Rat moralities are quite different to human morality.

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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Bat and Rat moralities are quite different to human morality. For example, Bats are highly sociable towards each other, but also very politically fractious, whilst Rats are unrepentantly promiscuous and coarse, not to mention casually amoral towards killing and eating anything and anyone.
* BrainUploading: It is eventually revealed that, due to the fact Bat and Rat brains are derived from their Soft-Cyber implants, it's possible to resurrect a dead Bat or Rat by removing the Soft-Cyber and installing it in a new brain. [[spoiler: Ariel, a rattess, has this done to her towards the end of the second novel, granting her a human body that she has mixed feelings about; on the one hand, she laments its limitations compared to her old rat body, and finds it rather ugly -- on the other, she is very much appreciative of being able to have an intimate relationship with her human with it.]]



* EatsBabies: the evil aliens do this with aplomb.

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* EatsBabies: [[spoiler: The adorably puppy-like infants of the evil aliens do this with aplomb.Nerba are the favored food of high-ranking Korozhets]].



* FlowersForAlgernonSyndrome: what else the Soft-Cybers can do.

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* FlowersForAlgernonSyndrome: what Something else the Soft-Cybers can do.do; repair neural or nervous system injuries, allowing mentally disabled people to live normal lives.



* InterspeciesRomance: Ariel the rattess has a definite, arguably romantic fondness for Fitzhugh, even though she fits in his pocket [[spoiler:until she [[BodySnatcher gets an upgrade]]]].

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* InterspeciesRomance: Ariel the rattess has a definite, arguably romantic fondness fierce affection for her human partner, Major Fitzhugh, even though she fits and he reciprocates despite the fact she, for example, has to ride around in his pocket [[spoiler:until pocket. [[spoiler: When she [[BodySnatcher gets an upgrade]]]].ends up being transplanted into a human body, she wastes ''very'' little time, even by Rat standards, in jumping him, and is openly willing to stay monogamously mated to him despite the fact casual promiscuity is her natural instinct.]]



* {{Oireland}}: the uplifted Bats to the point of asking why were they given high explosives again?

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* {{Oireland}}: the The uplifted Bats Bats, to the point of asking why were they given high explosives again?



* {{Prequel}}: Genie Out of the Bottle is a short story taking place shortly before the main plot, detailing the backstory of Fitz, among other things. Available at the Baen Free Online Library here: http://www.baen.com/library/0743498879/0743498879.htm

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* ThePowerOfLove: [[spoiler: Ariel is able to defy a Korozhet command and, in fact, defiantly plants herself on her helpless human love-interest's chest, threatening one to stay away from him, simply because she cares about him that strongly it overrides her programming. Cruelly averted when it simply lasers her dead for trying.]]
* {{Prequel}}: Genie Out of the Bottle is a short story taking place shortly before the main plot, detailing the backstory of Fitz, among other things. Available at the Baen Free Online Library here: http://www.baen.com/library/0743498879/0743498879.htm[[http://www.wattpad.com/486908-genie-out-of-the-bottle-by-eric-flint-%26-dave-freer here]].



* StarfishAlien: three varieties; vaguely bug-ish Magh, vaguely land-sea-urchin-ish Korozhet, and vaguely blue-four-tentacled-hairball-thing-ish Jampad.

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* StarfishAlien: three At least two varieties; vaguely bug-ish Magh, vaguely land-sea-urchin-ish Korozhet, and vaguely blue-four-tentacled-hairball-thing-ish Jampad.land-dwelling sea-urchin-ish Korozhet
** Debatable about the Jampad, which are implied to be human-like, despite having lots of fur, four grasping appendages, and similar adaptations for a world with extreme tidal conditions (so they spend half their time in trees and half their time in water), and the Nerba, which are multi-limbed minotaur/bull-creatures... that grow from very puppy-like infants.



* VillainWithGoodPublicity: [[spoiler: The Korozhets, the "friendly aliens" who warned humanity about the Magh and gave them their alien technologies, are actually the true masters of the Magh and are seeking to slowly grind humanity into slavery or extinction and claim their world. They use their status to subtly manipulate the human military to ensure they fail, and the soft-cyber implants include a compulsion to obey them.]]
* WidgetSeries: take a swig every time you laugh out loud ... we dare you.

