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* AccidentalMisnaming: In ''Liu'' the title character refers to Jane Arkansaw as Jane Alabama, remembering it sounded like a state.
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** In the [=GameFuelTv=] version, the Jeff kills Randy and [[UncertainDoom presumably Troy and Keith]] in the incident that leaves Jeff disfigured. In this version only Jeff is harmed in the incident and Randy and co survive the installment. Subverted with Troy and Keith who a KilledOffscreen before the second installment ''Scars of Corruption'', but Randy goes into witness protection and lives till the final installment.
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** In the [=GameFuelTv=] version, the Jeff kills Randy and [[UncertainDoom presumably Troy and Keith]] in the incident that leaves Jeff disfigured. In this version only Jeff is harmed in the incident and Randy and co survive the installment. Subverted with Troy and Keith who a arr KilledOffscreen before the second installment ''Scars of Corruption'', but Randy goes into witness protection and lives till the final installment.
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** Randy also claimed to be this when he was hanging out with Jeff. Indeed the later installment confirm [[spoiler:the entire town was a psychological experiment with Randy as a "control variable"]].
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** Randy also claimed to be this when he was hanging out with Jeff. Indeed the later installment confirm [[spoiler:the entire town of Mandeville was a psychological experiment with Randy as a "control variable"]].
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A remake of ''Literature/JeffTheKiller'' made by K. Banning Kellum, which won a community vote to be the new ''Jeff the Killer'' story on the creepypasta Fandom wiki.
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A remake of ''Literature/JeffTheKiller'' ''Literature/JeffTheKiller2011'' made by K. Banning Kellum, which won a community vote to be the new ''Jeff the Killer'' ''DerivativeWorks/JeffTheKiller'' story on the creepypasta Fandom wiki.
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** ''Shades of Madness'' reveals [[spoiler:that Doctor Sawyer had police harass Randy's father Maxwell for not participating in his experiment]].
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** ''Shades of Madness'' reveals [[spoiler:that Doctor Sawyer had police harass Randy's [[spoiler:Randy's father Maxwell for not participating participated in his experiment]].Doctor Sawyer's experiment, due to Sawyer having police harass Maxwell]].
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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: [[spoiler:Randy says he only stole Jeff and Liu's bikes out of boredom. Unfortunately for Jeff, not only was he lying, he was also just getting Jeff's trust so that he could attack him again.]]
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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: [[spoiler:Randy says he only stole Jeff and Liu's bikes out of boredom. boredom, having as much issues with Mandaville as Jeff himself. Unfortunately for Jeff, not only was he lying, he Randy was also just getting Jeff's trust so that he could attack him again.]]
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** Jeff spares Liu, and his reasons for killing his parents are more understandable since they were not particularly nice to him or Liu. The opening with him trying to kill a child is cut, and it's not even clear if he plans on continuing to kill people.
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** Jeff spares Liu, and his reasons for killing his parents are more understandable since they were not particularly nice to him or Liu. The opening with him trying to kill a child is cut, and it's not even clear if he plans on continuing to kill people.people after he kills bullies Troy and Keith and corrupt officer Donald Williams.
* AdaptationalNameChange: Jane Arkansaw's father and mother are Drake and Elaine not Greg and Isabelle.
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** ''Shades of Madness'' reveals spoiler:that Doctor Sawyer had police harass Randy's father Maxwell for not participating in his experiment]].
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** ''Shades of Madness'' reveals spoiler:that [[spoiler:that Doctor Sawyer had police harass Randy's father Maxwell for not participating in his experiment]].
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: Randy and co get away with the fight they had with Jeff and Liu as well as the flare gun incident that left Jeff disfigured, due to Randy's father having connections with Officer Donald Williamson. ''Shades of Madness'' reveals spoiler:that Doctor Sawyer had Randy set up as "control variable" for his experiments, with a life of comfort and ease being part of said experiment]].
