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** Vivian refers to Adebayo Sall as “Ade” and even “dear Ade,” which certainly seems like this.
** Simon calls Denizen the shortened “Den.”
** Simon calls Denizen the shortened “Den.”
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** Vivian refers to Adebayo Sall as “Ade” "Ade" and even “dear Ade,” which certainly seems like this.
"dear Ade".
** Simon calls Denizen the shortened“Den.”"Den."
** Simon calls Denizen the shortened
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* AlmostKiss: [[spoiler: Denizen gets one with Mercy, before they're [[{{MomentKiller}} interrupted by Vivian.]]]]
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* AlmostKiss: [[spoiler: Denizen gets one with Mercy, before they're [[{{MomentKiller}} interrupted by Vivian.]]]]]]
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* ApologeticAttacker: Both [[spoiler:Grey and Vivian,]] to each other.
* ArcWords: The Hardwick family motto--"''Yield not to evil, but attack all the more boldly.''”
* ArcWords: The Hardwick family motto--"''Yield not to evil, but attack all the more boldly.''”
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* ApologeticAttacker: Both [[spoiler:Grey and Vivian,]] Vivian]], to each other.
*ArcWords: ArcWords:
** The Hardwick familymotto--"''Yield motto. "Yield not to evil, but attack all the more boldly.''”"
*
** The Hardwick family
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Pathetic, cowardly, ''[[{{HeightAngst}} short—]]''
* AscendedFridgeHorror: [[spoiler: Thralldom]] is discussed very openly in ''The Forever Court''. Not only is it made explicitly clear that yes, [[spoiler: the Three were [[{{MindRape}} literally inside of Grey's mind]] and killing him with the unbearable pressure of it,]] but it also provides a nasty bit of in-universe ParanoiaFuel—[[spoiler:''anyone'' could be a thrall, and there's ''no way of knowing''.]]
** It also addresses [[{{NightmareFuel}} what has to happen]] to Knights who lose control to their powers in order to protect the public.
* AscendedFridgeHorror: [[spoiler: Thralldom]] is discussed very openly in ''The Forever Court''. Not only is it made explicitly clear that yes, [[spoiler: the Three were [[{{MindRape}} literally inside of Grey's mind]] and killing him with the unbearable pressure of it,]] but it also provides a nasty bit of in-universe ParanoiaFuel—[[spoiler:''anyone'' could be a thrall, and there's ''no way of knowing''.]]
** It also addresses [[{{NightmareFuel}} what has to happen]] to Knights who lose control to their powers in order to protect the public.
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%% * ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Pathetic, cowardly, ''[[{{HeightAngst}} short—]]''
''short--''
*AscendedFridgeHorror: AscendedFridgeHorror:
** [[spoiler: Thralldom]] is discussed very openly in ''The Forever Court''. Not only is it made explicitly clear that yes, [[spoiler: the Three were[[{{MindRape}} literally inside of Grey's mind]] mind and killing him with the unbearable pressure of it,]] but it also provides a nasty bit of in-universe ParanoiaFuel—[[spoiler:''anyone'' ParanoiaFuel: [[spoiler:''anyone'' could be a thrall, and there's ''no way of knowing''.]]
** It also addresses[[{{NightmareFuel}} what has to happen]] happen to Knights who lose control to their powers in order to protect the public.
*
** [[spoiler: Thralldom]] is discussed very openly in ''The Forever Court''. Not only is it made explicitly clear that yes, [[spoiler: the Three were
** It also addresses
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* BaitAndSwitchGunshot: [[spoiler: In chapter 25, Grey has a gun to Denizen's head, and Denizen thinks he's been shot when it goes off—but Grey moved it at the last second and fired toward Crosscaper instead.]]
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* BaitAndSwitchGunshot: [[spoiler: In chapter 25, When Grey has a gun to Denizen's head, and Denizen thinks he's been shot when it goes off—but off -- but Grey moved it at the last second and fired toward Crosscaper instead.]]
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* BigBadEnsemble: The Endless King and the Clockwork Three in book one.
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* BigBadEnsemble: BigBadEnsemble:
** The Endless King and the Clockwork Three in book one.
** The Endless King and the Clockwork Three in book one.
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* TheBigDamnKiss: [[spoiler: Denizen kisses Mercy to return the Cants, so yes, a kiss literally saves the multiverse.]]
* BigFancyHouse: Seraphim Row.
* BigWordShout: “STOP” is yelled a lot.
* BigFancyHouse: Seraphim Row.
* BigWordShout: “STOP” is yelled a lot.
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* TheBigDamnKiss: [[spoiler: Denizen kisses Mercy to return the Cants, so yes, a with their kiss literally saves saving the multiverse.]]
%% * BigFancyHouse: Seraphim Row.
* BigWordShout:“STOP” "STOP" is yelled a lot.
%% * BigFancyHouse: Seraphim Row.
* BigWordShout:
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* BittersweetEnding: At the end of the series, [[spoiler: the Usurpers are dead and the Cants have been returned to the Tenebrae. Breaches have become nearly unheard of, eliminating the need for an Order that fights Tenebrous; Denizen goes to college and becomes a teacher, Abigail has gone into private security, and Ed does architecture for the Order. However, there were countless casualties during the War of Daybreak. Denizen found out the girl he had a crush on was mostly just using him, and the cost of saving the multiverse is becoming mostly iron, which he barely survives. And Vivian is dead, so he doesn't get a life ''with her.'']] Still, it's more sweet than bitter.
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* BittersweetEnding: At the end of the series, [[spoiler: the Usurpers are dead and the Cants have been returned to the Tenebrae. Breaches have become nearly unheard of, eliminating the need for an Order that fights Tenebrous; Denizen goes to college and becomes a teacher, Abigail has gone into private security, and Ed does architecture for the Order. However, there were countless casualties during the War of Daybreak. Denizen found out the girl he had a crush on was mostly just using him, and the cost of saving the multiverse is becoming mostly iron, which he barely survives. And Vivian is dead, so he doesn't get a life ''with her.'']] Still, it's more sweet than bitter.'']]
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* BlackSwordsAreBetter: Denizen's [[{{DownplayedTrope}} knife]] is made from a shard of a Malleus's hammer and is thus black.
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* BlackSwordsAreBetter: Denizen's [[{{DownplayedTrope}} knife]] knife is made from a shard of a Malleus's hammer and is thus black.
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* BodyHorror: [[spoiler: ''Grey's hand''—already iron from the Cost, now misshapen and filled with clockwork that seems to be ''growing out of him''. Made even more visceral when he rips a stray strip of his skin loose without even flinching.]]
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* BodyHorror: [[spoiler: ''Grey's hand''—already hand'' -- already iron from the Cost, now misshapen and filled with clockwork that seems to be ''growing out of him''. Made even more visceral when he rips a stray strip of his skin loose without even flinching.]]
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* BookcasePassage: The entrance to Retreat involves one of these. Denizen Lampshades it, of course.
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* BookcasePassage: The entrance to Retreat involves one of these. Denizen Lampshades it, of course.it.
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** The prologue of the first book is called “Tick,” and chapter 31 is titled “Tock.”
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** The prologue of the first book is called “Tick,” "Tick," and chapter 31 is titled “Tock.”"Tock."
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* BreadEggsBreadedEggs: “There are a ''lot'' of people in Dublin. With cameras. And phones that are cameras. And phones that are cameras that can phone people with cameras.”
* BreakTheCutie: The author ''loves'' this trope, so everyone gets it to some degree.
--> '''Author's Bio:''' Dave Rudden enjoys cats, adventure, and [[{{BreadEggsMilkSquick}} being cruel to fictional children.]]
** Because WarIsHell, most of the Knights had already gone through this before the story began, becoming "iron inside" [[{{TheStoic}} blatantly]] or [[{{StepfordSmiler}} beneath a mask.]] Grey in particular is very much of that second variety, and gets [[{{TraumaCongaLine}} extra helpings of this trope]] over the course of the first book before he ([[{{AmbiguousSituation}} possibly]]) crosses the DespairEventHorizon.
** Naturally, the kids aren't excused from this, either. [[{{GuiltComplex}} Darcie takes it hard whenever someone gets hurt,]] and [[{{MuggleBestFriend}} Simon]] picked up a lot of long-lasting trauma from his RunOrDie situation at Crosscaper. Denizen gets to experience several near-death experiences, [[spoiler: betrayal by the second friend he's ever made, the death of someone he cared about, and witnesses [[{{BodyHorror}} other various]] [[{{HarmfulToMinors}} traumatic events.]]]]
* BreakTheCutie: The author ''loves'' this trope, so everyone gets it to some degree.
--> '''Author's Bio:''' Dave Rudden enjoys cats, adventure, and [[{{BreadEggsMilkSquick}} being cruel to fictional children.]]
** Because WarIsHell, most of the Knights had already gone through this before the story began, becoming "iron inside" [[{{TheStoic}} blatantly]] or [[{{StepfordSmiler}} beneath a mask.]] Grey in particular is very much of that second variety, and gets [[{{TraumaCongaLine}} extra helpings of this trope]] over the course of the first book before he ([[{{AmbiguousSituation}} possibly]]) crosses the DespairEventHorizon.
** Naturally, the kids aren't excused from this, either. [[{{GuiltComplex}} Darcie takes it hard whenever someone gets hurt,]] and [[{{MuggleBestFriend}} Simon]] picked up a lot of long-lasting trauma from his RunOrDie situation at Crosscaper. Denizen gets to experience several near-death experiences, [[spoiler: betrayal by the second friend he's ever made, the death of someone he cared about, and witnesses [[{{BodyHorror}} other various]] [[{{HarmfulToMinors}} traumatic events.]]]]
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* BreadEggsBreadedEggs: “There "There are a ''lot'' of people in Dublin. With cameras. And phones that are cameras. And phones that are cameras that can phone people with cameras.”
"
* BreakTheCutie:The author ''loves'' this trope, so everyone Everyone gets it to some degree.
--> '''Author's Bio:''' Dave Rudden enjoys cats, adventure, and [[{{BreadEggsMilkSquick}} being cruel to fictional children.]]
** Because WarIsHell, most of the Knights had already gone through this before the story began, becoming "iron inside" [[{{TheStoic}} blatantly]] blatantly or [[{{StepfordSmiler}} beneath a mask.]] mask. Grey in particular is very much of that second variety, and gets [[{{TraumaCongaLine}} extra helpings of this trope]] trope over the course of the first book before he ([[{{AmbiguousSituation}} possibly]]) (possibly) crosses the DespairEventHorizon.
**Naturally, the The kids aren't excused from this, either. [[{{GuiltComplex}} Darcie takes it hard whenever someone gets hurt,]] hurt, and [[{{MuggleBestFriend}} Simon]] MuggleBestFriend Simon picked up a lot of long-lasting trauma from his RunOrDie situation at Crosscaper. Denizen gets to experience several near-death experiences, [[spoiler: betrayal by the second friend he's ever made, the death of someone he cared about, and witnesses [[{{BodyHorror}} other various]] [[{{HarmfulToMinors}} various traumatic events.]]]]]]
* BreakTheCutie:
**
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** “I should just try to [[spoiler: kiss Mercy]] again and then [[{{ParentsWalkInAtTheWorstTime}} Vivian would magically materialize.]]”
%% * BrokenRecord: “I need to speak to Edifice Greaves.” [[spoiler: Poor Uriel...]]
%% * BrokenRecord: “I need to speak to Edifice Greaves.” [[spoiler: Poor Uriel...]]
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** “I "I should just try to [[spoiler: kiss Mercy]] again and then [[{{ParentsWalkInAtTheWorstTime}} Vivian would magically materialize.]]”
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%% * BrokenRecord:“I "I need to speak to Edifice Greaves.” " [[spoiler: Poor Uriel...]]
%% * BrokenRecord:
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* BungledSuicide: Implied. While [[{{DeathSeeker}} he never makes any active attempts to kill himself,]] this actually happens ''twice'' to [[spoiler:Grey--the Three don't kill him for his rebellion like he hoped, and Vivian spares him after they fight.]]
* BurningWithAnger: Denizen, sometimes. He holds his power, or his [[{{GlowingEyes}} eyes start glowing]], or he [[{{PlayingWithFire}} catches on varying degrees of literal fire]]—he all but ''exploded'' during his Dawning.
* BurningWithAnger: Denizen, sometimes. He holds his power, or his [[{{GlowingEyes}} eyes start glowing]], or he [[{{PlayingWithFire}} catches on varying degrees of literal fire]]—he all but ''exploded'' during his Dawning.
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* BungledSuicide: Implied. While [[{{DeathSeeker}} he never makes any active attempts to kill himself,]] himself, this actually happens ''twice'' to [[spoiler:Grey--the [[spoiler:Grey. The Three don't kill him for his rebellion like he hoped, and Vivian spares him after they fight.]]
*BurningWithAnger: BurningWithAnger:
** Denizen, sometimes. He holds his power, or his[[{{GlowingEyes}} [[GlowingEyes eyes start glowing]], or he [[{{PlayingWithFire}} catches on varying degrees of literal fire]]—he fire. He all but ''exploded'' during his Dawning.
*
** Denizen, sometimes. He holds his power, or his
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* CallingTheOldManOut: Denizen delivers an absolutely ''epic'' one to Vivian. After eleven years [[{{ParentalAbandonment}} in an orphanage]], and nearly a month of being ignored and left in the dark about his parents, [[{{RageBreakingPoint}} he confronts her]] about how he's been treated. He threatens to fight her to keep her from just leaving again... [[spoiler:and it ''works''. He gets answers. And after learning that she's [[{{LukeIAmYourFather}} actually his mother,]] after learning what happened eleven years ago, after learning her [[{{GiveHimANormalLife}} reasoning,]] he [[{{UnstoppableRage}} still doesn't]] [[{{TheReasonYouSuckSpeech}} back down.]]]]
* CallAHumanAMeatbag: Mocked-By-A-Husband calls humans “little meat.”
* CapitalLettersAreMagic: As usual for the genre, this trope is employed... and it's ''[[{{ExaggeratedTrope}} all over the place.]]'' Not only is “Knight” always capitalized, there's also the Cost, TheOrder, the King [[note]]the “Endless” part of his name seems to be optional in casual conversation[[/note]], the Court [[note]]in reference to the Forever Court, so this one may be justified[[/note]], Dawnings, Breaches, Tenebrous, the Book of Rust, Cants and Higher Cants [[note]]which are also called Epithets[[/note]], and the name of every single Cant revealed so far.
** Funnily enough, however, this trope is entirely averted when it comes to the Knights' actual power, which isn't even given a real ''name'' and is simply referred to as “the power of the Tenebrae” or some variant thereof. It's also surprisingly averted in regards to the Endless King's mercy, [[spoiler:up until TheReveal that it's actually a Tenebrous ''named'' Mercy.]]
** The Croits take this up to eleven—almost all of their terminology is capitalized words.
* CallAHumanAMeatbag: Mocked-By-A-Husband calls humans “little meat.”
* CapitalLettersAreMagic: As usual for the genre, this trope is employed... and it's ''[[{{ExaggeratedTrope}} all over the place.]]'' Not only is “Knight” always capitalized, there's also the Cost, TheOrder, the King [[note]]the “Endless” part of his name seems to be optional in casual conversation[[/note]], the Court [[note]]in reference to the Forever Court, so this one may be justified[[/note]], Dawnings, Breaches, Tenebrous, the Book of Rust, Cants and Higher Cants [[note]]which are also called Epithets[[/note]], and the name of every single Cant revealed so far.
** Funnily enough, however, this trope is entirely averted when it comes to the Knights' actual power, which isn't even given a real ''name'' and is simply referred to as “the power of the Tenebrae” or some variant thereof. It's also surprisingly averted in regards to the Endless King's mercy, [[spoiler:up until TheReveal that it's actually a Tenebrous ''named'' Mercy.]]
** The Croits take this up to eleven—almost all of their terminology is capitalized words.
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* CallingTheOldManOut: Denizen delivers an absolutely ''epic'' one to Vivian. After eleven years [[{{ParentalAbandonment}} years in an orphanage]], orphanage, and nearly a month of being ignored and left in the dark about his parents, [[{{RageBreakingPoint}} parents, he confronts her]] her about how he's been treated. He threatens to fight her to keep her from just leaving again... [[spoiler:and it ''works''. He gets answers. And after learning that she's [[{{LukeIAmYourFather}} actually his mother,]] mother, after learning what happened eleven years ago, after learning her [[{{GiveHimANormalLife}} reasoning,]] reasoning, he [[{{UnstoppableRage}} still doesn't]] [[{{TheReasonYouSuckSpeech}} doesn't back down.]]]]
]]
* CallAHumanAMeatbag: Mocked-By-A-Husband calls humans“little "little meat.”
"
*CapitalLettersAreMagic: As usual for the genre, this trope is employed... and it's ''[[{{ExaggeratedTrope}} all CapitalLettersAreMagic:
** All over theplace.]]'' place. Not only is “Knight” "Knight" always capitalized, there's also the Cost, TheOrder, the King [[note]]the “Endless” "Endless" part of his name seems to be optional in casual conversation[[/note]], the Court [[note]]in reference to the Forever Court, so this one may be justified[[/note]], Dawnings, Breaches, Tenebrous, the Book of Rust, Cants and Higher Cants [[note]]which are also called Epithets[[/note]], and the name of every single Cant revealed so far.
** Funnily enough, however, this trope is entirely Entirely averted when it comes to the Knights' actual power, which isn't even given a real ''name'' and is simply referred to as “the "the power of the Tenebrae” Tenebrae" or some variant thereof. It's also surprisingly averted in regards to the Endless King's mercy, [[spoiler:up until TheReveal that it's actually a Tenebrous ''named'' Mercy.]]
** The Croits take this up toeleven—almost eleven: almost all of their terminology is capitalized words.
* CallAHumanAMeatbag: Mocked-By-A-Husband calls humans
*
** All over the
** The Croits take this up to
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** In the third book, [[spoiler: the Endless King.]]
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%% ** In the third book, [[spoiler: the Endless King.]]
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* ChangelingFantasy: Lovingly Deconstructed. [[{{Troperiffic}} Denizen is whisked away from the orphanage he's lived at since he was two to meet a long-lost aunt, discovers he has magic powers, and is introduced to an exciting secret world of adventure and monsters]]... except all that is ''definitely'' [[{{Deconstruction}} not as glamorous as it sounds.]]
** Denizen developed a skeptical view of life and some pretty severe trust issues [[{{ParentalAbandonment}} because of his time at Crosscaper Orphanage]] ([[{{GenreSavvy}} and reading lots of novels with this trope]]), and his war-hardened aunt refuses to talk to him about his parents... [[{{TheReveal}} He eventually learns]] that [[spoiler: Vivian is his mother, who left him in an orphanage because her world got his father killed, and she wanted to keep him away from it. This only ends up sucking him further in, however.]]
** [[{{CrapsackWorld}} The life of the Knights isn't pretty either.]] Joining the Order is a lifetime contract, meaning he'd have to throw away any other future he wanted to become a Knight; he is technically given a choice about it, but there are so many moral strings attached that he feels guilty even ''thinking'' about choosing, and why would he want to return to Crosscaper anyway? The magic is dangerous and unpleasant, his Dawning leaves a permanent impact on his personality since his anger fuels it whether he wants it to or not, and [[{{PowerAtAPrice}} it comes with a Cost.]] The [[{{MagicalSociety}} secret society]] is made up of [[{{HopelessWar}} soldiers engaged in total warfare,]] which is [[{{WarIsHell}} extremely mentally scarring,]] and obviously has a [[{{AnyoneCanDie}} high mortality rate,]] not to mention the [[{{FateWorseThanDeath}} other unearthly horrors]] [[{{AndIMustScream}} that could happen]] due to the [[{{EldritchAbomination}} nature of the monsters they fight.]]
** Denizen developed a skeptical view of life and some pretty severe trust issues [[{{ParentalAbandonment}} because of his time at Crosscaper Orphanage]] ([[{{GenreSavvy}} and reading lots of novels with this trope]]), and his war-hardened aunt refuses to talk to him about his parents... [[{{TheReveal}} He eventually learns]] that [[spoiler: Vivian is his mother, who left him in an orphanage because her world got his father killed, and she wanted to keep him away from it. This only ends up sucking him further in, however.]]
** [[{{CrapsackWorld}} The life of the Knights isn't pretty either.]] Joining the Order is a lifetime contract, meaning he'd have to throw away any other future he wanted to become a Knight; he is technically given a choice about it, but there are so many moral strings attached that he feels guilty even ''thinking'' about choosing, and why would he want to return to Crosscaper anyway? The magic is dangerous and unpleasant, his Dawning leaves a permanent impact on his personality since his anger fuels it whether he wants it to or not, and [[{{PowerAtAPrice}} it comes with a Cost.]] The [[{{MagicalSociety}} secret society]] is made up of [[{{HopelessWar}} soldiers engaged in total warfare,]] which is [[{{WarIsHell}} extremely mentally scarring,]] and obviously has a [[{{AnyoneCanDie}} high mortality rate,]] not to mention the [[{{FateWorseThanDeath}} other unearthly horrors]] [[{{AndIMustScream}} that could happen]] due to the [[{{EldritchAbomination}} nature of the monsters they fight.]]
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* ChangelingFantasy: Lovingly ChangelingFantasy:
** Deconstructed.[[{{Troperiffic}} Denizen is whisked away from the orphanage he's lived at since he was two to meet a long-lost aunt, discovers he has magic powers, and is introduced to an exciting secret world of adventure and monsters]]... monsters... except all that is ''definitely'' [[{{Deconstruction}} not as glamorous as it sounds.]]
**sounds. Denizen developed a skeptical view of life and some pretty severe trust issues [[{{ParentalAbandonment}} because of his time at Crosscaper Orphanage]] ([[{{GenreSavvy}} and Orphanage (and reading lots of novels with this trope]]), trope), and his war-hardened aunt refuses to talk to him about his parents... [[{{TheReveal}} He eventually learns]] learns that [[spoiler: Vivian is his mother, who left him in an orphanage because her world got his father killed, and she wanted to keep him away from it. This only ends up sucking him further in, however.]]
**[[{{CrapsackWorld}} The life of the Knights isn't pretty either.]] either. Joining the Order is a lifetime contract, meaning he'd have to throw away any other future he wanted to become a Knight; he is technically given a choice about it, but there are so many moral strings attached that he feels guilty even ''thinking'' about choosing, and why would he want to return to Crosscaper anyway? The magic is dangerous and unpleasant, his Dawning leaves a permanent impact on his personality since his anger fuels it whether he wants it to or not, and [[{{PowerAtAPrice}} it comes with a Cost.]] Cost. The [[{{MagicalSociety}} secret society]] MagicalSociety is made up of [[{{HopelessWar}} soldiers engaged in total warfare,]] warfare, which is [[{{WarIsHell}} extremely mentally scarring,]] scarring, and obviously has a [[{{AnyoneCanDie}} high mortality rate,]] not rate. %% Not to mention the [[{{FateWorseThanDeath}} other unearthly horrors]] [[{{AndIMustScream}} that could happen]] due to the [[{{EldritchAbomination}} nature of the monsters they fight.]]]]%%
** Deconstructed.
**
**
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* {{Chekhovs Gun}}: Hey, remember the Malleus's hammer in the Emissary's chest? [[spoiler: Yeah, Vivian goes to get that after Grey steals hers.]]
