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* WizardsFromOuterSpace: Earth gets invaded by an army of fantasy creatures armed with powerful magic and MagiTech.
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* WizardsFromOuterSpace: Earth gets invaded by an army of fantasy creatures armed with powerful magic and MagiTech.{{Magitek}}.
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* LaughablyEvil: Mammon is a far sillier foe than Shroud's previous villains with his LargeHam nature, ShamlessSelfPromoter antics, along with his interactions with his GirlFriday, Ace.
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* LaughablyEvil: Mammon is a far sillier foe than Shroud's previous villains with his LargeHam nature, ShamlessSelfPromoter ShamelessSelfPromoter antics, along with his interactions dynamic with his GirlFriday, Ace.
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* ConspicuousConsumption: Fitting for a EvilOverord named Mammon, the demon uses his wealth to buy some weird things, like his collection of thirty-seven suns and tries to buy a planet he doesn't like so he can blow it up.
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* ConspicuousConsumption: Fitting for a EvilOverord named Mammon, King of the demon Midnight Market Mammon uses his wealth to buy some weird things, like his collection of thirty-seven suns and tries to buy a planet he doesn't like so he can blow it up.
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* EmotionSurpression: Kari dampens her own emotions by using her past lives memories to overwrite her own to help her deal with her own baggage.
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* EmotionSurpression: EmotionSuppression: Kari dampens her own emotions by using her past lives memories to overwrite her own to help her deal with her own baggage.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Maggie and Mur quickly bond given how similar they are, being rough, hedonistic, greedy, and amoral fighters driven on by a hatred of their own weakness.
* ConspicuousConsumption: Fitting for a EvilOverord named Mammon, the demon uses his wealth to buy some weird things, like his collection of thirty-seven suns and tries to buy a planet he doesn't like so he can blow it up.
* ConspicuousConsumption: Fitting for a EvilOverord named Mammon, the demon uses his wealth to buy some weird things, like his collection of thirty-seven suns and tries to buy a planet he doesn't like so he can blow it up.
* EmotionSurpression: Kari dampens her own emotions by using her past lives memories to overwrite her own to help her deal with her own baggage.
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* MageKiller: Captain John Kresnik is an experienced White Sorcerer who specializes in taking down rogue sorcerers due to both his martial skills and AntiMagic spells.
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* LaughablyEvil: Mammon is a far sillier foe than Shroud's previous villains with his LargeHam nature, ShamlessSelfPromoter antics, along with his interactions with his GirlFriday, Ace.
* LoveCannotOvercome: Mathias starts a relationship with his friend, Perse, who's had a crush on him for years, [[spoiler: but Mathias ruins the relationship because of his duplicitous behavior, which causes her to break up with him, appalled by his lack of trust in her.]]
* MageKiller: Captain John Kresnik is an experienced White Sorcerer who specializes in taking down rogue sorcerers due to both his martial skills and AntiMagic spells.
* LoveCannotOvercome: Mathias starts a relationship with his friend, Perse, who's had a crush on him for years, [[spoiler: but Mathias ruins the relationship because of his duplicitous behavior, which causes her to break up with him, appalled by his lack of trust in her.]]
* MageKiller: Captain John Kresnik is an experienced White Sorcerer who specializes in taking down rogue sorcerers due to both his martial skills and AntiMagic spells.
* MoralSociopathy: Aster shows all the signs of being TheSociopath but he has a ''very'' twisted moral compass, refusing to believe in evil because he believes he can reeducate anyone into a model citizen, ironically showing a belief in good and bad.
* MuggleBornOfMages: While most races are lucky if twenty percent of their population has magic, dragons are the only race known that has a majority of sorcerers in its population [[spoiler: making it a particular sticking point for Smokefang that he doesn't have magic.]]
* MuggleBornOfMages: While most races are lucky if twenty percent of their population has magic, dragons are the only race known that has a majority of sorcerers in its population [[spoiler: making it a particular sticking point for Smokefang that he doesn't have magic.]]
