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all Malakandrans serve the Oyarsa in their own ways, not just the seroni
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* SpaceElves: The sorns of Mars are exceptionally tall creatures renowned for their intellect. They directly serve the spirit Oyarsa, a position which puts them above the more dwarvish pfifltrigg and hrossa.
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* SpaceElves: The sorns of Mars are exceptionally tall creatures renowned for their intellect. They directly serve the spirit Oyarsa, a position which puts them above the more dwarvish pfifltrigg and hrossa.
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* TakeMeToYourLeader: The first thing Weston and Devine tried to do upon meeting Martians was ask to speak to their ruler. When the Martians say they're ruled by an energy being, the humans decide its the ruler is some man-made idol and go back to Earth to get a human sacrifice to offer to it.
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* TakeMeToYourLeader: The first thing Weston and Devine tried to do upon meeting Martians was ask to speak to their ruler. When the Martians say they're ruled by an energy being, the humans decide its the ruler is some man-made artificial idol and go back to Earth to get a human sacrifice to offer to it.
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* ThatsNoMoon: It takes time for Ransom to admit that the giant sphere outside his spaceship is not the Moon, but the Earth getting farther and farther from sight.
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%% that's not this trope * ThatsNoMoon: It takes time for Ransom to admit that the giant sphere outside his spaceship is not the Moon, but the Earth getting farther and farther from sight.