** Simon's birthday also qualifies.
* ChekhovsGunman: The Emissary.
** Simon's birthday also qualifies.
* ChekhovsGunman: The Emissary.
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* {{Chekhovs Gun}}: ChekhovsGun: Hey, remember the Malleus's hammer in the Emissary's chest? [[spoiler: Yeah, Vivian goes to get that after Grey steals hers.]]
%% ** Simon's birthday also qualifies.
%% * ChekhovsGunman: The Emissary.
%% ** Simon's birthday also qualifies.
%% * ChekhovsGunman: The Emissary.
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* ConspicuousGloves: The Knights each wear a pair of black leather gloves to hide the iron from the Cost.
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* ConspicuousGloves: ConspicuousGloves:
** The Knights each wear a pair of black leather gloves to hide the iron from the Cost.
** The Knights each wear a pair of black leather gloves to hide the iron from the Cost.
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* CoolCar: The Jensen Interceptor.
* CreatureHunterOrganization: Deconstructed. The Knights' work is [[{{WarIsHell}} total warfare]], and extremely taxing, physically and mentally. It's a massive responsibility, for them to risk their lives, fight, and die for a whole world of people who will hopefully never even know about what they do.
* CreepyCrows: Malebranche is made of this trope. [[{{IncrediblyLamePun}} Quite literally.]]
* CreatureHunterOrganization: Deconstructed. The Knights' work is [[{{WarIsHell}} total warfare]], and extremely taxing, physically and mentally. It's a massive responsibility, for them to risk their lives, fight, and die for a whole world of people who will hopefully never even know about what they do.
* CreepyCrows: Malebranche is made of this trope. [[{{IncrediblyLamePun}} Quite literally.]]
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%% * CoolCar: The Jensen Interceptor.
* CreatureHunterOrganization: Deconstructed. The Knights' work is[[{{WarIsHell}} total warfare]], warfare, and extremely taxing, physically and mentally. It's a massive responsibility, for them to risk their lives, fight, and die for a whole world of people who will hopefully never even know about what they do.
*CreepyCrows: CreepyCrows:
** Malebranche is made of thistrope. [[{{IncrediblyLamePun}} Quite literally.]]trope.
* CreatureHunterOrganization: Deconstructed. The Knights' work is
*
** Malebranche is made of this
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* {{Curb Stomp Battle}}: Vivian beats [[spoiler:Grey]] in a matter of ''seconds''.
* CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon: “If he so much as catches a cold, the Malleus will melt you both down and use you as scrap.”
* CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon: “If he so much as catches a cold, the Malleus will melt you both down and use you as scrap.”
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* {{Curb Stomp Battle}}: CurbStompBattle: Vivian beats [[spoiler:Grey]] in a matter of ''seconds''.
%% * CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon:“If "If he so much as catches a cold, the Malleus will melt you both down and use you as scrap.”"
%% * CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon:
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* DarkFantasy: It is ''definitely'' horror-fantasy.
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%% * DarkFantasy: It is ''definitely'' horror-fantasy.
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* DeathWail: When she's told that [[spoiler: Vivian is dead]], Abigail starts screaming... except her jaw is clenched so [[{{SubvertedTrope}} no one else could hear it.]]
* DescriptionPorn: Hoo boy. The writing is absolutely ''lovely'', rife with imagery and making use of other beautiful figurative language, so many things are described like this.
* DescriptionPorn: Hoo boy. The writing is absolutely ''lovely'', rife with imagery and making use of other beautiful figurative language, so many things are described like this.
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* DeathWail: When she's told that [[spoiler: Vivian is dead]], Abigail starts screaming... except her jaw is clenched so [[{{SubvertedTrope}} no one else could hear it.]]
it.
%% * DescriptionPorn: Hoo boy. The writing is absolutely ''lovely'', rife with imagery and making use of other beautiful figurative language, so many things are described like this.
%% * DescriptionPorn: Hoo boy. The writing is absolutely ''lovely'', rife with imagery and making use of other beautiful figurative language, so many things are described like this.
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** ''Vivian.'' She's been a Knight for nearly two decades and has risen to the position of Malleus, which in and of itself implies this, but she also [[spoiler: gets shot {{in the back}} at nearly point-blank range, ''survives it'', gets up, and prepares to go back into battle only a few hours later.]]
** Grey never stops fighting. He also [[spoiler: gets [[{{ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice}} impaled]], turns his stomach to iron, and take the Opening Boy off Os Reges Point into the Tenebraic ocean with him. And he survives all that.]]
** Grey never stops fighting. He also [[spoiler: gets [[{{ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice}} impaled]], turns his stomach to iron, and take the Opening Boy off Os Reges Point into the Tenebraic ocean with him. And he survives all that.]]
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** ''Vivian.'' She's been a Knight for nearly two decades and has risen to the position of Malleus, which in and of itself implies this, but she also [[spoiler: gets shot {{in in the back}} back at nearly point-blank range, ''survives it'', gets up, and prepares to go back into battle only a few hours later.]]
** Grey never stops fighting. He also [[spoiler: gets[[{{ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice}} impaled]], ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice, turns his stomach to iron, and take the Opening Boy off Os Reges Point into the Tenebraic ocean with him. And he survives all that.]]
** Grey never stops fighting. He also [[spoiler: gets
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* DiedOnTheirBirthday: {{Defied|Trope}}. [[spoiler: Simon very nearly dies on his birthday]].
* DisappearsIntoLight: Mercy does this a lot... because she ''is'' made of light.
* DisappearsIntoLight: Mercy does this a lot... because she ''is'' made of light.
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%% * DiedOnTheirBirthday: {{Defied|Trope}}. [[spoiler: Simon very nearly dies on his birthday]].
%% * DisappearsIntoLight: Mercy does this a lot... because she ''is'' made of light.
%% * DisappearsIntoLight: Mercy does this a lot... because she ''is'' made of light.
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* DramaticIrony: Denizen and Simon's plotlines. Denizen is motivated by knowing that, even though he's in some very dangerous and unpleasant situations, Simon is safe; Simon, conversely, is able to keep going because Denizen is out there somewhere, away from Crosscaper, and [[{{ActionSurvivor}} Simon needs to be able to warn him when he gets back.]] In reality, ''neither'' of them are safe.
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* DramaticIrony: Denizen and Simon's plotlines. Denizen is motivated by knowing that, even though he's in some very dangerous and unpleasant situations, Simon is safe; Simon, conversely, is able to keep going because Denizen is out there somewhere, away from Crosscaper, and [[{{ActionSurvivor}} Simon needs to be able to warn him when he gets back.]] back] In reality, ''neither'' of them are safe.
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* DullSurprise: Uriel was expecting Greaves's reaction to [[spoiler: the story—and the disproving thereof—of the Redemptress]] to be a bit more... dramatic. Or just to be anything other than a flat “OK.”
* DumbStruck: After [[spoiler: Ambrel is snatched away in the Tenebrae]], Uriel goes through a version of this. He can still speak, but it's only [[{{BrokenRecord}} one sentence.]]
* DyingAlone: A Knight's ultimate fate.
--> '''Grey:''' We die alone, or we die in twos or threes, but we always, ''always'', die in shadow.
* DumbStruck: After [[spoiler: Ambrel is snatched away in the Tenebrae]], Uriel goes through a version of this. He can still speak, but it's only [[{{BrokenRecord}} one sentence.]]
* DyingAlone: A Knight's ultimate fate.
--> '''Grey:''' We die alone, or we die in twos or threes, but we always, ''always'', die in shadow.
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* DullSurprise: Uriel was expecting Greaves's reaction to [[spoiler: the story—and story, and the disproving thereof—of thereof, of the Redemptress]] to be a bit more... more dramatic. Or just to be anything other than a flat “OK.”
"OK."
* DumbStruck: After [[spoiler: Ambrel is snatched away in the Tenebrae]], Uriel goes through a version of this. He can still speak, but it's only[[{{BrokenRecord}} one sentence.]]
sentence.
%% * DyingAlone: A Knight's ultimate fate.
%% --> '''Grey:''' We die alone, or we die in twos or threes, but we always, ''always'', die in shadow.
* DumbStruck: After [[spoiler: Ambrel is snatched away in the Tenebrae]], Uriel goes through a version of this. He can still speak, but it's only
%% * DyingAlone: A Knight's ultimate fate.
%% --> '''Grey:''' We die alone, or we die in twos or threes, but we always, ''always'', die in shadow.
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* EndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: If the Endless King Breaches.
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%% * EndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: If the Endless King Breaches.
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* EvilChancellor: Discussed when Denizen contemplates diplomacy. [[spoiler: Later, after learning about Malebranche being a traitor, [[{{LampshadeHanging}} he wonders whether he counts as a Grand Vizier or not.]]]]
* EvilIsPetty: The Clockwork Three destroy meaninglessly.
* EvilTwin: Inverted (well, [[{{GrayAndGreyMorality}} depending on which side you're looking at it from]]) and Played With. Ambrel could be seen as Uriel's evil twin, or Uriel could be seen as Ambrel's good twin. They start out on the same side, but as the story progresses, Uriel begins having doubts and [[spoiler: eventually preforms a HeelFaceTurn,]] while Ambrel becomes more and more fanatic.
* EvilIsPetty: The Clockwork Three destroy meaninglessly.
* EvilTwin: Inverted (well, [[{{GrayAndGreyMorality}} depending on which side you're looking at it from]]) and Played With. Ambrel could be seen as Uriel's evil twin, or Uriel could be seen as Ambrel's good twin. They start out on the same side, but as the story progresses, Uriel begins having doubts and [[spoiler: eventually preforms a HeelFaceTurn,]] while Ambrel becomes more and more fanatic.
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* EvilChancellor: Discussed when Denizen contemplates diplomacy. [[spoiler: Later, after learning about Malebranche being a traitor, [[{{LampshadeHanging}} he wonders whether he counts as a Grand Vizier or not.]]]]
]]
%% * EvilIsPetty: The Clockwork Three destroy meaninglessly.
%% * EvilTwin: Inverted (well, [[{{GrayAndGreyMorality}} depending on which side you're looking at it from]]) and Played With. Ambrel could be seen as Uriel's evil twin, or Uriel could be seen as Ambrel's good twin. They start out on the same side, but as the story progresses, Uriel begins having doubts and [[spoiler: eventually preforms a HeelFaceTurn,]] while Ambrel becomes more and more fanatic.
%% * EvilIsPetty: The Clockwork Three destroy meaninglessly.
%% * EvilTwin: Inverted (well, [[{{GrayAndGreyMorality}} depending on which side you're looking at it from]]) and Played With. Ambrel could be seen as Uriel's evil twin, or Uriel could be seen as Ambrel's good twin. They start out on the same side, but as the story progresses, Uriel begins having doubts and [[spoiler: eventually preforms a HeelFaceTurn,]] while Ambrel becomes more and more fanatic.
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* ExtraDimensionalShortcut: The Art of Apertura Cant is somewhere between this and [[{{ShadowWalker}} Shadow Walking,]] as it allows Knights to use shadows to enter the Tenebrae and travel through it to anywhere they've already been in the real world.
* ExtremeMeleeRevenge: [[spoiler: Uriel does this to the Redemptress for ruining his Family... as Denizen was trying to make peace with Her.]]
* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Denizen's pupil explodes into iron.]] [[{{Squick}} Yikes.]]
* FactionMotto: The Order of the Borrowed Dark has one--"''Linguae Centum, Sunt Oraque Centum, Ferrea Vox.''"
* ExtremeMeleeRevenge: [[spoiler: Uriel does this to the Redemptress for ruining his Family... as Denizen was trying to make peace with Her.]]
* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Denizen's pupil explodes into iron.]] [[{{Squick}} Yikes.]]
* FactionMotto: The Order of the Borrowed Dark has one--"''Linguae Centum, Sunt Oraque Centum, Ferrea Vox.''"
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* ExtraDimensionalShortcut: The Art of Apertura Cant is somewhere between this and [[{{ShadowWalker}} [[ShadowWalker Shadow Walking,]] Walking]], as it allows Knights to use shadows to enter the Tenebrae and travel through it to anywhere they've already been in the real world.
* ExtremeMeleeRevenge: [[spoiler: Uriel does this to the Redemptress for ruining hisFamily... Family as Denizen was trying to make peace with Her.]]
* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Denizen's pupil explodes into iron.]] [[{{Squick}} Yikes.]]
* FactionMotto: The Order of the Borrowed Dark hasone--"''Linguae one: "''Linguae Centum, Sunt Oraque Centum, Ferrea Vox.''"
* ExtremeMeleeRevenge: [[spoiler: Uriel does this to the Redemptress for ruining his
* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Denizen's pupil explodes into iron.
* FactionMotto: The Order of the Borrowed Dark has
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* FighterMageThief: When the Neophytes fight together—Abigail is the Fighter, Denizen is the Mage, and Simon is the Thief.
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* FighterMageThief: When the Neophytes fight together—Abigail together, Abigail is the Fighter, Denizen is the Mage, and Simon is the Thief.
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* FireForgedFriends: Abigail and Matt.
* FlamingSword: Uriel's Prayer allows him to summon a sword that is literally ''made of fire.''
* FlamingSword: Uriel's Prayer allows him to summon a sword that is literally ''made of fire.''
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%% * FireForgedFriends: Abigail and Matt.
* FlamingSword: Uriel's Prayer allows him to summon a sword that is literally''made made of fire.''
* FlamingSword: Uriel's Prayer allows him to summon a sword that is literally
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*** The off-ness of the strangers foreshadows them being Tenebrous. They avoid the lights, their eyes look wrong, and when asked about their names, they say that they're “new”.
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*** The off-ness offness of the strangers foreshadows them being Tenebrous. They avoid the lights, their eyes look wrong, and when asked about their names, they say that they're “new”."new".
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*** Ackerby hears [[{{TerribleTicking}} ticking.]] Actually, their interrogation of Ackerby [[spoiler: gives a slice into a variant of the process they used on Grey.]]
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*** Ackerby hears [[{{TerribleTicking}} ticking.]] Actually, their ticking. %their interrogation of Ackerby [[spoiler: gives a slice into a variant of the process they used on Grey.]]
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** Simon suggests that Denizen's aunt might have been [[{{PubertySuperpower}} waiting for him to be older,]] and that she might travel a lot and have a [[{{BigFancyHouse}} giant house.]] Turns out he's more right than he thinks.
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** Simon suggests that Denizen's aunt might have been [[{{PubertySuperpower}} been waiting for him to be older,]] older, and that she might travel a lot and have a [[{{BigFancyHouse}} giant house.]] BigFancyHouse. Turns out he's more right than he thinks.
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*** He drives up to Crosscaper at night with no headlights on because [[{{InnateNightVision}} the ''Intueor Lucidum'' lets him see in the dark.]]
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*** He drives up to Crosscaper at night with no headlights on because [[{{InnateNightVision}} the ''Intueor Lucidum'' lets him see in the dark.]]
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*** She also hesitates while saying “I owe it to your parents”, [[spoiler: probably because she was going to say “father” instead.]]
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*** She also hesitates while saying “I "I owe it to your parents”, parents", [[spoiler: probably because she was going to say “father” "father" instead.]]
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** Grey has [[{{WeakWilled}} never been much good at self-control.]]
** “Something has the Tenebrae stirred up.”
** “Something has the Tenebrae stirred up.”
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** Grey has [[{{WeakWilled}} never been much good at self-control.]]
self-control.
%% **“Something "Something has the Tenebrae stirred up.”"
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*** The Clockwork Three have a real person with them; they've wormed into his head and can force him to do things. They also call him “Knight,” and that explosion sure looks like a Cant. [[spoiler: It turns out this person is Grey.]]
*** Them having tasted fire and the “tools often break in the hand” line both reference [[spoiler: the events of eleven years ago, when every attempt of theirs to create a thrall ended in a casualty and Vivian hurt them worse than anyone had before.]]
** Grey taking a while to get back from Rathlath and going expressionless at the mention of the Woman in White. Actually, [[{{BreakTheCutie}} Grey's deterioration as a whole.]]
*** Them having tasted fire and the “tools often break in the hand” line both reference [[spoiler: the events of eleven years ago, when every attempt of theirs to create a thrall ended in a casualty and Vivian hurt them worse than anyone had before.]]
** Grey taking a while to get back from Rathlath and going expressionless at the mention of the Woman in White. Actually, [[{{BreakTheCutie}} Grey's deterioration as a whole.]]
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*** The Clockwork Three have a real person with them; they've wormed into his head and can force him to do things. They also call him “Knight,” "Knight," and that explosion sure looks like a Cant. [[spoiler: It turns out this person is Grey.]]
*** Them having tasted fire and the“tools "tools often break in the hand” hand" line both reference [[spoiler: the events of eleven years ago, when every attempt of theirs to create a thrall ended in a casualty and Vivian hurt them worse than anyone had before.]]
** Grey taking a while to get back from Rathlath and going expressionless at the mention of the Woman in White.Actually, [[{{BreakTheCutie}} Grey's deterioration as a whole.]]
*** Them having tasted fire and the
** Grey taking a while to get back from Rathlath and going expressionless at the mention of the Woman in White.
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** “I like exploring, peering up at all the different worlds.”
** Before she [[spoiler: gives Denizen the Cants]], Mercy says, “Wait long enough and the sun always rises. Do you believe that?” It seems random at the time, but hints at [[spoiler: the fact that the Knights' power was the Tenebrae's sun.]]
*** Actually, all the sun imagery in reference to the Knights' powers. Special mention to Denizen's Dawn being described as like “a hole had been torn between here and the heart of the sun.”
** Before she [[spoiler: gives Denizen the Cants]], Mercy says, “Wait long enough and the sun always rises. Do you believe that?” It seems random at the time, but hints at [[spoiler: the fact that the Knights' power was the Tenebrae's sun.]]
*** Actually, all the sun imagery in reference to the Knights' powers. Special mention to Denizen's Dawn being described as like “a hole had been torn between here and the heart of the sun.”
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%% ** “I "I like exploring, peering up at all the different worlds.”
"
** Before she [[spoiler: gives Denizen the Cants]], Mercy says,“Wait "Wait long enough and the sun always rises. Do you believe that?” that?" It seems random at the time, but hints at [[spoiler: the fact that the Knights' power was the Tenebrae's sun.]]
*** Actually, all ** Aall the sun imagery in reference to the Knights' powers. Special mention to Denizen's Dawn being described as like “a "a hole had been torn between here and the heart of the sun.”"
** Before she [[spoiler: gives Denizen the Cants]], Mercy says,
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** When [[spoiler: Denizen asks who stole the fire from the Endless King, Mercy doesn't answer—she changes the subject and starts talking about the rarity of human and Tenebrous working together, and how it's ended in pain and death every other time.]]
** “You didn't speak to prisoners. They might infect you with dangerous ideas.”
** “You didn't speak to prisoners. They might infect you with dangerous ideas.”
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** When [[spoiler: Denizen asks who stole the fire from the Endless King, Mercy doesn't answer—she answer, she changes the subject and starts talking about the rarity of human and Tenebrous working together, and how it's ended in pain and death every other time.]]
%% **“You "You didn't speak to prisoners. They might infect you with dangerous ideas.”"
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* GallowsHumor: Denizen is very prone to this—he makes jokes about how many near-death experiences he's had, and uses a bit of it to stay calm in [[{{WhamEpisode}} chapter 25.]] Abigail and Grey also do this a couple times.
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* GallowsHumor: Denizen is very prone to this—he this. He makes jokes about how many near-death experiences he's had, and uses a bit of it to stay calm in [[{{WhamEpisode}} chapter 25.]] 25. Abigail and Grey also do this a couple times.
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* GeometricMagic: Justified. [[spoiler:Mercy's cage]] is a poorly-drawn circle on the ground. Thoroughly Discussed and Exploited by [[{{GenreSavvy}} Denizen,]] who realizes instantly that it's probably very dangerous.
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* GeometricMagic: Justified. [[spoiler:Mercy's cage]] is a poorly-drawn circle on the ground. Thoroughly Discussed and Exploited by [[{{GenreSavvy}} Denizen,]] Denizen, who realizes instantly that it's probably very dangerous.
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* GrayingMorality: The series presented itself at first as a [[{{BlackAndWhiteMorality}} traditional good vs. evil story.]] This quickly became muddy ''at best'' in book one, and the conflict became even greyer in book two. The Tenebrous aren't monsters—they're complex, individual creatures capable of feeling love and grief and everything in between.
* HairFlip: Grey's {{character tic}}. Played for Drama when it's used to nail home [[spoiler: just what the Three have done to him.]]
* HalfIdenticalTwins: Uriel and Ambrel Croit, Justified due to their ''whole family'' looking [[{{UncannyFamilyResemblance}} creepily similar.]]
* HairFlip: Grey's {{character tic}}. Played for Drama when it's used to nail home [[spoiler: just what the Three have done to him.]]
* HalfIdenticalTwins: Uriel and Ambrel Croit, Justified due to their ''whole family'' looking [[{{UncannyFamilyResemblance}} creepily similar.]]
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* GrayingMorality: The series presented itself at first as a [[{{BlackAndWhiteMorality}} [[BlackAndWhiteMorality traditional good vs. evil story.]] This quickly became muddy ''at best'' in book one, and the conflict became even greyer in book two. The Tenebrous aren't monsters—they're monsters; they're complex, individual creatures capable of feeling love and grief and everything in between.
* HairFlip: Grey's{{character tic}}.character tic. Played for Drama when it's used to nail home [[spoiler: just what the Three have done to him.]]
* HalfIdenticalTwins: Uriel and Ambrel Croit, Justified due to their ''whole family'' looking[[{{UncannyFamilyResemblance}} creepily similar.]]
* HairFlip: Grey's
* HalfIdenticalTwins: Uriel and Ambrel Croit, Justified due to their ''whole family'' looking
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* HeroicSacrifice
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* HeroicSacrificeHeroicSacrifice:
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* HeroicWillpower: Invoked into a Double Subversion. [[spoiler:It's implied that Grey tried to fight the Three's control, but either failed or became [[{{DespairEventHorizon}} worn out.]] However, Denizen attempts to [[{{TalkingTheMonsterToDeath}} convince him to fight it again...]] and it ''works''.]]
* HeroWithAUniqueName: Most everyone else has a real name (Vivian, Simon, Abigail, etc.) and then there's ''Denizen.''
* HeroWithAUniqueName: Most everyone else has a real name (Vivian, Simon, Abigail, etc.) and then there's ''Denizen.''
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* HeroicWillpower: Invoked into a Double Subversion. [[spoiler:It's implied that Grey tried to fight the Three's control, but either failed or became [[{{DespairEventHorizon}} worn out.]] out. However, Denizen attempts to [[{{TalkingTheMonsterToDeath}} convince him to fight it again...]] again... and it ''works''.works.]]