* NotSoDifferent: Mathias and Kari. Both lost someone dear to them because of Concordia, both internalize their problems, and both use a persona of some kind (Mathias' Shroud identity, and Kari's past lives with Oversoul) as a crutch to deal with their emotional baggage.
* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: The end of the first book utterly destroys the status quo: [[spoiler: Mathias' father is killed by Candlemaker Jack, outing his identity leading to his capture by Concordia. Maggie, Mur, and Sol are empowered by Magik Online, Perse breaks up with Mathias, and Mathias kills Smokefang giving up on living a double life and becoming Shroud full time. He and the newly formed Dragonslayers then have to flee Evermarsh, relocating to the alien Midnight Market.]]
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* PragmaticVillainy: Grimsour, the Orange Minister of Concordia, shows disgust at Blackcinders love of superweapons because he considers them AwesomeButImpractical waste of money and resources that could be spent on more practical things.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Grimsour, the Orange Minister of Concordia, shows disgust at Blackcinders love of superweapons because he considers them AwesomeButImpractical waste wastes of money and resources that could be spent on more practical things.things.
* {{Reincarnation}}: Kari's Lock, Oversoul, is based around letting her draw the memories, skills, and powers of her past lives which include many skilled warriors and the ''Nine-Tailed Fox''.
* {{Reincarnation}}: Kari's Lock, Oversoul, is based around letting her draw the memories, skills, and powers of her past lives which include many skilled warriors and the ''Nine-Tailed Fox''.
* TheSpymaster: Aster is the head of Concordian Intelligence and a powerful Blue Mage. It comes as no surprise that he has a galaxy-spanning network of informants, spies, and schemes.
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* WakeUpCallBoss: Smokefang and Kresnik are ''far'' more competent than Mayor John Brown's cult ever was.
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* TokenGoodTeammate: Among Concordia's High Command and dragons in general, the Golden Prince stands out with his strong morals is the only Minister interested in diplomatically assimilating over races into Concordia and building a working culture beyond conquest. He's also the only dragon shown to not have a superiority complex.
* WakeUpCallBoss: Smokefang and Kresnik are ''far'' more competent than Mayor John Brown's cult everwas. was.
* WizardsFromOuterSpace: Earth gets invaded by an army of fantasy creatures armed with powerful magic and MagiTech.
* WakeUpCallBoss: Smokefang and Kresnik are ''far'' more competent than Mayor John Brown's cult ever
* WizardsFromOuterSpace: Earth gets invaded by an army of fantasy creatures armed with powerful magic and MagiTech.
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* GoodShepard: The Christian priest Solomon (Sol for short) who is a close family friend of the Martels. He protected people from drug gangs before Concordia invaded, fights against racism and oppression, is looked up to by Mathias, lets him use his church as a base for his resistance activities, later fights in a suit of PoweredArmor, and becomes a sorcerer.
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* GoodShepard: GoodShepherd: The Christian priest Solomon (Sol for short) who is a close family friend of the Martels. He protected people from drug gangs before Concordia invaded, fights against racism and oppression, is looked up to by Mathias, lets him use his church as a base for his resistance activities, later fights in a suit of PoweredArmor, and becomes a sorcerer.
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* MysteriousBacker: The Administrator to a tee. He gives Mathias access to Magik Online, which gives non-magical beings the ability to become sorcerers by having an account. But their identity is a complete mystery, they only communicate through chat messages, and Mathias needs to fulfill 'Quests' for his benefactor in order to gain Spellcoins needed to buy new spells.
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* MysteriousBacker: The Administrator to a tee. He gives Mathias access to Magik Online, which gives non-magical beings the ability to become sorcerers by having an account. But their identity is a complete mystery, they only communicate through chat messages, and Mathias needs to fulfill 'Quests' for his benefactor in order to gain Spellcoins needed to buy new spells. spells,
* NotInThisForYourRevolution: Lacking brute strength during the Heist arc, Mathias and Kari end up having to hire the gargoyle mercenary Mur to make up for their magics lack of firepower.
* NotInThisForYourRevolution: Lacking brute strength during the Heist arc, Mathias and Kari end up having to hire the gargoyle mercenary Mur to make up for their magics lack of firepower.
