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* WindowLove: Grace and Rocky do this after revealing to each other that they've both lost their entire crew.

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* DrinkBasedCharacterization: During the celebration of the ''Hail Mary'' being launched and assembled Yáo has a German beer, Ilyukhin has a large thermos full of vodka, and Dubois has a red wine (perfectly aerated).

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* DrinkBasedCharacterization: During the celebration of the ''Hail Mary'' being launched and assembled Yáo has a German beer, Ilyukhin Ilyukhina has a large thermos full of vodka, and Dubois has a red wine (perfectly aerated).



* TheEngineer: Ilyukhin in the flashbacks, though she dies during the transit to Tau Ceti. Rocky takes over the role in the main plot.

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* TheEngineer: Ilyukhin Ilyukhina in the flashbacks, though she dies during the transit to Tau Ceti. Rocky takes over the role in the main plot.



* MercyKill: When Yao requests a gun as his chosen method of suicide he also states that if Ilyukhina and [=DuBois=]'s methods fail he can use the gun to do this for them before he kills himself.



* TwoGuysAndAGirl: Discussed, the original mission plan involves sending two men and a woman, all heterosexual, which Stratt hates due the gender setup having few benefits and mostly [[BelligerentSexualTension down]][[{{Cockfight}} sides]]. If Ilyukhin hadn't been the best candidate for engineer and Shapiro the alternate candidate for biologist, she'd have sent all heterosexual men to minimize the odds of messy conflict.

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* TwoGuysAndAGirl: Discussed, the original mission plan involves sending two men and a woman, all heterosexual, which Stratt hates due the gender setup having few benefits and mostly [[BelligerentSexualTension down]][[{{Cockfight}} sides]]. If Ilyukhin Ilyukhina hadn't been the best candidate for engineer and Shapiro the alternate candidate for biologist, she'd have sent all heterosexual men to minimize the odds of messy conflict.
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** Grace comes to a sudden and horrifying realization: [[spoiler: He had just discovered that the specially-bred taumoeba can now travel through Xenonite, which isn't a problem for him since he can make a container of something that the taumoeba can't penetrate. But Rocky's ship is ''made up of taumoeba-permeable Xenonite'', meaning there's nothing stopping the evolved microbes from eating all of Rocky's fuel, stranding his ship, and dooming the Eridians.]] A glance at his telescope only supports his fears.

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** Grace comes to a sudden and horrifying realization: [[spoiler: He had just discovered that the specially-bred taumoeba can now travel through Xenonite, which isn't a problem for him since he can make a container of something that the taumoeba can't penetrate. But Rocky's ship is ''made up entirely of taumoeba-permeable Xenonite'', meaning there's nothing stopping the evolved microbes from eating all of Rocky's fuel, stranding his ship, and dooming the Eridians.]] A glance at his telescope only supports his fears.



* StarCrossedLovers: Dubois and Shapiro are aware that their fling will only end in heartbreak (either one will go on the SuicideMission or the other one will), which doesn't stop them from. [[spoiler:Unexpectedly, they both die together in an accident right before the mission.]]

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* StarCrossedLovers: Dubois and Shapiro are aware that their fling will only end in heartbreak (either one will go on the SuicideMission or the other one will), which doesn't stop them from.them. [[spoiler:Unexpectedly, they both die together in an accident right before the mission.]]



