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Nightmares and hallucinations have plagued Heather Morell all her life. Diagnosed with schizophrenia as a child after the loss of her twin - a sister nobody else believes ever existed - and now struggling with her mental health at university, Heather teeters on the verge of giving up on life. A chance meeting ends in a revelation: she is not crazy, her visions are all too real, and probably want to eat her soul.
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Nightmares and hallucinations have plagued Heather Morell all her life. Diagnosed with schizophrenia as a child after the loss of her twin - a twin--a sister nobody else believes ever existed - and existed--and now struggling with her mental health at university, Heather teeters on the verge of giving up on life. A chance meeting ends in a revelation: she is not crazy, her visions are all too real, and probably want to eat her soul.
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-->I scooped my shoes off the floor, one in each hand, swung them wide and slapped the soles together as hard as I could.
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* DimensionalTraveler: Heather, unknowingly, unwillingly, reluctantly, [[spoiler:and heroically]].
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** Heather, unknowingly, unwillingly, reluctantly, [[spoiler:and heroically]].
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* HormoneAddledTeenager: Heather calls herself one. Throughout the story, she frequently has lewd thoughts about multiple characters even in tense, serious situations, but she tends to keep the thoughts to herself.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Thrust into the leadership position with Raine and Evelyn incapacitated, Heather decides to [[spoiler:kill an intervening police officer to stop her from interrupting]]. Lozzie calls Heather out on it before it happens.
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* GogglesDoSomethingUnusual: [[spoiler:Evelyn eventually figures out how to make glasses that the wearer is capable of seeing pneumasomatic life through]]
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* GogglesDoSomethingUnusual: [[spoiler:Evelyn eventually figures out how to make glasses that the wearer is capable of seeing pneumasomatic life through]]
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*GogglesDoSomethingUnusual: [[spoiler:Evelyn eventually figures out how to make glasses that the wearer is capable of seeing pneumasomatic life through]]
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* HealingFactor: One of Twil’s powers as a result of being a werewolf is accelerated healing. She is capable of healing cuts in a matter of minutes.
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* HealingFactor: One of Twil’s powers as a result of being a werewolf is accelerated healing. She is capable of healing cuts in a matter of minutes.
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* QueerRomance: Heather’s open about being a lesbian, and this seems to apply to several other characters to varying degrees as well.
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* QueerRomance: Heather’s open about being a lesbian, and this seems to apply applies to several other characters to varying degrees as well.
*SoullessBedroom: Brought up several times in the story, Heather's flat she lived in at the beginning of the story, [[spoiler:Lozzie's room when she first moved into Number 12 Barnslow Drive, Badger's apartment and Jan and June's first hotel room.]]
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* TheTeamNormal: Raine. Everyone else has some flavor of supernatural wierdness: Heather has her brainmath/Abyssal powers [[spoiler: and is as much Abyssal entity as human]], Evve's a wizard, Twil's a werewolf, Lozzie has own flavor of Outside powers [[spoiler: and is as Outsider as she is human]], Zheng is an ancient unbound demonhost and [[spoiler: Sevens is a fairly powerful Outsider]]. Raine is just good at stabbing and shooting people.
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* TheTeamNormal: Raine. Everyone else has some flavor of supernatural wierdness: Heather has her brainmath/Abyssal brainmath[[spoiler:/Abyssal powers [[spoiler: and is as much Abyssal entity as human]], Evve's a wizard, Twil's a werewolf, Lozzie has own flavor of Outside powers [[spoiler: and is as Outsider as she is human]], Zheng is an ancient unbound demonhost and [[spoiler: Sevens is a fairly powerful Outsider]]. Raine is just good at stabbing and shooting people.
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* TransparentCloset: When [[spoiler:Heather]] comes out to their mother, they're bluntly told that [[EverybodyKnewAlready she'd always known]], and they weren't exactly subtle.
* {{Tsundere}}: While Evelyn usually comes off as harsh and grouchy, she has a soft spot for [[spoiler:Twil]], which she is reluctant to admit.
* {{Tsundere}}: While Evelyn usually comes off as harsh and grouchy, she has a soft spot for [[spoiler:Twil]], which she is reluctant to admit.
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* TransparentCloset: When [[spoiler:Heather]] comes out to their her mother, they're she's bluntly told that [[EverybodyKnewAlready she'd always known]], and they weren't she wasn't exactly subtle.
* {{Tsundere}}: While Evelyn usually comes off as harsh and grouchy, she has a soft spot for[[spoiler:Twil]], [[spoiler:Twil and Heather]], which she is reluctant to admit.
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* MyDeathIsJustTheBeginning: [[spoiler:Edward's plan for returning from the abyss involves him first dying, even if he never technically died.]]
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* MyDeathIsJustTheBeginning: [[spoiler:Edward's plan for returning from the abyss involves him first dying, even if he never technically died.dies.]]
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* MyDeathIsJustTheBeginning: [[Edward's plan for returning from the abyss involves him first dying, even if he never technically died.]]
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* MyDeathIsJustTheBeginning: [[Edward's [[spoiler:Edward's plan for returning from the abyss involves him first dying, even if he never technically died.]]
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* MyDeathIsJustTheBeginning: [[Edward's plan for returning from the abyss involves him first dying, even if he never technically died.]]
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* CastFullOfGay: There are no straight people in the main cast.
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* TheTeamNormal: Raine. Everyone else has some flavor of supernatural wierdness: Heather has her brainmath/Abyssal powers [[spoiler: and is as much Abyssal entity as human]], Evve's a wizard, Twil's a werewolf, Lozzie has own flavor of Outside powers [[spoiler: and is as Outsider as she is human]], Zheng is an ancient unbound demonhost and [[Sevens is a fairly powerful Outsider]]. Raine is just good at stabbing and shooting people.
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* TheTeamNormal: Raine. Everyone else has some flavor of supernatural wierdness: Heather has her brainmath/Abyssal powers [[spoiler: and is as much Abyssal entity as human]], Evve's a wizard, Twil's a werewolf, Lozzie has own flavor of Outside powers [[spoiler: and is as Outsider as she is human]], Zheng is an ancient unbound demonhost and [[Sevens [[spoiler: Sevens is a fairly powerful Outsider]]. Raine is just good at stabbing and shooting people.
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* TheTeamNormal: Raine. Everyone else has some flavor of supernatural wierdness: Heather has her brainmath/Abyssal powers [[spoiler: and is as much Abyssal entity as human]], Evve's a wizard, Twil's a werewolf, Lozzie has own flavor of Outside powers [[spoiler: and is as Outsider as she is human]], Zheng is an ancient unbound demonhost and [[Sevens is a fairly powerful Outsider]]. Raine is just good at stabbing and shooting people.