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: Randy and co get away with the fight they had with Jeff and Liu as well as the flare gun incident that left Jeff disfigured, due to Randy's father having connections with Officer Donald Williamson. ''Shades of Madness'' reveals spoiler:that [[spoiler:that Doctor Sawyer had Randy set up as "control variable" for his experiments, with a life of comfort and ease being part of said experiment]].
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The original story can be found [[https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer_2015 here]], and the extended "Creator's Cut" can be found on Spinpasta [[https://spinpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer_2015:_Creator%27s_Cut here]].
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The original story can be found [[https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer_2015 here]], and the extended "Creator's Cut" can be found on Spinpasta [[https://spinpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer_2015:_Creator%27s_Cut here]]. The author then released a series of sequels, though the last one ends on a cliffhanger
* ''[[https://spinpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer:_Scars_of_Corruption Jeff the Killer: Scars of Corruption]]''
* ''[[https://spinpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer:_Jane Jeff the Killer: Jane]]''
* ''[[https://spinpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer:_The_Disturbingly_Cruel Jeff the Killer: The Disturbingly Cruel]]''
* ''[[https://spinpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer:_Liu Jeff the Killer: Liu]]''
* ''[[https://spinpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer:_Shades_of_Madness Jeff the Killer: Shades of Madness]]''
* ''[[https://spinpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer:_Randy Jeff the Killer: Randy]]''
* ''[[https://spinpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer:_Scars_of_Corruption Jeff the Killer: Scars of Corruption]]''
* ''[[https://spinpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer:_Jane Jeff the Killer: Jane]]''
* ''[[https://spinpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer:_The_Disturbingly_Cruel Jeff the Killer: The Disturbingly Cruel]]''
* ''[[https://spinpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer:_Liu Jeff the Killer: Liu]]''
* ''[[https://spinpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer:_Shades_of_Madness Jeff the Killer: Shades of Madness]]''
* ''[[https://spinpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer:_Randy Jeff the Killer: Randy]]''
* ContrastingSequelProtagonist: ''Liu'' has the title character face even worse harassment then what he and his brother faced previously, given that he is tainted by association with Jeff's crimes. Instead of becoming a killer, he becomes a cynical sellout, cashing in his reputation with the help of a SinisterMinister.
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* DirtyCop: Donald Williamson in ''Scars of Corruption'' is the one who let Randy and co get away with the fight they had with Jeff and Liu as well as the flare gun incident.
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* DirtyCop: DirtyCop:
** Donald Williamsonin ''Scars of Corruption'' is the one who let Randy and co get away with the fight they had with Jeff and Liu as well as the flare gun incident.incident that left Jeff disfigured. ''Scars of Corruption'' explicitly spells out that he was working for Randy's father Maxwell, with Randy wondering if he was paying Williamson with money or had dirt on him.
** ''Shades of Madness'' reveals spoiler:that Doctor Sawyer had police harass Randy's father Maxwell for not participating in his experiment]].
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** ''Shades of Madness'' reveals spoiler:that Doctor Sawyer had police harass Randy's father Maxwell for not participating in his experiment]].
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* FauxAffablyEvil: [[spoiler:Randy says he only stole Jeff and Liu's bikes out of boredom. Unfortunately for Jeff, not only was he lying, he was also just getting Jeff's trust so that he could attack him again. Possibly actually affably evil, but still.]]
* KarmaHoudini:
** Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it. And somehow making them think Jeff ''shot himself with a flare gun.
** Jeff himself, though not as much as the [=GameFuelTv=] version as he only murders his parents, with no clear indication that he plans to continue killing. His parents are [[AssholeVictim asshole victims]] in this version, and while murder is still murder, he does end up having to say goodbye to his brother (who he truly cares for) and leave his house, forcing him to become a homeless loner.
* KarmaHoudini:
** Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it. And somehow making them think Jeff ''shot himself with a flare gun.
