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* LemonyNarrator: Largely, the entire appeal of the book.
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* OnlySaneMan: Don believes himself to be this, and he may not be wrong.
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* OnlySaneMan: Don believes himself to be this, and he may not might actually be wrong.right if he wasn't pathologically obsessed with his video game.
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* OceanMadness: After floating on a lifeboat for a while, Travis begins to talk to himself, and mis-attributes the replies to his ''spider''.
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* OceanMadness: After floating on a lifeboat for a while, Travis begins to talk to himself, and mis-attributes the replies to his ''spider''. His own crazy voice even says he's not doing it right, since he's speaking the imagined voice out loud instead of it happening inside of his head.
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* HazmatSuit: Home-made out of trash bags and tape.
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A [[AfterTheEnd post-apocalyptic]] novel by [[Creator/BenCroshaw Ben "Yahtzee" Croshaw]], with a twist, and even a couple of [[{{Satire}} satirical]] jabs at some of the apocalypse genre's recurring tropes.
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* ActionSurvivor: Tim tries a ''[[{{Understatement}} little]]'' too hard to be this.
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* ActionSurvivor: Tim tries [[{{Understatement}} a ''[[{{Understatement}} little]]'' too little]] ''too'' hard to be this.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Don's role is to do this and little else.
* GreyGoo: The Jam converts all organic matter it touches into more of itself. It's compared to the classic "Grey Goo eats everyone and covers the earth" scenario a few times.
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* GreyGoo: The Jam converts all organic matter it touches into more of itself. It's compared to the classic "Grey Goo eats everyone and covers the earth" scenario a few times.
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* GreyGoo: The Jam converts all organic matter it touches into more of itself. It's compared to OOCIsSeriousBusiness: When Travis notices in Hibatsu building that Don isn't getting angry, he's immediately distressed and knows that Don is troubled by the classic "Grey Goo eats everyone and covers the earth" scenario a few times.fate of his hard drive.
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* [[spoiler: AnyoneCanDie: Every major character except Travis and Don dies. Deidre/Princess Ravenhair possibly survived, though the book ends before we can confirm that.]]
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* [[spoiler: AnyoneCanDie: Every [[spoiler:Every major character except Travis and Don dies. Deidre/Princess Ravenhair possibly survived, though the book ends before we can confirm that.]]
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* AscendedExtra: Don, one of the human characters in Croshaw's book Literature/{{Mogworld}}, is a main character.
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* AscendedExtra: Don, one of the human characters in Croshaw's book Literature/{{Mogworld}}, ''Literature/{{Mogworld}}'', is a main character.
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* [[spoiler: CassandraTruth: At one point, X says the Jam wasn't released as a deliberate attack. Angela believes her for all of five minutes. Turns out, Y left a sample on the roof of his and X's car and the container broke when they drove off.]]
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* [[spoiler: CassandraTruth: At [[spoiler:At one point, X says the Jam wasn't released as a deliberate attack. Angela believes her for all of five minutes. Turns out, Y left a sample on the roof of his and X's car and the container broke when they drove off.]]
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** Using things lying around their office, Hibatsu had jury rigged a full-scale catapult that used office hardware (printers, filing cabinets) as ammunition. They also made improvised bows, crossbows, and slingshots to shoot box cutter blades, glass, and sharpened DVDs.
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** Using things lying around their office, Hibatsu had jury rigged a full-scale catapult that used office hardware (printers, filing cabinets) as ammunition. They also made improvised bows, crossbows, and slingshots to shoot box cutter blades, glass, and sharpened DVDs.[=DVDs=].
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* [[GreyGoo Red Goo]]: The Jam converts all organic matter it touches into more of itself. It's compared to the classic "Grey Goo eats everyone and covers the earth" scenario a few times.
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* [[GreyGoo Red Goo]]: GreyGoo: The Jam converts all organic matter it touches into more of itself. It's compared to the classic "Grey Goo eats everyone and covers the earth" scenario a few times.
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** VideoGame/HalfLife: [[spoiler: The jam was supplied (and possibly created) by a research facility in New Mexico.]]
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** VideoGame/HalfLife: ''VideoGame/HalfLife'': [[spoiler: The jam was supplied (and possibly created) by a research facility in New Mexico.]]
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** Naming the spider that Travis is talking to (and not getting a response from) Mary may have been a been a joke about SilentHill.
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** Naming the spider that Travis is talking to (and not getting a response from) Mary may have been a been a joke about SilentHill.''VideoGame/SilentHill''.
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* SupportingProtagonist: Travis is the one character that rarely if ever does anything proactive. Angela [[LampshadeHanging notes that]] if this was a film, the main character would be either Tim or Don, depending on whether this was a [[ApocalypseHow world-wide apocalypse of just a localised one]].