** Because the boiling point of water changes with atmospheric pressure, at 29 atm the boiling point of water is 230 C (not 100 C like at Earth's 1 atm). Thus Eridians are most comfortable at a temperature of around 210 C. Air pressure of under 19 atm is fatal to them, because the boiling point of water would correspondingly drop, so their own internal temperature of 210 C would literally boil them own cells alive.
** While their ammonia-based atmosphere blocks out all sunlight from their surface, the Eridians themselves actually don't "breathe" at all, ammonia or oxygen. That is, they don't use "cellular respiration" for gaseous exchange: they do cycle air through tubes, which is also how they make noises audible to humans, but this is purely used to regulate internal temperature. Thus the pressure differential, not difference in chemical composition, is what makes them unable to live in an Earth-like atmosphere.
** Eridians are covered in heavy carapaces to survive the high atmospheric pressure, giving them the appearance of rocky spiders: this takes up over 90% of their mass and is made of inorganic metals and ceramics (i.e. how human bone is made of calcium, except it's ''almost all'' of their body). Despite this, Eridians ''are not'' silicon-based lifeforms, but carbon-based. Indeed, the basic sugars and proteins of their biosphere are essentially compatible with Earth's (they even have [[MirrorChemistry matching chirality]]), leading Grace and Rocky to speculate that both of our biospheres share a common origin through microbial panspermia. Eridian bio-matter is ''not'' edible to humans, however, due to being saturated with a large number of additional heavy metal toxins.

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** Because the boiling point of water changes with atmospheric pressure, at 29 atm the boiling point of water is 230 C (not 100 C like at Earth's 1 atm). Thus Eridians are most comfortable at a temperature of around 210 C. Air pressure of under 19 atm is fatal to them, because the boiling point of water would correspondingly drop, so their own internal temperature of 210 C would literally boil them own cells alive.
** While their ammonia-based atmosphere blocks out all sunlight from their surface, the Eridians themselves actually don't "breathe" at all, either ammonia or oxygen. That is, they don't use "cellular respiration" for gaseous exchange: they do cycle air through tubes, which is also how they make noises audible to humans, but this is purely used to regulate internal temperature. Thus the pressure differential, not difference in chemical composition, is what makes them unable to live in an Earth-like atmosphere.
** Eridians are covered in heavy carapaces to survive the high atmospheric pressure, giving them the appearance of rocky spiders: this takes up over 90% of their mass and is made of inorganic metals and ceramics (i.e. how human bone is made of calcium, except it's ''almost all'' of their body). Despite this, Eridians ''are not'' silicon-based lifeforms, but carbon-based. Indeed, the basic sugars and proteins of their biosphere are essentially compatible with Earth's (they even have [[MirrorChemistry matching chirality]]), leading Grace and Rocky to speculate that both of our their biospheres share a common origin through microbial panspermia. Eridian bio-matter is ''not'' edible to humans, however, due to being saturated with a large number of additional heavy metal toxins.
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Grace's theory on abiogenesis wasn't proven. Both alien ecosystems he learns about (Adrian and Erid) have water-based life


* AlmightyJanitor: Grace isn't just MoreThanJustATeacher, he's an expert microbiologist with a groundbreaking paper that's eventually proven right and competent in several other fields of science- and this is before all the training he goes through. [[spoiler: Stratt calls him out on why this is, he's a coward that couldn't handle academia or any field where he could make a difference and preferred the safety of being "the cool science teacher." He doesn't deny it.]]

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* AlmightyJanitor: Grace isn't just MoreThanJustATeacher, he's an expert microbiologist with a groundbreaking paper that's eventually proven right and competent in several other fields of science- and this is before all the training he goes through. [[spoiler: Stratt calls him out on why this is, he's a coward that couldn't handle academia or any field where he could make a difference and preferred the safety of being "the cool science teacher." He doesn't deny it.]]
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** While the very nature of the ''Hail Mary'' and it propulsion is new technology, all machinery and lab equipment ''aboard'' it is existing off-the-shelf technology with many thousands of hours of consumer testing, save for the coma apparatus and medical droids. Microsoft Office may not be flashy, but it works reliably.

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** While the very nature of the ''Hail Mary'' and it propulsion is new technology, all machinery and lab equipment ''aboard'' it is existing off-the-shelf technology with many thousands of hours of consumer testing, save for the coma apparatus and medical droids. Its CentrifugalGravity mode, though experimental, spared them from having to design a whole university's worth of new, untested scientific apparati that work in microgravity. Microsoft Office may not be flashy, but it works reliably.

