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''[[http://nonpachyderm.wordpress.com Nonpachyderm]]'' is an in-progress WebSerialNovel centered around of a band of five unlikely travelers, pulled together by circumstance.
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''[[http://nonpachyderm.wordpress.com wail.es Nonpachyderm]]'' is an in-progress WebSerialNovel centered around of a band of five unlikely travelers, pulled together by circumstance.
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* DaysOfFuturePast: as a result of the co-existence of the Mountaindwellers and the Underdwellers, civilisation has evolved into this by necessity
* HumanSubspecies: Augments are the descendants of genetically altered humans, who have bred and interbred for ~10 generations, producing a group of people with wildly diverse abilities and ability combinations
* NatureHero: Matthias defines this almost perfectly, while most members of the Hunt Pack fit into this mould to a lesser degree.
* HumanSubspecies: Augments are the descendants of genetically altered humans, who have bred and interbred for ~10 generations, producing a group of people with wildly diverse abilities and ability combinations
* NatureHero: Matthias defines this almost perfectly, while most members of the Hunt Pack fit into this mould to a lesser degree.
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* LanguageBarrier: [[spoilers:Rebeccitha initially doesn't speak the same language as Matthias, and has to learn English so they can communicate. Begins in Mining 1.3]]
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* LanguageBarrier: [[spoilers:Rebeccitha [[spoiler:Rebeccitha initially doesn't speak the same language as Matthias, and has to learn English so they can communicate. Begins in Mining 1.3]]
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* AfterTheEnd: some form of cataclysmic event, [[spoilers:referred to as "Forvmai" in Mining 1.1]]. Whilst it's unclear whether this was global or local, it's certainly something close to an extinction level event. Also hints at a PostPeakOil world, with [[spoiler:Matthias starting a fire with kindling and a flint and steel, rather than a lighter or matches in Mining 1.2]].
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* AfterTheEnd: some form of cataclysmic event, [[spoilers:referred [[spoiler:referred to as "Forvmai" in Mining 1.1]]. Whilst it's unclear whether this was global or local, it's certainly something close to an extinction level event. Also hints at a PostPeakOil world, with [[spoiler:Matthias starting a fire with kindling and a flint and steel, rather than a lighter or matches in Mining 1.2]].
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* Antihero: Matthias is the main example. [[spoiler:He coldly considers throwing Rebeccitha off the edge of a cliff as a way of ensuring he doesn't have to look after her, and doesn't purely as it might end badly for him, rather than due to a moral compass.]]
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* Antihero: AntiHero: Matthias is the main example. [[spoiler:He coldly considers throwing Rebeccitha off the edge of a cliff as a way of ensuring he doesn't have to look after her, and doesn't purely as it might end badly for him, rather than due to a moral compass.]]
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* Thesmartguy: Matthias is repeatedly shown as having a thought process that would mark him as having SuperIntelligence
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* Thesmartguy: TheSmartGuy: Matthias is repeatedly shown as having a thought process that would mark him as having SuperIntelligence
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!! This series provides examples of:
* Antihero: Matthias is the main example. [[spoiler:He coldly considers throwing Rebeccitha off the edge of a cliff as a way of ensuring he doesn't have to look after her, and doesn't purely as it might end badly for him, rather than due to a moral compass.]]
* AfterTheEnd: some form of cataclysmic event, [[spoilers:referred to as "Forvmai" in Mining 1.1]]. Whilst it's unclear whether this was global or local, it's certainly something close to an extinction level event. Also hints at a PostPeakOil world, with [[spoiler:Matthias starting a fire with kindling and a flint and steel, rather than a lighter or matches in Mining 1.2]].
* LanguageBarrier: [[spoilers:Rebeccitha initially doesn't speak the same language as Matthias, and has to learn English so they can communicate. Begins in Mining 1.3]]
* Thesmartguy: Matthias is repeatedly shown as having a thought process that would mark him as having SuperIntelligence
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''[[http://nonpachyderm.wordpress.com Nonpachyderm]]'' is an in-progress WebSerialNovel centered around Matthias, a soldier/thinker and Rebeccitha, a young woman he is ordered to protect.
Nonpachyderm launched in January, 2014 and updates on Thursdays. It is current in Arc 1, and expected to run for between 15 and 20 arcs.
Nonpachyderm launched in January, 2014 and updates on Thursdays. It is current in Arc 1, and expected to run for between 15 and 20 arcs.
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''[[http://nonpachyderm.wordpress.com Nonpachyderm]]'' is an in-progress WebSerialNovel centered around of a band of five unlikely travelers, pulled together by circumstance.
* Matthias, asoldier/thinker and warrior from the north-west of England
* Rebeccitha, ayoung woman he is ordered in his care, delivered to protect.
Nonpachyderm launched in January, 2014him by the Augments
* Llew, the leader of the Hunt Pack, a group of warriors charged with defending The Caer of the Lakes
* Phileas, an Exiled/Banished man, convicted of a raft of crimes
* Caynwyn, Matthias' sister andupdates on Thursdays. It is current a healer, as well as one of the few people to have lived in Arc 1, The City under the River, as part of an exchange
Upon being banished under his father's laws, Matthias leaves with the Rebeccitha, Llew andexpected Caynwyn, to run for between 15 find Rebeccitha's origins, and 20 arcs.understand who she is. Shenanigans ensue.
* Matthias, a
* Rebeccitha, a
Nonpachyderm launched in January, 2014
* Llew, the leader of the Hunt Pack, a group of warriors charged with defending The Caer of the Lakes
* Phileas, an Exiled/Banished man, convicted of a raft of crimes
* Caynwyn, Matthias' sister and
Upon being banished under his father's laws, Matthias leaves with the Rebeccitha, Llew and
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''[[http://nonpachyderm.wordpress.com Worm]]'' is an in-progress WebSerialNovel centered around Matthias, a soldier/thinker and Rebeccitha, a young woman he is ordered to protect.
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''[[http://nonpachyderm.wordpress.com Worm]]'' Nonpachyderm]]'' is an in-progress WebSerialNovel centered around Matthias, a soldier/thinker and Rebeccitha, a young woman he is ordered to protect.
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->''It's not the end of the world... But you can see it from here.''
''[[http://nonpachyderm.wordpress.com Worm]]'' is an in-progress WebSerialNovel centered around Matthias, a soldier/thinker and Rebeccitha, a young woman he is ordered to protect.
Nonpachyderm launched in January, 2014 and updates on Thursdays. It is current in Arc 1, and expected to run for between 15 and 20 arcs.
%% NOTE: Tropes about characters -- their skills, their personalities, their physical appearances, their relations with each other -- belong on the corresponding Character Sheets. Tropes about the things they do and that are done to them belong here.
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->''It's not the end of the world... But you can see it from here.''
''[[http://nonpachyderm.wordpress.com Worm]]'' is an in-progress WebSerialNovel centered around Matthias, a soldier/thinker and Rebeccitha, a young woman he is ordered to protect.
Nonpachyderm launched in January, 2014 and updates on Thursdays. It is current in Arc 1, and expected to run for between 15 and 20 arcs.