** Jeff himself, though not as much as the [=GameFuelTv=] version as he only murders his parents, with no clear indication that he plans to continue killing. His parents are [[AssholeVictim asshole victims]] in this version, and while murder is still murder, he does end up having to say goodbye to his brother (who he truly cares for) and leave his house, forcing him to become a homeless loner.
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* FauxAffablyEvil: JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: [[spoiler:Randy says he only stole Jeff and Liu's bikes out of boredom. Unfortunately for Jeff, not only was he lying, he was also just getting Jeff's trust so that he could attack him again. Possibly actually affably evil, but still.]]
*KarmaHoudini:
** Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it. And somehow making them think Jeff ''shot himself with a flare gun.
**KarmaHoudini: Jeff himself, though not as much as the [=GameFuelTv=] version as he only murders his parents, with no clear indication that he plans to continue killing. His parents are [[AssholeVictim asshole victims]] {{asshole victim}}s in this version, and while murder is still murder, he does end up having to say goodbye to his brother (who he truly cares for) and leave his house, forcing him to become a homeless loner.loner.
* KarmaHoudiniWarranty: Troy and Keith die offpage in ''Scars of Corruption'' and Randy is forced into witness protection.
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** Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it. And somehow making them think Jeff ''shot himself with a flare gun.
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* KarmaHoudiniWarranty: Troy and Keith die offpage in ''Scars of Corruption'' and Randy is forced into witness protection.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: Randy and co get away with the fight they had with Jeff and Liu as well as the flare gun incident that left Jeff disfigured, due to Randy's father having connections with Officer Donald Williamson. ''Shades of Madness'' reveals spoiler:that Doctor Sawyer had Randy set up as "control variable" for his experiments, with a life of comfort and ease being part of said experiment]].
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** The bullies, as opposed to the original killing Randy and leaving Keith and Troy to suffer from UncertainDoom. Now, all three are victims of ChuckCunninghamSyndrome.
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** The bullies, as opposed to In the original killing [=GameFuelTv=] version, the Jeff kills Randy and leaving [[UncertainDoom presumably Troy and Keith]] in the incident that leaves Jeff disfigured. In this version only Jeff is harmed in the incident and Randy and co survive the installment. Subverted with Troy and Keith who a KilledOffscreen before the second installment ''Scars of Corruption'', but Randy goes into witness protection and Troy to suffer from UncertainDoom. Now, all three are victims of ChuckCunninghamSyndrome. lives till the final installment.
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** Randy also claimed to be this when he was hanging out with Jeff. Indeed the later installment confirm [[spoiler:the entire town was an experiment set up for Randy]].
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** Randy also claimed to be this when he was hanging out with Jeff. Indeed the later installment confirm [[spoiler:the entire town was an a psychological experiment set up for Randy]].with Randy as a "control variable"]].
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* WitnessProtection: In ''Scars of Corruption'' Randy goes under witness protection after the deaths of Troy and Keith, living in Utah under the name Sean Beckett, until he outed and decides to leave the program to tell his story. ''Randy'' shows the title character's conflicts with his father, embittered by the loss of his wealth.
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* KarmaHoudini: Jeff himself, though not as much as the [=GameFuelTv=] version as he only murders his parents, with no clear indication that he plans to continue killing. His parents are [[AssholeVictim asshole victims]] in this version, and while murder is still murder, he does end up having to say goodbye to his brother (who he truly cares for) and leave his house, forcing him to become a homeless loner.
* KarmaHoudini: Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it trouble in the first installment, but ''Scars of Corruption'' has Keith and Troy KilledOffscreen and Randy living in witness protection.
* KarmaHoudini: Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it trouble in the first installment, but ''Scars of Corruption'' has Keith and Troy KilledOffscreen and Randy living in witness protection.
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* KarmaHoudini: KarmaHoudini:
** Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it. And somehow making them think Jeff ''shot himself with a flare gun.