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* AlienInvasion: Earth was conquered by an interstellar empire of ''fantasy creatures'' ten years before the start of ''Magik Online'' consisting of a dragon led army of hobs, bullmen, werewolves and many more species.
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* AbilityMixing: Magik Online users have the ability to combine two spells of different colors together to make a stronger, but more specialized spell at the cost of its two component spell. Examples include Glass Field, Lightbringer, Mad World, Killer Sense, and Bullseye.
* AbusiveParents:
** Henry Powells was a horrible father and it's not hard to see how [[SocialDarwinist Maggie]] and [[TheSociopath Jack]] ended up the way they did under his care.
** Blackcinders is a perfectionist stage mom who openly looks down on her son, Smokefang, for never meeting her absurd standards and refuses to let him heal his blinded eye as a form of discipline.
** Blackcinders POV reveals that her parents weren't much better, indoctrinating her with their toxic ideals of strength and ruthlessness.
* AlienInvasion: Earth was conquered by an interstellar empire of ''fantasy creatures'' ten years before the start of ''Magik Online'' consisting of a dragon led army of hobs, bullmen,werewolves werewolves, and many more species.
* AbusiveParents:
** Henry Powells was a horrible father and it's not hard to see how [[SocialDarwinist Maggie]] and [[TheSociopath Jack]] ended up the way they did under his care.
** Blackcinders is a perfectionist stage mom who openly looks down on her son, Smokefang, for never meeting her absurd standards and refuses to let him heal his blinded eye as a form of discipline.
** Blackcinders POV reveals that her parents weren't much better, indoctrinating her with their toxic ideals of strength and ruthlessness.
* AlienInvasion: Earth was conquered by an interstellar empire of ''fantasy creatures'' ten years before the start of ''Magik Online'' consisting of a dragon led army of hobs, bullmen,
* BerserkButton: Mur ''hates'' it when he is called by his full name, Murmur.
* BigBadEnsemble: While the story starts off with the main antagonist being the Concordian Empire led by Grandmaster Wyrde, it quickly becomes clear that the Maleking is an equal threat to both Concordia, Mathias, and everything else.
* BigBadEnsemble: While the story starts off with the main antagonist being the Concordian Empire led by Grandmaster Wyrde, it quickly becomes clear that the Maleking is an equal threat to both Concordia, Mathias, and everything else.
* DeconstructedCharacterArchetype:
** Mathias is one of the double-life teen superhero archetype. He tries to live a double-life as both Mathias Martel and the resistance leader Shroud, but during his first excursion saving his classmate, Maggie, from a cult, she easily figures out his identity [[spoiler: and not one and a half story arcs latter his identity is outed by Candlemaker Jack.]]
** [[spoiler: Fitting the video game motifs Jack is one of the people who only care about EXP. What happens if you could get EXP by killing in real life which Jack can basically do with his Crimson Echoes Lock? The obvious happens and you get a mass-murdering psychopath.]]
** Mathias is one of the double-life teen superhero archetype. He tries to live a double-life as both Mathias Martel and the resistance leader Shroud, but during his first excursion saving his classmate, Maggie, from a cult, she easily figures out his identity [[spoiler: and not one and a half story arcs latter his identity is outed by Candlemaker Jack.]]
** [[spoiler: Fitting the video game motifs Jack is one of the people who only care about EXP. What happens if you could get EXP by killing in real life which Jack can basically do with his Crimson Echoes Lock? The obvious happens and you get a mass-murdering psychopath.]]
* EvilIsBigger: Blackcinders is a GeneralRipper, as well as the biggest dragon Concordia has ever had.
* FirstPersonPerson: Mur the imp always refers to himself as 'Mur'.
* GeneralRipper: Blackcinders, Concordia's Red Minister, is the supreme commander of Concordia's armed forces, is a brutal dragon supremacist military leader with a love of power, destruction, and doomsday devices who is in charge of conquering new galaxies for Concordia.