*HeroWithAUniqueName: HeroWithAUniqueName:
** Most everyone else has a real name (Vivian, Simon, Abigail, etc.) and then there's ''Denizen.''
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** Most everyone else has a real name (Vivian, Simon, Abigail, etc.) and then there's ''Denizen.''
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''But someone did show up at Crosscaper.''\\
''Shut up.''\\
''I wish he was here now.''
''Shut up.''\\
''I wish he was here now.''
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Jack and D'Aubigny. She only comes up to his ''chest''.
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Jack and D'Aubigny. She only comes up to his ''chest''.chest.
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* InsistentTerminology: Every Knight has their own, much to Denizen's confusion: Vivian hates the word "[[{{MagicByAnyOtherName}} magic,]]" D'Aubigny insists that their fight against the Tenebrous is pest control and not "war," and Grey says Tenebrous aren't [[{{NotUsingTheZWord}} monsters]].
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* InsistentTerminology: Every Knight has their own, much to Denizen's confusion: Vivian hates the word "[[{{MagicByAnyOtherName}} magic,]]" "magic", D'Aubigny insists that their fight against the Tenebrous is pest control and not "war," and Grey says Tenebrous aren't [[{{NotUsingTheZWord}} monsters]].monsters.
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: Denizen and Grey.
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%% * IntergenerationalFriendship: Denizen and Grey.
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* InvisibilityFlicker: [[spoiler:Simon]] inverts this, flickering into {{invisibility}} (or at least translucency) several times.
* InMediasRes: ''The Endless King'' starts off with a prologue from Director Ackerby's perspective involving what seems like a Breach at Crosscaper and Denizen asking for help. The first chapter takes place “some time earlier.” Around the middle of the book, we get the context of that scene from Denizen's perspective.
* IronicEcho: [[{{TakeThat}} “I guess I'm just a blunt instrument.”]]
* ICallItVera: Denizen calls his knife “Falter” to invoke this trope.
* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Played With. [[spoiler:The Clockwork Three want Vivian to kill Grey because they think it'd be fun. Once Grey makes it perfectly clear that he has to fight her, she doesn't even try to talk him back and ends up neutralizing--but not killing--him.]]
* IResembleThatRemark: “I am very calm,” hissed Mercy. After [[spoiler: giving an implied war threat.]]
* JigsawPuzzlePlot: [[{{Foreshadowing}} Oh]] [[{{RewatchBonus}} yeah.]] The book has two major plot threads that don't converge until [[{{WhamEpisode}} very late in the story,]] with each picking up many more questions along the way. [[{{LockedOutOfTheLoop}} No one explains much to Denizen about anything,]] and nothing he uncovers about his parents gives him answers either, only deepening the mystery further. Simon, meanwhile, has no sources of information at all, and [[{{MindScrew}} the reader has only a minimally better idea of what's going on than he does.]] None of this is helped by the fact that the Knights know virtually ''nothing'' about the Tenebrous, and a lot of their prior notions and ideas were called into question or straight-up debunked by later events and reveals, and new puzzle pieces were brought up right up until the end of the book. And though the major [[{{DrivingQuestion}} Driving Questions]] [[{{TheReveal}} have been answered]] and some other mysteries explained by the end of the first book, [[{{SequelHook}} so there's still a lot left open.]]
* InMediasRes: ''The Endless King'' starts off with a prologue from Director Ackerby's perspective involving what seems like a Breach at Crosscaper and Denizen asking for help. The first chapter takes place “some time earlier.” Around the middle of the book, we get the context of that scene from Denizen's perspective.
* IronicEcho: [[{{TakeThat}} “I guess I'm just a blunt instrument.”]]
* ICallItVera: Denizen calls his knife “Falter” to invoke this trope.
* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Played With. [[spoiler:The Clockwork Three want Vivian to kill Grey because they think it'd be fun. Once Grey makes it perfectly clear that he has to fight her, she doesn't even try to talk him back and ends up neutralizing--but not killing--him.]]
* IResembleThatRemark: “I am very calm,” hissed Mercy. After [[spoiler: giving an implied war threat.]]
* JigsawPuzzlePlot: [[{{Foreshadowing}} Oh]] [[{{RewatchBonus}} yeah.]] The book has two major plot threads that don't converge until [[{{WhamEpisode}} very late in the story,]] with each picking up many more questions along the way. [[{{LockedOutOfTheLoop}} No one explains much to Denizen about anything,]] and nothing he uncovers about his parents gives him answers either, only deepening the mystery further. Simon, meanwhile, has no sources of information at all, and [[{{MindScrew}} the reader has only a minimally better idea of what's going on than he does.]] None of this is helped by the fact that the Knights know virtually ''nothing'' about the Tenebrous, and a lot of their prior notions and ideas were called into question or straight-up debunked by later events and reveals, and new puzzle pieces were brought up right up until the end of the book. And though the major [[{{DrivingQuestion}} Driving Questions]] [[{{TheReveal}} have been answered]] and some other mysteries explained by the end of the first book, [[{{SequelHook}} so there's still a lot left open.]]
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* InvisibilityFlicker: [[spoiler:Simon]] inverts this, flickering into {{invisibility}} invisibility (or at least translucency) several times.
* InMediasRes: ''The Endless King'' starts off with a prologue from Director Ackerby's perspective involving what seems like a Breach at Crosscaper and Denizen asking for help. The first chapter takes place“some "some time earlier.” " Around the middle of the book, we get the context of that scene from Denizen's perspective.
%% * IronicEcho: [[{{TakeThat}}“I "I guess I'm just a blunt instrument.”]]
"]]
* ICallItVera: Denizen calls his knife“Falter” "Falter" to invoke this trope.
* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Played With. [[spoiler:The Clockwork Three want Vivian to kill Grey because they think it'd be fun. Once Grey makes it perfectly clear that he has to fight her, she doesn't even try to talk him back and ends upneutralizing--but neutralizing (but not killing--him.killing) him.]]
* IResembleThatRemark:“I "I am very calm,” calm," hissed Mercy. After [[spoiler: giving an implied war threat.]]
* JigsawPuzzlePlot:[[{{Foreshadowing}} Oh]] [[{{RewatchBonus}} yeah.]] The book has two major plot threads that don't converge until [[{{WhamEpisode}} very late in the story,]] story, with each picking up many more questions along the way. [[{{LockedOutOfTheLoop}} No one explains much to Denizen about anything,]] anything, and nothing he uncovers about his parents gives him answers either, only deepening the mystery further. Simon, meanwhile, has no sources of information at all, and [[{{MindScrew}} the reader has only a minimally better idea of what's going on than he does.]] does. None of this is helped by the fact that the Knights know virtually ''nothing'' about the Tenebrous, and a lot of their prior notions and ideas were called into question or straight-up debunked by later events and reveals, and new puzzle pieces were brought up right up until the end of the book. And though the major [[{{DrivingQuestion}} Driving Questions]] [[{{TheReveal}} {{DrivingQuestion|s}} have been answered]] answered and some other mysteries explained by the end of the first book, [[{{SequelHook}} so there's still a lot left open.]]
* InMediasRes: ''The Endless King'' starts off with a prologue from Director Ackerby's perspective involving what seems like a Breach at Crosscaper and Denizen asking for help. The first chapter takes place
%% * IronicEcho: [[{{TakeThat}}
* ICallItVera: Denizen calls his knife
* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Played With. [[spoiler:The Clockwork Three want Vivian to kill Grey because they think it'd be fun. Once Grey makes it perfectly clear that he has to fight her, she doesn't even try to talk him back and ends up
* IResembleThatRemark:
* JigsawPuzzlePlot:
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* KillTheOnesYouLove: [[spoiler:Poor Grey. He tries to MercyKill Vivian and Denizen in order to prevent the Three from subjecting them to the [[{{AndIMustScream}} kind]] [[{{FateWorseThanDeath}} of]] [[{{MindRape}} torture]] he was put through, and give them a quick death. But while he was dealing with the Hardwicks, [[{{FailureToSaveMurder}} he knew the Three were at Seraphim Row,]] and he was under the impression that they had killed ''everyone'' until Vivian told him much later that only D'Aubigny was dead.]]
* KnightErrant: The Knights Peregrine.
* LampreyMouth: Dragon is described as having one.
* LanguageOfMagic: Kind of. The Cants are in a magic language, but it isn't exactly language; it's elemental, like speaking with the senses of nature.
* LastNameBasis: D'Aubigny, Jack, and Greaves.
* KnightErrant: The Knights Peregrine.
* LampreyMouth: Dragon is described as having one.
* LanguageOfMagic: Kind of. The Cants are in a magic language, but it isn't exactly language; it's elemental, like speaking with the senses of nature.
* LastNameBasis: D'Aubigny, Jack, and Greaves.
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* KillTheOnesYouLove: [[spoiler:Poor Grey. He tries to MercyKill Vivian and Denizen in order to prevent the Three from subjecting them to the [[{{AndIMustScream}} kind]] [[{{FateWorseThanDeath}} of]] [[{{MindRape}} torture]] kind of torture he was put through, and give them a quick death. But while he was dealing with the Hardwicks, [[{{FailureToSaveMurder}} he knew the Three were at Seraphim Row,]] Row, and he was under the impression that they had killed ''everyone'' until Vivian told him much later that only D'Aubigny was dead.]]
%% * KnightErrant: The Knights Peregrine.
%% * LampreyMouth: Dragon is described as having one.
%% * LanguageOfMagic: Kind of. The Cants are in a magic language, but it isn't exactly language; it's elemental, like speaking with the senses of nature.
%% * LastNameBasis: D'Aubigny, Jack, and Greaves.
%% * KnightErrant: The Knights Peregrine.
%% * LampreyMouth: Dragon is described as having one.
%% * LanguageOfMagic: Kind of. The Cants are in a magic language, but it isn't exactly language; it's elemental, like speaking with the senses of nature.
%% * LastNameBasis: D'Aubigny, Jack, and Greaves.
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* LetterMotif: '''Gre'''y and '''Gre'''aves, probably because [[spoiler: they're [[{{Foil}} foils]].]]
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Denizen feels like the other Knights are hiding something from him throughout most of the book, both about Knighthood in general and about his parents.
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Denizen feels like the other Knights are hiding something from him throughout most of the book, both about Knighthood in general and about his parents.
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* LetterMotif: '''Gre'''y and '''Gre'''aves, probably because [[spoiler: they're [[{{Foil}} foils]].]]
[[{{Foil|s}}]]
*LockedOutOfTheLoop: LockedOutOfTheLoop:
** Denizen feels like the other Knights are hiding something from him throughout most of the book, both about Knighthood in general and about his parents.
*
** Denizen feels like the other Knights are hiding something from him throughout most of the book, both about Knighthood in general and about his parents.
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* LockAndLoadMontage: An entire chapter is devoted to this.
* LongList: Denizen rattles one off when Mercy asks what he's nervous about. It ends with “so many things.”
* LoopHoleAbuse: [[spoiler: The Clockwork Three aren't very specific in their orders for Grey, [[{{ExactWords}} so he uses this to fight their control.]]]]
** The deal with the Forever Court was no hammers at the Concilium. They never said anything about [[{{MoreDakka}} obscene amounts of explosives]] in the floor.
* LoveObstructingParents: Vivian [[{{Understatement}} isn't too accepting]] of Denizen having a crush on a Tenebrous...
* LongList: Denizen rattles one off when Mercy asks what he's nervous about. It ends with “so many things.”
* LoopHoleAbuse: [[spoiler: The Clockwork Three aren't very specific in their orders for Grey, [[{{ExactWords}} so he uses this to fight their control.]]]]
** The deal with the Forever Court was no hammers at the Concilium. They never said anything about [[{{MoreDakka}} obscene amounts of explosives]] in the floor.
* LoveObstructingParents: Vivian [[{{Understatement}} isn't too accepting]] of Denizen having a crush on a Tenebrous...
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%% * LockAndLoadMontage: An entire chapter is devoted to this.
* LongList: Denizen rattles one off when Mercy asks what he's nervous about. It ends with“so "so many things.”
"
*LoopHoleAbuse: LoopHoleAbuse:
** [[spoiler: The Clockwork Three aren't very specific in their orders for Grey,[[{{ExactWords}} so he uses this to fight their control.]]]]
]]
** The deal with the Forever Court was no hammers at the Concilium. They never said anything about[[{{MoreDakka}} the obscene amounts of explosives]] explosives in the floor.
* LoveObstructingParents: Vivian[[{{Understatement}} isn't too accepting]] accepting of Denizen having a crush on a Tenebrous...
* LongList: Denizen rattles one off when Mercy asks what he's nervous about. It ends with
*
** [[spoiler: The Clockwork Three aren't very specific in their orders for Grey,
** The deal with the Forever Court was no hammers at the Concilium. They never said anything about
* LoveObstructingParents: Vivian
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* LuminescentBlush: Shockingly and hilariously Justified. Due to the fire in their blood, every single Knight can get this quite literally—and usually ''does'', to a small extent, ''as a default.''
* MagicKnight: The Knights of the Borrowed Dark, obviously. They have powers that can be used to defeat the Tenebrous, but also [[{{FightsLikeANormal}} train extensively at hand-to-hand combat]] so they don't have to [[{{PowerAtAPrice}} use their powers]] unless it's absolutely necessary.
* MagicalSociety: The Order of the Borrowed Dark.
* MagicKnight: The Knights of the Borrowed Dark, obviously. They have powers that can be used to defeat the Tenebrous, but also [[{{FightsLikeANormal}} train extensively at hand-to-hand combat]] so they don't have to [[{{PowerAtAPrice}} use their powers]] unless it's absolutely necessary.
* MagicalSociety: The Order of the Borrowed Dark.
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* LuminescentBlush: Shockingly and hilariously Justified. Due to the fire in their blood, every single Knight can get this quite literally—and literally, and usually ''does'', to a small extent, ''as as a default.''
default.
* MagicKnight: The Knights of the Borrowed Dark, obviously. They have powers that can be used to defeat the Tenebrous, but also[[{{FightsLikeANormal}} train extensively at hand-to-hand combat]] combat so they don't have to [[{{PowerAtAPrice}} use their powers]] powers unless it's absolutely necessary.
%% * MagicalSociety: The Order of the Borrowed Dark.
* MagicKnight: The Knights of the Borrowed Dark, obviously. They have powers that can be used to defeat the Tenebrous, but also
%% * MagicalSociety: The Order of the Borrowed Dark.
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* ManchurianAgent: [[spoiler: Grey, the Clockwork Three's thrall.]]
* MassOhCrap: Simon, Abigail, Darcie, and Vivian ''all'' have this reaction when [[spoiler:Uriel]] mentions Denizen having taught him the Art of Apertura... in front of Greaves.
* MassOhCrap: Simon, Abigail, Darcie, and Vivian ''all'' have this reaction when [[spoiler:Uriel]] mentions Denizen having taught him the Art of Apertura... in front of Greaves.
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%% * ManchurianAgent: [[spoiler: Grey, the Clockwork Three's thrall.]]
*MassOhCrap: MassOhCrap:
** Simon, Abigail, Darcie, and Vivian ''all'' have this reaction when [[spoiler:Uriel]] mentions Denizen having taught him the Art of Apertura... in front of Greaves.
*
** Simon, Abigail, Darcie, and Vivian ''all'' have this reaction when [[spoiler:Uriel]] mentions Denizen having taught him the Art of Apertura... in front of Greaves.
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* MasterSwordsman: D'Aubigny and Grey.
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%% * MasterSwordsman: D'Aubigny and Grey.
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** Tenebrae means “darkness” in Latin, and it's also the name of a candle-extinguishing festival.
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** Tenebrae means “darkness” "darkness" in Latin, and it's also the name of a candle-extinguishing festival.
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** Malleus means hammer.
** Hardwick means something along the lines of “herd and outlying farm,” or “brave in battle.” Denizen's claim that it translates to “safety through caution” might reference the armorial motto of the Duke of Devonshire.
** Hardwick means something along the lines of “herd and outlying farm,” or “brave in battle.” Denizen's claim that it translates to “safety through caution” might reference the armorial motto of the Duke of Devonshire.
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** Malleus means hammer.
"hammer".
** Hardwick means something along the lines of“herd "herd and outlying farm,” farm," or “brave "brave in battle.” " Denizen's claim that it translates to “safety "safety through caution” caution" might reference the armorial motto of the Duke of Devonshire.
** Hardwick means something along the lines of
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** Simon means “listening” or “he has heard” and Hayes means “descendant of Aodh,” who is a fire god.
** Graham means “grey home” and [=McCarron=] means “little dark one.” His nickname Grey [[spoiler: references his PTSD and how he's [[{{ConflictingLoyalty}} stuck between light and dark]].]]
** Graham means “grey home” and [=McCarron=] means “little dark one.” His nickname Grey [[spoiler: references his PTSD and how he's [[{{ConflictingLoyalty}} stuck between light and dark]].]]
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** Simon means “listening” "listening" or “he "he has heard” heard" and Hayes means “descendant "descendant of Aodh,” Aodh," who is a fire god.
** Graham means“grey home” "grey home" and [=McCarron=] means “little "little dark one.” " His nickname Grey [[spoiler: references his PTSD and how he's [[{{ConflictingLoyalty}} stuck between light and dark]].dark.]]
** Graham means
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** Corinne means “beautiful maiden” and her last name references UsefulNotes/JulieDAubigny.
** Darcie means “of the darkness” and wright is a name for a craftsman.
** A falx is a type of sickle, and Abigail means “my father is joy.”
** The surname Croit. It means “to place one's heart,” or “to believe,” but has several other possible significant meanings. It's related to croft—an enclosed area of land—which contrasts with the meaning of Hardwick, and can mean “raw” or “fresh blood.”
* MeaningfulEcho: These are all over the place.
** “Well, you know what they say about plans.”
** "I told you not to overthink stuff."
** “If not me, who else?”
* MentorOccupationalHazard: An interesting case with [[{{BigBrotherMentor}} Grey.]] While he doesn't actually ''die'', [[{{BreakTheCutie}} he is put through a lot of shit,]] and [[{{DespairEventHorizon}} breaks in a way]] that spurs on Denizen's character development similarly to what this trope invokes. The trope is, however, played straight with [[spoiler: D'Aubigny.]]
* MercifulMinion: Inverted and then played straight. [[spoiler:Grey's orders were just to keep the Hardwicks at Crosscaper until the Three returned, but he decides to kill them instead... believing it to be a [[{{MercyKill}} mercy.]] He ends up letting Denizen leave, which goes against his own plans and his orders.]]
** Darcie means “of the darkness” and wright is a name for a craftsman.
** A falx is a type of sickle, and Abigail means “my father is joy.”
** The surname Croit. It means “to place one's heart,” or “to believe,” but has several other possible significant meanings. It's related to croft—an enclosed area of land—which contrasts with the meaning of Hardwick, and can mean “raw” or “fresh blood.”
* MeaningfulEcho: These are all over the place.
** “Well, you know what they say about plans.”
** "I told you not to overthink stuff."
** “If not me, who else?”
* MentorOccupationalHazard: An interesting case with [[{{BigBrotherMentor}} Grey.]] While he doesn't actually ''die'', [[{{BreakTheCutie}} he is put through a lot of shit,]] and [[{{DespairEventHorizon}} breaks in a way]] that spurs on Denizen's character development similarly to what this trope invokes. The trope is, however, played straight with [[spoiler: D'Aubigny.]]
* MercifulMinion: Inverted and then played straight. [[spoiler:Grey's orders were just to keep the Hardwicks at Crosscaper until the Three returned, but he decides to kill them instead... believing it to be a [[{{MercyKill}} mercy.]] He ends up letting Denizen leave, which goes against his own plans and his orders.]]
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** Corinne means “beautiful maiden” "beautiful maiden" and her last name references UsefulNotes/JulieDAubigny.
** Darcie means“of "of the darkness” darkness" and wright is a name for a craftsman.
** A falx is a type of sickle, and Abigail means“my "my father is joy.”
"
** The surname Croit. It means“to "to place one's heart,” heart," or “to believe,” "to believe," but has several other possible significant meanings. It's related to croft—an enclosed area of land—which contrasts with the meaning of Hardwick, and can mean “raw” "raw" or “fresh "fresh blood.”
* MeaningfulEcho: These are all over the place.
** “Well, you know what they say about plans.”
** "I told you not to overthink stuff."
%% * MeaningfulEcho: These are all over the place.
%% **“If "Well, you know what they say about plans."
%% ** "I told you not to overthink stuff."
%% ** "If not me, whoelse?”
else?"
* MentorOccupationalHazard: An interesting case with[[{{BigBrotherMentor}} Grey.]] BigBrotherMentor Grey. While he doesn't actually ''die'', [[{{BreakTheCutie}} die, he is put through a lot of shit,]] lot, and [[{{DespairEventHorizon}} breaks in a way]] way that spurs on Denizen's character development similarly to what this trope invokes. The %%The trope is, however, played straight with [[spoiler: D'Aubigny.]]
]]%%
* MercifulMinion: Inverted and then played straight. [[spoiler:Grey's orders were just to keep the Hardwicks at Crosscaper until the Three returned, but he decides to kill them instead... believing it to be a[[{{MercyKill}} mercy.]] MercyKill. He ends up letting Denizen leave, which goes against his own plans and his orders.]]
** Darcie means
** A falx is a type of sickle, and Abigail means
** The surname Croit. It means
* MeaningfulEcho: These are all over the place.
** “Well, you know what they say about plans.”
** "I told you not to overthink stuff.
%% * MeaningfulEcho: These are all over the place.
%% **
%% ** "I told you not to overthink stuff."
%% ** "If not me, who
* MentorOccupationalHazard: An interesting case with
* MercifulMinion: Inverted and then played straight. [[spoiler:Grey's orders were just to keep the Hardwicks at Crosscaper until the Three returned, but he decides to kill them instead... believing it to be a
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* MetallicMotifs: Lots. Iron, gold, bronze...
* MindRape: [[spoiler:Thralldom is absolutely ''horrible.'' The Clockwork Three literally got inside of Grey's head, forced him to do things for them, and played with his memories.]]
* MoodWhiplash
** Denizen running from the Woman in White in Rathláth is a scary, tense scene... and then he hilariously falls on top of a four-year old girl. It whips back quickly, though.
** “Mr. Gilligan looked up, [[{{HopeSpot}} their eyes meeting for one long moment,]] and then [[spoiler: [[{{BreadEggsMilkSquick}} his car exploded.]]]]”
** The end of chapter 24 is ''made'' of this.
* MyBloodRunsHot: Due to their powers, emotionally-flooded Knights can literally ''raise the temperature of a room they're in.''
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
** The Endless King
** Dragon
* NeverFoundTheBody: Eleven years ago, [[spoiler: the Clockwork Three wiped out Vivian's cadre one by one... but they were taken alive, so no one was able to record even how they died.]] [[{{FridgeHorror}} Denizen figures out the reason for this later.]]
* MindRape: [[spoiler:Thralldom is absolutely ''horrible.'' The Clockwork Three literally got inside of Grey's head, forced him to do things for them, and played with his memories.]]