** Jeff himself, though not as much as the [=GameFuelTv=] version as he only murders his parents, with no clear indication that he plans to continue killing. His parents are [[AssholeVictim asshole victims]] in this version, and while murder is still murder, he does end up having to say goodbye to his brother (who he truly cares for) and leave his house, forcing him to become a homelessloner.
* KarmaHoudini: Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it trouble in the first installment, but ''Scars of Corruption'' has Keith and Troy KilledOffscreen and Randy living in witness protection.loner.
** Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it. And somehow making them think Jeff ''shot himself with a flare gun.
** Jeff himself, though not as much as the [=GameFuelTv=] version as he only murders his parents, with no clear indication that he plans to continue killing. His parents are [[AssholeVictim asshole victims]] in this version, and while murder is still murder, he does end up having to say goodbye to his brother (who he truly cares for) and leave his house, forcing him to become a homeless
* KarmaHoudini: Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it trouble in the first installment, but ''Scars of Corruption'' has Keith and Troy KilledOffscreen and Randy living in witness protection.
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* TrophyChild: This is how Jeff and Liu's parents treat them. When he and his brother get in trouble for standing up to the local bullies, their parents take the side of the cops, refuse to listen to their children about what happened even when in private, and even send Liu away as punishment. This is all because the bully, Randy, is the son of their father's new boss, and they'd rather look good to their new neighbors than support their children. After Jeff is in the hospital for being hit with a flare gun, his mother is more concerned with how he'll look than if he'll be okay mentally or physically. All of this makes it no wonder they die in this version of the story.
** Randy also claimed to be this when he was hanging out with Jeff.
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* TrophyChild: TrophyChild:
** This is how Jeff and Liu's parents treat them. When he and his brother get in trouble for standing up to the local bullies, their parents take the side of the cops, refuse to listen to their children about what happened even when in private, and even send Liu away as punishment. This is all because the bully, Randy, is the son of their father's new boss, and they'd rather look good to their new neighbors than support their children. After Jeff is in the hospital for being hit with a flare gun, his mother is more concerned with how he'll look than if he'll be okay mentally or physically. All of this makes it no wonder they die in this version of the story.
** Randy also claimed to be this when he was hanging out with Jeff. Indeed the later installment confirm [[spoiler:the entire town was an experiment set up for Randy]].
** This is how Jeff and Liu's parents treat them. When he and his brother get in trouble for standing up to the local bullies, their parents take the side of the cops, refuse to listen to their children about what happened even when in private, and even send Liu away as punishment. This is all because the bully, Randy, is the son of their father's new boss, and they'd rather look good to their new neighbors than support their children. After Jeff is in the hospital for being hit with a flare gun, his mother is more concerned with how he'll look than if he'll be okay mentally or physically. All of this makes it no wonder they die in this version of the story.
** Randy also claimed to be this when he was hanging out with Jeff. Indeed the later installment confirm [[spoiler:the entire town was an experiment set up for Randy]].
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* KarmaHoudini:
** Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it. And somehow making them think Jeff ''shot himself with a flare gun.
** Jeff himself, though not as much as the [=GameFuelTv=] version as he only murders his parents, with no clear indication that he plans to continue killing. His parents are [[AssholeVictim asshole victims]] in this version, and while murder is still murder, he does end up having to say goodbye to his brother (who he truly cares for) and leave his house, forcing him to become a homeless loner.
** Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it. And somehow making them think Jeff ''shot himself with a flare gun.
** Jeff himself, though not as much as the [=GameFuelTv=] version as he only murders his parents, with no clear indication that he plans to continue killing. His parents are [[AssholeVictim asshole victims]] in this version, and while murder is still murder, he does end up having to say goodbye to his brother (who he truly cares for) and leave his house, forcing him to become a homeless loner.
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* KarmaHoudini:
** Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it. And somehow making them think Jeff ''shot himself with a flare gun.