* GoodShepard: The Christian priest Solomon (Sol for short) who is a close family friend of the Martels. He protected people from drug gangs before Concordia invaded, fights against racism and oppression, is looked up to by Mathias, lets him use his church as a base for his resistance activities, later fights in a suit of PoweredArmor, and becomes a sorcerer.
* GoodShepard: The Christian priest Solomon (Sol for short) who is a close family friend of the Martels. He protected people from drug gangs before Concordia invaded, fights against racism and oppression, is looked up to by Mathias, lets him use his church as a base for his resistance activities, later fights in a suit of PoweredArmor, and becomes a sorcerer.
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* MageKiller: Captain John Kresnik is a experienced White Sorcerer who specializes in taking down rogue sorcerers due to both his martial skills and AntiMagic spells.
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* NotSoAboveItAll: Kari puts great effort into her stoic ninja image but it can break at times showing surprising mundanity such as when she reveals her skill at drumming or when her ringtone reveals that she's a massive fan of the Beatles.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Grimsour, the Orange Minister of Concordia, shows disgust at Blackcinders love of superweapons because he considers them AwesomeButImpractical waste of money and resources that could be spent on more practical things.
* PsychoForHire: Lacking brute strength, Mathias and Kari end up having to hire the gargoyle mercenary Mur to make up for their magics lck of firepower.
* PsychoForHire: Lacking brute strength, Mathias and Kari end up having to hire the gargoyle mercenary Mur to make up for their magics lck of firepower.
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* SignatureMove: Anyone who gains the ability to harness Flux to use sorcery immediately gains a Lock. A special spell that is completely unique to the user; such as Network, Oversoul, Crimson Echoes, White Geist, Adamant, and so on.
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* WakeUpCallBoss: Smokefang and Kresnik are ''far'' more competent than Mayor John Brown's cult ever was.
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* ForceAndFinisse: [[NighInvulnerable Smokefang]] and [[MageKiller Kresnik]] form this dynamic as the main antagonists of the Heist arc.
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* ForceAndFinisse: ForceAndFinesse: [[NighInvulnerable Smokefang]] and [[MageKiller Kresnik]] form this dynamic as the main antagonists of the Heist arc.
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* MageHunter: Captain John Kresnik is a experienced White Sorcerer who specializes in taking down rogue sorcerers due to both his martial skills and AntiMagic spells.
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* ExcuseMeWhileIMultitask: The Premium Thoughts spell's main advantage in combat. It gives Mathias to brainpower to multitask overseeing his entire team with his Network Lock and keep track of and control his hundreds of glass shards, as well as fly. [[spoiler: When Kresnik negates his spells, the loss of Premium Thoughts causes Mathias' entire fighting style to collapse upon itself.]]
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* AntiVillain: The werewolf Captain John Kresnik is quickly revealed to be one upon his arrival at the end of the first arc. Despite serving the Concordian Empire he is a GreatDetective who fights ForGreatJustice, truly wants to protect the people, shows legitimate sorrow at the deaths a satanic cult caused and is generally all around more likable than his boss, Smokefang.
* TheConspiracy: The first enemies Mathias fights is a conspiracy led by a human-sacrificing cult consisting of Evermarsh's impotent human authority figures and police run by Mayor John Brown who have turned to satanic means in order to regain their former status.
* TheConspiracy: The first enemies Mathias fights is a conspiracy led by a human-sacrificing cult consisting of Evermarsh's impotent human authority figures and police run by Mayor John Brown who have turned to satanic means in order to regain their former status.
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* AntiVillain: The werewolf Captain John Kresnik is quickly revealed to be one upon his arrival at the end of the first arc. Despite serving the Concordian Empire he is a GreatDetective who fights ForGreatJustice, truly wants to protect the people, shows legitimate sorrow at the deaths a satanic cult caused and is generally all around more likable than his boss, Smokefang.
* TheConspiracy: The first enemies Mathias fights isa conspiracy led by a human-sacrificing cult consisting of Evermarsh's impotent human authority figures and police run by Mayor John Brown Brown, who have turned to satanic occult means in order to regain their former status.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: The Evermarsh conspiracy sought to summon a demon by sacrificing other humans to strike back against Concordia. The demon summoned, the Candlemaker, proceeds to kill them all.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: The Evermarsh conspiracy sought to summon a demon by sacrificing other humans to strike back against Concordia. The demon summoned, the Candlemaker, proceeds to kill kills them all.all after they defaulted on the last sacrifice.