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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: The FirstContact with Rocky goes remarkably well, until Grace tries teaching Earth units of distance with a tape measurer. Rocky has no idea what to do with the device and just pulls and releases the tape repeatedly like a child playing with a toy. This is what leads Grace to figure out that Eridians can't see like he can.

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The FirstContact with Rocky goes remarkably well, until Grace tries teaching Earth units of distance with a tape measurer. Rocky has no idea what to do with the device and just pulls and releases the tape repeatedly like a child playing with a toy. This is what leads Grace to figure out that Eridians can't see like he can.can.
** Also, before the actual FirstContact, when Grace receives a strange canister from the ''Blip-A'', he spins up the ''Hail Mary''[='s=] rotational gravity to use the science equipment to analyze the canister. The next time he looks through the scope, he sees that the ''Blip-A'' is spinning as well, clearly misinterpreting what the ''Hail Mary'' is doing as an attempt to communicate.
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* StarFishAliens: Examined in realistic detail: while Eridians are very different from humans, on the cosmic scale of things Grace and Rocky are astonished that they're still reasonably close enough in terms of biology and technology levels that they're able to work out how to communicate with each other relatively well. The comparable technology levels are explained by Rocky pointing out that a pre-spaceflight civilization couldn't even try to stop the astrophages, and anything more advanced than they are could have solved the problem without launching an expedition to the astrophage homeworld in the Tau Ceti system. In terms of interaction, Eridians evolved in total darkness so they have no eyes, but their "sight" is a highly developed form of echolocation. Grace is thankful to discover that Eridian language is based on sound in the audible spectrum for humans, and vice versa, after which it's just a matter of learning (they don't have the mouthparts to make the sounds of each others' languages, but they can understand them). Weir published [[https://www.reddit.com/r/SpeculativeEvolution/comments/s5ixcv/eridian_biology_from_project_hail_mary_canon/ extensive notes]] about the Eridians biology:

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* StarFishAliens: StarfishAliens: Examined in realistic detail: while Eridians are very different from humans, on the cosmic scale of things Grace and Rocky are astonished that they're still reasonably close enough in terms of biology and technology levels that they're able to work out how to communicate with each other relatively well. The comparable technology levels are explained by Rocky pointing out that a pre-spaceflight civilization couldn't even try to stop the astrophages, and anything more advanced than they are could have solved the problem without launching an expedition to the astrophage homeworld in the Tau Ceti system. In terms of interaction, Eridians evolved in total darkness so they have no eyes, but their "sight" is a highly developed form of echolocation. Grace is thankful to discover that Eridian language is based on sound in the audible spectrum for humans, and vice versa, after which it's just a matter of learning (they don't have the mouthparts to make the sounds of each others' languages, but they can understand them). Weir published [[https://www.reddit.com/r/SpeculativeEvolution/comments/s5ixcv/eridian_biology_from_project_hail_mary_canon/ extensive notes]] about the Eridians biology:
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* StarFishAliens: Examined in realistic detail: while Eridians are very different from humans, on the cosmic scale of things Grace and Rocky are astonished that they're still reasonably close enough in terms of biology and technology levels that they're able to work out how to communicate with each other relatively well. The comparable technology levels are explained by Rocky pointing out that a pre-spaceflight civilization couldn't even try to stop the astrophages, and anything more advanced than they are could have solved the problem without launching an expedition to the astrophage homeworld in the Tau Ceti system. In terms of interaction, Eridians evolved in total darkness so they have no eyes, but their "sight" is a highly developed form of echolocation. Grace is thankful to discover that Eridiann language is based on sound in the audible spectrum for humans, and vice versa, after which it's just a matter of learning (they don't have the mouthparts to make the sounds of each others' languages, but they can understand them). Weir published [[https://www.reddit.com/r/SpeculativeEvolution/comments/s5ixcv/eridian_biology_from_project_hail_mary_canon/ extensive notes]] about the Eridians biology:

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* StarFishAliens: Examined in realistic detail: while Eridians are very different from humans, on the cosmic scale of things Grace and Rocky are astonished that they're still reasonably close enough in terms of biology and technology levels that they're able to work out how to communicate with each other relatively well. The comparable technology levels are explained by Rocky pointing out that a pre-spaceflight civilization couldn't even try to stop the astrophages, and anything more advanced than they are could have solved the problem without launching an expedition to the astrophage homeworld in the Tau Ceti system. In terms of interaction, Eridians evolved in total darkness so they have no eyes, but their "sight" is a highly developed form of echolocation. Grace is thankful to discover that Eridiann Eridian language is based on sound in the audible spectrum for humans, and vice versa, after which it's just a matter of learning (they don't have the mouthparts to make the sounds of each others' languages, but they can understand them). Weir published [[https://www.reddit.com/r/SpeculativeEvolution/comments/s5ixcv/eridian_biology_from_project_hail_mary_canon/ extensive notes]] about the Eridians biology:
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* StarFishAliens: Examined in realistic detail: while Eridians are very different from humans, on the cosmic scale of things Grace and Rocky are astonished that they're still reasonably close enough in terms of biology and technology levels that they're able to work out how to communicate with each other relatively well. The comparable technology levels are explained by Rocky pointing out that a pre-spaceflight civilization couldn't even try to stop the astrophages, and anything more advanced than they are could have solved the problem without launching an expedition to the astrophage homeworld in the Tau Ceti system. In terms of interaction, Eridians evolved in total darkness so they have no eyes, but their "sight" is a highly developed form of echolocation. Grace is thankful to discover that Eridiann language is based on sound in the audible spectrum for humans, and vice versa, after which it's just a matter of learning (they don't have the mouthparts to make the sounds of each others' languages, but they can understand them). Weir published [https://www.reddit.com/r/SpeculativeEvolution/comments/s5ixcv/eridian_biology_from_project_hail_mary_canon/ extensive notes] about the Eridians biology:

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* StarFishAliens: Examined in realistic detail: while Eridians are very different from humans, on the cosmic scale of things Grace and Rocky are astonished that they're still reasonably close enough in terms of biology and technology levels that they're able to work out how to communicate with each other relatively well. The comparable technology levels are explained by Rocky pointing out that a pre-spaceflight civilization couldn't even try to stop the astrophages, and anything more advanced than they are could have solved the problem without launching an expedition to the astrophage homeworld in the Tau Ceti system. In terms of interaction, Eridians evolved in total darkness so they have no eyes, but their "sight" is a highly developed form of echolocation. Grace is thankful to discover that Eridiann language is based on sound in the audible spectrum for humans, and vice versa, after which it's just a matter of learning (they don't have the mouthparts to make the sounds of each others' languages, but they can understand them). Weir published [https://www.[[https://www.reddit.com/r/SpeculativeEvolution/comments/s5ixcv/eridian_biology_from_project_hail_mary_canon/ extensive notes] notes]] about the Eridians biology:
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* StarFishAliens: Examined in realistic detail: while Eridians are very different from humans, on the cosmic scale of things Grace and Rocky are astonished that they're still reasonably close enough in terms of biology and technology levels that they're able to work out how to communicate with each other relatively well. The comparable technology levels are explained by Rocky pointing out that a pre-spaceflight civilization couldn't even try to stop the astrophages, and anything more advanced than they are could have solved the problem without launching an expedition to the astrophage homeworld in the Tau Ceti system. In terms of interaction, Eridians evolved in total darkness so they have no eyes, but their "sight" is a highly developed form of echolocation. Grace is thankful to discover that Eridiann language is based on sound in the audible spectrum for humans, and vice versa, after which it's just a matter of learning (they don't have the mouthparts to make the sounds of each others' languages, but they can understand them). Weir published [https://www.reddit.com/r/SpeculativeEvolution/comments/s5ixcv/eridian_biology_from_project_hail_mary_canon/ extensive notes] about the Eridians biology:
**Their homeworld has a thick ammonia-based atmosphere, with 29 times Earth's atmospheric pressure (which is 1 atm) and twice the gravity. No light reaches the surface, so the entire biosphere is similar to an ocean: light from their sun is captured by free-floating atmospheric microbes that act like plankton, which are in turn consumed by filter feeders and then predators up the food chain, and finally the land-level animals like the Eridians are like a sea floor biome (they actually are "Starfish Aliens"). The absence of light means that their sight is based on echolocation, and they have a poor understanding of ''all'' electro-magnetic rays, including cosmic radiation.
**Because the boiling point of water changes with atmospheric pressure, at 29 atm the boiling point of water is 230 C (not 100 C like at Earth's 1 atm). Thus Eridians are most comfortable at a temperature of around 210 C. Air pressure of under 19 atm is fatal to them, because the boiling point of water would correspondingly drop, so their own internal temperature of 210 C would literally boil them own cells alive.
**While their ammonia-based atmosphere blocks out all sunlight from their surface, the Eridians themselves actually don't "breathe" at all, ammonia or oxygen. That is, they don't use "cellular respiration" for gaseous exchange: they do cycle air through tubes, which is also how they make noises audible to humans, but this is purely used to regulate internal temperature. Thus the pressure differential, not difference in chemical composition, is what makes them unable to live in an Earth-like atmosphere.
**Eridians are covered in heavy carapaces to survive the high atmospheric pressure, giving them the appearance of rocky spiders: this takes up over 90% of their mass and is made of inorganic metals and ceramics (i.e. how human bone is made of calcium, except it's ''almost all'' of their body). Despite this, Eridians ''are not'' silicon-based lifeforms, but carbon-based. Indeed, the basic sugars and proteins of their biosphere are essentially compatible with Earth's (they even have [[MirrorChemistry matching chirality]]), leading Grace and Rocky to speculate that both of our biospheres share a common origin through microbial panspermia. Eridian bio-matter is ''not'' edible to humans, however, due to being saturated with a large number of additional heavy metal toxins.