* MoodWhiplash
** Denizen running from the Woman in White in Rathláth is a scary, tense scene... and then he hilariously falls on top of a four-year old girl. It whips back quickly, though.
** “Mr. Gilligan looked up, [[{{HopeSpot}} their eyes meeting for one long moment,]] and then [[spoiler: [[{{BreadEggsMilkSquick}} his car exploded.]]]]”
** The end of chapter 24 is ''made'' of this.
* MyBloodRunsHot: Due to their powers, emotionally-flooded Knights can literally ''raise the temperature of a room they're in.''
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
** The Endless King
** Dragon
* NeverFoundTheBody: Eleven years ago, [[spoiler: the Clockwork Three wiped out Vivian's cadre one by one... but they were taken alive, so no one was able to record even how they died.]] [[{{FridgeHorror}} Denizen figures out the reason for this later.]]
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%% * MetallicMotifs: Lots. Iron, gold, bronze...
* MindRape: [[spoiler:Thralldom is absolutely''horrible.'' horrible. The Clockwork Three literally got inside of Grey's head, forced him to do things for them, and played with his memories.]]
*MoodWhiplash
**MoodWhiplash: Denizen running from the Woman in White in Rathláth is a scary, tense scene... and then he hilariously falls on top of a four-year old girl. It whips back quickly, though.
%% **“Mr. "Mr. Gilligan looked up, [[{{HopeSpot}} [HopeSpot}} their eyes meeting for one long moment,]] and then [[spoiler: [[{{BreadEggsMilkSquick}} his car exploded.]]]]”
]]]]"
%% ** The end of chapter 24 is ''made'' of this.
* MyBloodRunsHot: Due to their powers, emotionally-flooded Knights can literally''raise raise the temperature of a room they're in.''
in.
%% * NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
%% ** The Endless King
%% ** Dragon
*NeverFoundTheBody: NeverFoundTheBody:
** Eleven years ago, [[spoiler: the Clockwork Three wiped out Vivian's cadre one by one... but they were taken alive, so no one was able to record even how they died.]] [[{{FridgeHorror}} Denizen figures out the reason for this later.]]
* MindRape: [[spoiler:Thralldom is absolutely
*
**
%% **
%% ** The end of chapter 24 is ''made'' of this.
* MyBloodRunsHot: Due to their powers, emotionally-flooded Knights can literally
%% * NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
%% ** The Endless King
%% ** Dragon
*
** Eleven years ago, [[spoiler: the Clockwork Three wiped out Vivian's cadre one by one... but they were taken alive, so no one was able to record even how they died.
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* NotQuiteDead
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* NotQuiteDeadNotQuiteDead:
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* TheOrder
* OrphansOrdeal: Lampshaded. Denizen has pretty severe trust issues [[{{ParentalAbandonment}} as a result of this,]] and is desperate to know ''anything'' about his parents. Grey [[{{MysteriousPast}} hasn't said much about his past]] other than that he ''is'' an orphan, but given the [[{{DullEyesOfUnhappiness}} negative reaction he displays]] whenever he brings it up, this trope is ''strongly implied''. Simon actually seems to be the best off when it comes to this, but it still affects him.
* OrphansOrdeal: Lampshaded. Denizen has pretty severe trust issues [[{{ParentalAbandonment}} as a result of this,]] and is desperate to know ''anything'' about his parents. Grey [[{{MysteriousPast}} hasn't said much about his past]] other than that he ''is'' an orphan, but given the [[{{DullEyesOfUnhappiness}} negative reaction he displays]] whenever he brings it up, this trope is ''strongly implied''. Simon actually seems to be the best off when it comes to this, but it still affects him.
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%% * TheOrder
* OrphansOrdeal: Lampshaded. Denizen has pretty severe trust issues[[{{ParentalAbandonment}} as a result of this,]] this, and is desperate to know ''anything'' about his parents. Grey [[{{MysteriousPast}} hasn't said much about his past]] past] other than that he ''is'' an orphan, but given the [[{{DullEyesOfUnhappiness}} negative reaction he displays]] displays whenever he brings it up, this trope is ''strongly implied''.strongly implied. Simon actually seems to be the best off when it comes to this, but it still affects him.
* OrphansOrdeal: Lampshaded. Denizen has pretty severe trust issues
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* PhlebotinumOverload: Mercy gave Denizen knowledge of all seventy-eight Cants, which he can now use at will and with minimal Cost. Cool, right?! Well... actually, no, [[{{BlessedWithSuck}} it sucks.]] The Cants are still WildMagic, and Denizen has an extremely difficult time controlling them. There's a reason most Knights only specialize in a select few of them; they want to be used, and it's painful.
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* PhlebotinumOverload: Mercy gave Denizen knowledge of all seventy-eight Cants, which he can now use at will and with minimal Cost. Cool, right?! Well... actually, no, [[{{BlessedWithSuck}} it sucks.]] The Cants are still WildMagic, and Denizen has an extremely difficult time controlling them. There's a reason most Knights only specialize in a select few of them; they want to be used, and it's painful.
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** So much of the second book involves the main characters purposefully withholding information from Greaves. And Vivian being vague with Denizen.
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%% ** So much of the second book involves the main characters purposefully withholding information from Greaves. And Vivian being vague with Denizen.
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* PowerDegeneration: See PowerAtAPrice above.
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%% * PowerDegeneration: See PowerAtAPrice above.
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* PowerIncontinence: Zig Zagged. It ''is'' possible to control them, with [[{{TrainingTheGiftOfMagic}} extensive training]], but even then it's hard; [[{{WildMagic}} the power is triggered by strong emotions and needs to be tamped down.]] Most characters, especially the experienced Knights, are able to prevent any accidents from happening... but can still be seen holding their power when angry, and it leaks if used when they're emotionally unstable.
* PreventTheWar: The reason it's so important to [[spoiler:find and return the Endless King's mercy.]] The Knights are already at war with the Tenebrous, but if the Endless King Breaches, [[{{BrokenMasquerade}} it'll become public.]]
* PrimalFear: The dark.
* PropheticName: ''Simon Hayes''. See MeaningfulName.
* PreventTheWar: The reason it's so important to [[spoiler:find and return the Endless King's mercy.]] The Knights are already at war with the Tenebrous, but if the Endless King Breaches, [[{{BrokenMasquerade}} it'll become public.]]
* PrimalFear: The dark.
* PropheticName: ''Simon Hayes''. See MeaningfulName.
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* PowerIncontinence: Zig Zagged. Zigzagged. It ''is'' possible to control them, with [[{{TrainingTheGiftOfMagic}} extensive training]], training, but even then it's hard; [[{{WildMagic}} the hard. The power is triggered by strong emotions and needs to be tamped down.]] down. Most characters, especially the experienced Knights, are able to prevent any accidents from happening... happening but can still be seen holding their power when angry, and it leaks if used when they're emotionally unstable.
* PreventTheWar: The reason it's so important to [[spoiler:find and return the Endless King's mercy.]] The Knights are already at war with the Tenebrous, but if the Endless King Breaches,[[{{BrokenMasquerade}} it'll become public.]]
public.
%% * PrimalFear: The dark.
%% * PropheticName: ''Simon Hayes''. See MeaningfulName.
* PreventTheWar: The reason it's so important to [[spoiler:find and return the Endless King's mercy.]] The Knights are already at war with the Tenebrous, but if the Endless King Breaches,
%% * PrimalFear: The dark.
%% * PropheticName: ''Simon Hayes''. See MeaningfulName.
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* PubliclyDiscussingTheSecret: Grey and Denizen do this twice, and though the first time was late at night in an empty cafe, the second was in a crowded park and, much to Denizen's dismay, Grey decided to [[{{HavingABlast}} use a Cant.]]
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* PubliclyDiscussingTheSecret: Grey and Denizen do this twice, and though the first time was late at night in an empty cafe, the second was in a crowded park and, much to Denizen's dismay, Grey decided to [[{{HavingABlast}} use a Cant.]]
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* PunnyName: Downplayed, but still... [[spoiler: The [[{{ConflictingLoyalty}} conflicted]] character with [[{{AmbiguouslyEvil}} questionable motives]] and [[{{AlternateCharacterInterpretation}} ambiguous actions]] is [[{{MeaningfulName}} nicknamed]] ''[[{{GreyAndGrayMorality}} Grey]]'']]? Gee, [[{{SarcasmMode}} I wonder why.]]
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%% * PunnyName: Downplayed, but still... [[spoiler: The [[{{ConflictingLoyalty}} conflicted]] character with [[{{AmbiguouslyEvil}} questionable motives]] and [[{{AlternateCharacterInterpretation}} ambiguous actions]] is [[{{MeaningfulName}} nicknamed]] ''[[{{GreyAndGrayMorality}} Grey]]'']]? Gee, [[{{SarcasmMode}} I wonder why.]]
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* RageBreakingPoint: Interestingly, Denizen manages to reach this several times over the course of the book, probably because he never gets the answers he's looking for [[spoiler: until the last one.]]
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* RageBreakingPoint: Interestingly, Denizen manages to reach this several times over the course of the book, probably because he never gets the answers he's looking for [[spoiler: until the last one.]]
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* RedOniBlueOni: Denizen and Simon, respectively. Denizen is skeptical, driven, and short-tempered, while Simon is more calm, controlled, and relaxed. This is further represented by their [[spoiler:Dawnings. Denizen's power [[{{BurningWithAnger}} manifested as raw and angry fire]]; Simon's was [[{{Invisibility}} bending light]], a difficult ability that requires a lot of patience and discipline.]]
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* RedOniBlueOni: Denizen and Simon, respectively. Denizen is skeptical, driven, and short-tempered, while Simon is more calm, controlled, and relaxed. This is further represented by their [[spoiler:Dawnings. Denizen's power [[{{BurningWithAnger}} manifested as raw and angry fire]]; fire; Simon's was [[{{Invisibility}} bending light]], light, a difficult ability that requires a lot of patience and discipline.]]
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* RewatchBonus: Due to the copious amounts of {{Foreshadowing}} and the nature of its JigsawPuzzlePlot, a reread (or several) can be very rewarding. To list a few examples: all of Simon's chapters—16 in particular—carry heavy reread bonuses, as does the prologue, and many scenes involving Vivian or Grey take on a different light after the [[{{TheReveal}} Reveals]] involving them.
** You can really see what Greaves is doing to [[spoiler: see if Denizen's a thrall]] on the second time through.
** You can really see what Greaves is doing to [[spoiler: see if Denizen's a thrall]] on the second time through.
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%% * RewatchBonus: Due to the copious amounts of {{Foreshadowing}} and the nature of its JigsawPuzzlePlot, a reread (or several) can be very rewarding. To list a few examples: all of Simon's chapters—16 in particular—carry heavy reread bonuses, as does the prologue, and many scenes involving Vivian or Grey take on a different light after the [[{{TheReveal}} Reveals]] involving them.
%% ** You can really see what Greaves is doing to [[spoiler: see if Denizen's a thrall]] on the second time through.
%% ** You can really see what Greaves is doing to [[spoiler: see if Denizen's a thrall]] on the second time through.
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* RunOrDie: ''Simon''. He's trapped alone in Crosscaper with the Clockwork Three, and [[{{MuggleBestFriend}} he has no powers,]] so all he can hope to do is avoid them—sneak, hide, run, and simply try to survive until... ''something'' happens.
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* RunOrDie: ''Simon''. Simon. He's trapped alone in Crosscaper with the Clockwork Three, and [[{{MuggleBestFriend}} he has no powers,]] powers, so all he can hope to do is avoid them—sneak, hide, run, them by sneaking, hiding, running, and simply try trying to survive until... ''something'' happens.
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* SceneryPorn: Due to the DescriptionPorn. Special mention to the description of Os Reges Point.
--> Five great spears of slick black stone rose out of the sea. At their base, the ocean dashed itself to spume and spray, trying and failing to bring them down. They marched like soldiers of ever-increasing height, the fifth and final one a massive pinnacle that must have been more than half a kilometer tall, its staggering bulk bullying the horizon aside.\\
--> Five great spears of slick black stone rose out of the sea. At their base, the ocean dashed itself to spume and spray, trying and failing to bring them down. They marched like soldiers of ever-increasing height, the fifth and final one a massive pinnacle that must have been more than half a kilometer tall, its staggering bulk bullying the horizon aside.\\
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%% * SceneryPorn: Due to the DescriptionPorn. Special mention to the description of Os Reges Point.
%% --> Five great spears of slick black stone rose out of the sea. At their base, the ocean dashed itself to spume and spray, trying and failing to bring them down. They marched like soldiers of ever-increasing height, the fifth and final one a massive pinnacle that must have been more than half a kilometer tall, its staggering bulk bullying the horizon aside.\\
%% --> Five great spears of slick black stone rose out of the sea. At their base, the ocean dashed itself to spume and spray, trying and failing to bring them down. They marched like soldiers of ever-increasing height, the fifth and final one a massive pinnacle that must have been more than half a kilometer tall, its staggering bulk bullying the horizon aside.\\
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[[{{JawDrop}} Denizen's jaw dropped.]] It actually dropped. He had always thought that phrase was a cliché. It wasn't. He'd just never been to Os Reges Point before.
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%% [[{{JawDrop}} Denizen's jaw dropped.]] It actually dropped. He had always thought that phrase was a cliché. It wasn't. He'd just never been to Os Reges Point before.
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* SequelHook: What the ''hell'' does the ending of the second book mean?
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%% * SequelHook: What the ''hell'' does the ending of the second book mean?
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* SheIsTheKing: [[spoiler: Once Mercy takes over for her father, she keeps the title “The Endless King” because Tenebrous don't have gender binaries so it doesn't matter.]]
* ShoutOut
** Vivian has fought a Tenebrous named [[{{Literature/RawheadRex}} Rawhead Rex.]]
* ShoutOut
** Vivian has fought a Tenebrous named [[{{Literature/RawheadRex}} Rawhead Rex.]]
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* SheIsTheKing: [[spoiler: Once Mercy takes over for her father, she keeps the title “The "The Endless King” King" because Tenebrous don't have gender binaries so it doesn't matter.]]
*ShoutOut
ShoutOut:
** Vivian has fought a Tenebrous named[[{{Literature/RawheadRex}} [[Literature/RawheadRex Rawhead Rex.]]
*
** Vivian has fought a Tenebrous named
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** D'Aubigny's tatoos are based off Rudden's friend [[{{Dedication}} Eilish.]]
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** D'Aubigny's tatoos tattoos are based off Rudden's friend [[{{Dedication}} Eilish.]]
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** “There was a phrase Denizen had heard in [[{{Series/FawltyTowers}} an old TV show]] the orphanage director had liked—''Don't mention the war''.”
** [[{{Literature/TheDivineComedy}} Malebranche.]]
** [[{{Literature/TheDivineComedy}} Malebranche.]]
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** “There "There was a phrase Denizen had heard in [[{{Series/FawltyTowers}} [[Series/FawltyTowers an old TV show]] the orphanage director had liked—''Don't mention the war''.”
"
%% ** [[{{Literature/TheDivineComedy}} Malebranche.]]
%% ** [[{{Literature/TheDivineComedy}} Malebranche.]]
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* StarfishLanguage: The Tenebrous don't speak using them, but the Cants are technically this.
* StealthPun: “Allow me to [[{{CreepyCrows}} caw]] in more civilized tones.”
* StealthPun: “Allow me to [[{{CreepyCrows}} caw]] in more civilized tones.”
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%% * StarfishLanguage: The Tenebrous don't speak using them, but the Cants are technically this.
%% * StealthPun:“Allow "Allow me to [[{{CreepyCrows}} caw]] caw in more civilized tones.”"
%% * StealthPun:
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* StepfordSmiler
** Of the Empty variety, there's [[{{HumanoidAbomination}} the Man in the Waistcoat]]... although the smile doesn't really do much to convince anyone that he's normal.
** Grey is Depressed, and there are a few moments when his mask slips, although the full extent of this isn't apparent until later. [[spoiler:He drifts into the Unstable territory when he has a {{sanity slippage}} and still ''[[{{BrokenSmile}} doesn't stop smiling]].'']]
** Of the Empty variety, there's [[{{HumanoidAbomination}} the Man in the Waistcoat]]... although the smile doesn't really do much to convince anyone that he's normal.
** Grey is Depressed, and there are a few moments when his mask slips, although the full extent of this isn't apparent until later. [[spoiler:He drifts into the Unstable territory when he has a {{sanity slippage}} and still ''[[{{BrokenSmile}} doesn't stop smiling]].'']]
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* StepfordSmiler
StepfordSmiler:
** Of the Empty variety, there's[[{{HumanoidAbomination}} the Man in the Waistcoat]]... Waistcoat, although the smile doesn't really do much to convince anyone that he's normal.
** Grey isDepressed, depressed, and there are a few moments when his mask slips, although the full extent of this isn't apparent until later. [[spoiler:He drifts into the Unstable territory when he has a {{sanity slippage}} SanitySlippage and still ''[[{{BrokenSmile}} doesn't stop smiling]].'']]smiling.
** Of the Empty variety, there's
** Grey is
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* SurprisinglyCreepyMoment:
** Given that it's middle-grade, and has a [[{{ClicheStorm}} fairly generic plot summary,]] the events of the prologue can come as an ''incredible'' shock.
** Happens again in chapter three. Denizen is on the way to meet his aunt, [=McCarron=] seems friendly, things are a bit weird but nothing too horrible... and then a massive EldritchAbomination ''suddenly pulls itself out of the rubble of a collapsed tunnel.''
* SurprisinglySuddenDeath: Subverted. [[spoiler: Vivian being shot in the back out of nowhere. [[{{NotQuiteDead}} She gets better]].]]
** [[spoiler: Ambrel, too. [[{{NeverFoundTheBody}} Possibly.]]]]
** Given that it's middle-grade, and has a [[{{ClicheStorm}} fairly generic plot summary,]] the events of the prologue can come as an ''incredible'' shock.
** Happens again in chapter three. Denizen is on the way to meet his aunt, [=McCarron=] seems friendly, things are a bit weird but nothing too horrible... and then a massive EldritchAbomination ''suddenly pulls itself out of the rubble of a collapsed tunnel.''
* SurprisinglySuddenDeath: Subverted. [[spoiler: Vivian being shot in the back out of nowhere. [[{{NotQuiteDead}} She gets better]].]]
** [[spoiler: Ambrel, too. [[{{NeverFoundTheBody}} Possibly.]]]]
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%% * SurprisinglyCreepyMoment:
%% ** Given that it's middle-grade, and has a [[{{ClicheStorm}} fairly generic plot summary,]] the events of the prologue can come as an ''incredible'' shock.
%% ** Happens again in chapter three. Denizen is on the way to meet his aunt, [=McCarron=] seems friendly, things are a bit weird but nothing too horrible... and then a massive EldritchAbomination ''suddenly pulls itself out of the rubble of a collapsed tunnel.''
*SurprisinglySuddenDeath: SurprisinglySuddenDeath:
** Subverted. [[spoiler: Vivian being shot in the back out of nowhere.[[{{NotQuiteDead}} She gets better]].]]
better]].
%% ** [[spoiler: Ambrel, too.[[{{NeverFoundTheBody}} Possibly.]]]]]]
%% ** Given that it's middle-grade, and has a [[{{ClicheStorm}} fairly generic plot summary,]] the events of the prologue can come as an ''incredible'' shock.
%% ** Happens again in chapter three. Denizen is on the way to meet his aunt, [=McCarron=] seems friendly, things are a bit weird but nothing too horrible... and then a massive EldritchAbomination ''suddenly pulls itself out of the rubble of a collapsed tunnel.''
*
** Subverted. [[spoiler: Vivian being shot in the back out of nowhere.
%% ** [[spoiler: Ambrel, too.
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* SurvivalHorror: Simon is stuck in this.
* SurvivorGuilt: [[spoiler:It turns out this was the reason the first Croit even started their cult—his guilt over surviving while his love, the Redemptress, did not. This helps Denizen come to terms with his own SurvivorGuilt.]]
* SympathyForTheDevil: Utilized in an absolutely heartbreaking way. [[spoiler:Denizen figures out what happened to the Redemptress and the First Croit, and sympathizes enough to try to talk Her down. He cries when Uriel and the others kill Her.]]
* SurvivorGuilt: [[spoiler:It turns out this was the reason the first Croit even started their cult—his guilt over surviving while his love, the Redemptress, did not. This helps Denizen come to terms with his own SurvivorGuilt.]]
* SympathyForTheDevil: Utilized in an absolutely heartbreaking way. [[spoiler:Denizen figures out what happened to the Redemptress and the First Croit, and sympathizes enough to try to talk Her down. He cries when Uriel and the others kill Her.]]
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%% * SurvivalHorror: Simon is stuck in this.
* SurvivorGuilt: [[spoiler:It turns out this was the reason the first Croit even started theircult—his cult: his guilt over surviving while his love, the Redemptress, did not. This helps Denizen come to terms with his own SurvivorGuilt.]]
*SympathyForTheDevil: Utilized SympathyForTheDevil:
((Utilized in an absolutely heartbreaking way. [[spoiler:Denizen figures out what happened to the Redemptress and the First Croit, and sympathizes enough to try to talk Her down. He cries when Uriel and the others kill Her.]]
* SurvivorGuilt: [[spoiler:It turns out this was the reason the first Croit even started their
*
((Utilized in an absolutely heartbreaking way. [[spoiler:Denizen figures out what happened to the Redemptress and the First Croit, and sympathizes enough to try to talk Her down. He cries when Uriel and the others kill Her.]]
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* TakenForGranite: Well, iron. If the Cost progresses enough, it turns a Knight completely to iron—not just their skin.
* TalkingTheMonsterToDeath: Downplayed and Double Subverted. Denizen tries to talk [[spoiler:Grey]] out of killing him. [[spoiler:It doesn't seem to be working, and [[{{BaitAndSwitchGunshot}} Grey shoots anyway...]] but spares Denizen anyway and lets him escape.]]
** Denizen also tries this on [[spoiler: the Redemptress.]]
* TalkingYourWayOut: Denizen does a variation of this when he's [[spoiler:kidnapped by the Croits and offers to teach them the Cants.]] Although it's less talking his way out of ''capture'', and more talking his way out of ''being murdered and having his blood used as crusade-paint''.
* TalkingTheMonsterToDeath: Downplayed and Double Subverted. Denizen tries to talk [[spoiler:Grey]] out of killing him. [[spoiler:It doesn't seem to be working, and [[{{BaitAndSwitchGunshot}} Grey shoots anyway...]] but spares Denizen anyway and lets him escape.]]
** Denizen also tries this on [[spoiler: the Redemptress.]]
* TalkingYourWayOut: Denizen does a variation of this when he's [[spoiler:kidnapped by the Croits and offers to teach them the Cants.]] Although it's less talking his way out of ''capture'', and more talking his way out of ''being murdered and having his blood used as crusade-paint''.
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* TakenForGranite: Well, iron. If the Cost progresses enough, it turns a Knight completely to iron—not just their skin.
iron.