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* MysteriousBacker: The Administrator to a tee. He gives Mathias access to Magik Online, which gives non-magical beings the ability to become sorcerers by having an account. But their identity is a complete mystery, they only communicate through chat messages, and Mathias needs to fulfill 'Quests' for his benefactor in order to gain Spellcoins to even be able to buy new spells from Magik to use.
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* MysteriousBacker: The Administrator to a tee. He gives Mathias access to Magik Online, which gives non-magical beings the ability to become sorcerers by having an account. But their identity is a complete mystery, they only communicate through chat messages, and Mathias needs to fulfill 'Quests' for his benefactor in order to gain Spellcoins to even be able needed to buy new spells from Magik to use.spells.
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* YouAreACreditToYourRace: Despite being openly speciest and oppressive Concordia openly practices exceptionalism; three of its Ministers (the highest ranks below the Grandmaster) are non-dragons (A bullman, a hob, with Brina's species a mystery). Though emphasis should be placed on ''exceptional'', you have to be particularly skilled, intelligent, powerful, and above all, have magic, if you want to break the glass ceiling.
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* YouAreACreditToYourRace: Despite being openly speciest and oppressive Concordia openly practices exceptionalism; three of its Ministers (the highest ranks below the Grandmaster) are non-dragons (A bullman, a hob, with Brina's species a mystery). Though emphasis should be placed on ''exceptional'', you have to be particularly skilled, intelligent, powerful, and above all, have magic, if you want to break the glass ceiling.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: The Evermarsh conspiracy sought to summon a demon by sacrificing other humans to strike back against Concordia. The demon summoned, the Candlemaker, proceeds to kill them all.
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* MysteriousBacker: The Administrator to a tee. He gives Mathias access to Magik Online, which gives non-magical beings the ability to become sorcerers by having an account. But their identity is a complete mysterty, mystery, they only communicate through chat messages, and Mathias needs to fulfill 'Quests' for his benefactor in order to gain Spellcoins to even be able to buy new spells from Magik to use.
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* AlienInvasion: Earth was conquered by an interstellar empire of ''fantasy creatures'' ten years before the start of ''Magik Online'' consisting of a dragon led army of Hobs, Bullmen, and many more species.
* DiscoDan: Mathias is an understated teenage version. His hatred of Concordia leads to him preferring pre-Conquest pop culture like Marvel comics and the Disney Alladin movie, never mentioning any form of entertainment that was created post-Conquest. The only exception being video games made by Dynamis, where he works.
* DiscoDan: Mathias is an understated teenage version. His hatred of Concordia leads to him preferring pre-Conquest pop culture like Marvel comics and the Disney Alladin movie, never mentioning any form of entertainment that was created post-Conquest. The only exception being video games made by Dynamis, where he works.
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* AlienInvasion: Earth was conquered by an interstellar empire of ''fantasy creatures'' ten years before the start of ''Magik Online'' consisting of a dragon led army of Hobs, Bullmen, hobs, bullmen, werewolves and many more species.
*DiscoDan: Mathias AntiVillain: The werewolf Captain John Kresnik is an understated teenage version. His hatred quickly revealed to be one upon his arrival at the end of Concordia leads the first arc. Despite serving the Concordian Empire he is a GreatDetective who fights ForGreatJustice, truly wants to him preferring pre-Conquest pop culture like Marvel comics protect the people, shows legitimate sorrow at the deaths a satanic cult caused and the Disney Alladin movie, never mentioning any form of entertainment that was created post-Conquest. The only exception being video games made by Dynamis, where he works.is generally all around more likable than his boss, Smokefang.
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* OneSteveLimit: The mayor of Evermarsh is named John Brown. He's quickly killed off and not a chapter later is Captain John Kresnik introduced.