**KarmaHoudini: Jeff himself, though not as much as the [=GameFuelTv=] version as he only murders his parents, with no clear indication that he plans to continue killing. His parents are [[AssholeVictim asshole victims]] in this version, and while murder is still murder, he does end up having to say goodbye to his brother (who he truly cares for) and leave his house, forcing him to become a homeless loner.loner.
* KarmaHoudini: Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it trouble in the first installment, but ''Scars of Corruption'' has Keith and Troy KilledOffscreen and Randy living in witness protection.
** Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it. And somehow making them think Jeff ''shot himself with a flare gun.
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* KarmaHoudini: Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it trouble in the first installment, but ''Scars of Corruption'' has Keith and Troy KilledOffscreen and Randy living in witness protection.
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Jane Arkansaw's father dies [[spoiler:not at the hands of Jeff but of copycats, due to him wanting to demolish the abandoned houses they hang out in]].
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* DirtyCop: Donald Williamson in ''Scars of Corruption'' is the one who let Randy and co get away with the fight they had with Jeff and Liu as well as the flare gun incident.
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** Jeff himself, though not as much as the orginial as he only murders his parents, with no clear indication that he plans to continue killing. His parents are [[AssholeVictim asshole victims]] in this version, and while murder is still murder, he does end up having to say goodbye to his brother (who he truly cares for) and leave his house, forcing him to become a homeless loner.
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** Jeff himself, though not as much as the orginial [=GameFuelTv=] version as he only murders his parents, with no clear indication that he plans to continue killing. His parents are [[AssholeVictim asshole victims]] in this version, and while murder is still murder, he does end up having to say goodbye to his brother (who he truly cares for) and leave his house, forcing him to become a homeless loner.loner.
* NamedInAdaptation:
** Randy is given the surname Hayden.
** ''Scars of Corruption'' gives Keith and Troy the surnames Jacobson and Lockett.
* NamedInAdaptation:
** Randy is given the surname Hayden.
** ''Scars of Corruption'' gives Keith and Troy the surnames Jacobson and Lockett.
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The orginal story can be found [[https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer_2015 here]] and the extended "Creator's Cut can be found on Spinpasta https://spinpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer_2015:_Creator%27s_Cut here]].
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The orginal original story can be found [[https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer_2015 here]] here]], and the extended "Creator's Cut Cut" can be found on Spinpasta https://spinpasta.[[https://spinpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer_2015:_Creator%27s_Cut here]].
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A [[https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer_2015 remake]] of ''Literature/JeffTheKiller'' made by K. Banning Kellum, which won a community vote to be the new ''Jeff the Killer'' story on the creepypasta Fandom wiki.
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A remake of ''Literature/JeffTheKiller'' made by K. Banning Kellum, which won a community vote to be the new ''Jeff the Killer'' story on the creepypasta Fandom wiki.
The orginal story can be found [[https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer_2015remake]] of ''Literature/JeffTheKiller'' made by K. Banning Kellum, which won a community vote to be here]] and the new ''Jeff the Killer'' story extended "Creator's Cut can be found on the creepypasta Fandom wiki.Spinpasta https://spinpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer_2015:_Creator%27s_Cut here]].
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* FauxAffablyEvil: [[spoiler:Randy says he only stole Jeff and Liu's bikes out of boredom. Unfortunately for Jeff, not only was he lying, he was also just getting Jeff's trust so that he could attack him again. Possibly actually affably evil, but still.]
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* FauxAffablyEvil: [[spoiler:Randy says he only stole Jeff and Liu's bikes out of boredom. Unfortunately for Jeff, not only was he lying, he was also just getting Jeff's trust so that he could attack him again. Possibly actually affably evil, but still.]]]
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* KarmaHoudini FauxAffablyEvil: [[spoiler:Randy says he only stole Jeff and Liu's bikes out of boredom. Unfortunately for Jeff, not only was he lying, he was also just getting Jeff's trust so that he could attack him again. Possibly actually affably evil, but still.]