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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: [[spoiler: The Korozhets, the "friendly aliens" who warned humanity about the Magh and gave them their alien technologies, are actually the true masters of the Magh and are seeking to slowly grind reduce humanity into slavery or extinction and claim their world. They use their status to subtly manipulate the human military to ensure they fail, and the soft-cyber implants include a compulsion to obey them.]]
* WidgetSeries: take Take a swig every time you laugh out loud ... we dare you.

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The books can be read online [[http://baencd.freedoors.org/Books/Rats,%20Bats%20&%20Vats/Rats_Bats_and_Vats.htm here]] and [[http://baencd.freedoors.org/Books/The%20Rats,%20the%20Bats,%20and%20the%20Ugly/0743488466.htm here]].



* BigEater: the uplifted Rats thanks to some shrew blood, to the point where it is mentioned repeatedly that they eat their enemies and if hungry enough their allies

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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Bat and Rat moralities are quite different to human morality.



* {{Lilliputians}}: 2/3rd's of Harmony And Reason's elite soldiers are the size of a small housecat.

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* {{Lilliputians}}: 2/3rd's of Harmony And Reason's elite soldiers are the size of a small housecat.housecat, due to being genetically engineered and uplifted small mammals.



* StarfishAlien: three varieties vaguely bug-ish Magh, vaguely land-sea-urchin-ish Korozhet, and vaguely blue-four-tentacled-hairball-thing-ish Jampad.

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* BadBoss: [[spoiler: Korozhets routinely eat their Magh slaves whenever they feel hungry.]]



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* BugWarBugWar: Literally, due to the insectile nature of the Magh.



* GeneralFailure: Part of the reason humanity is doing so poorly against the Magh is that all of their military higher-ups are incompetents who wouldn't be too out of place amongst the more useless specimens of FirstWorldWar leadership.



* InterspeciesRomance: Ariel the rattess has a certain fondness for Fitzhugh, though she fits in his pocket [[spoiler:until she [[BodySnatcher gets an upgrade]]]].

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* InterspeciesRomance: Ariel the rattess has a certain definite, arguably romantic fondness for Fitzhugh, even though she fits in his pocket [[spoiler:until she [[BodySnatcher gets an upgrade]]]].



* RestrainingBolt: what the Soft-Cybers really are. Other features include a highly-accurate timepiece, one-way radio, UniversalTranslator...
* SheCleansUpNicely: Inverted. Chip has no interest in Ginny whatsoever...until she gets nice and dirty.

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* RestrainingBolt: what [[spoiler: What the Soft-Cybers really are. Other features include a highly-accurate timepiece, one-way radio, UniversalTranslator...
UniversalTranslator...]]
* SheCleansUpNicely: Inverted. Chip has no interest in Ginny whatsoever...until she gets nice and dirty.dirty, thus proving herself to not be the arrogant, mindlessly self-entitled Shareholder he assumes her to be.



* {{Uplifted Animal}}s: the Rats and Bats are genetically engineered bipedal [[HollywoodCyborg cyborgs]] that require Soft-Cyber and vocal implants to soldier and talk

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* {{Uplifted Animal}}s: the Rats and Bats are genetically engineered bipedal [[HollywoodCyborg cyborgs]] that require Soft-Cyber and vocal implants to soldier and talktalk.
* VillainWithGoodPublicity: [[spoiler: The Korozhets, the "friendly aliens" who warned humanity about the Magh and gave them their alien technologies, are actually the true masters of the Magh and are seeking to slowly grind humanity into slavery or extinction and claim their world. They use their status to subtly manipulate the human military to ensure they fail, and the soft-cyber implants include a compulsion to obey them.]]
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* HotSkittyOnWailordAction: Ariel the rattess has a certain fondness for her commanding officer, though she fits in his pocket [[spoiler:until she [[BodySnatcher gets an upgrade]]]].