*TalkingTheMonsterToDeath: TalkingTheMonsterToDeath:
** Downplayed and Double Subverted. Denizen tries to talk [[spoiler:Grey]] out of killing him. [[spoiler:It doesn't seem to be working, and[[{{BaitAndSwitchGunshot}} Grey shoots anyway...]] anyway... but spares Denizen anyway and lets him escape.]]
%% ** Denizen also tries this on [[spoiler: the Redemptress.]]
* TalkingYourWayOut: Denizen does a variation of this when he's [[spoiler:kidnapped by the Croits and offers to teach them the Cants.]] Although it's less talking his way out of''capture'', capture, and more talking his way out of ''being being murdered and having his blood used as crusade-paint''.crusade-paint.
*
** Downplayed and Double Subverted. Denizen tries to talk [[spoiler:Grey]] out of killing him. [[spoiler:It doesn't seem to be working, and
%% ** Denizen also tries this on [[spoiler: the Redemptress.]]
* TalkingYourWayOut: Denizen does a variation of this when he's [[spoiler:kidnapped by the Croits and offers to teach them the Cants.]] Although it's less talking his way out of
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Vivian and Greaves.
* TermsOfEndangerment: The Clockwork Three call Vivian “dear girl” and [[spoiler:Grey]] “little Knight.” The latter case is particularly creepy because it sounds almost dehumanizing, as if they were using it as part of their psychological torture.
* TermsOfEndangerment: The Clockwork Three call Vivian “dear girl” and [[spoiler:Grey]] “little Knight.” The latter case is particularly creepy because it sounds almost dehumanizing, as if they were using it as part of their psychological torture.
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%% * TeethClenchedTeamwork: Vivian and Greaves.
* TermsOfEndangerment: The Clockwork Three call Vivian“dear girl” "dear girl" and [[spoiler:Grey]] “little "little Knight.” " The latter case is particularly creepy because it sounds almost dehumanizing, as if they were using it as part of their psychological torture.
* TermsOfEndangerment: The Clockwork Three call Vivian
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* ThemeNaming: A lot of the names in the book have to do with darkness.
* ThemeTwinNaming: Uriel and Ambrel are both named after angels, possibly.
* ThemeTwinNaming: Uriel and Ambrel are both named after angels, possibly.
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%% * ThemeNaming: A lot of the names in the book have to do with darkness.
* ThemeTwinNaming: Uriel and Ambrel are both named afterangels, possibly.angels.
* ThemeTwinNaming: Uriel and Ambrel are both named after
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* ThisIsReality: “But that was in books, and monsters were real.”
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%% * ThisIsReality: “But "But that was in books, and monsters were real.”"
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* TrainingTheGiftOfMagic: The power is [[{{WildMagic}} hungry]] and [[{{PowerIncontinence}} dangerous]], and the Cants—the only moderately safe way to even use the magic—are potentially deadly without training, so this becomes necessary to everyone with a connection to the Tenebrae, whether they decide to join the Order or not.
* TrappedWithMonsterPlot: Simon's plotline.
* TrustPassword: Invoked [[spoiler:by [[{{GenreSavvy}} Denizen]] to prove to Simon that he is real. When he starts really overthinking it,]] it turns into more of a case of SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay.
* TwitchyEye: [[spoiler:Grey]] develops this.
* TrappedWithMonsterPlot: Simon's plotline.
* TrustPassword: Invoked [[spoiler:by [[{{GenreSavvy}} Denizen]] to prove to Simon that he is real. When he starts really overthinking it,]] it turns into more of a case of SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay.
* TwitchyEye: [[spoiler:Grey]] develops this.
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* TrainingTheGiftOfMagic: The power is [[{{WildMagic}} hungry]] hungry and [[{{PowerIncontinence}} dangerous]], dangerous, and the Cants—the Cants (the only moderately safe way to even use the magic—are magic) are potentially deadly without training, so this becomes necessary to everyone with a connection to the Tenebrae, whether they decide to join the Order or not.
%% * TrappedWithMonsterPlot: Simon's plotline.
* TrustPassword: Invoked [[spoiler:by[[{{GenreSavvy}} Denizen]] Denizen to prove to Simon that he is real. When he starts really overthinking it,]] it]], it turns into more of a case of SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay.
*TwitchyEye: TwitchyEye:
** [[spoiler:Grey]] develops this.
%% * TrappedWithMonsterPlot: Simon's plotline.
* TrustPassword: Invoked [[spoiler:by
*
** [[spoiler:Grey]] develops this.
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* TwoFirstNames: Fuller Jack.
* UnreliableExpositor: The Knights don't know a whole lot about the Tenebrous, which results in this. They warn Denizen that this is the case, though. Grey also has a habit of glossing over information, or giving incomplete/inaccurate explanations, such as when he told Denizen that the reason they lit candles in Seraphim Row was because they'd miss colors (in reality, it's because they act as anchors that prevent the house from [[{{ThinDimensionalBarrier}} falling into the Tenebrae]]).
* TheUsurper: In the third book, the Endless King is overthrown and three Usurpers—[[spoiler: Dragon, the Emissary, and the Opening Boy]]—declare challenges to try to take his place on the throne by proving their strength to the other Tenebrous. Ultimately, [[spoiler: Mercy ascends by returning the Cants.]]
* UnreliableExpositor: The Knights don't know a whole lot about the Tenebrous, which results in this. They warn Denizen that this is the case, though. Grey also has a habit of glossing over information, or giving incomplete/inaccurate explanations, such as when he told Denizen that the reason they lit candles in Seraphim Row was because they'd miss colors (in reality, it's because they act as anchors that prevent the house from [[{{ThinDimensionalBarrier}} falling into the Tenebrae]]).
* TheUsurper: In the third book, the Endless King is overthrown and three Usurpers—[[spoiler: Dragon, the Emissary, and the Opening Boy]]—declare challenges to try to take his place on the throne by proving their strength to the other Tenebrous. Ultimately, [[spoiler: Mercy ascends by returning the Cants.]]
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* TheUsurper: In the third book, the Endless King is overthrown and three
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* WainscotSociety: The Order of the Borrowed Dark.
* WalkInChimeIn: “That sounds like an excellent idea, because I'm about ready to retire.”
* WallOfWeapons: The [[{{ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin}} Room of Swords.]]
* WalkInChimeIn: “That sounds like an excellent idea, because I'm about ready to retire.”
* WallOfWeapons: The [[{{ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin}} Room of Swords.]]
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%% * WainscotSociety: The Order of the Borrowed Dark.
%% * WalkInChimeIn:“That "That sounds like an excellent idea, because I'm about ready to retire.”
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%% * WallOfWeapons: The[[{{ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin}} Room of Swords.]]
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%% * WallOfWeapons: The
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* WesternZodiac
** Although he probably thought he was a Taurus for most of his life, Denizen is a Libra, since he was born on October 3rd. It seems like an odd sign for him at first, since [[{{FieryRedhead}} he's easily angered]] and [[{{NoSocialSkills}} has all the charisma of a rock,]] but it does fit with his role as TheHeart, his longing for familiarity and peace, and the importance he places on deep relationships, among other traits.
** Simon (born October 26) is a rare heroic Scorpio--fitting, given his love of mystery novels and the significance of his detective skills.
* WhamEpisode: ''Chapter 25.'' [[spoiler:Grey is the Clockwork Three's [[{{ManchurianAgent}} thrall,]] Vivian Hardwick [[{{NotQuiteDead}} appears to]] [[{{SurprisinglySuddenDeath}} die,]] and it's finally revealed what the Three ''want'' and why they're after Denizen.]]
* WhamLine
** Book One: [[spoiler: “Denizen... I'm not your aunt. [[{{LukeIAmYourFather}} I'm your mother.]]”]]
** Book Two: “The Order live?”
* WildMagic: The power of the Tenebrae just wants to be used... ''[[{{SelfDemonstratingArticle}} and really, just once wouldn't hurt, would it?]] Just let your anger out, [[{{PowerIncontinence}} it would be so easy to change the world, to burn the world,]] and come on, [[{{Understatement}} a hand isn't that big of]] [[{{EquivalentExchange}} a sacrifice for this kind of power!]]'' … Yeah, [[{{PowerAtAPrice}} that's why there's a Cost.]]
** Although he probably thought he was a Taurus for most of his life, Denizen is a Libra, since he was born on October 3rd. It seems like an odd sign for him at first, since [[{{FieryRedhead}} he's easily angered]] and [[{{NoSocialSkills}} has all the charisma of a rock,]] but it does fit with his role as TheHeart, his longing for familiarity and peace, and the importance he places on deep relationships, among other traits.
** Simon (born October 26) is a rare heroic Scorpio--fitting, given his love of mystery novels and the significance of his detective skills.
* WhamEpisode: ''Chapter 25.'' [[spoiler:Grey is the Clockwork Three's [[{{ManchurianAgent}} thrall,]] Vivian Hardwick [[{{NotQuiteDead}} appears to]] [[{{SurprisinglySuddenDeath}} die,]] and it's finally revealed what the Three ''want'' and why they're after Denizen.]]
* WhamLine
** Book One: [[spoiler: “Denizen... I'm not your aunt. [[{{LukeIAmYourFather}} I'm your mother.]]”]]
** Book Two: “The Order live?”
* WildMagic: The power of the Tenebrae just wants to be used... ''[[{{SelfDemonstratingArticle}} and really, just once wouldn't hurt, would it?]] Just let your anger out, [[{{PowerIncontinence}} it would be so easy to change the world, to burn the world,]] and come on, [[{{Understatement}} a hand isn't that big of]] [[{{EquivalentExchange}} a sacrifice for this kind of power!]]'' … Yeah, [[{{PowerAtAPrice}} that's why there's a Cost.]]
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* WesternZodiac
**WesternZodiac:: Although he probably thought he was a Taurus for most of his life, Denizen is a Libra, since he was born on October 3rd. It seems like an odd sign for him at first, since [[{{FieryRedhead}} he's easily angered]] angered and [[{{NoSocialSkills}} has all the charisma of a rock,]] NoSocialSkills, but it does fit with his role as TheHeart, his longing for familiarity and peace, and the importance he places on deep relationships, among other traits.
%% ** Simon (born October 26) is a rare heroicScorpio--fitting, Scorpio. Fitting, given his love of mystery novels and the significance of his detective skills.
* WhamEpisode:''Chapter 25.'' Chapter 25. [[spoiler:Grey is the Clockwork Three's [[{{ManchurianAgent}} thrall,]] ManchurianAgent, Vivian Hardwick [[{{NotQuiteDead}} appears to]] [[{{SurprisinglySuddenDeath}} die,]] to die, and it's finally revealed what the Three ''want'' want and why they're after Denizen.]]
*WhamLine
WhamLine:
** Book One: [[spoiler:“Denizen..."Denizen... I'm not your aunt. [[{{LukeIAmYourFather}} I'm your mother.]]”]]
]]"]]
** Book Two:“The "The Order live?”
live?"
%% * WildMagic: The power of the Tenebrae just wants to beused... ''[[{{SelfDemonstratingArticle}} and really, just once wouldn't hurt, would it?]] Just let your anger out, [[{{PowerIncontinence}} it would be so easy to change the world, to burn the world,]] and come on, [[{{Understatement}} a hand isn't that big of]] [[{{EquivalentExchange}} a sacrifice for this kind of power!]]'' … Yeah, [[{{PowerAtAPrice}} that's why there's a Cost.]]used.
**
%% ** Simon (born October 26) is a rare heroic
* WhamEpisode:
*
** Book One: [[spoiler:
** Book Two:
%% * WildMagic: The power of the Tenebrae just wants to be
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* YouKnowWhatTheySay: [[{{MeaningfulEcho}} No plan of action]] survives first contact.
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%% * YouKnowWhatTheySay: [[{{MeaningfulEcho}} No plan of action]] survives first contact.
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* DropTheHammer: The Mallei.
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* GoMadFromTheRevelation: Tenebrous are driven insane from the weight of being able to see the entire multiverse above them at all times. Denizen himself almost dies from seeing it.
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* GoMadFromTheRevelation: Tenebrous are driven insane from the weight of being able to see the entire multiverse above them at all times. Denizen himself almost dies from seeing it.
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** [[spoiler:Matt, cut in half [[KilledMidSentence mid-conversation]] in the final battle.]]
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* BirthdayBeginning: The story technically begins on the day ''before'' Denizen's birthday, which is twenty-tree minutes past midnight on October 3rd. Not that he knew this, of course.
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* TheHerosBirthday: The story technically begins on the day ''before'' Denizen's birthday, which is twenty-tree minutes past midnight on October 3rd. Not that he knew this, of course.
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* SurpriseCreepy: Given that it's middle-grade, and has a [[{{ClicheStorm}} fairly generic plot summary,]] the events of the prologue can come as an ''incredible'' shock.
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* SurpriseCreepy: SurprisinglyCreepyMoment:
** Given that it's middle-grade, and has a [[{{ClicheStorm}} fairly generic plot summary,]] the events of the prologue can come as an ''incredible'' shock.
** Given that it's middle-grade, and has a [[{{ClicheStorm}} fairly generic plot summary,]] the events of the prologue can come as an ''incredible'' shock.
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* ABirthdayNotABreak: For Simon. [[spoiler: He nearly ''dies'' on his birthday.]]
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* DiedOnTheirBirthday: {{Defied|Trope}}. [[spoiler: Simon very nearly dies on his birthday]].
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** Of the Empty variety, there's [[{{HumanoidAbomination}} the Man in the Waistcoat]]... although the smile doesn't really do much to [[{{UncannyValley}} convince anyone that he's normal.]]
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** Of the Empty variety, there's [[{{HumanoidAbomination}} the Man in the Waistcoat]]... although the smile doesn't really do much to [[{{UncannyValley}} convince anyone that he's normal.]]
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** The Croits take this UpToEleven—almost all of their terminology is capitalized words.
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** The Croits take this UpToEleven—almost up to eleven—almost all of their terminology is capitalized words.
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* LockAndLoadMontage: An [[{{UpToEleven}} entire chapter]] is devoted to this.
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* LockAndLoadMontage: An [[{{UpToEleven}} entire chapter]] chapter is devoted to this.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Good luck keeping track of all the Croits.
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* BodyMotifs: Hands.
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* BrokenRecord: “I need to speak to Edifice Greaves.” [[spoiler: Poor Uriel...]]
* BrokenTears: The Opening Boy and [[spoiler: Grey]].
* BrokenTears: The Opening Boy and [[spoiler: Grey]].
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%% * BrokenRecord: “I need to speak to Edifice Greaves.” [[spoiler: Poor Uriel...]]
%% * BrokenTears: The Opening Boy and [[spoiler: Grey]].
%% * BrokenTears: The Opening Boy and [[spoiler: Grey]].
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* EpicFail: A very drugged-up Denizen attempts to use the Art of Apertura. [[{{RealityEnsues}} It goes about as well as one would expect.]]
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* EpicFail: A very drugged-up Denizen attempts to use the Art of Apertura. [[{{RealityEnsues}} It goes about as well as one would expect.]]
* PhlebotinumOverload: Mercy gave Denizen knowledge of all seventy-eight Cants, which he can now use at will and with minimal Cost. Cool, right?! Well... actually, no, [[{{BlessedWithSuck}} it sucks.]] The Cants are still WildMagic, and Denizen has an extremely difficult time controlling them. There's a reason most Knights only specialize in a select few of them; they want to be used, and it's painful.
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* RealityEnsues: Mercy gave Denizen knowledge of all seventy-eight Cants, which he can now use at will and with minimal Cost. Cool, right?! Well... actually, no, [[{{BlessedWithSuck}} it sucks.]] The Cants are still WildMagic, and Denizen has an extremely difficult time controlling them. There's a reason most Knights only specialize in a select few of them; they want to be used, and it's painful.
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* BadDreams: Denizen started having nightmares about clocks due to the events of the first book, and Simon gets these so bad that he doesn't sleep because all he can think of is being at Crosscaper with the Three.
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* GreyingMorality: The series presented itself at first as a [[{{BlackAndWhiteMorality}} traditional good vs. evil story.]] This quickly became muddy ''at best'' in book one, and the conflict became even greyer in book two. The Tenebrous aren't monsters—they're complex, individual creatures capable of feeling love and grief and everything in between.
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* GreyingMorality: GrayingMorality: The series presented itself at first as a [[{{BlackAndWhiteMorality}} traditional good vs. evil story.]] This quickly became muddy ''at best'' in book one, and the conflict became even greyer in book two. The Tenebrous aren't monsters—they're complex, individual creatures capable of feeling love and grief and everything in between.
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* FamilyEyeResemblance: Denizen has the same hard {{grey eyes}} as Vivian.
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* FamilyEyeResemblance: Denizen has the same hard {{grey eyes}} grey eyes as Vivian.
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* GreyEyes: The Hardwicks both have grey eyes, described as “the color and softness of a nail.”
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''The Forever Court'' takes place six months later, with the Order [[{{NothingIsTheSameAnymore}} still dealing with the aftermath of the events of the first book]] and the implications it carried. And nowhere are the effects felt stronger than in Seraphim Row.
But as Denizen is adjusting to his new life of Knighthood, the Order receives an unexpected letter from the Tenebrous. And not only that, but another dangerous power is gathering in preparation for war...
The third book in the trilogy—''The Endless King''—comes out Spring, 2018.
But as Denizen is adjusting to his new life of Knighthood, the Order receives an unexpected letter from the Tenebrous. And not only that, but another dangerous power is gathering in preparation for war...
The third book in the trilogy—''The Endless King''—comes out Spring, 2018.
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''The Forever Court'' takes place six months later, with the Order [[{{NothingIsTheSameAnymore}} still dealing with the aftermath of the events of the first book]] and the implications it carried. And nowhere are the effects felt stronger than in Seraphim Row.
Row. But as Denizen is adjusting to his new life of Knighthood, the Order receives an unexpected letter from the Tenebrous. And not only that, but another dangerous power is gathering in preparation for war...
Thethird final book in the trilogy—''The trilogy, ''The Endless King''—comes King,'' came out Spring, 2018.2018 and follows Denizen and his friends as they travel to the Order's ancestral home, Daybreak. It isn't long before a shocking arrival comes bearing the even more shocking news that the Tenebrae's leader has fallen—and with Usurpers targeting Daybreak, real war is rising.
The
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* AnAesop: Bravery is a choice.
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* AnAesop: AccidentalMurder: [[spoiler: The Opening Boy didn't mean to hurt Grey during their fight, but ends up ''impaling him.'' Later, after cutting him off its arm, the Boy brings Grey back up to Denizen and Mercy, and acts very relieved that he's still alive.]]
* AnAesop
** Bravery is achoice.choice.
** You may not get noticed or rewarded for doing the right thing, but it's still worth it.
* AnAesop
** Bravery is a
** You may not get noticed or rewarded for doing the right thing, but it's still worth it.
* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler: Greaves]] loses half an arm at some point during the third book.
* BallOfLightTransformation: Mercy likes taking a form made of light.
** In book three, there's [[spoiler: Dragon, the Emissary, and the Opening Boy.]]
* TheBigDamnKiss: [[spoiler: Denizen kisses Mercy to return the Cants, so yes, a kiss literally saves the multiverse.]]
* TheBigDamnKiss: [[spoiler: Denizen kisses Mercy to return the Cants, so yes, a kiss literally saves the multiverse.]]
* BittersweetEnding: At the end of the series, [[spoiler: the Usurpers are dead and the Cants have been returned to the Tenebrae. Breaches have become nearly unheard of, eliminating the need for an Order that fights Tenebrous; Denizen goes to college and becomes a teacher, Abigail has gone into private security, and Ed does architecture for the Order. However, there were countless casualties during the War of Daybreak. Denizen found out the girl he had a crush on was mostly just using him, and the cost of saving the multiverse is becoming mostly iron, which he barely survives. And Vivian is dead, so he doesn't get a life ''with her.'']] Still, it's more sweet than bitter.
* BodyOfBodies: Dragon, a stained-glass dragon Tenebrous made out of the iron corpses of Knights.
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* {{Bookends}}: The prologue of the first book is called “Tick,” and chapter 31 is titled “Tock.”
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* {{Bookends}}: {{Bookends}}
** The prologue of the first book is called “Tick,” and chapter 31 is titled “Tock.””
** The epilogue of book one is Daybreak; the epilogue of book three is Sunrise.
** The prologue of the first book is called “Tick,” and chapter 31 is titled “Tock.
** The epilogue of book one is Daybreak; the epilogue of book three is Sunrise.
** When Grey finds out [[spoiler: the Opening Boy is still alive]], the air around him catches fire.
** In the third book, [[spoiler: the Endless King.]]
* ChekhovsGunman: The Emissary.
* ComingOutStory: In the third book, Simon tries to come out to Denizen.
** Grey is the only Knight at Daybreak to wear gloves.
* DeathWail: When she's told that [[spoiler: Vivian is dead]], Abigail starts screaming... except her jaw is clenched so [[{{SubvertedTrope}} no one else could hear it.]]
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* {{Determinator}}: ''Vivian.'' She's been a Knight for nearly two decades and has risen to the position of Malleus, which in and of itself implies this, but she also [[spoiler: gets shot {{in the back}} at nearly point-blank range, ''survives it'', gets up, and prepares to go back into battle only a few hours later.]]
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* {{Determinator}}: {{Determinator}}
** ''Vivian.'' She's been a Knight for nearly two decades and has risen to the position of Malleus, which in and of itself implies this, but she also [[spoiler: gets shot {{in the back}} at nearly point-blank range, ''survives it'', gets up, and prepares to go back into battle only a few hours later.]]
** Grey never stops fighting. He also [[spoiler: gets [[{{ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice}} impaled]], turns his stomach to iron, and take the Opening Boy off Os Reges Point into the Tenebraic ocean with him. And he survives all that.]]
** ''Vivian.'' She's been a Knight for nearly two decades and has risen to the position of Malleus, which in and of itself implies this, but she also [[spoiler: gets shot {{in the back}} at nearly point-blank range, ''survives it'', gets up, and prepares to go back into battle only a few hours later.]]
** Grey never stops fighting. He also [[spoiler: gets [[{{ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice}} impaled]], turns his stomach to iron, and take the Opening Boy off Os Reges Point into the Tenebraic ocean with him. And he survives all that.]]
* FireForgedFriends: Abigail and Matt.
** A ton for who the third Usurper is: Abigail and Matt coming across frozen Tenebrous; Denizen hearing what sounds like the Boy's sobbing; Grey's confusion and inconsistency surrounding his Aperture taking them to Crosscaper; the graffiti; Denizen wondering whether the Three were really dead; the frost on Os Reges Point.
* GoMadFromTheRevelation: Tenebrous are driven insane from the weight of being able to see the entire multiverse above them at all times. Denizen himself almost dies from seeing it.
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: D'Aubigny and Jack fighting the Clockwork Three so Darcie and Abigail could get away. Jack survives but is left severely wounded, and D'Aubigny dies.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: HeroicSacrifice
** [[spoiler: D'Aubigny and Jack fighting the Clockwork Three so Darcie and Abigail could get away. Jack survives but is left severely wounded, and D'Aubigny dies.]]