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* YouAreACreditToYourRace: Despite being openly speciest and oppressive Concordia openly practices exceptionalism; three of its Ministers (the highest ranks below the Grandmaster) are non-dragons (A Bullman, bullman, a Hob, hob, with Brina's species a mystery). Though emphasis should be placed on ''exceptional'', you have to be particularly skilled, intelligent, powerful, and powerful above all, have magic, if you want to break the glass ceiling.
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* DiscoDan: Mathias is an understated teenage version. His hatred of Concordia leads to him preferring pre-Conquest pop culture like Marvel comics and the Disney Alladin movie, the only exception being games made by Dynamis, where he works.
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* DiscoDan: Mathias is an understated teenage version. His hatred of Concordia leads to him preferring pre-Conquest pop culture like Marvel comics and the Disney Alladin movie, the never mentioning any form of entertainment that was created post-Conquest. The only exception being video games made by Dynamis, where he works.
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Magik Online began in January 2018 and updates regularly on Wednesday.
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Magik Online began in January 2018 2019 and updates regularly on Wednesday.
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[[https://magikonline.com/ Magik Online]] by Void Herald, is an ongoing WebSerialNovel following Mathias "Matt" Martel, a creative teenager discovering an online application allowing him to purchase spells online.
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[[https://magikonline.com/ Magik Online]] by Void Herald, is an ongoing WebSerialNovel following Mathias "Matt" Martel, a creative teenager discovering an online application a website allowing him to purchase spells online.
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* TheRightOfTheSuperiorSpecies: Concordia is founded on the belief that dragons are inherently the strongest and wisest race and it's their job to enlighten and uplift lesser species. Basically, they conquer everyone and forcibly integrate them into their culture and sadly have more than enough power to back it up.
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* TheRightOfTheSuperiorSpecies: TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies: Concordia is founded on the belief that dragons are inherently the strongest and wisest race and it's their job to enlighten and uplift lesser species. Basically, they conquer everyone and forcibly integrate them into their culture and sadly have more than enough power to back it up.
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* TheRightOfTheSuperiorSpecies: Concordia is founded on the belief that dragons are inherently the strongest and wisest race and it's their job to enlighten and uplift lesser species. Basically, they conquer everyone and forcibly integrate them into their culture and sadly have more than enough power to back it up.
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* SuperiorSpecies: Concordia is founded on the belief that dragons are inherently the strongest and wisest race and it's their job to enlighten and uplift lesser species. Basically, they conquer everyone and forcibly integrate them into their culture and sadly have more than enough power to back it up.
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* DishingOutDirt: Mathias' main spell, "Glass Field" grants him perfect control over every piece of glass within a ten-meters radius.
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* DishingOutDirt: Mathias' main spell, "Glass Field" grants him perfect control over every piece of glass within a ten-meters ten-meter radius.
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* SuperiorSpecies: Concordia is founded on the belief that dragons are inherently the strongest and most wisest race and it's their job to enlighten and uplift lesser species. Basically, they conquer everyone and forcibly integrate them into their culture and sadly have more than enough power to back it up.
* YouAreACreditToYourRace: Despite being openly speciest and oppressive Concordia openly practices exceptionalism; three of its Ministers (the highest ranks below the Grandmaster) are non-dragons (A Bullman, a Hob, with Brina's speices a mystery). Though emphasis should be placed on ''exceptional'', you have to be particuarly skilled, intelligent, and powerful if you want to break the glass ceiling.
* YouAreACreditToYourRace: Despite being openly speciest and oppressive Concordia openly practices exceptionalism; three of its Ministers (the highest ranks below the Grandmaster) are non-dragons (A Bullman, a Hob, with Brina's speices a mystery). Though emphasis should be placed on ''exceptional'', you have to be particuarly skilled, intelligent, and powerful if you want to break the glass ceiling.
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* SuperiorSpecies: Concordia is founded on the belief that dragons are inherently the strongest and most wisest race and it's their job to enlighten and uplift lesser species. Basically, they conquer everyone and forcibly integrate them into their culture and sadly have more than enough power to back it up.