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* HotSkittyOnWailordAction: InterspeciesRomance: Ariel the rattess has a certain fondness for her commanding officer, Fitzhugh, though she fits in his pocket [[spoiler:until she [[BodySnatcher gets an upgrade]]]].
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* VirginityMakesYouStupid: Ginny. [[spoiler: Partially averted that the symptoms start to attenuate shortly before the [[UnusualEuphemism cause is treated]]]].
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''Rats, Bats, and Vats'' and ''The Rats, The Bats, and The Ugly'' are military Science-Fiction books by Creator/EricFlint and Creator/DaveFreer that take place in the same universe on a colony planet called [[PunnyName Harmony And Reason]] with a BugWar going on. But wait, [[SarcasmMode it gets better]]: the colony was put there by a [[GenerationShip slow ship]] so a good deal of the passengers were of the genetic material variety ... [[CloningBlues instant conscripts]]! Hu, What not so instant? Well, crud. But wait, there are friendly aliens who are willing to sell us their [[AppliedPhlebotinum advanced technology]], [[TooDumbToLive too bad their ships FTL broke down on the way to warn us about the bugs]]. This technology consists of implants slowshield/hardshield chip and the Soft-Cyber chip, see below.

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''Rats, Bats, and Vats'' and ''The Rats, The Bats, and The Ugly'' are military Science-Fiction books by Creator/EricFlint and Creator/DaveFreer that take place in the same universe on a colony planet called [[PunnyName Harmony And Reason]] with a BugWar going on. But wait, [[SarcasmMode it gets better]]: the colony was put there by a [[GenerationShip [[SleeperStarship slow ship]] so a good deal of the passengers were of the genetic material variety ... [[CloningBlues instant conscripts]]! [[RealityEnsues Hu, What not so instant? instant]]? Well, crud. But wait, there are friendly aliens who are willing to sell us their [[AppliedPhlebotinum advanced technology]], [[TooDumbToLive [[GullibleLemmings too bad their ships FTL broke down on the way to warn us about the bugs]]. This technology mostly consists of implants the implant slowshield/hardshield chip and the Soft-Cyber chip, see below.



* [[UpliftedAnimal Uplifted animals]]: the Rats and Bats are genetically engineered bipedal [[HollywoodCyborg cyborgs]] that require Soft-Cyber and vocal implants to soldier and talk

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* [[UpliftedAnimal Uplifted animals]]: {{Uplifted Animal}}s: the Rats and Bats are genetically engineered bipedal [[HollywoodCyborg cyborgs]] that require Soft-Cyber and vocal implants to soldier and talk
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Good Looking Privates now only deals with in-story acknowledgement that the person is better looking because of the uniform. Re-add with correct context if this example fits.


* HotSkittyOnWailordAction: Ariel the rattess has a certain [[GoodLookingPrivates fondness]] for her commanding officer, though she fits in his pocket [[spoiler:until she [[BodySnatcher gets an upgrade]]]].

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* HotSkittyOnWailordAction: Ariel the rattess has a certain [[GoodLookingPrivates fondness]] fondness for her commanding officer, though she fits in his pocket [[spoiler:until she [[BodySnatcher gets an upgrade]]]].
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''Rats, Bats, and Vats'' and ''The Rats, The Bats, and The Ugly'' are military Science-Fiction books by EricFlint and DaveFreer that take place in the same universe on a colony planet called [[PunnyName Harmony And Reason]] with a BugWar going on. But wait, [[SarcasmMode it gets better]]: the colony was put there by a [[GenerationShip slow ship]] so a good deal of the passengers were of the genetic material variety ... [[CloningBlues instant conscripts]]! Hu, What not so instant? Well, crud. But wait, there are friendly aliens who are willing to [++sell++] us their [[AppliedPhlebotinum advanced technology]], [[TooDumbToLive too bad their ships FTL broke down on the way to warn us about the bugs]]. This technology consists of implants slowshield/hardshield chip and the Soft-Cyber chip, see below.