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Grace has to use what fuel he has left to save not only Rocky, but the Eridian race itself, by carrying Rocky home, leaving the Beetles to bring info back to Earth. Fortunately, the Eridians treat him very well, doing everything they can to make his new home pleasant. It also turns out that he succeeded in his own mission, as Sol is observed to be brightening. And he is doing the thing he loved most, teaching again (to Eridian children, who are as excited as Earth children would be to be in a class taught by an actual alien!) But he is still basically stuck in a small domed habitat on an alien world that he can never really explore, and Erid's high gravity is starting to take its toll on his body.]]

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[[spoiler:Grace has to use what fuel he has left to save not only Rocky, but the Eridian race itself, by carrying Rocky home, leaving the Beetles to bring info back to Earth. Fortunately, the Eridians treat him very well, doing everything they can to make his new home pleasant. It also turns out that he succeeded in his own mission, as Sol is observed to be brightening. And he is doing the thing he loved most, teaching again (to Eridian children, who are as excited as Earth children would be to be in a class taught by an actual alien!) But he is still basically stuck in a small domed habitat on an alien world that he can never really explore, and Erid's high gravity is starting to take its toll on his body.]]



* CunningLinguist: Stratt showed no difficulty working through paperwork in six languages and four alphabets.

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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: Some of Grace's returning memories serve as this.
** The flashback about Stratt dismissing a copyright lawsuit for putting copies of all of Earth's software aboard the ''Hail Mary'' without paying royalties appears right before Grace starts looking for a way to translate Rocky's speech. Thanks to Stratt, he has a plethora of sound-analysis programs to choose from.

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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: Some of Grace's returning memories serve show up right before they become relevant, such as this.
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the flashback about Stratt dismissing a copyright lawsuit for putting copies of all of Earth's software aboard the ''Hail Mary'' without paying royalties royalties, which appears right before Grace starts looking for a way to translate Rocky's speech. Thanks to Stratt, he has a plethora of sound-analysis programs to choose from.
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* DrinkOrderCharacterization: During the celebration of the ''Hail Mary'' being launched and assembled Yáo has a German beer, Ilyukhin has a large thermos full of vodka, and Dubois has a red wine (perfectly aerated).

