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* AdultFear: For the Milon parents, your homeworld was just destroyed by your government, and now your government is coming to throw you and your family (including [[WouldHurtAChild your children]]) in jail under the assumption that you are now more likely to join the rebel cause. You have to send your kids away and hope that they can survive on the streets while on the run, while you get arrested, and if you're a first-generation immigrant, you get ''executed''.
** Even worse for Mr. Milon, who was offworld during this entire ordeal and ''may not even be aware that the Empire is persecuting Alderaanians on Coruscant'', so it's possible he may have blindly returned to his apartment to find that his family is presumably ''dead'' and is promptly arrested and executed.
** Even worse for Mr. Milon, who was offworld during this entire ordeal and ''may not even be aware that the Empire is persecuting Alderaanians on Coruscant'', so it's possible he may have blindly returned to his apartment to find that his family is presumably ''dead'' and is promptly arrested and executed.
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-->--'''Mon Calamari refugee'''
''One Thousand Levels Down'' is a ShortStory set in the ''Star Wars'' universe written by Alexander Freed and featuring illustrations from Joe Corroney and Brian Miller. It first appeared in ''Star Wars Insider'' 151, which was released on July 22, 2014.
''One Thousand Levels Down'' is a ShortStory set in the ''Star Wars'' universe written by Alexander Freed and featuring illustrations from Joe Corroney and Brian Miller. It first appeared in ''Star Wars Insider'' 151, which was released on July 22, 2014.
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'''''One Thousand Levels Down''''' is a ShortStory set in the ''Star Wars'' universe written by Alexander Freed and featuring illustrations from Joe Corroney and Brian Miller. It first appeared in ''Star Wars Insider'' 151, which was released on July 22, 2014.
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-->''"Mon Calamari, Empire takes. Herglic, Empire takes. Alderaanian, Empire takes. But here, we all share."''
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* BittersweetEnding: Despite losing their parents and homes, Anandra and Santigo manage to find shelter with other refugees, but this being the Imperial Center, [[HappyEndingOverride there's a possibility that the camp may have been found later on]].
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** Though there's no indication that help ever managed to reach Coruscant before the Empire was defeated, after the destruction of the Death Star, Leia would immediately try to help an enclave of Alderaanian survivors in ''ComicBook/PrincessLeia''.
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--->--'''Mon Calamari refugee'''
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* AdultFear: For the Milon parents, your homeworld was just destroyed by your government, and now your government is coming to throw you and your family (including [[WouldHurtAChild your children]]) in jail under the assumption that you are now more likely to join the rebel cause. You have to send your kids away and hope that they can survive on the streets while on the run, while you get arrested, and if you're a first-generation immigrant, you get ''executed''. Even worse for Mr. Milon, who was offworld during this entire ordeal and ''may not even be aware that the Empire is persecuting Alderaanians on Coruscant'', so he could have blindly returned to his apartment to find that his family is presumably ''dead'' and is promptly arrested and executed.
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* AdultFear: For the Milon parents, your homeworld was just destroyed by your government, and now your government is coming to throw you and your family (including [[WouldHurtAChild your children]]) in jail under the assumption that you are now more likely to join the rebel cause. You have to send your kids away and hope that they can survive on the streets while on the run, while you get arrested, and if you're a first-generation immigrant, you get ''executed''.
** Even worse for Mr. Milon, who was offworld during this entire ordeal and ''may not even be aware that the Empire is persecuting Alderaanians on Coruscant'', so it's possible hecould may have blindly returned to his apartment to find that his family is presumably ''dead'' and is promptly arrested and executed.
** Even worse for Mr. Milon, who was offworld during this entire ordeal and ''may not even be aware that the Empire is persecuting Alderaanians on Coruscant'', so it's possible he
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* AdultFear: For the Milon parents, your homeworld was just destroyed by your government, and now your government is coming to throw you and your family (including [[WouldHurtAChild your children]]) in jail under the assumption that you are now more likely to join the rebel cause. You have to send your kids away and hope that they can survive on the streets while on the run, while you get arrested, and if you're a first-generation immigrant, you get ''executed''. Even worse for Mr. Milon, who was offworld during this entire ordeal and ''may not even be aware that the Empire is persecuting Alderaanians on Coruscant'', so he could have blindly returned to his apartment to find that his family is presumably ''dead'' and is promptly arrested and executed.