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* SupportingProtagonist: Travis is the one character that rarely if ever does anything proactive. Angela [[LampshadeHanging notes that]] if this was a film, the main character would be either Tim or Don, depending on whether this was a [[ApocalypseHow world-wide apocalypse of just a localised localized one]].
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* TheWormThatWalks: The Jam is reffered to as a "swarm" by X and Dr Thorn.
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* WeJustNeedToWaitForRescue: Don insists that this is not the end of civilization as we know it and that the best course of action is to be saved. Interestingly this mentality actually spurs him into action: sticking with the Americans as he believes they will be rescued first and attempting to retrieve his build as it would be needed in a non-post-apocalyptic world.
* TheWormThatWalks: The Jam isreffered referred to as a "swarm" by X and Dr Thorn.
* TheWormThatWalks: The Jam is
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* DysfuntionJunction: Most character are either profoundly neurotic in some way, and the few who aren't are being dragged along.
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* DysfuntionJunction: DysfunctionJunction: Most character are either profoundly neurotic in some way, and the few who aren't are being dragged along.
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* {{Deconstruction}}: Of the Apocalypse, or at least the popular Internet pastime of planning for such hypothetical events as the ZombieApocalypse. As discussed [[http://www.darkhorse.com/Blog/1125/interview-yahtzee-croshaw-about-jam here]], one of the main points of the novel is that if the apocalypse were to occur, there's no guarantee that it would be caused by something pop culture has prepared you for.
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* ActionSurvivor: Tim tries a [[{{Understatement}} little]] too hard to be this.
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* ActionSurvivor: Tim tries a [[{{Understatement}} little]] ''[[{{Understatement}} little]]'' too hard to be this.
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* ApocalypticLog: Angela attempts to keep one. [[spoiler:The battery for her camcorder ran out, but she felt it was too important to stop]].
* ArmiesAreEvil: Played with. Y is a frighteningly-good soldier who willingly murders a lot of people whenever ordered to, and X goes to murderous lengths to conceal her and Y's part in the jampocalypse. Plus, [[spoiler: the American Navy quarantines the entire country and fires upon those who try to escape]]. However, [[spoiler:Y was a very moral person and obeying those orders caused him a lot of psychological grief; also, the quarantine thing was a big misunderstanding and once they know the truth, the entire American Navy basically does a mass HeelFaceTurn.]]
* ArmiesAreEvil: Played with. Y is a frighteningly-good soldier who willingly murders a lot of people whenever ordered to, and X goes to murderous lengths to conceal her and Y's part in the jampocalypse. Plus, [[spoiler: the American Navy quarantines the entire country and fires upon those who try to escape]]. However, [[spoiler:Y was a very moral person and obeying those orders caused him a lot of psychological grief; also, the quarantine thing was a big misunderstanding and once they know the truth, the entire American Navy basically does a mass HeelFaceTurn.]]
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* ApocalypticLog: Angela attempts to keep one. [[spoiler:The battery for her camcorder ran out, out after day 1, but she felt it was too important to stop]].
* ArmiesAreEvil: Played with. Y is a frighteningly-good soldier who willingly murders a lot of people whenever ordered to, and X goes to murderous lengths to conceal her and Y's part in the jampocalypse. Plus, [[spoiler: the American Navy quarantines the entire country and fires upon those who try to escape]]. However, [[spoiler:Y was avery pretty moral person and obeying those orders caused him a lot of psychological grief; also, the quarantine thing was a big misunderstanding and once misunderstanding. Once they know the truth, the entire American Navy basically does a mass HeelFaceTurn.HeelFaceTurn by turning in their superiors.]]
* ArmiesAreEvil: Played with. Y is a frighteningly-good soldier who willingly murders a lot of people whenever ordered to, and X goes to murderous lengths to conceal her and Y's part in the jampocalypse. Plus, [[spoiler: the American Navy quarantines the entire country and fires upon those who try to escape]]. However, [[spoiler:Y was a
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* DudeNotIronic: The central gag of the Bagmen living in a mall is that their group was founded by a bunch of young people on some survivalist internet forum, who constantly misuse the term {{irony}} due to MemeticMutation. Tim eventually [[YouKeepUsingThatWord calls them out on this]] while campaigning to become their new leader.
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* DudeNotIronic: The central gag of the Bagmen living in a mall is that their group was founded by a bunch of young people {{Hipster}}s on some survivalist internet forum, who constantly misuse the term {{irony}} due to MemeticMutation. Tim eventually [[YouKeepUsingThatWord calls them out on this]] while campaigning to become their new leader.
* DysfuntionJunction: Most character are either profoundly neurotic in some way, and the few who aren't are being dragged along.
* DysfuntionJunction: Most character are either profoundly neurotic in some way, and the few who aren't are being dragged along.
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* FunWithAcronyms: X and Y mistake a mis-spelling of HELP for [[spoiler:'''H'''uman '''E'''xtinction '''P'''rotocol '''L'''ibra]].