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''Rats, Bats, and Vats'' and ''The Rats, The Bats, and The Ugly'' are military Science-Fiction books by EricFlint Creator/EricFlint and DaveFreer Creator/DaveFreer that take place in the same universe on a colony planet called [[PunnyName Harmony And Reason]] with a BugWar going on. But wait, [[SarcasmMode it gets better]]: the colony was put there by a [[GenerationShip slow ship]] so a good deal of the passengers were of the genetic material variety ... [[CloningBlues instant conscripts]]! Hu, What not so instant? Well, crud. But wait, there are friendly aliens who are willing to [++sell++] sell us their [[AppliedPhlebotinum advanced technology]], [[TooDumbToLive too bad their ships FTL broke down on the way to warn us about the bugs]]. This technology consists of implants slowshield/hardshield chip and the Soft-Cyber chip, see below.
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* SplitPersonality: what happens when you [[UpgradeArtifact know too much]] [[IKnowKarate kung fu]]

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* SplitPersonality: what happens when you [[UpgradeArtifact know too much]] [[IKnowKarate kung fu]][[SuddenlyAlwaysKnewThat overload a soft-cyber]].
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A videogame trope doesn\'t belong in a literature article.


* YouRequireMoreVespeneGas: Works on many levels--for instance, the authors use AppliedPhlebotinum rather sparingly, to the point of SchizoTech, so that plot points revolving around the phlebotinum would be central to the story, namely the Soft-Cyber chips which became [[GreenLanternRing green lantern rings]] similar to [[CommandAndConquer Tiberium]] and because multi-species conscription was mutated into requiring more population.

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* [[ColonelBadass Major Badass]]: Both Fitzhugh and Van Klomp


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* MajorlyAwesome: Both Fitzhugh and Van Klomp
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* SplitPersonality: what happens when you [[UpgradeArtifact know too much]] [[IKnowKungFu kung fu]]

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* SplitPersonality: what happens when you [[UpgradeArtifact know too much]] [[IKnowKungFu [[IKnowKarate kung fu]]

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Fixing some minor grammatical issues.


''Rats, Bats, and Vats'' and ''The Rats, The Bats, and The Ugly'' are military Science-Fiction books by EricFlint and DaveFreer that take place in the same universe on a colony planet called [[PunnyName Harmony And Reason]] with a BugWar going on. But wait, [[SarcasmMode it gets better]] the colony was put there by a [[GenerationShip slow ship]] so a good deal of the passengers were the genetic material variety ... [[CloningBlues instant conscripts]]! Hu, What not so instant? well crud. But wait, there are friendly aliens who are willing to [++sell++] us their [[AppliedPhlebotinum advanced technology]], [[TooDumbToLive too bad their ships FTL broke down on the way to warn us about the bugs]]. This Technology consists of implants slowshield/hardshield chip and the Soft-Cyber chip, see below.

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''Rats, Bats, and Vats'' and ''The Rats, The Bats, and The Ugly'' are military Science-Fiction books by EricFlint and DaveFreer that take place in the same universe on a colony planet called [[PunnyName Harmony And Reason]] with a BugWar going on. But wait, [[SarcasmMode it gets better]] better]]: the colony was put there by a [[GenerationShip slow ship]] so a good deal of the passengers were of the genetic material variety ... [[CloningBlues instant conscripts]]! Hu, What not so instant? well Well, crud. But wait, there are friendly aliens who are willing to [++sell++] us their [[AppliedPhlebotinum advanced technology]], [[TooDumbToLive too bad their ships FTL broke down on the way to warn us about the bugs]]. This Technology technology consists of implants slowshield/hardshield chip and the Soft-Cyber chip, see below.



The second book deals with Chip's [[NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished court martial over the aforementioned events]] and Ginny and the other's attempts to save him from the firing squad.

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The second book deals with Chip's [[NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished court martial over the aforementioned events]] and Ginny and the other's others' attempts to save him from the firing squad.



* BigEater: the uplifted Rats thanks to some vole blood, to the point where it is mentioned repeatedly that they eat their enemies and if hungry enough their allies

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* BigEater: the uplifted Rats thanks to some vole shrew blood, to the point where it is mentioned repeatedly that they eat their enemies and if hungry enough their allies



* DeadlyUpgrade: the [[BarrierWarrior shield]] implants; if not used correctly they will kill their users and/or explode. [[spoiler: Subverted in that that is exactly what they are designed to do; not only are the evil alien masterminds natural weapons not covered by the two types of shield provided but also the implants don't even have a [[PowerIncontinence on/off switch]]]].