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A [[https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer_2015 remake]] of ''Literature/JeffTheKiller'' made by K. Banning Kallum, which won a community vote to be the new ''Jeff the Killer'' story on the creepypasta Fandom wiki.
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A [[https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer_2015 remake]] of ''Literature/JeffTheKiller'' made by K. Banning Kallum, Kellum, which won a community vote to be the new ''Jeff the Killer'' story on the creepypasta Fandom wiki.
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A [[https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer_2015 remake]] of WebOriginal/JeffTheKiller which was posted in 2015, but was also criticized for the fact that while it managed to fix the broken grammar and plot holes, it still wasn't that great overall.
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A [[https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Jeff_the_Killer_2015 remake]] of WebOriginal/JeffTheKiller ''Literature/JeffTheKiller'' made by K. Banning Kallum, which was posted in 2015, but was also criticized for won a community vote to be the fact that while it managed to fix new ''Jeff the broken grammar and plot holes, it still wasn't that great overall.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Jeff makes it clear that he cares about Liu, even after becoming a killer he spare him and tell him that he loves him.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Jeff makes it clear that he cares about Liu, even after becoming a killer he spare Liu is important to him. He spares him and tell assures him that he loves him.him even after turning become a killer.
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* SlowPacedBeginning: Starts with a description of the weather.
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* AdaptationalHeroism:
** Jeff spares Liu, and his reasons for killing his parents are more understandable since they were not particularly nice to him or Liu. The opening with him trying to kill a child is cut, and it's not even clear if he plans on continuing to kill people.
** In a downplayed example, the bullies, while still huge jerks, never try to kill anyone. There is also no mention of them mugging other kids at knifepoint. They simply mess with Jeff and Liu's bikes and get into a fistfight with them. When they try to get revenge on Jeff later, they do it away from anyone else, and only try to beat him up, whereas in the original, they attacked him at a birthday party with the intent to brutally murder him and threatened all those present.
* AintTooProudToBeg: Jeff's mom in the begs for her life and in a last ditch tries to manipulate Jeff into sparing her.
* BaitTheDog: When Jeff is forced to come to Randy's house, Randy seems like [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold he's not such a bad guy after all]]. The impression given is somebody who only got into a fight against Jeff and Liu because he felt provoked and is willing to let bygones be bygones. As a result, the reader starts thinking he might be a RedHerring who [[NotHisSled has nothing to do with Jeffery Woods becoming Jeff the Killer]]. Even Jeff starts to like him after a while. Then he tries to force Jeff to let Keith and Troy beat him up and [[JerkWithAHeartOfJerk his true colors are revealed]].
* BigBrotherInstinct: Jeff makes it clear that he cares about Liu, even after becoming a killer he spare him and tell him that he loves him.
* {{Expy}}: After his disfigurement Jeff resembles ComicBook/TwoFace, with one half of Jeff's face being perfectly normal looking while the other is horribly disfigured
* KarmaHoudini
** Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it. And somehow making them think Jeff ''shot himself with a flare gun.
** Jeff himself, though not as much as the orginial as he only murders his parents, with no clear indication that he plans to continue killing. His parents are [[AssholeVictim asshole victims]] in this version, and while murder is still murder, he does end up having to say goodbye to his brother (who he truly cares for) and leave his house, forcing him to become a homeless loner.
* SaidBookism: The author seems almost incapable of having anyone simply "say" anything. They blurt, reply, announce, invite, and suggest, but they hardly ever say.
* SlowPacedBeginning: Starts with a description of the weather.
* SparedByTheAdaptation:
** Liu is spared by Jeff after he kills their parents, simply stating that Liu is now "free".
** The bullies, as opposed to the original killing Randy and leaving Keith and Troy to suffer from UncertainDoom. Now, all three are victims of ChuckCunninghamSyndrome.