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** Starblossom originated from ''[[Literature/TheCallistaTrilogy Children of the Force]]''. It's worth noting that according to that book, starblossom also grew on the world of Belsavis. As said planet was also recanonized by ''Film/TheForceAwakens Beginner Game'' roleplay, [[HopeSpot so it's possible Anandra and Milon could find starblossom again one day.]]
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** Starblossom originated from ''[[Literature/TheCallistaTrilogy Children of the Force]]''. It's worth noting that according to that book, starblossom also grew on the world of Belsavis. As said planet was also recanonized by ''Film/TheForceAwakens Beginner Game'' roleplay, [[HopeSpot so it's possible Anandra and Milon could find starblossom again one day.]]
* DisappearedDad: Mr. Milon was on a trade mission offworld when the Disaster happened. We never get to know what happened to him.
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* EarthShatteringKaboom: The destruction of Alderaan, which is referred to as The Disaster.
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* EarthShatteringKaboom: The destruction of Alderaan, which is referred to as The Disaster.the Disaster.
* HeroicSacrifice: When the family finds out that Stormtroopers are going door-to-door persecuting Alderaanian families, Mrs. Milon sends her children to hide out in their neighbor's house while she answers the door. As she is a first-generation immigrant, it is implied that she was arrested and executed.
* HeroicSacrifice: When the family finds out that Stormtroopers are going door-to-door persecuting Alderaanian families, Mrs. Milon sends her children to hide out in their neighbor's house while she answers the door. As she is a first-generation immigrant, it is implied that she was arrested and executed.
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** Starblossom originated from ''[[Literature/TheCallistaTrilogy Children of the Force]]''. It's worth noting that according to that book, starblossom also grew on the world of Belsavis. As said planet was also canonized by ''Film/TheForceAwakens Beginner Game'' roleplay, [[HopeSpot so it's possible Anandra and Milon could find starblossom again one day.]]
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** Starblossom originated from ''[[Literature/TheCallistaTrilogy Children of the Force]]''. It's worth noting that according to that book, starblossom also grew on the world of Belsavis. As said planet was also canonized recanonized by ''Film/TheForceAwakens Beginner Game'' roleplay, [[HopeSpot so it's possible Anandra and Milon could find starblossom again one day.]]
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** Starblossom originated from ''[[Literature/TheCallistaTrilogy Children of the Force]]''. It's worth noting that according to that book, starblossom also grew on the world of Belsavis, the planet of which was also canonized by ''Film/TheForceAwakens Beginner Game'' roleplay, [[HopeSpot so it's possible Anandra and Milon could find starblossom again one day.]]
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** Starblossom originated from ''[[Literature/TheCallistaTrilogy Children of the Force]]''. It's worth noting that according to that book, starblossom also grew on the world of Belsavis, the Belsavis. As said planet of which was also canonized by ''Film/TheForceAwakens Beginner Game'' roleplay, [[HopeSpot so it's possible Anandra and Milon could find starblossom again one day.]]
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** The short story is the first appearance of a Herglic (basically whale-people) in canon. In ''Legends'', having been a technologically advanced race earlier than most in galactic history, their manufacturing centers were among the first to be nationalized by the Galactic Empire. Initially, the normally docile Herglics tried to fight back, but after significant losses to their people and realizing the futility of their resistance (nearly leading to the destruction of their infrastructure), they chose a more pragmatic path; [[TheBadGuyWinssubmitting to the will of the Empire]]. This is presumably the same reason as to why Herglics are being persecuted alongside the Mon Calamaris and Alderaanians, as both of these other races have influential figures in the Rebel Alliance.
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** The short story is the first appearance of a Herglic (basically whale-people) in canon. In ''Legends'', having been a technologically advanced race earlier than most in galactic history, their manufacturing centers were among the first to be nationalized by the Galactic Empire. Initially, the normally docile Herglics tried to fight back, but after significant losses to their people and realizing the futility of their resistance (nearly leading to the destruction of their infrastructure), they chose a more pragmatic path; [[TheBadGuyWinssubmitting [[TheBadGuyWins submitting to the will of the Empire]]. This is presumably the same reason as to why Herglics are being persecuted alongside the Mon Calamaris and Alderaanians, as both of these other races have influential figures in the Rebel Alliance.