* GodwinsLaw: Whenever Tim compares a group of survivors to Nazi Germany, Don is quick to call him out on it.
* GodwinsLaw: Whenever Tim compares a group of survivors to Nazi Germany, Don is quick to call him out on it.
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* FunWithAcronyms: X and Y mistake a mis-spelling misspelling of HELP for [[spoiler:'''H'''uman '''E'''xtinction '''P'''rotocol '''L'''ibra]].
* GodwinsLaw: Whenever Tim compares a group of survivors to Nazi Germany, Don is quick to call him out onit.it, calling him a communist.
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** After first travelling with Tim, Don and Travis, Y cuts a deal with Hibatsu to suppress the mall survivor colony and [[spoiler:kills many of them]], as he was trying to fulfill his end of the bargain to protect and extract X, as they had means of communication to the outside. He did what he had to, even nearly killing the protagonists, but [[spoiler:it obviously caused him major psychological grief]] [[spoiler:After his death]], [[ShaggyDogStory it was revealed]] that, in a turn of corporate phrasing, it was just a sheet they had put on the side of their building.
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* {{Hipster}}: Lord Awesomo and his followers. They're ''ironically'' evil. Because not being evil is too mainstream.
* ImprovisedWeapon: Y makes himself a bow-and-arrow out of some sticks and a pair of underpants. The Hipster Cult makes spearsd out of broomsticks and kitchen knives, and later a stun-gun out of a nerf dart shooter, and a [[AerosolFlamethrower a flamethrower out of a barbecue starter, two peices of wood, and three cans of hairspray]].
* IndustrializedEvil: Hibatsu.
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mainstream. Saner (or rather less insane) characters make a point of telling them that people are ''actually'' dying and being murdered.
* ImprovisedWeapon: Y makes himself a bow-and-arrow out of some sticks and a pair of underpants. The Hipster Cult makesspearsd spears out of broomsticks and kitchen knives, and later a stun-gun out of a nerf dart shooter, nerfgun with darts soaked in pepper spray, finally and a an [[AerosolFlamethrower a flamethrower out of a barbecue starter, two peices of wood, and three cans of hairspray]].
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* IndustrializedEvil:Hibatsu.Hibatsu, who applied their corporate thinking to surviving the apocalypse, and are using cold pragmatism to bring what's left of Brisbane under their sway.
* ImprovisedWeapon: Y makes himself a bow-and-arrow out of some sticks and a pair of underpants. The Hipster Cult makes
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** The plastic men formed an "ironic" cult around a guy named Crazy Bob. While they don't sincerely subscribe to a belief system, they do things like kill their members for minor crimes against Crazy Bob (eating his yogurt), and wage a hopeless assault in "ironic holy war" which expends dozens of lives. For a cult they're "ironically" following.
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** They also REALLY emphasize the word whenever they say it (pronounced "eye-RRRRRON-ic" according to Yahtzee's narration).
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** To make things stupidly simple; they confuse "sarcasm" with "irony"; very common with hipsters.
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* AscendedExtra: Don, one of the human characters in Croshaw's book MogWorld, is a main character.
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* ShoutOut: Several to ''Literature/MogWorld'', which may double as {{Continuity Nod}}s since they seem to take place in the same universe.
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* ShoutOut: Several to ''Literature/MogWorld'', ''Literature/{{Mogworld}}'', which may double as {{Continuity Nod}}s since they seem to take place in the same universe.
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-> ''I woke up one morning to find that the entire city had been covered in a three foot layer of man-eating jam.''
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** Semi-justified in that X is a government agent trying to cover it all up, but she's also a very BadLiar. InsaneTrollLogic is pretty much all she has.
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* BreakTheCutie: Poor [[TheWoobie woobieish]] Travis just can't catch a break what with everybody around him either dying, trying to murder him or shouting a lot. Also Dierdre when [[spoiler: Lord Awesomo dies]] and Angela when [[spoiler: she learns that the jampocalypse was a pointless accident.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: Poor [[TheWoobie woobieish]] Travis just can't catch a break what with everybody around him either [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking dying, trying to murder him or shouting a lot.lot]]. Also Dierdre when [[spoiler: Lord Awesomo dies]] and Angela when [[spoiler: she learns that the jampocalypse was a pointless accident.]]
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* [[spoiler: AnyoneCanDie: Every major character except Travis and Don dies.]]
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* MikeNelsonDestroyerOfWorlds: X and Y accidentally release the jam by leaving it on the roof of their car.
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* MikeNelsonDestroyerOfWorlds: X and Y [[spoiler: accidentally release the jam by leaving it on the roof of their car.car]].
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* FunWithAcronyms: X and Y mistake a mis-spelling of HELP for [[spoiler:'''H'''uman '''E'''xtinction '''P'''rotocol '''L'''ibra]].
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