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* AllThereInTheManual: The author provided [[https://frankensteinbeck.blogspot.com/2015/12/puppeteers.html an explanation of the Puppeteers]] on his blog that summarizes the various tidbits scattered through the book.
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* CreateYourOwnHero: When Penny sows chaos in the Jupiter colonies and ignores [spoiler:Remmy's]] growing resentment, she causes [spoiler:Remmy]] to take up the moniker, "The Kludge" and become a hero with the express purpose of defeating Penny.
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* CreateYourOwnHero: When Penny sows chaos in the Jupiter colonies and ignores [spoiler:Remmy's]] [[spoiler:Remmy's]] growing resentment, she causes [spoiler:Remmy]] [[spoiler:Remmy]] to take up the moniker, "The Kludge" and become a hero with the express purpose of defeating Penny.
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* LopsidedDichotomy: Based on the number and variety of mad science devices Bad Penny has been shown to use, the Audit concludes that either Bad Penny (not knowing "Bad Penny" is the alias her known-to-be-powerful daughter uses) is exponentially more powerful than any other mad scientist in human history, or she's a relatively weak mad scientist who steals other people's inventions out of jealousy. Bad Penny is even ''more'' powerful than her inventions that the Audit knows about would indicate.
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* CreateYourOwnHero: When Penny sows chaos in the Jupiter colonies and ignores Remmy's [spoiler:Remmy's]] growing resentment, she causes Remmy [spoiler:Remmy]] to take up the moniker, "The Kludge" and become a hero with the express purpose of defeating Penny.
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* DemotedToExtra: Every major character from the first book except the main three and Vera.
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* CreateYourOwnHero: When Penny sows chaos in the Jupiter colonies and ignores Remmy's growing resentment, she causes Remmy to take up the moniker, "The Kludge" and become a hero with the express purpose of defeating Penny.
* DemotedToExtra:Every The only major character characters from the first book except who return as major characters are the main three and Vera.Vera. Everyone else from the first book becomes a side character at best.
* DemotedToExtra:
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* TheDreaded: Mourning Dove, a powerful AntiHero who has a reputation for taking out villains that [[MoralEventHorizon cross the line]]. Penny, Claire and Ray shit their collective pants when they run into her on a heist. Luckily, she wasn't there for them and in fact considers them heroes for attacking the illegal weapons research lab.
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* TheDreaded: Mourning Dove, a powerful AntiHero who has a reputation for taking out villains that [[MoralEventHorizon [[BeyondRedemption cross the line]]. Penny, Claire and Ray shit their collective pants when they run into her on a heist. Luckily, she wasn't there for them and in fact considers them heroes for attacking the illegal weapons research lab.
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The sequel to the best-seller ''Literature/PleaseDontTellMyParentsImASupervillain''.
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The sequel to the best-seller ''Literature/PleaseDontTellMyParentsImASupervillain''.
''Literature/PleaseDontTellMyParentsImASupervillain'' by Creator/RichardRoberts.
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Penny and her friends are back in school, and finding themselves extremely bored without any supervillainy. While Penny distracts herself with wondering which of her classmates have powers, it's not really working. Thankfully, Spider comes up with a mission for them: She has detected a human transmission from the moons of Jupiter, farther than any human has ever gone. She wants Bad Penny to build a spaceship and investigate. The result is a red catfish bioship that carries the team to the stars.
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Penny and her friends are back in school, and finding themselves extremely bored without any supervillainy. While Penny distracts herself with wondering which of her classmates have powers, it's not really working. Thankfully, Spider comes up with a mission for them: She has detected a human transmission from the moons of Jupiter, farther than any human has ever gone. She wants Bad Penny to build a spaceship and investigate. The result is a red catfish bioship [[LivingShip bioship]] that carries the team to the stars.
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How To Write An Example - Do Not Pothole the Trope Name
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: After the BigDamnKiss of the last book, Ray and Penny's relationship remains poorly defined. They spent too much time avoiding awkward conversations. She's extremely embarrassed to find that her mother noticed before she did.
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: After the BigDamnKiss TheBigDamnKiss of the last book, Ray and Penny's relationship remains poorly defined. They spent too much time avoiding awkward conversations. She's extremely embarrassed to find that her mother noticed before she did.
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* ImportantHaircut: Remmy cuts off her braids [[spoiler: after building he mech and going on an Unstoppable Rage.]]
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* ImportantHaircut: Remmy cuts off her braids [[spoiler: after building he her mech and going on an Unstoppable Rage.UnstoppableRage.]]
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The battery and ball of electricity left at Penny's computer, and the person who left the challenge for her, are immediately forgotten about as they soon after are sent into space. The ending of the book also wraps up in a hurry with no time to remember them, but then they serve as an opener for the third book.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The battery and ball of electricity left at Penny's computer, and the person who left the challenge for her, are immediately forgotten about as they soon after are sent into space. The ending of the book also wraps up in a hurry with no time to remember them, but then [[ChekhovsGun they serve as an opener for the third book.book]].
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The battery and ball of electricity left at Penny's computer, and the person who left the challenge for her, are immediately forgotten about as they soon after are sent into space. The ending of the book also wraps up in a hurry with no time to remember them, but then they serve as an opener for the third book.
* WordOfGod: Author posted some extra backstory materials on the Puppeteers [[http://frankensteinbeck.blogspot.com.by/2015/12/puppeteers.html on his blog]].
* WordOfGod: Author posted some extra backstory materials on the Puppeteers [[http://frankensteinbeck.blogspot.com.by/2015/12/puppeteers.html on his blog]].
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The battery and ball of electricity left at Penny's computer, and the person who left the challenge for her, are immediately forgotten about as they soon after are sent into space. The ending of the book also wraps up in a hurry with no time to remember them, but then they serve as an opener for the third book.
* WordOfGod: Author posted some extra backstory materials on the Puppeteers [[http://frankensteinbeck.blogspot.com.by/2015/12/puppeteers.html on his blog]].book.
* WordOfGod: Author posted some extra backstory materials on the Puppeteers [[http://frankensteinbeck.blogspot.com.by/2015/12/puppeteers.html on his blog]].
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The battery and ball of electricity left at Penny's computer, and the person who left the challenge for her, are immediately forgotten about as they soon after are sent into space.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The battery and ball of electricity left at Penny's computer, and the person who left the challenge for her, are immediately forgotten about as they soon after are sent into space. The ending of the book also wraps up in a hurry with no time to remember them, but then they serve as an opener for the third book.
* WordOfGod: Author posted some extra backstory materials on the Puppeteers [[http://frankensteinbeck.blogspot.com.by/2015/12/puppeteers.html on his blog]].
* WordOfGod: Author posted some extra backstory materials on the Puppeteers [[http://frankensteinbeck.blogspot.com.by/2015/12/puppeteers.html on his blog]].
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* NeverTrustATitle: The moon referred to in the title is not the Earth's moon, which is the only one normally referred to as [[SpellMyNameWithAThe "the moon"]]. In actuality, it is one of Jupiter's many moons, which is alluded to by the WorkingTitle ''At Least I Didn't Blow Up OUR Moon''.
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* AsteroidThicket: Averted. Penny, Ray and Claire are surprised to discover how sparsely-populated the asteroid belt actually is when they take off from Ceres.
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* AsteroidThicket: Averted.Subverted and lampshaded. Penny, Ray and Claire are surprised to discover how sparsely-populated the asteroid belt actually is when they take off from Ceres.
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* AsteroidThicket: Averted. Penny, Ray and Claire are surprised to discover how sparsely-populated the asteroid belt actually is when they take off from Ceres.