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* CanonImmigrant: Right out of ''Legends'', of course.
** Starblossom originated from ''[[Literature/TheCallistaTrilogy Children of the Force]]''. It's worth noting that according to that book, starblossom also grew on the world of Belsavis, the planet of which was also canonized by ''Film/TheForceAwakens Beginner Game'' roleplay, [[HopeSpot so it's possible Anandra and Milon could find starblossom again one day.]]
** A delivery from Centax 3 is mentioned. Centax 3 was established as a moon of Coruscant in ''Star Wars Roleplaying Game'' sourcebook, ''Coruscant and the Core Worlds''.
** The short story is the first appearance of a Herglic (basically whale-people) in canon. In ''Legends'', having been a technologically advanced race earlier than most in galactic history, their manufacturing centers were among the first to be nationalized by the Galactic Empire. Initially, the normally docile Herglics tried to fight back, but after significant losses to their people and realizing the futility of their resistance (nearly leading to the destruction of their infrastructure), they chose a more pragmatic path; [[TheBadGuyWinssubmitting to the will of the Empire]]. This is presumably the same reason as to why Herglics are being persecuted alongside the Mon Calamaris and Alderaanians, as both of these other races have influential figures in the Rebel Alliance.
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** The Coruscant Underworld Police were first seen in ''WesternAnimation/TheCloneWars''.
** Starblossom originated from ''[[Literature/TheCallistaTrilogy Children of the Force]]''. It's worth noting that according to that book, starblossom also grew on the world of Belsavis, the planet of which was also canonized by ''Film/TheForceAwakens Beginner Game'' roleplay, [[HopeSpot so it's possible Anandra and Milon could find starblossom again one day.]]
** A delivery from Centax 3 is mentioned. Centax 3 was established as a moon of Coruscant in ''Star Wars Roleplaying Game'' sourcebook, ''Coruscant and the Core Worlds''.
** The short story is the first appearance of a Herglic (basically whale-people) in canon. In ''Legends'', having been a technologically advanced race earlier than most in galactic history, their manufacturing centers were among the first to be nationalized by the Galactic Empire. Initially, the normally docile Herglics tried to fight back, but after significant losses to their people and realizing the futility of their resistance (nearly leading to the destruction of their infrastructure), they chose a more pragmatic path; [[TheBadGuyWinssubmitting to the will of the Empire]]. This is presumably the same reason as to why Herglics are being persecuted alongside the Mon Calamaris and Alderaanians, as both of these other races have influential figures in the Rebel Alliance.
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** The Coruscant Underworld Police were first seen in ''WesternAnimation/TheCloneWars''.
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-->''"Mon Calamari, Empire takes. Herglic, Empire takes. Alderaanian, Empire takes. But here, we all share."''
'''''One Thousand Levels Down''''' is a ShortStory set in the ''Star Wars'' universe written by Alexander Freed and featuring illustrations from Joe Corroney and Brian Miller. It first appeared in ''Star Wars Insider'' 151, which was released on July 22, 2014.
Following the destruction of Alderaan by the Death Star, Alderaanians living on Coruscant are being hunted down by the Empire. Sixteen year old Anandra Milon is forced to go on the run with her younger brother Santigo as they avoid Imperial forces and seek a way off of Coruscant.
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!!This short story contains the following tropes:
* ActionSurvivor: Anandra does a fairly good job avoiding Imperial detection for awhile while caring for Santigo, and when confronted by a stormtrooper she did an okay job fighting him, managing to disarm him of his blaster and knock his helmet off. However, She would have lost had it not been for the intervention of a Herglic.
* AliensSpeakingEnglish: {{Averted}}, surprisingly, by the Mon Calamari scavenger who Anandra and Santigo meet on Level 1782. Most of the other aliens on that level also seem to only know a little Basic.
