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''Prophecy Approved Companion'' is a LitRPG told not from the perspective of the game breaking player full of meta knowledge, but instead from the POV of his [[ChildhoodFriends tutorial friend]] from their DoomedHometown. Created by Tevagah and hosted on Amazon and Royal Road. Book one and two can be found [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0B3FSFZ2Z here]] and book three [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/35549/prophecy-approved-companion here]].
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''Prophecy Approved Companion'' is a LitRPG told not from the perspective of the game breaking player full of meta knowledge, but instead from the POV of his [[ChildhoodFriends tutorial friend]] from their DoomedHometown. Created by Tevagah and hosted on Amazon and Royal Road. Book one and two can be found on Amazon [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0B3FSFZ2Z here]] here]], and book three on Website/RoyalRoad [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/35549/prophecy-approved-companion here]].
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* {{Anaphora}}: What happens after the prophecy's revealed from Qube's perspective "it was":
--> It was glorious. It was shining. It was… currently being shoved in the Hero's backpack.
--> It was glorious. It was shining. It was… currently being shoved in the Hero's backpack.
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* CreepyCute: Squiggles, the eternally hungry sharktopus that loves warm hugs and the blood of her enemies.
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--> "Well that was interesting. Didn't expect the fire to actually hurt. Good to know." He said, then looked at Qube. "Hey. I'm injured. Heal me."\\
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--> "Well that was interesting. Didn't expect the fire to actually hurt. Good to know." He know," he said, then looked at Qube. "Hey. I'm injured. Heal me."\\
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* CreepyCute: Squiggles, the eternally hungry sharktopus that loves warm hugs and the blood of her enemies.
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''Prophecy Approved Companion'' is a LitRPG told not from the perspective of the game breaking player full of meta knowledge, but instead from the POV of his [[ChildhoodFriends tutorial friend]] from their DoomedHometown. Created by Tevagah and hosted on Royal Road, it can be found [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/35549/prophecy-approved-companion here]].
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''Prophecy Approved Companion'' is a LitRPG told not from the perspective of the game breaking player full of meta knowledge, but instead from the POV of his [[ChildhoodFriends tutorial friend]] from their DoomedHometown. Created by Tevagah and hosted on Amazon and Royal Road, it Road. Book one and two can be found [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0B3FSFZ2Z here]] and book three [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/35549/prophecy-approved-companion here]].
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** ''VideoGame/KingdomHeartsII'' and its [[https://kingdomhearts.fandom.com/wiki/Sea-salt_ice_cream sea-salt ice cream]] popsicles: As confirmed in [[https://discord.com/channels/770227411564101692/999433732341628939/1019766178148798474 the Discord]], the mention of the prophecised companions splitting popsicles in the first chapter, because, spoiler for Book One: Chapter Seven and the end of ''Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days'', [[spoiler:the companions are supposed to die, like Xion]].
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** ''VideoGame/KingdomHeartsII'' and its [[https://kingdomhearts.fandom.com/wiki/Sea-salt_ice_cream sea-salt ice cream]] popsicles: As confirmed in [[https://discord.com/channels/770227411564101692/999433732341628939/1019766178148798474 the Discord]], the mention of the prophecised companions splitting popsicles in the first chapter, because, spoiler for Book One: Chapter Seven and the end of ''Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days'', [[spoiler:the companions are supposed chapter is a reference to die, like Xion]].that game's tutorial segment with Roxas.
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* ReferenceOverdosed: Just trying to find all the references is work.
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* ReferenceOverdosed: Just trying to find all ReferenceOverdosed:
** ''VideoGame/KingdomHeartsII'' and its [[https://kingdomhearts.fandom.com/wiki/Sea-salt_ice_cream sea-salt ice cream]] popsicles: As confirmed in [[https://discord.com/channels/770227411564101692/999433732341628939/1019766178148798474 thereferences is work.Discord]], the mention of the prophecised companions splitting popsicles in the first chapter, because, spoiler for Book One: Chapter Seven and the end of ''Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days'', [[spoiler:the companions are supposed to die, like Xion]].
** ''VideoGame/KingdomHeartsII'' and its [[https://kingdomhearts.fandom.com/wiki/Sea-salt_ice_cream sea-salt ice cream]] popsicles: As confirmed in [[https://discord.com/channels/770227411564101692/999433732341628939/1019766178148798474 the
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* SequenceBreaking: The player loves doing this, and Qube's presence makes it much easier, eg being ignored means that she can push her way past guards who would attack him. When she shows that she's starting to grasp the idea, he laughs at how he's rubbing off on her. It's also how Sexy Screamy Spider Lady came to be in her spider form, when the player mixed up the order of events and disrupted the breaking of her curse.
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* SequenceBreaking: The player loves doing this, and Qube's presence makes it much easier, eg being ignored means that she can push her way past guards who would attack him. When she shows that she's starting to grasp the idea, he laughs at how he's rubbing off on her.
** It's also how Sexy Screamy Spider Lady came to be in her spiderform, when form- the player mixed up the order of events and disrupted the breaking of her curse.
** It's also how Sexy Screamy Spider Lady came to be in her spider
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--> '''Qube''': Chosen One, please… please stop breaking the law of physics.\\
'''Chosen One''': No, it's fine. I did this before.
'''Chosen One''': No, it's fine. I did this before.
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--> '''Qube''': '''Qube:''' Chosen One, please… please stop breaking the law of physics.\\
'''ChosenOne''': One:''' No, it's fine. I did this before.
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* WeirdnessCensor: The limitations of the game's scripting cause characters to ignore things that aren't supposed to happen, or that are outside their scope, such as the Chosen One ignoring their quest explanation and going around the room looting everything while they speak. Qube gets this turned UpToEleven; since she was supposed to be dead, she gets completely ignored by most characters, as if she were invisible.
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* WeirdnessCensor: The limitations of the game's scripting cause characters to ignore things that aren't supposed to happen, or that are outside their scope, such as the Chosen One ignoring their quest explanation and going around the room looting everything while they speak. Qube gets this turned UpToEleven; up to eleven; since she was supposed to be dead, she gets completely ignored by most characters, as if she were invisible.
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* ExtremeOmnivore: It's unclear just what the limits of Squiggles' digestive system are, but her diet has included saucepans, makeup bottles, and unique historical artefacts. Getting her to spit out [[spoiler:a set of magical wings]] took a lot of persuading.