* YouAreACreditToYourRace: Despite being openly speciest and oppressive Concordia openly practices exceptionalism; three of its Ministers (the highest ranks below the Grandmaster) are non-dragons (A Bullman, a Hob, with Brina'sspeices species a mystery). Though emphasis should be placed on ''exceptional'', you have to be particuarly particularly skilled, intelligent, and powerful if you want to break the glass ceiling.
* YouAreACreditToYourRace: Despite being openly speciest and oppressive Concordia openly practices exceptionalism; three of its Ministers (the highest ranks below the Grandmaster) are non-dragons (A Bullman, a Hob, with Brina's
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* AlienInvasion: Earth was conquered by an interstellar empire of ''fantasy creatures'' ten years before the start of ''Magik Online'' consisting of a dragon led army of Hobs, Bullmen, and many more species.
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* PostModernMagik: the website Magik, which allows users to purchase magical powers through a currency called Spellcoins.
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* MechaMooks: A majority of Concordia's normal forces consist of Gearsmen; flying multi-purpose, mechanical attack bots.
* PostModernMagik: the website Magik, which allows users to purchase magical powers through a currency calledSpellcoins.Spellcoins.
* SheIsTheKing: Concordia's leader is called 'Grandmaster'. A position held by a female dragon named Wyrde since its founding.
* SuperiorSpecies: Concordia is founded on the belief that dragons are inherently the strongest and most wisest race and it's their job to enlighten and uplift lesser species. Basically, they conquer everyone and forcibly integrate them into their culture and sadly have more than enough power to back it up.
* YouAreACreditToYourRace: Despite being openly speciest and oppressive Concordia openly practices exceptionalism; three of its Ministers (the highest ranks below the Grandmaster) are non-dragons (A Bullman, a Hob, with Brina's speices a mystery). Though emphasis should be placed on ''exceptional'', you have to be particuarly skilled, intelligent, and powerful if you want to break the glass ceiling.
* PostModernMagik: the website Magik, which allows users to purchase magical powers through a currency called
* SheIsTheKing: Concordia's leader is called 'Grandmaster'. A position held by a female dragon named Wyrde since its founding.
* SuperiorSpecies: Concordia is founded on the belief that dragons are inherently the strongest and most wisest race and it's their job to enlighten and uplift lesser species. Basically, they conquer everyone and forcibly integrate them into their culture and sadly have more than enough power to back it up.
* YouAreACreditToYourRace: Despite being openly speciest and oppressive Concordia openly practices exceptionalism; three of its Ministers (the highest ranks below the Grandmaster) are non-dragons (A Bullman, a Hob, with Brina's speices a mystery). Though emphasis should be placed on ''exceptional'', you have to be particuarly skilled, intelligent, and powerful if you want to break the glass ceiling.
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* {{HowDoIShootTheWeb?}}: Mathias spends most of the first arc learning how to use the various spells he purchased and how the Magik website works.
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* {{HowDoIShootTheWeb?}}: HowDoIShotWeb: Mathias spends most of the first arc learning how to use the various spells he purchased and how the Magik website works.
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* HowDoIShootTheWeb?: {{HowDoIShootTheWeb?}}: Mathias spends most of the first arc learning how to use the various spells he purchased and how the Magik website works.
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* HowDoIShootTheWeb: Mathias spends most of the first arc learning how to use the various spells he purchased and how the Magik website works.
* Magitek: the setting's dominant feature, with magic and science having become one.
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Magik Online by Void Herald, is an ongoing WebSerialNovel following Mathias "Matt" Martel, a creative teenager discovering an online application allowing him to purchase spells online.
On an alternate version of Earth, a Magitek, transdimensional dragon-led empire called Concordia has risen to prominence. One of the many young people resenting the dictatorial status quo, Mathias receives a mysterious invitation to a website, Magik, allowing users to buy magical powers with a currency earned by fulfilling strange requests. Eager to strike back after Concordia arrested his mother, Mathias decides to use Magik to rebel. However, juggling between his new sorcerer identity, the Shroud, and his private life turns out a bit more difficult than expected.