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* DeadlyUpgrade: the [[BarrierWarrior shield]] implants; if implants. If not used correctly they will kill their users and/or explode. [[spoiler: Subverted in that that this is exactly what they are designed to do; not only are the evil alien masterminds masterminds' natural weapons not covered by the two types of shield provided but also provided, the implants also don't even have a [[PowerIncontinence on/off switch]]]].



* EatsBabies: the evil aliens do this with aplomb
* EverythingsBetterWithMonkeys: or at least uplifted Galagos
* ExactWords: How the Doc resists the RestrainingBolt; sure, he'll follow the good, wonderful [[spoiler: Korozhet]]'s instructions. The Complete Monster [[spoiler: Korozhet]] might as well order a wall around, though.
** Later on, Dr Thom learns the hard way that using his [[spoiler: Korozhet]] mind control device to order Ginny to come to him was a bad idea. At least, doing so without first ordering her to put down the chainsaw was a bad idea...
* FlowersForAlgernonSyndrome: what else the Soft-Cybers can do

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* EatsBabies: the evil aliens do this with aplomb
aplomb.
* EverythingsBetterWithMonkeys: or at least uplifted Galagos
Galagos (aka bushbabies).
* ExactWords: How the Doc resists the RestrainingBolt; sure, he'll follow the good, wonderful [[spoiler: Korozhet]]'s instructions. The Complete Monster [[spoiler: Korozhet]] Crotchet]] might as well order a wall around, though.
** Later on, Dr Dr. Thom learns the hard way that using his [[spoiler: Korozhet]] mind control device to order Ginny to come to him was a bad idea. At least, doing so least without first ordering her to put down the chainsaw was a bad idea...
chainsaw...
* FlowersForAlgernonSyndrome: what else the Soft-Cybers can dodo.



* HotSkittyOnWailordAction: Ariel the ratess has a certain [[GoodLookingPrivates fondness]] for her commanding officer though she fits in his pocket [[spoiler:until she [[BodySnatcher gets an upgrade]]]].

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* HotSkittyOnWailordAction: Ariel the ratess rattess has a certain [[GoodLookingPrivates fondness]] for her commanding officer officer, though she fits in his pocket [[spoiler:until she [[BodySnatcher gets an upgrade]]]].



* {{Lilliputians}}: 2/3rd's of Harmony And Reason's elite soldiers are the size of a small housecat
* TheMedic: an oddly [[ContemplateOurNavels philosophical]] rat with a good deal of HeroicWillpower
* MilesGloriosus: The HAR military brass minus Fitzhugh and Van Klomp

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* {{Lilliputians}}: 2/3rd's of Harmony And Reason's elite soldiers are the size of a small housecat
housecat.
* TheMedic: an oddly [[ContemplateOurNavels philosophical]] rat with a good deal of HeroicWillpower
HeroicWillpower.
* MilesGloriosus: The HAR military brass minus Fitzhugh and Van KlompKlomp.



* YouRequireMoreVespeneGas: Works on many levels for instance the authors use AppliedPhlebotinum rather sparingly to the point of SchizoTech so that plot points revolving around the phlebotinum would be central to the story, namely the Soft-Cyber chips which became [[GreenLanternRing green lantern rings]] similar to [[CommandAndConquer Tiberium]] and because multi-species conscription was mutated into requiring more population.

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* YouRequireMoreVespeneGas: Works on many levels for instance levels--for instance, the authors use AppliedPhlebotinum rather sparingly sparingly, to the point of SchizoTech SchizoTech, so that plot points revolving around the phlebotinum would be central to the story, namely the Soft-Cyber chips which became [[GreenLanternRing green lantern rings]] similar to [[CommandAndConquer Tiberium]] and because multi-species conscription was mutated into requiring more population.
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changed shooting squat to firing squad


The second book deals with Chip's [[NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished court martial over the aforementioned events]] and Ginny and the other's attempts to save him from the shooting squad.

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The second book deals with Chip's [[NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished court martial over the aforementioned events]] and Ginny and the other's attempts to save him from the shooting firing squad.

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