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* DrinkOrderCharacterization: DrinkBasedCharacterization: During the celebration of the ''Hail Mary'' being launched and assembled Yáo has a German beer, Ilyukhin has a large thermos full of vodka, and Dubois has a red wine (perfectly aerated).
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* YouNeedToGetLaid: Grace is horrified to hear that ''everyone'' thinks Stratt are sleeping together, given their closeness on the project. When he denies it, someone tells him maybe it'd do them both some good.

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* YouNeedToGetLaid: Grace is horrified to hear that ''everyone'' thinks he and Stratt are sleeping together, given their closeness on the project. When he denies it, someone tells him maybe it'd do them both some good.
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* CowardiceCallout: Towards the end, the amnesiac Dr. Ryland Grace discovers that [[spoiler:he didn't nobly volunteer for the SuicideMission to another solar system after all, but tried to duck out by claiming he was more use teaching science. Stratt, who was in charge of the titular project, cuts this excuse dead by asking if he'd do more good by ''training'' a few kids, or ''saving'' all of them]]. Stratt calls him out for his cowardice and [[spoiler:sends him on the mission against his will after drugging him to induce the amnesia]]. Remembering this exchange later [[WhatYouAreInTheDark prompts him to]] [[spoiler:[[WhatYouAreInTheDark go back for a stranded Rocky]], giving up the possibility of returning to Earth to save an alien species]].

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* {{Heavyworlder}}: Erid has roughly double Earth’s gravity with twenty-nine times its surface air pressure.

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* HadToBeSharp: Grace speculates that a high-gravity environment like Earth or Erid might be necessary for sapient life to evolve, since a {{heavyworlder}} species will need to think and react quickly in order to evade predators or capture prey. A species from a low-gravity world, by contrast, will be used to moving and thinking slowly, without natural selection putting pressure on them to evolve intelligence.
* {{Heavyworlder}}: Erid has roughly double Earth’s gravity with twenty-nine times its surface air pressure.pressure, and its inhabitants are built like tanks to compensate.

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* ClusterBleepBomb: Implied, Rocky's AngerBornOfWorry tirade against Grace's questionable actions includes all sorts of negative words, including at least one he doesn't know the meaning of yet. Since they never taught each other swears..



* InterfaceSpoiler: Averted in the ebook version. The table of contents shows the chapter titles as regular numbers ("Chapter 1", "Chapter 2", etc.), while in the book itself, [[spoiler:the very last chapter number is Eridian numerals ("Chapter ∀â„“") to show Grace's long time on Erid]].

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* InterfaceSpoiler: Averted in the ebook version. The table of contents shows the chapter titles as regular numbers ("Chapter 1", "Chapter 2", etc.), while in the book itself, [[spoiler:the very last chapter number is Eridian numerals ("Chapter ∀â„“") to show Grace's long time on Erid]].Erid]]



* WhamLine: Grace tries to measure the distance from the sun by calculating how fast a sunspot is growing bigger. Then he sees it's moving far too quickly, does a few more calculations, and realizes that he's orbiting ''Tau Ceti'', not Sol.

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** In universe, the Hail Mary project leadership finding out that humanity has 17 years before '''half of humanity''' will die out. Upon finding out that they have even less time than they thought, they start weighing drastic measures.
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* AnthropicPrinciple: Discussed in its original form (not the TV Tropes definition) when Grace muses on the likelihood of both humans and Eridians having similar technology levels. Rocky posits that they both must have both sufficient technology to breed astrophage and send a crew on an interstellar mission ''and'' insufficient technology to solve the issue without leaving their star systems, otherwise they would never meet and ask the question at all.
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* AppliedPhlebotinum: Xenonite, a super-strong xenon-based material that can be used to build pretty much anything [[spoiler:except taumoeba-82.5 containment]].