* BigDamnHeroes: The Herglic criminal who saves Anandra from the stormtrooper and tells her about the safe haven on Level 1782.
* BigSisterInstinct: Anandra's only goal is to protect Santigo from the Empire.
* DisneyVillainDeath: The stormtrooper pursuing Anandra and Santigo is thrown off a catwalk to his death by a Herglic.
* EarthShatteringKaboom: The destruction of Alderaan, which is referred to as The Disaster.
* NoNameGiven: Aside from Anandra and Santigo, none of the other characters are named in the story, with the exception of a brief mention of a neighbor named Reffe who was killed by the Empire.
* PetTheDog: The stormtrooper who tries to arrest Anandra is clearly uncomfortable doing so, and even attempts to comfort and semi-apologize to her about the situation. Even after she disarms him, the trooper hesitates about attacking her further once he knocks her down, which allows her to rip his helmet off and the Herglic to sneak up and kill him.
-->'''Stormtrooper:''' Come on kid. You got a raw deal, but it's not the end of the world.\\
'''Anandra:''' It kind of was.
* ThePurge: The Empire is arresting all Coruscant civilians of Alderaanian descent following riots on Level 3204 after the destruction of Alderaan was reported on the news, with the implication that all first-generation immigrants will be killed while the rest are imprisoned. It is not the first Imperial purge of a specific population on Coruscant either, with the Mon Calamari and Herglic being other victims of the Empire's wrath.
* WretchedHive: Level 1997 is heavy on crime and other vices.
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-->''"Mon Calamari, Empire takes. Herglic, Empire takes. Alderaanian, Empire takes. But here, we all share."''
'''''One Thousand Levels Down''''' is a ShortStory set in the ''Star Wars'' universe written by Alexander Freed and featuring illustrations from Joe Corroney and Brian Miller. It first appeared in ''Star Wars Insider'' 151, which was released on July 22, 2014.
Following the destruction of Alderaan by the Death Star, Alderaanians living on Coruscant are being hunted down by the Empire. Sixteen year old Anandra Milon is forced to go on the run with her younger brother Santigo as they avoid Imperial forces and seek a way off of Coruscant.
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!!This short story contains the following tropes:
* ActionSurvivor: Anandra does a fairly good job avoiding Imperial detection for awhile while caring for Santigo, and when confronted by a stormtrooper she did an okay job fighting him, managing to disarm him of his blaster and knock his helmet off. However, She would have lost had it not been for the intervention of a Herglic.
* AliensSpeakingEnglish: {{Averted}}, surprisingly, by the Mon Calamari scavenger who Anandra and Santigo meet on Level 1782. Most of the other aliens on that level also seem to only know a little Basic.
* BigDamnHeroes: The Herglic criminal who saves Anandra from the stormtrooper and tells her about the safe haven on Level 1782.
* BigSisterInstinct: Anandra's only goal is to protect Santigo from the Empire.
* DisneyVillainDeath: The stormtrooper pursuing Anandra and Santigo is thrown off a catwalk to his death by a Herglic.
* EarthShatteringKaboom: The destruction of Alderaan, which is referred to as The Disaster.
* NoNameGiven: Aside from Anandra and Santigo, none of the other characters are named in the story, with the exception of a brief mention of a neighbor named Reffe who was killed by the Empire.
* PetTheDog: The stormtrooper who tries to arrest Anandra is clearly uncomfortable doing so, and even attempts to comfort and semi-apologize to her about the situation. Even after she disarms him, the trooper hesitates about attacking her further once he knocks her down, which allows her to rip his helmet off and the Herglic to sneak up and kill him.
-->'''Stormtrooper:''' Come on kid. You got a raw deal, but it's not the end of the world.\\
'''Anandra:''' It kind of was.
* ThePurge: The Empire is arresting all Coruscant civilians of Alderaanian descent following riots on Level 3204 after the destruction of Alderaan was reported on the news, with the implication that all first-generation immigrants will be killed while the rest are imprisoned. It is not the first Imperial purge of a specific population on Coruscant either, with the Mon Calamari and Herglic being other victims of the Empire's wrath.
* WretchedHive: Level 1997 is heavy on crime and other vices.
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