On an alternate version of Earth, a Magitek, transdimensional dragon-led empire called Concordia has risen to prominence. One of the many young people resenting the dictatorial status quo, Mathias receives a mysterious invitation to a website, Magik, allowing users to buy magical powers with a currency earned by fulfilling strange requests. Eager to strike back after Concordia arrested his mother, Mathias decides to use Magik to rebel. However, juggling between his new sorcerer identity, the Shroud, and his private life turns out a bit more difficult than expected.
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[[https://magikonline.com/ Magik Online Online]] by Void Herald, is an ongoing WebSerialNovel following Mathias "Matt" Martel, a creative teenager discovering an online application allowing him to purchase spells online.
On an alternate version of Earth, a Magitek, transdimensional dragon-led empire called Concordia has risen to prominence. One of the many young people resenting the dictatorial status quo, Mathias receives a mysterious invitation to a website, Magik, allowing users to buy magical powers with a currency earned by fulfilling strange requests. Eager to strike back after Concordia arrested his mother, Mathias decides to use Magik to rebel. However, juggling between his new sorcerer identity, the Shroud, and his private life turns out a bit more difficult thanexpected.expected.
Magik Online began in January 2018 and updates regularly on Wednesday.
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!! This series provides examples of:
* DishingOutDirt: Mathias' main spell, "Glass Field" grants him perfect control over every piece of glass within a ten-meters radius.
* TheEmpire: Concordia, a transdimensional empire led by dragons and fielding steel golems called Gearsmen as shock troops. They conquered Earth a decade before the story's start, renaming it "Terra Firma."
* HowDoIShootTheWeb: Mathias spends most of the first arc learning how to use the various spells he purchased and how the Magik website works.
* Magitek: the setting's dominant feature, with magic and science having become one.
* PostModernMagik: the website Magik, which allows users to purchase magical powers through a currency called Spellcoins.
On an alternate version of Earth, a Magitek, transdimensional dragon-led empire called Concordia has risen to prominence. One of the many young people resenting the dictatorial status quo, Mathias receives a mysterious invitation to a website, Magik, allowing users to buy magical powers with a currency earned by fulfilling strange requests. Eager to strike back after Concordia arrested his mother, Mathias decides to use Magik to rebel. However, juggling between his new sorcerer identity, the Shroud, and his private life turns out a bit more difficult than
Magik Online began in January 2018 and updates regularly on Wednesday.
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!! This series provides examples of:
* DishingOutDirt: Mathias' main spell, "Glass Field" grants him perfect control over every piece of glass within a ten-meters radius.
* TheEmpire: Concordia, a transdimensional empire led by dragons and fielding steel golems called Gearsmen as shock troops. They conquered Earth a decade before the story's start, renaming it "Terra Firma."
* HowDoIShootTheWeb: Mathias spends most of the first arc learning how to use the various spells he purchased and how the Magik website works.
* Magitek: the setting's dominant feature, with magic and science having become one.
* PostModernMagik: the website Magik, which allows users to purchase magical powers through a currency called Spellcoins.
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Magik Online by Void Herald, is an ongoing WebSerialNovel following Mathias "Matt" Martel, a creative teenager discovering an online application allowing him to purchase spells online.
On an alternate version of Earth, a Magitek, transdimensional dragon-led empire called Concordia has risen to prominence. One of the many young people resenting the dictatorial status quo, Mathias receives a mysterious invitation to a website, Magik, allowing users to buy magical powers with a currency earned by fulfilling strange requests. Eager to strike back after Concordia arrested his mother, Mathias decides to use Magik to rebel. However, juggling between his new sorcerer identity, the Shroud, and his private life turns out a bit more difficult than expected.
On an alternate version of Earth, a Magitek, transdimensional dragon-led empire called Concordia has risen to prominence. One of the many young people resenting the dictatorial status quo, Mathias receives a mysterious invitation to a website, Magik, allowing users to buy magical powers with a currency earned by fulfilling strange requests. Eager to strike back after Concordia arrested his mother, Mathias decides to use Magik to rebel. However, juggling between his new sorcerer identity, the Shroud, and his private life turns out a bit more difficult than expected.