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* AppliedPhlebotinum: Xenonite, a super-strong xenon-based material that can be used to build pretty much anything [[spoiler:except taumoeba-82.5 containment]]. The novel gets around how it's made by having Rocky, an engineer, not know the science despite being an expert in using it.
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* {{MacGyvering}}: Thanks to the circumstances they're in, Grace and Rocky have to create a number of elaborate devices from what they have on board their ships, ranging from a simple pendulum to 10 kilometers of chain to [[spoiler:a Taumoeba breeding farm]].


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* WhamLine: Grace tries to measure the distance from the sun by calculating how fast a sunspot is growing bigger. Then he sees it's moving far too quickly, does a few more calculations, and realizes that he's orbiting ''Tau Ceti'', not Sol.
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* ImAHumanitarian: [[spoiler:At the end of the book, Grace is living on Erid, which has a biosphere never meant for humans or their nutritional needs. Luckily they had an example of earth-evolved biota on hand and eventually worked out how to clone muscle tissue in-vitro. (You see where this is going.) By the time of the DistantFinale, a large part of Grace's diet is made up of what he likes to call "me-burgers". He is fully aware of how disturbing it is objectively, but you try living off of taumeba slurry and vaguely sweet protein shakes for a few years and see how gross you find it then.]]

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* ImAHumanitarian: [[spoiler:At the end of the book, Grace is living on Erid, which has a biosphere never meant for humans or their nutritional needs. Luckily they had an example of earth-evolved biota on hand and eventually worked out how to clone muscle tissue in-vitro. (You see where this is going.) By the time of the DistantFinale, a large part of Grace's diet is made up of what he likes to call "me-burgers". He is fully aware of how disturbing it is objectively, but you try living off of taumeba taumoeba slurry and vaguely sweet protein shakes for a few years and see how gross you find it then.]]



** "He lead me through a maze of [[VideoGame/ColossalCave twisty little passages, all alike.]]"

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** "He lead led me through a maze of [[VideoGame/ColossalCave twisty little passages, all alike.]]"alike]]".
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--> '''Stratt:''' Humanity has been accidentally causing global warming for a century. Let's see what we can do when we really set our minds to it.

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* ChekhovsSkill: Grace being a science teacher greatly comes in handy for explaining things like relativity and radiation to Rocky, and later [[spoiler: gives him a purpose when he's living on Erid]].
* {{Cincinnatus}}: Stratt's job in a nutshell. And for all her hard work she has a [[PromotedToScapeGoat dismal future to look forward to]].

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** Despite their lack of advancements in other areas, Eridians are geniuses at material sciences. [[spoiler:When Grace goes to Erid, they're eventually able to synthesize vitamins and nutrients for him.]]
* {{Cincinnatus}}: Stratt's job in a nutshell.nutshell, as she has essentially unlimited political power regarding ''Hail Mary'' that will vaporize the instant it launches. And for all her hard work she has a [[PromotedToScapeGoat dismal future to look forward to]].


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* HumanResources: Played for laughs in the epilogue. [[spoiler:When figuring out how to feed Grace on Erid, the scientists made meat by cloning muscle tissue from the only Earth mammal they had: Grace himself. Grace calls them meburgers and has a good sense of humor about the whole thing.]]


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* NoBiochemicalBarriers: The "Alien Food is Edible" variant is discussed between Rocky and Grace, who note that their food does have proteins and sugars in common (adding to the {{Panspermia}} theory), but have a bunch of additional components that the other can't digest or would straight up kill them. Rocky's diet in particular contains many metals toxic to human consumption.
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* SchizoTech: Vice versa –- one race has incredibly advanced materials science, the other has incredibly advanced computation.

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* SchizoTech: Vice versa –- one race has incredibly advanced materials science, the other has incredibly advanced computation. And besides that Eridians seem to have no concept of any of the physics that would make [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Philipp_Lenard Philipp Lenard]] mad with antisemitic rage (i.e. relativity, quantum mechanics and anything to do with ionizing radiation and its effects).
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** The Eridians managed to brute-force an interstellar mission despite having no experience with space travel, but this has a myriad of unintended consequences -- some good (having a huge surplus of fuel thanks to now knowing that TimeDilation was a thing) and some bad (radiation killing most of the crew because they didn't know ''that'' was a thing either).