** [[spoiler: Vivian fights Dragon so the Neophytes can get away. She ends up killing it, but at the cost of her own life.]]
** [[spoiler: D'Aubigny and Jack fighting the Clockwork Three so Darcie and Abigail could get away. Jack survives but is left severely wounded, and D'Aubigny dies.]]
** [[spoiler: Vivian fights Dragon so the Neophytes can get away. She ends up killing it, but at the cost of her own life.]]
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* HeroWithAUniqueName: Most everyone else has a real name (Vivian, Simon, Abigail, etc.) and then there's ''Denizen.'' Somewhat Subverted in book two with the introduction of Edifice Greaves, who isn't TheHero, but whose name is also a noun not usually given as a name.
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* HeroWithAUniqueName: Most everyone else has a real name (Vivian, Simon, Abigail, etc.) and then there's ''Denizen.'' ''
** Somewhat Subverted in book two with the introduction of Edifice Greaves, who isn't TheHero, but whose name is also a noun not usually given as aname.name.
** Turns out it's Justified; Vivian wanted to give Denizen a normal name, but his father didn't because he was never going to be normal.
** Somewhat Subverted in book two with the introduction of Edifice Greaves, who isn't TheHero, but whose name is also a noun not usually given as a
** Turns out it's Justified; Vivian wanted to give Denizen a normal name, but his father didn't because he was never going to be normal.
* InMediasRes: ''The Endless King'' starts off with a prologue from Director Ackerby's perspective involving what seems like a Breach at Crosscaper and Denizen asking for help. The first chapter takes place “some time earlier.” Around the middle of the book, we get the context of that scene from Denizen's perspective.
* ICallItVera: Denizen calls his knife “Falter” to invoke this trope.
* LampreyMouth: Dragon is described as having one.
* LateForSchool: Played With. Denizen wakes up late on the first day of classes at Daybreak and freaks out, but is stopped in the halls by Greaves, who doesn't even want him to go to class anyway.
** When Simon, Abigail, Ed, and Matt realize that [[spoiler: lighting Daybreak was a challenge beacon.]]
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* MeaningfulName: ''Everything''.
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* MeaningfulName: ''Everything''.''Everything.'' To the point where there's a lexicon of them in the back of the third book.
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* MeaningfulEcho: “Well, you know what they say about plans.”
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* MeaningfulEcho: These are all over the place.
** “Well, you know what they say about plans.”
** “Well, you know what they say about plans.”
** “If not me, who else?”
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The Endless King
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
** The EndlessKingKing
** Dragon
** The Endless
** Dragon
* NobleFugitive: Mercy in ''The Endless King,'' due to her father being overthrown and her being Dragon's challenge.
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* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Vivian comes back after being shot and laying in a pool of her own blood for who-knows-how-long.]]
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* NotQuiteDead: NotQuiteDead
** [[spoiler: Vivian comes back after being shot and laying in a pool of her own blood for who-knows-how-long.]]
** [[spoiler: Grey survives his TakingYouWithMe moment, barely, by turning his stomach to iron, and Denizen manages to save him with the Bellows Subventum.]]
** [[spoiler: Vivian comes back after being shot and laying in a pool of her own blood for who-knows-how-long.]]
** [[spoiler: Grey survives his TakingYouWithMe moment, barely, by turning his stomach to iron, and Denizen manages to save him with the Bellows Subventum.]]
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* {{Patricide}}: [[spoiler: Mercy kills the Endless King in order to replace him.]]
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* ShapeshifterModeLock: Downplayed. [[spoiler: Taking some Cost from Denizen leaves Mercy permanently partially iron, but she can still change shape, it's just harder.]]
* SheIsTheKing: [[spoiler: Once Mercy takes over for her father, she keeps the title “The Endless King” because Tenebrous don't have gender binaries so it doesn't matter.]]
* SheIsTheKing: [[spoiler: Once Mercy takes over for her father, she keeps the title “The Endless King” because Tenebrous don't have gender binaries so it doesn't matter.]]
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** In the third book, Denizen can't bring himself to kill [[spoiler: the Opening Boy]] because he sees himself in it.
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* TheUsurper: In the third book, the Endless King is overthrown and three Usurpers—[[spoiler: Dragon, the Emissary, and the Opening Boy]]—declare challenges to try to take his place on the throne by proving their strength to the other Tenebrous. Ultimately, [[spoiler: Mercy ascends by returning the Cants.]]
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* WasItAllALie: [[spoiler: Denizen asks Mercy this after learning how she's been using him since the events of book one. She did genuinely like him, but she did have an ulterior motive for basically every single one of their interactions.]]
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** Corinne means “beautiful maiden” and her last name references Julie D'Aubigny.
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** Corinne means “beautiful maiden” and her last name references Julie D'Aubigny.UsefulNotes/JulieDAubigny.
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It's the first book in a trilogy. Book two, ''The Forever Court'', comes out in April, 2017.
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But as Denizen is adjusting to his new life of Knighthood, the Order receives an unexpected letter from the Tenebrous. And not only that, but another dangerous power is gathering in preparation for war...
The third book in the trilogy—''The Endless King''—comes out
* AffectionateNickname
** Vivian refers to Adebayo Sall as “Ade” and even “dear Ade,” which certainly seems like this.
** Simon calls Denizen the shortened “Den.”
** Vivian refers to Adebayo Sall as “Ade” and even “dear Ade,” which certainly seems like this.
** Simon calls Denizen the shortened “Den.”
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* AmbiguousAllegiance: [[spoiler:[[{{AmbiguouslyEvil}} Grey.]] While most of what he does is because of [[{{ManchurianAgent}} thralldom]] and [[{{BrainwashedAndCrazy}} not free will,]] not all of his actions are so cut-and-dry. He shot Vivian in a [[{{MercyKill}} distorted attempt to help,]] but stole her hammer despite having no orders to do so, and has [[{{MysteriousPast}} such unclear motives and backstory]] that [[{{AlternateCharacterInterpretation}} it's nearly impossible to say anything about him]] except that he's an extremely [[{{AccidentalPun}} grey]] character. [[{{AllThereInTheManual}} Also, ]] his [[{{ConflictingLoyalty}} allegiance is divided]], and he's called a traitor in-universe multiple times.]]
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* AmbiguousAllegiance: [[spoiler:[[{{AmbiguouslyEvil}} Grey.]] While most of what he does is because of [[{{ManchurianAgent}} thralldom]] AlmostKiss: [[spoiler: Denizen gets one with Mercy, before they're [[{{MomentKiller}} interrupted by Vivian.]]]]
* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Subverted and[[{{BrainwashedAndCrazy}} not free will,]] not all of his actions are so cut-and-dry. He shot Vivian in a [[{{MercyKill}} distorted attempt Deconstructed. The Tenebrous ''seem'' to help,]] but stole her hammer despite having no orders to do so, and has [[{{MysteriousPast}} such unclear motives and backstory]] that [[{{AlternateCharacterInterpretation}} it's nearly impossible to say anything about him]] except that he's an be this... until Denizen meets Mercy, who is extremely [[{{AccidentalPun}} grey]] character. [[{{AllThereInTheManual}} Also, ]] his [[{{ConflictingLoyalty}} allegiance nice. This is divided]], explored further; Tenebrous, while alien to the world, are not inherently evil, and he's called are individuals with their own desires and emotions. However, most Knights won't believe that Mercy isn't a traitor in-universe multiple times.]]monster, and even Denizen seems to think of her as an exception rather than proof that Tenebrous aren't all evil.
* AmbiguouslyEvil: An interesting case with [[spoiler: Mercy]], who's actually more ambiguously ''trustworthy'' than ambiguously ''evil.'' Despite [[spoiler: being the Endless King's daughter,]] she has been nothing but kind and straightforward with Denizen, and has never done anything evil, but the ending of ''The Forever Court'' suggests that she may be up to something, or be more shady that she seems.
* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Subverted and
* AmbiguouslyEvil: An interesting case with [[spoiler: Mercy]], who's actually more ambiguously ''trustworthy'' than ambiguously ''evil.'' Despite [[spoiler: being the Endless King's daughter,]] she has been nothing but kind and straightforward with Denizen, and has never done anything evil, but the ending of ''The Forever Court'' suggests that she may be up to something, or be more shady that she seems.
** The words of the Croits. "She loved. She stole. And we knew fire."
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* BackToBackBadasses: D'Aubigny and Grey fight Pick-Up-the-Pieces in this manner.
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* AscendedFridgeHorror: [[spoiler: Thralldom]] is discussed very openly in ''The Forever Court''. Not only is it made explicitly clear that yes, [[spoiler: the Three were [[{{MindRape}} literally inside of Grey's mind]] and killing him with the unbearable pressure of it,]] but it also provides a nasty bit of in-universe ParanoiaFuel—[[spoiler:''anyone'' could be a thrall, and there's ''no way of knowing''.]]
** It also addresses [[{{NightmareFuel}} what has to happen]] to Knights who lose control to their powers in order to protect the public.
* BackToBackBadasses: D'Aubigny and Grey fight Pick-Up-the-Pieces in thismanner.manner, and Denizen and Vivian get in this formation when the Croits attack.
* BadDreams: Denizen started having nightmares about clocks due to the events of the first book, and Simon gets these so bad that he doesn't sleep because all he can think of is being at Crosscaper with the Three.
** It also addresses [[{{NightmareFuel}} what has to happen]] to Knights who lose control to their powers in order to protect the public.
* BackToBackBadasses: D'Aubigny and Grey fight Pick-Up-the-Pieces in this
* BadDreams: Denizen started having nightmares about clocks due to the events of the first book, and Simon gets these so bad that he doesn't sleep because all he can think of is being at Crosscaper with the Three.
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* BigBadEnsemble: The Endless King and the Clockwork Three.
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* BattleInterruptingShout: [[spoiler: It only stops the Redemptress, but Denizen yells one of these.]]
* BigBadEnsemble: The Endless King and the ClockworkThree.Three in book one.
* BigBadEnsemble: The Endless King and the Clockwork
* BigWordShout: “STOP” is yelled a lot.
* BlackShirt: The Croits, kind of. They're waiting for the Redemptress to awaken and the War That Will Come, but are isolated from the world and are preparing for it.
* BlackSwordsAreBetter: Denizen's [[{{DownplayedTrope}} knife]] is made from a shard of a Malleus's hammer and is thus black.
* BlessedWithSuck: [[spoiler: The Cants gifted to Denizen turn out to be this due to how much trouble he has controlling them.]]
* BlackSwordsAreBetter: Denizen's [[{{DownplayedTrope}} knife]] is made from a shard of a Malleus's hammer and is thus black.
* BlessedWithSuck: [[spoiler: The Cants gifted to Denizen turn out to be this due to how much trouble he has controlling them.]]
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* BondingOverMissingParents: Downplayed, but it's definitely there between Denizen and Grey. [[spoiler:One has to wonder where this will go when Grey learns that Denizen isn't actually an orphan.]]
* {{Bookends}}: The prologue is called “Tick,” and chapter 31 is titled “Tock.”
* {{Bookends}}: The prologue is called “Tick,” and chapter 31 is titled “Tock.”
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* BondingOverMissingParents: Downplayed, but it's definitely there between Denizen and Grey. [[spoiler:One has Grey.
* BookcasePassage: The entrance towonder where this will go when Grey learns that Retreat involves one of these. Denizen isn't actually an orphan.]]
Lampshades it, of course.
* {{Bookends}}: The prologue of the first book is called “Tick,” and chapter 31 is titled “Tock.”
* BreadEggsBreadedEggs: “There are a ''lot'' of people in Dublin. With cameras. And phones that are cameras. And phones that are cameras that can phone people with cameras.”
* BookcasePassage: The entrance to
* {{Bookends}}: The prologue of the first book is called “Tick,” and chapter 31 is titled “Tock.”
* BreadEggsBreadedEggs: “There are a ''lot'' of people in Dublin. With cameras. And phones that are cameras. And phones that are cameras that can phone people with cameras.”
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** Naturally, the kids aren't excused from this, either. [[{{GuiltComplex}} Darcie takes it hard whenever someone gets hurt.]] [[{{MuggleBestFriend}} Simon]] is stuck in an extremely traumatic RunOrDie situation at Crosscaper and Denizen gets to experience several near-death experiences, [[spoiler: betrayal by the second friend he's ever made, the death of someone he cared about, and witnesses [[{{BodyHorror}} other various]] [[{{HarmfulToMinors}} traumatic events,]] which send him into a mild HeroicSafeMode.]]
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** Naturally, the kids aren't excused from this, either. [[{{GuiltComplex}} Darcie takes it hard whenever someone gets hurt.]] hurt,]] and [[{{MuggleBestFriend}} Simon]] is stuck in an extremely traumatic picked up a lot of long-lasting trauma from his RunOrDie situation at Crosscaper and Crosscaper. Denizen gets to experience several near-death experiences, [[spoiler: betrayal by the second friend he's ever made, the death of someone he cared about, and witnesses [[{{BodyHorror}} other various]] [[{{HarmfulToMinors}} traumatic events,]] which send him into events.]]]]
* BrickJoke
** When Simon and Abigail start theorizing on why Denizen is taking so long to try on amild HeroicSafeMode.shirt, Abigail suggests that he might have knocked himself out with a Higher Cant again.
** “I should just try to [[spoiler: kiss Mercy]] again and then [[{{ParentsWalkInAtTheWorstTime}} Vivian would magically materialize.]]”
* BrokenRecord: “I need to speak to Edifice Greaves.” [[spoiler: Poor Uriel...]]
* BrickJoke
** When Simon and Abigail start theorizing on why Denizen is taking so long to try on a
** “I should just try to [[spoiler: kiss Mercy]] again and then [[{{ParentsWalkInAtTheWorstTime}} Vivian would magically materialize.]]”
* BrokenRecord: “I need to speak to Edifice Greaves.” [[spoiler: Poor Uriel...]]
* BrotherSisterTeam: Uriel and Ambrel. They strategize in combat very, very well... and had a meltdown when separated.
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* CapitalLettersAreMagic: As usual for the genre, this trope is employed... and it's ''[[{{UpToEleven}} all over the place.]]'' Not only is “Knight” always capitalized, there's also the Cost, TheOrder, the King [[note]]the “Endless” part of his name seems to be optional in casual conversation[[/note]], the Court [[note]]in reference to the Forever Court, so this one may be justified[[/note]], Dawnings, Breaches, Tenebrous, the Book of Rust, Cants and Higher Cants [[note]]which are also called Epithets[[/note]], and the name of every single Cant revealed so far.
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* CallAHumanAMeatbag: Mocked-By-A-Husband calls humans “little meat.”
* CapitalLettersAreMagic: As usual for the genre, this trope is employed... and it's''[[{{UpToEleven}} ''[[{{ExaggeratedTrope}} all over the place.]]'' Not only is “Knight” always capitalized, there's also the Cost, TheOrder, the King [[note]]the “Endless” part of his name seems to be optional in casual conversation[[/note]], the Court [[note]]in reference to the Forever Court, so this one may be justified[[/note]], Dawnings, Breaches, Tenebrous, the Book of Rust, Cants and Higher Cants [[note]]which are also called Epithets[[/note]], and the name of every single Cant revealed so far.
* CapitalLettersAreMagic: As usual for the genre, this trope is employed... and it's
** The Croits take this UpToEleven—almost all of their terminology is capitalized words.
* CargoCult: The Croits... at least until the Redemptress awakens and is no longer inanimate.
* ChekhovsSkill: [[spoiler: Mercy learning to take on a human form, and change it at will.]]
* TheChosenOne: Deconstructed with the Croits. They believe they are chosen, Favored by the Redemptress, and it twisted them into haughty, self-important monsters who believe they are destined to own the world.
* CreepyCrows: Malebranche is made of this trope. [[{{IncrediblyLamePun}} Quite literally.]]
** Also, the Croit's emblem, the Crow and the Claw.
** Also, the Croit's emblem, the Crow and the Claw.
* {{Cult}}: The Family. They all live on an isolated island and worship a giant woman made of wire, who they believe is their sleeping savior. WordOfGod is that they ''are'' based on accounts of people who'd left cults.
* DidYouJustRomanceCthulhu: Did you just romance [[spoiler: ''the Endless King's daughter?'']]
* DisappearsIntoLight: Mercy does this a lot... because she ''is'' made of light.
* DisappearsIntoLight: Mercy does this a lot... because she ''is'' made of light.
* DramaticPause: Greaves hesitates while speaking, and Denizen wonders whether it was an actual hesitation or intentionally one of these.
* DullSurprise: Uriel was expecting Greaves's reaction to [[spoiler: the story—and the disproving thereof—of the Redemptress]] to be a bit more... dramatic. Or just to be anything other than a flat “OK.”
* DumbStruck: After [[spoiler: Ambrel is snatched away in the Tenebrae]], Uriel goes through a version of this. He can still speak, but it's only [[{{BrokenRecord}} one sentence.]]
* DumbStruck: After [[spoiler: Ambrel is snatched away in the Tenebrae]], Uriel goes through a version of this. He can still speak, but it's only [[{{BrokenRecord}} one sentence.]]
* EpicFail: A very drugged-up Denizen attempts to use the Art of Apertura. [[{{RealityEnsues}} It goes about as well as one would expect.]]
* EscalatingPunchline: It felt like vomiting wasps. Sharpened wasps. Holding toothpicks.
* EscalatingPunchline: It felt like vomiting wasps. Sharpened wasps. Holding toothpicks.
* EvilChancellor: Discussed when Denizen contemplates diplomacy. [[spoiler: Later, after learning about Malebranche being a traitor, [[{{LampshadeHanging}} he wonders whether he counts as a Grand Vizier or not.]]]]
* EvilTwin: Inverted (well, [[{{GrayAndGreyMorality}} depending on which side you're looking at it from]]) and Played With. Ambrel could be seen as Uriel's evil twin, or Uriel could be seen as Ambrel's good twin. They start out on the same side, but as the story progresses, Uriel begins having doubts and [[spoiler: eventually preforms a HeelFaceTurn,]] while Ambrel becomes more and more fanatic.
* ExpectingSomeoneTaller: Discussed and Subverted. When Malebranche asks about Denizen, Greaves guesses that he thought he'd be taller. Malebranche replies that he thinks all humans look the same.
* ExpectingSomeoneTaller: Discussed and Subverted. When Malebranche asks about Denizen, Greaves guesses that he thought he'd be taller. Malebranche replies that he thinks all humans look the same.
* ExtremeMeleeRevenge: [[spoiler: Uriel does this to the Redemptress for ruining his Family... as Denizen was trying to make peace with Her.]]
* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Denizen's pupil explodes into iron.]] [[{{Squick}} Yikes.]]
* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Denizen's pupil explodes into iron.]] [[{{Squick}} Yikes.]]
* FictionalCountry: Adumbral.
* FighterMageThief: When the Neophytes fight together—Abigail is the Fighter, Denizen is the Mage, and Simon is the Thief.
* FighterMageThief: When the Neophytes fight together—Abigail is the Fighter, Denizen is the Mage, and Simon is the Thief.
* FlamingSword: Uriel's Prayer allows him to summon a sword that is literally ''made of fire.''
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** Tons in the prologue.
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** Tons in the prologue.prologue of book one.
** Denizen's first experience with the Art of Apertura, and Grey having warned him about needing to look out for sharks in the Tenebrae.
** “I like exploring, peering up at all the different worlds.”
** Before she [[spoiler: gives Denizen the Cants]], Mercy says, “Wait long enough and the sun always rises. Do you believe that?” It seems random at the time, but hints at [[spoiler: the fact that the Knights' power was the Tenebrae's sun.]]
*** Actually, all the sun imagery in reference to the Knights' powers. Special mention to Denizen's Dawn being described as like “a hole had been torn between here and the heart of the sun.”
** Uriel remained stone-faced while Ambrel prepared a sneak attack on Grandfather from behind. It didn't work on him, but they got [[spoiler: Denizen]] this way.
** When [[spoiler: Denizen asks who stole the fire from the Endless King, Mercy doesn't answer—she changes the subject and starts talking about the rarity of human and Tenebrous working together, and how it's ended in pain and death every other time.]]
** “You didn't speak to prisoners. They might infect you with dangerous ideas.”
** “I like exploring, peering up at all the different worlds.”
** Before she [[spoiler: gives Denizen the Cants]], Mercy says, “Wait long enough and the sun always rises. Do you believe that?” It seems random at the time, but hints at [[spoiler: the fact that the Knights' power was the Tenebrae's sun.]]
*** Actually, all the sun imagery in reference to the Knights' powers. Special mention to Denizen's Dawn being described as like “a hole had been torn between here and the heart of the sun.”
** Uriel remained stone-faced while Ambrel prepared a sneak attack on Grandfather from behind. It didn't work on him, but they got [[spoiler: Denizen]] this way.
** When [[spoiler: Denizen asks who stole the fire from the Endless King, Mercy doesn't answer—she changes the subject and starts talking about the rarity of human and Tenebrous working together, and how it's ended in pain and death every other time.]]
** “You didn't speak to prisoners. They might infect you with dangerous ideas.”
* FriendshipMoment: Simon and Denizen get a sweet one at the end of chapter 20 of ''The Forever Court''.
* GreyingMorality: The series presented itself at first as a [[{{BlackAndWhiteMorality}} traditional good vs. evil story.]] This quickly became muddy ''at best'' in book one, and the conflict became even greyer in book two. The Tenebrous aren't monsters—they're complex, individual creatures capable of feeling love and grief and everything in between.
* HalfIdenticalTwins: Uriel and Ambrel Croit, Justified due to their ''whole family'' looking [[{{UncannyFamilyResemblance}} creepily similar.]]
* HeadbuttingHeroes: Vivian and Greaves really don't like each other.
* HeadbuttingHeroes: Vivian and Greaves really don't like each other.
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* HeroWithAUniqueName: Most everyone else has a real name (Vivian, Simon, Abigail, etc.) and then there's ''Denizen.''
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* HeroWithAUniqueName: Most everyone else has a real name (Vivian, Simon, Abigail, etc.) and then there's ''Denizen.'''' Somewhat Subverted in book two with the introduction of Edifice Greaves, who isn't TheHero, but whose name is also a noun not usually given as a name.
* HopeIsScary: Denizen brings this up when wondering whether [[spoiler: Uriel was able to reason with Ambrel and get back to Trinity.]]
--> ''No.'' Denizen had dabbled in hope before. Every orphan in Crosscaper had. ''Maybe someone will come along and tell me it's all been a mistake, that I don't belong here—that there's a family and a home and love waiting for me outside these miserable walls.''\\
Hope was paralysing. It encouraged you to put your determination aside and rely on somebody else's, when that energy would be much better spent being your own best chance for happiness, your own best plan for survival.\\
''But someone did show up at Crosscaper.''\\
''Shut up.''\\
''I wish he was here now.''