* TrophyChild: This is how Jeff and Liu's parents treat them. When he and his brother get in trouble for standing up to the local bullies, their parents take the side of the cops, refuse to listen to their children about what happened even when in private, and even send Liu away as punishment. This is all because the bully, Randy, is the son of their father's new boss, and they'd rather look good to their new neighbors than support their children. After Jeff is in the hospital for being hit with a flare gun, his mother is more concerned with how he'll look than if he'll be okay mentally or physically. All of this makes it no wonder they die in this version of the story.
* TwoFaced: Half of Jeff's face gets hideously disfigured by a flare gun.
* ViewersAreGoldfish: The majority of its opening tells us over and over again that Jeff and Liu miss home. It later recaps Jeff's first encounter with the bullies ''in the same scene.''
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!!Tropes:
* AdaptationalHeroism:
** Jeff spares Liu, and his reasons for killing his parents are more understandable since they were not particularly nice to him or Liu. The opening with him trying to kill a child is cut, and it's not even clear if he plans on continuing to kill people.
** In a downplayed example, the bullies, while still huge jerks, never try to kill anyone. There is also no mention of them mugging other kids at knifepoint. They simply mess with Jeff and Liu's bikes and get into a fistfight with them. When they try to get revenge on Jeff later, they do it away from anyone else, and only try to beat him up, whereas in the original, they attacked him at a birthday party with the intent to brutally murder him and threatened all those present.
* AintTooProudToBeg: Jeff's mom in the begs for her life and in a last ditch tries to manipulate Jeff into sparing her.
* BaitTheDog: When Jeff is forced to come to Randy's house, Randy seems like [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold he's not such a bad guy after all]]. The impression given is somebody who only got into a fight against Jeff and Liu because he felt provoked and is willing to let bygones be bygones. As a result, the reader starts thinking he might be a RedHerring who [[NotHisSled has nothing to do with Jeffery Woods becoming Jeff the Killer]]. Even Jeff starts to like him after a while. Then he tries to force Jeff to let Keith and Troy beat him up and [[JerkWithAHeartOfJerk his true colors are revealed]].
* BigBrotherInstinct: Jeff makes it clear that he cares about Liu, even after becoming a killer he spare him and tell him that he loves him.
* {{Expy}}: After his disfigurement Jeff resembles ComicBook/TwoFace, with one half of Jeff's face being perfectly normal looking while the other is horribly disfigured
* KarmaHoudini
** Randy, Keith and Troy get off scot-free by lying their way out of it. And somehow making them think Jeff ''shot himself with a flare gun.
** Jeff himself, though not as much as the orginial as he only murders his parents, with no clear indication that he plans to continue killing. His parents are [[AssholeVictim asshole victims]] in this version, and while murder is still murder, he does end up having to say goodbye to his brother (who he truly cares for) and leave his house, forcing him to become a homeless loner.
* SaidBookism: The author seems almost incapable of having anyone simply "say" anything. They blurt, reply, announce, invite, and suggest, but they hardly ever say.
* SlowPacedBeginning: Starts with a description of the weather.
* SparedByTheAdaptation:
** Liu is spared by Jeff after he kills their parents, simply stating that Liu is now "free".
** The bullies, as opposed to the original killing Randy and leaving Keith and Troy to suffer from UncertainDoom. Now, all three are victims of ChuckCunninghamSyndrome.
* TrophyChild: This is how Jeff and Liu's parents treat them. When he and his brother get in trouble for standing up to the local bullies, their parents take the side of the cops, refuse to listen to their children about what happened even when in private, and even send Liu away as punishment. This is all because the bully, Randy, is the son of their father's new boss, and they'd rather look good to their new neighbors than support their children. After Jeff is in the hospital for being hit with a flare gun, his mother is more concerned with how he'll look than if he'll be okay mentally or physically. All of this makes it no wonder they die in this version of the story.
* TwoFaced: Half of Jeff's face gets hideously disfigured by a flare gun.
* ViewersAreGoldfish: The majority of its opening tells us over and over again that Jeff and Liu miss home. It later recaps Jeff's first encounter with the bullies ''in the same scene.''
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