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** The Eridians managed to brute-force an interstellar mission despite having no experience with space travel, but this has a myriad of unintended consequences -- some good (having a huge surplus of fuel thanks to now not knowing that TimeDilation was a thing) and some bad (radiation killing most of the crew because they didn't know ''that'' was a thing either).

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* StarCrossedLovers: Dubois and Shapiro are aware that their fling will only end in heartbreak (either one will go on the SuicideMission or the other one will), which doesn't stop them from. [[spoiler: In the end, they both die together right before the mission.]]

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* StarCrossedLovers: Dubois and Shapiro are aware that their fling will only end in heartbreak (either one will go on the SuicideMission or the other one will), which doesn't stop them from. [[spoiler: In the end, [[spoiler:Unexpectedly, they both die together in an accident right before the mission.]]



* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[spoiler:No, Grace, you can't decline going on the SuicideMission, not while [[NecessarilyEvil Stratt]] is in charge.]]

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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[spoiler:No, SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** The Eridians managed to brute-force an interstellar mission despite having no experience with space travel, but this has a myriad of unintended consequences -- some good (having a huge surplus of fuel thanks to now knowing that TimeDilation was a thing) and some bad (radiation killing most of the crew because they didn't know ''that'' was a thing either).
** Astrophage is an incredibly potent way to store energy, but that also makes it incredibly dangerous to work with, as [[spoiler:Dubois and Shapiro]] find out the hard way.
** No,
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* NamedworldAndNamedland: The third planet from 40 Eridani A has no formal name[[note]]Because the Eridians are blind, they never romanticized their neighboring planets enough to associate them with mythology.[[/note]]; Rocky just calls it "Planet Three". Grace decides that's boring and calls it "Threeworld" instead.

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* TheseQuestionsThree: Grace is awakened from his coma with three questions to test his recovering cognition, two rudimentary math problems and asking for his name. [[OnlyTheSmartMayPass The last one is needed to progress to the next room of the ship.]]

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* TheseQuestionsThree: Grace is awakened from his coma with three questions to test his recovering cognition, two rudimentary math problems and asking for his name. [[OnlyTheSmartMayPass [[OnlySmartPeopleMayPass The last one is needed to progress to the next room of the ship.]]ship's cockpit]], as anyone who still can't remember who they are is presumably in no condition to control anything.


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* {{Unobtanium}}: The astrophage, which required an unmanned probe mission to Venus to even collect and Grace's breakthroughs to breed on earth as rocket fuel. By human standards, xenonite is an extremely high quality material that our current materials science can't create or work with (which the Eridians consider ubiquitous enough to basically be plastic).
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** The reverse is also true. Earth's environment is almost a vacuum as far as Eridians are concerned, and its high oxygen content causes their lung-equivalent to spontaneously combust just from their natural body heat.

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** The reverse is also true. Earth's environment is almost a vacuum as far as Eridians are concerned, and its high oxygen content causes their lung-equivalent to spontaneously combust just from their natural body heat. Rocky in particular is incredulous that human survival depends on a gas (O2) that slowly kills them via oxidation, and that they just accept it as a fact of life.
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* GrewASpine:
** Grace is so heavily affected by the forecasted fate of his students and their families that he marches back into the inital lab and demands Stratt to let him continue astrophage research. She relents.
** [[spoiler: After the reveal that Grace had to be forced onto the mission and spending most of the novel dreading his eventual death in space, Grace finally proves once and for all that he's no coward when he willing chooses to give his own life (seemingly) to rescue Rocky and the Blip-A, and by extention the Eridians.]]


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* INeedAFreakingDrink: Grace's old colleague had several whiskeys before dinner upon hearing about the sun-dimming data; after Grace finds out and grasps the enormity of the problem, he needs some too.


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* NumberTwo: Grace is so busy working on the project as Stratt's scientific advisor, that he didn't even realize ''everyone'' considers him second in command.

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