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* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler: The Entity decides to cause this, ForTheEvulz, by causing meteor showers, advancing ClimateChange and in many more ways.]].
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* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler: The Entity decides to cause this, ForTheEvulz, by causing meteor showers, advancing ClimateChange GlobalWarming and in many more ways.]].
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* ClimateChange: [[spoiler: The Entity melts the ice caps, for fun.]]
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* GlobalWarming: [[spoiler: The Entity melts the ice caps, for fun.]]
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* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler: The Entity decides to cause this, ForTheEvulz, by causing meteor showers, advancing GlobalWarming and in many more ways.]].
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* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler: The Entity decides to cause this, ForTheEvulz, by causing meteor showers, advancing GlobalWarming ClimateChange and in many more ways.]].
* ClimateChange: [[spoiler: The Entity melts the ice caps, for fun.]]
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* GlobalWarming: [[spoiler: The Entity melts the ice caps, for fun.]]
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* [[spoiler:TheBadGuyWins: The Entity is ultimately never stopped from its goals of aboslute omnicide.]]
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* [[spoiler:TheBadGuyWins: The Entity is ultimately never stopped from its goals of aboslute absolute omnicide.]]]]
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''Machinations of a Monster'' is a short CosmicHorror story written by Tropers/MahStache. [[https://www.wattpad.com/424100140-machinations-of-a-monster It can be read on Wattpad]] and [[https://www.fictionpress.com/story/story_edit_property.php?storyid=3308119 FictionPress]].
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''Machinations of a Monster'' is a short CosmicHorror story written by Tropers/MahStache. [[https://www.wattpad.com/424100140-machinations-of-a-monster It can be read on Wattpad]] and [[https://www.fictionpress.com/story/story_edit_property.php?storyid=3308119 com/s/3308119/1/Machinations-of-a-Monster FictionPress]].
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''Machinations of a Monster'' is a short CosmicHorror story written by Tropers/MahStache. [[https://www.wattpad.com/424100140-machinations-of-a-monster It can be read on Wattpad.]]
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''Machinations of a Monster'' is a short CosmicHorror story written by Tropers/MahStache. [[https://www.wattpad.com/424100140-machinations-of-a-monster It can be read on Wattpad.]]
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** [[spoiler: The Entity making a little girl immortal just so he can trap her under the sea in a chest for all eternity, without death.]]
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** [[spoiler: The Entity making a little girl immortal just so he can trap her under the sea in a chest for all eternity, without death.drowning forever.]]
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''Machinations of a Monster'' is a short CosmicHorror story written by Tropers/MahStache. [[https://www.wattpad.com/424100140-machinations-of-a-monster It can be read on Wattpad.]]
The story intially revolves around a mysterious but [[DarkIsNotEvil benevolent]] [[DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu race]] of {{Eldritch Abomination}}s named Xqqapikalits that appear to look over the world and hold the peace. One day, however, it turns out one of the children of the mysterious race wants to deviate from the path it was designed for. [[ApocalypseHow You can probably guess where this is going.]]
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!! Machinations of a Monster contains examples of:
*AndIMustScream: Several.
**The Entity [[spoiler: traps all living Xqqapikalits in an extremely sharp, tiny box for the rest of eternity, and right next to their friends too. Except no sound goes through these boxes.]]
**[[spoiler: The Entity making a little girl immortal just so he can trap her under the sea in a chest for all eternity, without death.]]
*ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler: The Entity decides to cause this, ForTheEvulz, by causing meteor showers, advancing GlobalWarming and in many more ways.]].
*BigBad: The Entity is ''the'' reason everything bad happens.
*BodyHorror: [[spoiler: The Entity causes horrific damage to Chad's girlfriend, not limited to disembowling her.]]
*DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: The Xqqapikalits are surprisingly friendly for being {{Eldritch Abomination}}s. Subverted with the Entity.
*DarkIsNotEvil: The Xqqapikalits.
*EldritchAbomination: Downplayed with the [[DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu Xqqapikalits]], and played straight with the Entity.
*EstablishingCharacterMoment: When the Entity [[spoiler: destroys a realm.]]
*EyeScream: [[spoiler: The Entity gouges Chad's girlfriend's eyes out.]]
*ForceFeeding: In a particularly sadistic example, [[spoiler: The Entity forces Chad to eat his own girlfriend's remains.]]
*ForTheEvulz: Ultimately, everything the Entity does is because he found being nice "uninteresting".
*GlobalWarming: [[spoiler: The Entity melts the ice caps, for fun.]]
*OmnicidalManiac: The Entity's [[EstablishingCharacterMoment first act]] is to [[spoiler:destroy a lesser realm]] and he later goes on to [[spoiler: destroy the Earth.]]
*[[spoiler:TheBadGuyWins: The Entity is ultimately never stopped from its goals of aboslute omnicide.]]
The story intially revolves around a mysterious but [[DarkIsNotEvil benevolent]] [[DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu race]] of {{Eldritch Abomination}}s named Xqqapikalits that appear to look over the world and hold the peace. One day, however, it turns out one of the children of the mysterious race wants to deviate from the path it was designed for. [[ApocalypseHow You can probably guess where this is going.]]
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!! Machinations of a Monster contains examples of:
*AndIMustScream: Several.
**The Entity [[spoiler: traps all living Xqqapikalits in an extremely sharp, tiny box for the rest of eternity, and right next to their friends too. Except no sound goes through these boxes.]]
**[[spoiler: The Entity making a little girl immortal just so he can trap her under the sea in a chest for all eternity, without death.]]
*ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler: The Entity decides to cause this, ForTheEvulz, by causing meteor showers, advancing GlobalWarming and in many more ways.]].
*BigBad: The Entity is ''the'' reason everything bad happens.
*BodyHorror: [[spoiler: The Entity causes horrific damage to Chad's girlfriend, not limited to disembowling her.]]
*DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: The Xqqapikalits are surprisingly friendly for being {{Eldritch Abomination}}s. Subverted with the Entity.
*DarkIsNotEvil: The Xqqapikalits.
*EldritchAbomination: Downplayed with the [[DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu Xqqapikalits]], and played straight with the Entity.
*EstablishingCharacterMoment: When the Entity [[spoiler: destroys a realm.]]
*EyeScream: [[spoiler: The Entity gouges Chad's girlfriend's eyes out.]]
*ForceFeeding: In a particularly sadistic example, [[spoiler: The Entity forces Chad to eat his own girlfriend's remains.]]
*ForTheEvulz: Ultimately, everything the Entity does is because he found being nice "uninteresting".
*GlobalWarming: [[spoiler: The Entity melts the ice caps, for fun.]]
*OmnicidalManiac: The Entity's [[EstablishingCharacterMoment first act]] is to [[spoiler:destroy a lesser realm]] and he later goes on to [[spoiler: destroy the Earth.]]
*[[spoiler:TheBadGuyWins: The Entity is ultimately never stopped from its goals of aboslute omnicide.]]