--> ''No.'' Denizen had dabbled in hope before. Every orphan in Crosscaper had. ''Maybe someone will come along and tell me it's all been a mistake, that I don't belong here—that there's a family and a home and love waiting for me outside these miserable walls.''\\
Hope was paralysing. It encouraged you to put your determination aside and rely on somebody else's, when that energy would be much better spent being your own best chance for happiness, your own best plan for survival.\\
''But someone did show up at Crosscaper.''\\
''Shut up.''\\
''I wish he was here now.''
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* HumanoidAbomination: The Clockwork Three, [[spoiler:Mercy]], and apparently some other older Tenebrous.
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* HumanoidAbomination: The Clockwork Three, [[spoiler:Mercy]], Mercy, and apparently some other older Tenebrous.
* IncomingHam: Edifice Greaves loves showy entrances.
* InstantlyProvenWrong: Mercy bragging about how human she can be... followed immediately by her umbra taking out every light and even the fridge in a store.
* InstantSedation: [[spoiler: The Croits drugged Denizen and it knocked him out almost immediately.]]
* InstantSedation: [[spoiler: The Croits drugged Denizen and it knocked him out almost immediately.]]
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* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Played With. [[spoiler:The Clockwork Three want Vivian to kill Grey because they think it'd be fun. Once Grey makes it perfectly clear that he has to fight her, she doesn't even try to talk him back and ends up neutralizing--but not killing--him.]]
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* IronicEcho: [[{{TakeThat}} “I guess I'm just a blunt instrument.”]]
* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Played With. [[spoiler:The Clockwork Three want Vivian to kill Grey because they think it'd be fun. Once Grey makes it perfectly clear that he has to fight her, she doesn't even try to talk him back and ends up neutralizing--but not killing--him.]] ]]
* IResembleThatRemark: “I am very calm,” hissed Mercy. After [[spoiler: giving an implied war threat.]]
* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Played With. [[spoiler:The Clockwork Three want Vivian to kill Grey because they think it'd be fun. Once Grey makes it perfectly clear that he has to fight her, she doesn't even try to talk him back and ends up neutralizing--but not killing--him.
* IResembleThatRemark: “I am very calm,” hissed Mercy. After [[spoiler: giving an implied war threat.]]
* KnightErrant: The Knights Peregrine.
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* LastNameBasis: Everyone with D'Aubigny and Jack. Denizen also called Grey “[=McCarron=]” for a little while.
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* LastNameBasis: Everyone with D'Aubigny D'Aubigny, Jack, and Jack. Denizen also called Grey “[=McCarron=]” for a little while.Greaves.
* LetterMotif: '''Gre'''y and '''Gre'''aves, probably because [[spoiler: they're [[{{Foil}} foils]].]]
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Good luck keeping track of all the Croits.
* LetterMotif: '''Gre'''y and '''Gre'''aves, probably because [[spoiler: they're [[{{Foil}} foils]].]]
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Good luck keeping track of all the Croits.
** In book two, Denizen truly ''is'' LockedOutOfTheLoop about ''why'' Greaves is apparently untrustworthy, and about [[spoiler: all of Vivian's plans to protect him.]]
* LongList: Denizen rattles one off when Mercy asks what he's nervous about. It ends with “so many things.”
** The deal with the Forever Court was no hammers at the Concilium. They never said anything about [[{{MoreDakka}} obscene amounts of explosives]] in the floor.
* LoveObstructingParents: Vivian [[{{Understatement}} isn't too accepting]] of Denizen having a crush on a Tenebrous...
* LoveObstructingParents: Vivian [[{{Understatement}} isn't too accepting]] of Denizen having a crush on a Tenebrous...
* LuminescentBlush: Shockingly and hilariously Justified. Due to the fire in their blood, every single Knight can get this quite literally—and usually ''does'', to a small extent, ''as a default.''
* MalevolentMutilation: [[spoiler:Uriel]] is threatened with this when [[spoiler:Ambrel comes after him with the intent to ''shave off parts of his hands'' with a file.]]
* MassOhCrap: Simon, Abigail, Darcie, and Vivian ''all'' have this reaction when [[spoiler:Uriel]] mentions Denizen having taught him the Art of Apertura... in front of Greaves.
** The surname Croit. It means “to place one's heart,” or “to believe,” but has several other possible significant meanings. It's related to croft—an enclosed area of land—which contrasts with the meaning of Hardwick, and can mean “raw” or “fresh blood.”
* MindRape: [[spoiler:Thralldom is absolutely ''horrible.'' The Clockwork Three literally got inside of Grey's head, forced him to do things for them, and played with his memories.]]
* MyBloodRunsHot: Due to their powers, emotionally-flooded Knights can literally ''raise the temperature of a room they're in.''
** This trope is why [[spoiler: Uriel and Mercy believe Ambrel could still be alive.]]
* ParentsWalkInAtTheWorstTime: Played With hilariously. [[spoiler:Denizen and Mercy truly were about to kiss when Vivian found them... but she thought Mercy had made Denizen a thrall. So Denizen had to awkwardly explain to her that, yes, he really was trying to kiss a Tenebrous.]]
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* PowerAtAPrice: The Cost, which turns Knights' skin to iron.
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** So much of the second book involves the main characters purposefully withholding information from Greaves. And Vivian being vague with Denizen.
* PowerAtAPrice: The Cost, which turns Knights' skin toiron.iron the more the use their powers.
* PowerDegeneration: See PowerAtAPrice above.
* PowerAtAPrice: The Cost, which turns Knights' skin to
* PowerDegeneration: See PowerAtAPrice above.
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* PunctuationShaker: Tenebrous names employ this sometimes, such as with Pick-Up-the-Pieces and the title Tenebrous use for the Endless King, That-Which-Is-Endless.
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* PunctuationShaker: Tenebrous names employ this sometimes, such as with Pick-Up-the-Pieces Pick-Up-the-Pieces, Mocked-By-A-Husband and the title Tenebrous use for the Endless King, That-Which-Is-Endless.
* PutOnABus: Grey was [[spoiler:taken away by the Order]] after book one, and was absent for the entirety of ''The Forever Court''.
* RealityEnsues: Mercy gave Denizen knowledge of all seventy-eight Cants, which he can now use at will and with minimal Cost. Cool, right?! Well... actually, no, [[{{BlessedWithSuck}} it sucks.]] The Cants are still WildMagic, and Denizen has an extremely difficult time controlling them. There's a reason most Knights only specialize in a select few of them; they want to be used, and it's painful.
* RealMenGetShot: Vivian has been shot ''twice'' now. The first time [[spoiler:was nearly point-blank to the back, and incapacitated her for a significant amount of time before she managed to heal herself]]; the second time was to the shoulder, bounced off the iron of the Cost, and did literally nothing.
* RealMenGetShot: Vivian has been shot ''twice'' now. The first time [[spoiler:was nearly point-blank to the back, and incapacitated her for a significant amount of time before she managed to heal herself]]; the second time was to the shoulder, bounced off the iron of the Cost, and did literally nothing.
* ReligionIsMagic: The Croits believe they get the Favour from their Redemptress. [[spoiler:This isn't actually true.]]
** You can really see what Greaves is doing to [[spoiler: see if Denizen's a thrall]] on the second time through.
* RunningGag: Denizen's near-death experiences. Specifically, how many he's had, and whether or not he's used to them yet.
* RunningGag: Denizen's near-death experiences. Specifically, how many he's had, and whether or not he's used to them yet.
* SequelHook: What the ''hell'' does the ending of the second book mean?
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* SlidingScaleOfUnavoidableVersusUnforgivable: Comes up in regards to [[spoiler:Grey shooting Vivian.]] Denizen seems to place it more on the unforgivable end, but the action is ambiguous enough that cases could be made for both sides.
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** “There was a phrase Denizen had heard in [[{{Series/FawltyTowers}} an old TV show]] the orphanage director had liked—''Don't mention the war''.”
** [[{{Literature/TheDivineComedy}} Malebranche.]]
* SlidingScaleOfUnavoidableVersusUnforgivable: Comes up in regards to [[spoiler:Grey shooting Vivian.]] Denizen seems to place it more on the unforgivable end, but the action is ambiguous enough that cases could be made for both sides. [[spoiler: People seem to have forgiven him, though.]]
* TheSnackIsMoreInteresting: When asked about her thoughts on Greaves, Abigail responds with her extremely elaborate food order off the menu at the Goshawk. ''Then'' she answers the actual question.
* StarfishLanguage: The Tenebrous don't speak using them, but the Cants are technically this.
* StealthPun: “Allow me to [[{{CreepyCrows}} caw]] in more civilized tones.”
* StealthHiBye: Greaves came to watch the Neophytes train without anyone noticing him arriving, which was disconcerting compared to how his entrances [[{{IncomingHam}} usually go.]]
** [[{{Literature/TheDivineComedy}} Malebranche.]]
* SlidingScaleOfUnavoidableVersusUnforgivable: Comes up in regards to [[spoiler:Grey shooting Vivian.]] Denizen seems to place it more on the unforgivable end, but the action is ambiguous enough that cases could be made for both sides. [[spoiler: People seem to have forgiven him, though.]]
* TheSnackIsMoreInteresting: When asked about her thoughts on Greaves, Abigail responds with her extremely elaborate food order off the menu at the Goshawk. ''Then'' she answers the actual question.
* StarfishLanguage: The Tenebrous don't speak using them, but the Cants are technically this.
* StealthPun: “Allow me to [[{{CreepyCrows}} caw]] in more civilized tones.”
* StealthHiBye: Greaves came to watch the Neophytes train without anyone noticing him arriving, which was disconcerting compared to how his entrances [[{{IncomingHam}} usually go.]]
* StrongFamilyResemblance: The Croits all look extremely similar, to an almost creepy extent.
** [[spoiler: Ambrel, too. [[{{NeverFoundTheBody}} Possibly.]]]]
* SurvivorGuilt: [[spoiler:It turns out this was the reason the first Croit even started their cult—his guilt over surviving while his love, the Redemptress, did not. This helps Denizen come to terms with his own SurvivorGuilt.]]
* SympathyForTheDevil: Utilized in an absolutely heartbreaking way. [[spoiler:Denizen figures out what happened to the Redemptress and the First Croit, and sympathizes enough to try to talk Her down. He cries when Uriel and the others kill Her.]]
* TakenForGranite: Well, iron. If the Cost progresses enough, it turns a Knight completely to iron—not just their skin.
* SympathyForTheDevil: Utilized in an absolutely heartbreaking way. [[spoiler:Denizen figures out what happened to the Redemptress and the First Croit, and sympathizes enough to try to talk Her down. He cries when Uriel and the others kill Her.]]
* TakenForGranite: Well, iron. If the Cost progresses enough, it turns a Knight completely to iron—not just their skin.
** Denizen also tries this on [[spoiler: the Redemptress.]]
* TalkingYourWayOut: Denizen does a variation of this when he's [[spoiler:kidnapped by the Croits and offers to teach them the Cants.]] Although it's less talking his way out of ''capture'', and more talking his way out of ''being murdered and having his blood used as crusade-paint''.
* TalkingYourWayOut: Denizen does a variation of this when he's [[spoiler:kidnapped by the Croits and offers to teach them the Cants.]] Although it's less talking his way out of ''capture'', and more talking his way out of ''being murdered and having his blood used as crusade-paint''.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Vivian and Greaves.
* ThemeTwinNaming: Uriel and Ambrel are both named after angels, possibly.
* ThisIsReality: “But that was in books, and monsters were real.”
* ThrowingYourSwordAlwaysWorks: Uriel repeatedly throws copies of the FlamingSword he can summon [[spoiler:at the Redemptress.]]
* ThrowingYourSwordAlwaysWorks: Uriel repeatedly throws copies of the FlamingSword he can summon [[spoiler:at the Redemptress.]]
** Also occurs when someone is struggling to control their powers.
* WackyAmericansHaveWackyNames: Downplayed, but the [=PenumbraCorp=] agent is named ''Strap.''
* WeaponOfXSlaying: The hammers of Mallei are the only weapons that can kill certain ancient Tenebrous.
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* WhamLine: [[spoiler: “Denizen... I'm not your aunt. [[{{LukeIAmYourFather}} I'm your mother.]]”]]
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* WhamLine: WhamLine
** Book One: [[spoiler: “Denizen... I'm not your aunt. [[{{LukeIAmYourFather}} I'm your mother.]]”]]]]”]]
** Book Two: “The Order live?”
** Book One: [[spoiler: “Denizen... I'm not your aunt. [[{{LukeIAmYourFather}} I'm your mother.
** Book Two: “The Order live?”
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[[{{MeaningfulName}} Denizen Hardwick]] is an orphan. And he has been for eleven of his thirteen years of life—that is, until he's contacted by [[{{LongLostRelative}} an aunt he's never heard of before]] and sees her colleague destroy a [[{{EldritchAbomination}} reality-defying shadow monster]] with spoken sunrise.
He's taken to a place called Seraphim Row, a candle-lit mansion of secrets, and learns that creatures called the Tenebrous tear into our world through the shadows. And his aunt is part of an ancient order of [[{{MagicKnight}} Knights]] who fight to beat them back. Not only that, but Denizen has [[{{SuperpowerfulGenetics}} fire in his own bloodstream,]] giving him the potential to join their fight... and possibly [[{{LockedOutOfTheLoop}} finally get answers about his parents as well.]]
He's taken to a place called Seraphim Row, a candle-lit mansion of secrets, and learns that creatures called the Tenebrous tear into our world through the shadows. And his aunt is part of an ancient order of [[{{MagicKnight}} Knights]] who fight to beat them back. Not only that, but Denizen has [[{{SuperpowerfulGenetics}} fire in his own bloodstream,]] giving him the potential to join their fight... and possibly [[{{LockedOutOfTheLoop}} finally get answers about his parents as well.]]
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[[{{FieryRedhead}} Denizen]] [[{{MeaningfulName}} Denizen Hardwick]] is an orphan. And he has been for eleven of his thirteen years of life—that is, until he's contacted by [[{{LongLostRelative}} an aunt he's never heard of before]] and sees her colleague destroy a [[{{EldritchAbomination}} reality-defying shadow monster]] with spoken sunrise.
He's taken to a place called Seraphim Row, a candle-lit mansion of secrets, and learns that creatures called the Tenebrous tear into our world through the shadows. And his aunt is part of an ancient order of [[{{MagicKnight}} Knights]] who fight to beat them back. Not only that, but Denizen has [[{{SuperpowerfulGenetics}} fire in his own bloodstream,]] giving him the potential to join their fight... and possibly[[{{LockedOutOfTheLoop}} [[{{TellMeAboutMyFather}} finally get answers about his parents as well.]]
He's taken to a place called Seraphim Row, a candle-lit mansion of secrets, and learns that creatures called the Tenebrous tear into our world through the shadows. And his aunt is part of an ancient order of [[{{MagicKnight}} Knights]] who fight to beat them back. Not only that, but Denizen has [[{{SuperpowerfulGenetics}} fire in his own bloodstream,]] giving him the potential to join their fight... and possibly
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Pathetic, cowardly, ''[[{{HeightAngst}} short—]]''
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* BondingOverMissingParents: Downplayed, but it's definitely there between Denizen and Grey. [[spoiler:One has to wonder where this will go when Grey learns that [[{{LukeIAmYourFather}} Denizen isn't actually an orphan.]]]]
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* BondingOverMissingParents: Downplayed, but it's definitely there between Denizen and Grey. [[spoiler:One has to wonder where this will go when Grey learns that [[{{LukeIAmYourFather}} Denizen isn't actually an orphan.]]]]]]
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* CallingTheOldManOut: When Denizen ''finally'' does this to Vivian, it's one of the most satisfying moments of the book.
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* CallingTheOldManOut: When Denizen ''finally'' does delivers an absolutely ''epic'' one to Vivian. After eleven years [[{{ParentalAbandonment}} in an orphanage]], and nearly a month of being ignored and left in the dark about his parents, [[{{RageBreakingPoint}} he confronts her]] about how he's been treated. He threatens to fight her to keep her from just leaving again... [[spoiler:and it ''works''. He gets answers. And after learning that she's [[{{LukeIAmYourFather}} actually his mother,]] after learning what happened eleven years ago, after learning her [[{{GiveHimANormalLife}} reasoning,]] he [[{{UnstoppableRage}} still doesn't]] [[{{TheReasonYouSuckSpeech}} back down.]]]]
* CapitalLettersAreMagic: As usual for the genre, thisto Vivian, trope is employed... and it's ''[[{{UpToEleven}} all over the place.]]'' Not only is “Knight” always capitalized, there's also the Cost, TheOrder, the King [[note]]the “Endless” part of his name seems to be optional in casual conversation[[/note]], the Court [[note]]in reference to the Forever Court, so this one may be justified[[/note]], Dawnings, Breaches, Tenebrous, the Book of Rust, Cants and Higher Cants [[note]]which are also called Epithets[[/note]], and the name of every single Cant revealed so far.
** Funnily enough, however, this trope is entirely averted when it comes to the Knights' actual power, which isn't even given a real ''name'' and is simply referred to as “the power of themost satisfying moments of Tenebrae” or some variant thereof. It's also surprisingly averted in regards to the book.Endless King's mercy, [[spoiler:up until TheReveal that it's actually a Tenebrous ''named'' Mercy.]]
* CapitalLettersAreMagic: As usual for the genre, this
** Funnily enough, however, this trope is entirely averted when it comes to the Knights' actual power, which isn't even given a real ''name'' and is simply referred to as “the power of the
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* CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon: “If he so much as catches a cold, the Malleus will melt you both down and use you as scrap.”
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* DissonantLaughter: He only does it once, but Grey laughs going into the fight with the Bad-Dream Angel.
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* HeroicWillpower: Invoked into a Double Subversion. [[spoiler:It's implied that Grey tried to fight the Three's control, but either failed or became [[{{DespairEventHorizon}} worn out.]] However, Denizen attempts to [[{{TalkingTheMonsterToDeath}} convince him to fight it again...]] and it ''works''.]]
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Jack and D'Aubigny. She only comes up to his ''chest''.
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* PunctuationShaker: Tenebrous names employ this sometimes, such as with Pick-Up-the-Pieces and the title Tenebrous use for the Endless King, That-Which-Is-Endless.
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* ABirthdayNotABreak: For Simon. [[spoiler: He nearly ''dies'' on his birthday.]]
* TheHerosBirthday: The story technically begins on the day ''before'' Denizen's birthday, which is twenty-tree minutes past midnight on October 3rd. Not that he knew this, of course.
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* ShoutOut: Vivian has fought a Tenebrous named [[{{Literature/RawheadRex}} Rawhead Rex.]]
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut
** Vivian has fought a Tenebrous named [[{{Literature/RawheadRex}} Rawhead Rex.]]]]
** Grey is named after Graham Tugwell, Dave Rudden's friend and writing buddy, and his phoenix tattoo is for Sarah Maria Griffin.
** D'Aubigny's tatoos are based off Rudden's friend [[{{Dedication}} Eilish.]]
** The Hardwick's and the Order's mottos are both taken from book 6 of ''Literature/TheAeneid.''
** Vivian has fought a Tenebrous named [[{{Literature/RawheadRex}} Rawhead Rex.
** Grey is named after Graham Tugwell, Dave Rudden's friend and writing buddy, and his phoenix tattoo is for Sarah Maria Griffin.
** D'Aubigny's tatoos are based off Rudden's friend [[{{Dedication}} Eilish.]]
** The Hardwick's and the Order's mottos are both taken from book 6 of ''Literature/TheAeneid.''
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* TattooAsCharacterType: D'Aubigny has two tattoos: a colorful dominant one across her shoulders, and a black rose on her stomach (although the meaning of that one doesn't fit). Grey has a bird on his shoulder blade. Both characters do have supernatural powers, although neither has actually ever even mentioned their tattoos.
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* TattooAsCharacterType: D'Aubigny has two tattoos: a colorful dominant one across her shoulders, and a black rose on her stomach (although the meaning of that one doesn't fit). Grey has a bird phoenix on his shoulder blade. Both characters do have supernatural powers, although neither has actually ever even mentioned their tattoos.
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* UnreliableExpositor: The Knights don't know a whole lot about the Tenebrous, which results in this. They warn Denizen that this is the case, though. Grey also has a habit of glossing over information, or giving incomplete/inaccurate explanations, such as when he told Denizen that the reason they lit candles in Seraphim Row was because they'd miss colors (in reality, it's because they act as anchors that prevent the house from [[{{ThinDimensionalBarrier}} falling into the Tenebrae]]).
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* AnAesop: Bravery is a choice.
* AfterActionPatchUp: Jack gives one to D'Aubigny after Rathláth.
* AfterActionPatchUp: Jack gives one to D'Aubigny after Rathláth.
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* AnAesop: Bravery is a choice.
* DescriptionPorn: Hoo boy. The writing is absolutely ''lovely'', rife with imagery and making use of other beautiful figurative language, so many things are described like this.
* FactionMotto: The Order of the Borrowed Dark has one--"''Linguae Centum, Sunt Oraque Centum, Ferrea Vox.''"
* GallowsHumor: Denizen is very prone to this—he makes jokes about how many near-death experiences he's had, and uses a bit of it to stay calm in [[{{WhamEpisode}} chapter 25.]] Abigail and Grey also do this a couple times.
* GeometricMagic: Justified. [[spoiler:Mercy's cage]] is a poorly-drawn circle on the ground. Thoroughly Discussed and Exploited by [[{{GenreSavvy}} Denizen,]] who realizes instantly that it's probably very dangerous.
* IgnoredExpert: Darcie gets very concerned about the Breach in Rathláth, but no one pays attention to her worry.
* JustBetweenYouAndMe: Discussed. Grey mocks this trope when talking to Denizen about how the Tenebrous aren't monsters. [[spoiler:Kind of ironic, given that he actually exploits a variation of it later.]]
* KillTheOnesYouLove: [[spoiler:Poor Grey. He tries to MercyKill Vivian and Denizen in order to prevent the Three from subjecting them to the [[{{AndIMustScream}} kind]] [[{{FateWorseThanDeath}} of]] [[{{MindRape}} torture]] he was put through, and give them a quick death. But while he was dealing with the Hardwicks, [[{{FailureToSaveMurder}} he knew the Three were at Seraphim Row,]] and he was under the impression that they had killed ''everyone'' until Vivian told him much later that only D'Aubigny was dead.]]
* KillTheOnesYouLove: [[spoiler:Poor Grey. He tries to MercyKill Vivian and Denizen in order to prevent the Three from subjecting them to the [[{{AndIMustScream}} kind]] [[{{FateWorseThanDeath}} of]] [[{{MindRape}} torture]] he was put through, and give them a quick death. But while he was dealing with the Hardwicks, [[{{FailureToSaveMurder}} he knew the Three were at Seraphim Row,]] and he was under the impression that they had killed ''everyone'' until Vivian told him much later that only D'Aubigny was dead.]]
* LockAndLoadMontage: An [[{{UpToEleven}} entire chapter]] is devoted to this.
** Hardwick means something along the lines of “herd and outlying farm,” or “brave in battle.” Denizen's claim that it translates to “safety through caution” might reference the armorial motto of the Duke of Devonshire.
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* NicknamingTheEnemy: All the Knights' terminology for the Tenebrous is of their own invention.
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* OneHitKill: Grey delivers one to the Bad-Dream Angel using Sunrise.
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* PubliclyDiscussingTheSecret: Grey and Denizen do this twice, and though the first time was late at night in an empty cafe, the second was in a crowded park and, much to Denizen's dismay, Grey decided to [[{{HavingABlast}} use a Cant.]]
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* SceneryPorn: Due to the DescriptionPorn. Special mention to the description of Os Reges Point.
--> Five great spears of slick black stone rose out of the sea. At their base, the ocean dashed itself to spume and spray, trying and failing to bring them down. They marched like soldiers of ever-increasing height, the fifth and final one a massive pinnacle that must have been more than half a kilometer tall, its staggering bulk bullying the horizon aside.\\
Beyond them, the ocean went on forever, rising in iron-grey swells, then falling to lines of foam. The air was crisp and clear, the night sky filled with stars, but clouds had massed on the horizon in a vast continent of grey and white and black. Lightning stung its depths.\\
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--> Five great spears of slick black stone rose out of the sea. At their base, the ocean dashed itself to spume and spray, trying and failing to bring them down. They marched like soldiers of ever-increasing height, the fifth and final one a massive pinnacle that must have been more than half a kilometer tall, its staggering bulk bullying the horizon aside.\\
Beyond them, the ocean went on forever, rising in iron-grey swells, then falling to lines of foam. The air was crisp and clear, the night sky filled with stars, but clouds had massed on the horizon in a vast continent of grey and white and black. Lightning stung its depths.\\
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* TermsOfEndangerment: The Clockwork Three call Vivian “dear girl” and [[spoiler:Grey]] “little Knight.” The latter case is particularly creepy because it sounds almost dehumanizing, as if they were using it as part of their psychological torture.
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* TrustPassword: Invoked [[spoiler:by [[{{GenreSavvy}} Denizen]] to prove to Simon that he is real. When he starts really overthinking it,]] it turns into more of a case of SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay.
* TwitchyEye: [[spoiler:Grey]] develops this.
* TwoFirstNames: Fuller Jack.
* TwitchyEye: [[spoiler:Grey]] develops this.
* TwoFirstNames: Fuller Jack.
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* WalkInChimeIn: “That sounds like an excellent idea, because I'm about ready to retire.”
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* AnAesop: Bravery is a choice.
* BondingOverMissingParents: Downplayed, but it's definitely there between Denizen and Grey. [[spoiler:One has to wonder where this will go when Grey learns that [[{{LukeIAmYourFather}} Denizen isn't actually an orphan.]]]]
* BungledSuicide: Implied. While [[{{DeathSeeker}} he never makes any active attempts to kill himself,]] this actually happens ''twice'' to [[spoiler:Grey--the Three don't kill him for his rebellion like he hoped, and Vivian spares him after they fight.]]
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* DropTheHammer: The Mallei.
* DropTheHammer: The Mallei.
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* GoodIsNotNice: She may be protecting the world from shadow monsters, but Vivian still acts very rude to Denizen, refusing to speak to him and criticizing almost everything he does.
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* GoodIsNotNice: She may be protecting the world from shadow monsters, but GiveHimANormalLife: [[spoiler:What Vivian still acts very rude to Denizen, refusing to speak to him and criticizing almost everything he does.wanted for Denizen.]]
* GoodIsNotNice: She may be protecting the world from shadow monsters, but Vivian still acts very rude to Denizen, refusing to speak to him and criticizing almost everything he does.
* HopeSpot: Simon is given one in chapter 16 when Mr. Gilligan returns from his vacation.
* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Played With. [[spoiler:The Clockwork Three want Vivian to kill Grey because they think it'd be fun. Once Grey makes it perfectly clear that he has to fight her, she doesn't even try to talk him back and ends up neutralizing--but not killing--him.]]
* MercifulMinion: Inverted and then played straight. [[spoiler:Grey's orders were just to keep the Hardwicks at Crosscaper until the Three returned, but he decides to kill them instead... believing it to be a [[{{MercyKill}} mercy.]] He ends up letting Denizen leave, which goes against his own plans and his orders.]]
* MoodWhiplash
** Denizen running from the Woman in White in Rathláth is a scary, tense scene... and then he hilariously falls on top of a four-year old girl. It whips back quickly, though.
** “Mr. Gilligan looked up, [[{{HopeSpot}} their eyes meeting for one long moment,]] and then [[spoiler: [[{{BreadEggsMilkSquick}} his car exploded.]]]]”
** The end of chapter 24 is ''made'' of this.
** Denizen running from the Woman in White in Rathláth is a scary, tense scene... and then he hilariously falls on top of a four-year old girl. It whips back quickly, though.
** “Mr. Gilligan looked up, [[{{HopeSpot}} their eyes meeting for one long moment,]] and then [[spoiler: [[{{BreadEggsMilkSquick}} his car exploded.]]]]”
** The end of chapter 24 is ''made'' of this.
* PrimalFear: The dark.
* SurpriseCreepy: Given that it's middle-grade, and has a [[{{ClicheStorm}} fairly generic plot summary,]] the events of the prologue can come as an ''incredible'' shock.
** Happens again in chapter three. Denizen is on the way to meet his aunt, [=McCarron=] seems friendly, things are a bit weird but nothing too horrible... and then a massive EldritchAbomination ''suddenly pulls itself out of the rubble of a collapsed tunnel.''
** Happens again in chapter three. Denizen is on the way to meet his aunt, [=McCarron=] seems friendly, things are a bit weird but nothing too horrible... and then a massive EldritchAbomination ''suddenly pulls itself out of the rubble of a collapsed tunnel.''
* ThatsAnOrder: Vivian says this when she commands the other Knights [[spoiler:to stand down while she goes after the Clockwork Three.]] Naturally, Grey disobeys anyway.
* WesternZodiac
** Although he probably thought he was a Taurus for most of his life, Denizen is a Libra, since he was born on October 3rd. It seems like an odd sign for him at first, since [[{{FieryRedhead}} he's easily angered]] and [[{{NoSocialSkills}} has all the charisma of a rock,]] but it does fit with his role as TheHeart, his longing for familiarity and peace, and the importance he places on deep relationships, among other traits.
** Simon (born October 26) is a rare heroic Scorpio--fitting, given his love of mystery novels and the significance of his detective skills.
** Although he probably thought he was a Taurus for most of his life, Denizen is a Libra, since he was born on October 3rd. It seems like an odd sign for him at first, since [[{{FieryRedhead}} he's easily angered]] and [[{{NoSocialSkills}} has all the charisma of a rock,]] but it does fit with his role as TheHeart, his longing for familiarity and peace, and the importance he places on deep relationships, among other traits.
** Simon (born October 26) is a rare heroic Scorpio--fitting, given his love of mystery novels and the significance of his detective skills.
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* WithDueRespect: The members of Vivian's cadre do ''not'' use this when they are disagreeing with her, but Grey puts the phrase in as a slightly-sarcastic afterthought when he (probably) accidentally insults her.
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--> '''Grey:''' I just thought you'd paid him a visit. With respect, Malleus.
--> '''Vivian:''' Eager? You didn't think that odd?
--> '''Grey:''' I just thought you'd paid him a visit. With respect, Malleus.
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* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: Lampshaded multiple times. Denizen, Simon, and Grey are all orphans.
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* OrphansOrdeal: Lampshaded. Denizen has pretty severe trust issues [[{{ParentalAbandonment}} as a result of this,]] and is desperate to know ''anything'' about his parents. Grey [[{{MysteriousPast}} hasn't said much about his past]] other than that he ''is'' an orphan, but given the [[{{DullEyesOfUnhappiness}} negative reaction he displays]] whenever he brings it up, this trope is ''strongly implied''. Simon actually seems to be the best off when it comes to this, but it still affects him.
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* AmbiguousAllegiance: [[spoiler:[[{{AmbiguouslyEvil}} Grey.]] While most of what he does is because of [[{{ManchurianAgent}} thralldom]] and [[{{BrainwashedAndCrazy}} not free will,]] not all of his actions are so cut-and-dry. He shot Vivian in a [[{{MercyKill}} distorted attempt to help,]] but stole her hammer despite having no orders to do so, and has [[{{MysteriousPast}} such unclear motives and backstory]] that [[{{AlternateCharacterInterpretation}} it's nearly impossible to say anything about him]] except that he's an extremely [[{{AccidentalPun}} grey]] character. [[{{AllThereInTheManual}} Word of God also says]] that his [[{{ConflictingLoyalty}} allegiance is divided]], and he's called a traitor in-universe multiple times.]]
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* AmbiguousAllegiance: [[spoiler:[[{{AmbiguouslyEvil}} Grey.]] While most of what he does is because of [[{{ManchurianAgent}} thralldom]] and [[{{BrainwashedAndCrazy}} not free will,]] not all of his actions are so cut-and-dry. He shot Vivian in a [[{{MercyKill}} distorted attempt to help,]] but stole her hammer despite having no orders to do so, and has [[{{MysteriousPast}} such unclear motives and backstory]] that [[{{AlternateCharacterInterpretation}} it's nearly impossible to say anything about him]] except that he's an extremely [[{{AccidentalPun}} grey]] character. [[{{AllThereInTheManual}} Word of God also says]] that Also, ]] his [[{{ConflictingLoyalty}} allegiance is divided]], and he's called a traitor in-universe multiple times.]]
* ApologeticAttacker: Both [[spoiler:Grey and Vivian,]] to each other.
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* InternalReveal: That the Clockwork Three are at Crosscaper. Denizen finds out in chapter 23, but the audience has known for almost the entire book.
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* SecretWar: The one between the Knights and the Tenebrous that's been going on for centuries.
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* SlidingScaleOfUnavoidableVersusUnforgivable: Comes up in regards to [[spoiler:Grey shooting Vivian.]] Denizen seems to place it more on the unforgivable end, but the action is ambiguous enough that cases could be made for both sides.
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* TalkingTheMonsterToDeath: Downplayed and Double Subverted. Denizen tries to talk [[spoiler:Grey]] out of killing him. [[spoiler:It doesn't seem to be working, and [[{{BaitAndSwitchGunshot}} Grey shoots anyway...]] but spares Denizen anyway and lets him escape.]]
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* ThinDimensionalBarrier: Although the barrier between the real world and the Tenebrae is never very stable, they almost overlap in some places, creating these spots. At Os Reges Point, the worlds are so close that they almost coexist, and so many Knights have lived at Seraphim Row and thinned the wall there that they have to light candlewards to lessen the danger of it falling into the Tenebrae.
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* YouKnowWhatTheySay: [[{{MeaningfulEcho}} No plan of action]] survives first contact.
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: [[spoiler:Grey. While most of what he does is because of [[{{ManchurianAgent}} thralldom]] and [[{{BrainwashedAndCrazy}} not free will,]] not all of his actions are so cut-and-dry. He shot Vivian in a [[{{MercyKill}} distorted attempt to help,]] stole her hammer despite having no orders to do so, and has [[{{MysteriousPast}} such unclear motives and backstory]] that [[{{AlternateCharacterInterpretation}} it's nearly impossible to say anything about him]] except that he's an extremely [[{{AccidentalPun}} grey character]]. [[{{AllThereInTheManual}} Word of God also says]] that his [[{{ConflictingLoyalty}} allegiance is divided]], and he's called a traitor multiple times.]]
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: [[spoiler:Grey. AmbiguousAllegiance: [[spoiler:[[{{AmbiguouslyEvil}} Grey.]] While most of what he does is because of [[{{ManchurianAgent}} thralldom]] and [[{{BrainwashedAndCrazy}} not free will,]] not all of his actions are so cut-and-dry. He shot Vivian in a [[{{MercyKill}} distorted attempt to help,]] but stole her hammer despite having no orders to do so, and has [[{{MysteriousPast}} such unclear motives and backstory]] that [[{{AlternateCharacterInterpretation}} it's nearly impossible to say anything about him]] except that he's an extremely [[{{AccidentalPun}} grey character]]. grey]] character. [[{{AllThereInTheManual}} Word of God also says]] that his [[{{ConflictingLoyalty}} allegiance is divided]], and he's called a traitor in-universe multiple times.]]
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He's taken to a place called Seraphim Row, a candle-lit mansion of secrets, and learns that creatures called the Tenebrous tear into our world through the shadows. And his aunt is part of an ancient order of [[{{MagicKnight}} Knights]] who fight to beat them back. Not only that, but Denizen has fire in his own bloodstream, giving him the potential to join their fight... and possibly [[{{ParentalAbandonment}} finally get answers about his parents as well.]]
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He's taken to a place called Seraphim Row, a candle-lit mansion of secrets, and learns that creatures called the Tenebrous tear into our world through the shadows. And his aunt is part of an ancient order of [[{{MagicKnight}} Knights]] who fight to beat them back. Not only that, but Denizen has [[{{SuperpowerfulGenetics}} fire in his own bloodstream, bloodstream,]] giving him the potential to join their fight... and possibly [[{{ParentalAbandonment}} [[{{LockedOutOfTheLoop}} finally get answers about his parents as well.]]
* BadPowersGoodPeople: Knights' powers come from the world where the Tenebrous live.
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** Denizen developed a skeptical view of life and some pretty severe trust issues because of his time at Crosscaper Orphanage ([[{{GenreSavvy}} and reading lots of novels with this trope]]), and his war-hardened aunt refuses to talk to him about his parents... [[{{TheReveal}} He eventually learns]] that [[spoiler: Vivian is his mother, who left him in an orphanage because her world got his father killed, and she wanted to keep him away from it. This only ends up sucking him further in, however.]]
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** Denizen developed a skeptical view of life and some pretty severe trust issues [[{{ParentalAbandonment}} because of his time at Crosscaper Orphanage Orphanage]] ([[{{GenreSavvy}} and reading lots of novels with this trope]]), and his war-hardened aunt refuses to talk to him about his parents... [[{{TheReveal}} He eventually learns]] that [[spoiler: Vivian is his mother, who left him in an orphanage because her world got his father killed, and she wanted to keep him away from it. This only ends up sucking him further in, however.]]
* CrushingHandshake: The man in the waistcoat gives one to Ackerby in the prologue.
* DarkFantasy: It is ''definitely'' horror-fantasy.
* ExtraDimensionalShortcut: The Art of Apertura Cant is somewhere between this and [[{{ShadowWalker}} Shadow Walking,]] as it allows Knights to use shadows to enter the Tenebrae and travel through it to anywhere they've already been in the real world.
* FamilyEyeResemblance: Denizen has the same hard {{grey eyes}} as Vivian.
* FamilyEyeResemblance: Denizen has the same hard {{grey eyes}} as Vivian.
* HeroWithAUniqueName: Most everyone else has a real name (Vivian, Simon, Abigail, etc.) and then there's ''Denizen.''
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* InsistentTerminology: Every Knight has their own, much to Denizen's confusion: Vivian hates the word "magic," D'Aubigny insists that their fight against the Tenebrous is pest control and not "war," and Grey says Tenebrous aren't [[{{NotUsingTheZWord}} monsters]].
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* InsistentTerminology: Every Knight has their own, much to Denizen's confusion: Vivian hates the word "magic," "[[{{MagicByAnyOtherName}} magic,]]" D'Aubigny insists that their fight against the Tenebrous is pest control and not "war," and Grey says Tenebrous aren't [[{{NotUsingTheZWord}} monsters]].monsters]].
* IntergenerationalFriendship: Denizen and Grey.
* InvisibilityFlicker: [[spoiler:Simon]] inverts this, flickering into {{invisibility}} (or at least translucency) several times.
* IntergenerationalFriendship: Denizen and Grey.
* InvisibilityFlicker: [[spoiler:Simon]] inverts this, flickering into {{invisibility}} (or at least translucency) several times.
* OnlyFriend: At the beginning of the book, Simon is this to Denizen.
* PreventTheWar: The reason it's so important to [[spoiler:find and return the Endless King's mercy.]] The Knights are already at war with the Tenebrous, but if the Endless King Breaches, [[{{BrokenMasquerade}} it'll become public.]]
* StepfordSmiler
** Of the Empty variety, there's [[{{HumanoidAbomination}} the Man in the Waistcoat]]... although the smile doesn't really do much to [[{{UncannyValley}} convince anyone that he's normal.]]
** Grey is Depressed, and there are a few moments when his mask slips, although the full extent of this isn't apparent until later. [[spoiler:He drifts into the Unstable territory when he has a {{sanity slippage}} and still ''[[{{BrokenSmile}} doesn't stop smiling]].'']]
** Of the Empty variety, there's [[{{HumanoidAbomination}} the Man in the Waistcoat]]... although the smile doesn't really do much to [[{{UncannyValley}} convince anyone that he's normal.]]
** Grey is Depressed, and there are a few moments when his mask slips, although the full extent of this isn't apparent until later. [[spoiler:He drifts into the Unstable territory when he has a {{sanity slippage}} and still ''[[{{BrokenSmile}} doesn't stop smiling]].'']]
* WainscotSociety: The Order of the Borrowed Dark.
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--> '''Author Bio:''' Dave Rudden enjoys cats, adventure, and [[{{BreadEggsMilkSquick}} being cruel to fictional children.]]
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* JigsawPuzzlePlot: [[{{Foreshadowing}} Oh]] [[{{RewatchBonus}} yeah.]] The book has two major plot threads that don't converge until [[{{WhamEpisode}} very late in the story,]] with each picking up many more questions along the way. [[{{LockedOutOfTheLoop}} No one explains much to Denizen about anything,]] and nothing he uncovers about his parents gives him answers either, only deepening the mystery further. Simon, meanwhile, has no sources of information at all, and [[{{MindScrew}} the reader has only a minimally better idea of what's going on than he does.]] None of this is helped by the fact that the Knights know virtually ''nothing'' about the Tenebrous, and a lot of their prior notions and ideas were called into question or straight-up debunked by later events and reveals, and new puzzle pieces were brought up right up until the end of the book. And though the major [[{{DrivingQuestion}} Driving Questions]] [[{{TheReveal}} have been answered]] and some other mysteries explained by the end of the first book, [[{{SequelHook}} so there's still a lot left open.]]
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** Tons in the prologue.
*** The off-ness of the strangers foreshadows them being Tenebrous. They avoid the lights, their eyes look wrong, and when asked about their names, they say that they're “new”.
*** The strangers asking about Denizen: Has he turned thirteen? Has another relative come to take him away to a new life? And the odd phenomena they mention are all related to the Tenebrae and the Knights' powers: fires, disappearances, injuries, spacial or luminal distortion, shadows moving strangely...
*** What they say at the end of the chapter, about confusion and symmetry, and just wanting a little more misery in the world hints at their motivations.
*** Ackerby hears [[{{TerribleTicking}} ticking.]] Actually, their interrogation of Ackerby [[spoiler: gives a slice into a variant of the process they used on Grey.]]
--> '''The Man in the Waistcoat:''' Given time, we can be... persuasive. Imaginatively and painfully so.
** Simon suggests that Denizen's aunt might have been [[{{PubertySuperpower}} waiting for him to be older,]] and that she might travel a lot and have a [[{{BigFancyHouse}} giant house.]] Turns out he's more right than he thinks.
** Before Denizen gets to Seraphim Row, basically everything Grey does is this to something about Knighthood:
*** He drives up to Crosscaper at night with no headlights on because [[{{InnateNightVision}} the ''Intueor Lucidum'' lets him see in the dark.]]
*** He doesn't take off his gloves to eat because of the Cost.
** Vivian asking if Director Carsing still runs Crosscaper.
*** She also hesitates while saying “I owe it to your parents”, [[spoiler: probably because she was going to say “father” instead.]]
** Simon is the only person still awake in Crosscaper for no explainable reason... [[spoiler: except he's a Knight.]]
** Grey has [[{{WeakWilled}} never been much good at self-control.]]
** “Something has the Tenebrae stirred up.”
** D'Aubigny promising that she'll bring Denizen home.
** All of what Simon overhears the man in the waistcoat say in chapter 16 turns out to be significant:
*** The Clockwork Three have a real person with them; they've wormed into his head and can force him to do things. They also call him “Knight,” and that explosion sure looks like a Cant. [[spoiler: It turns out this person is Grey.]]
*** Them having tasted fire and the “tools often break in the hand” line both reference [[spoiler: the events of eleven years ago, when every attempt of theirs to create a thrall ended in a casualty and Vivian hurt them worse than anyone had before.]]
** Grey taking a while to get back from Rathlath and going expressionless at the mention of the Woman in White. Actually, [[{{BreakTheCutie}} Grey's deterioration as a whole.]]
** Tons in the prologue.
*** The off-ness of the strangers foreshadows them being Tenebrous. They avoid the lights, their eyes look wrong, and when asked about their names, they say that they're “new”.
*** The strangers asking about Denizen: Has he turned thirteen? Has another relative come to take him away to a new life? And the odd phenomena they mention are all related to the Tenebrae and the Knights' powers: fires, disappearances, injuries, spacial or luminal distortion, shadows moving strangely...
*** What they say at the end of the chapter, about confusion and symmetry, and just wanting a little more misery in the world hints at their motivations.
*** Ackerby hears [[{{TerribleTicking}} ticking.]] Actually, their interrogation of Ackerby [[spoiler: gives a slice into a variant of the process they used on Grey.]]
--> '''The Man in the Waistcoat:''' Given time, we can be... persuasive. Imaginatively and painfully so.
** Simon suggests that Denizen's aunt might have been [[{{PubertySuperpower}} waiting for him to be older,]] and that she might travel a lot and have a [[{{BigFancyHouse}} giant house.]] Turns out he's more right than he thinks.
** Before Denizen gets to Seraphim Row, basically everything Grey does is this to something about Knighthood:
*** He drives up to Crosscaper at night with no headlights on because [[{{InnateNightVision}} the ''Intueor Lucidum'' lets him see in the dark.]]
*** He doesn't take off his gloves to eat because of the Cost.
** Vivian asking if Director Carsing still runs Crosscaper.
*** She also hesitates while saying “I owe it to your parents”, [[spoiler: probably because she was going to say “father” instead.]]
** Simon is the only person still awake in Crosscaper for no explainable reason... [[spoiler: except he's a Knight.]]
** Grey has [[{{WeakWilled}} never been much good at self-control.]]
** “Something has the Tenebrae stirred up.”
** D'Aubigny promising that she'll bring Denizen home.
** All of what Simon overhears the man in the waistcoat say in chapter 16 turns out to be significant:
*** The Clockwork Three have a real person with them; they've wormed into his head and can force him to do things. They also call him “Knight,” and that explosion sure looks like a Cant. [[spoiler: It turns out this person is Grey.]]
*** Them having tasted fire and the “tools often break in the hand” line both reference [[spoiler: the events of eleven years ago, when every attempt of theirs to create a thrall ended in a casualty and Vivian hurt them worse than anyone had before.]]
** Grey taking a while to get back from Rathlath and going expressionless at the mention of the Woman in White. Actually, [[{{BreakTheCutie}} Grey's deterioration as a whole.]]
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