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%%* ActionGirl: Attia.
* BecomeARealBoy: [[spoiler:Incarceron's goal in ''Sapphique'' is to acquire a human body.]]
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* IJustWantToBeHuman: [[spoiler:Incarceron's goal in ''Sapphique'' is to acquire a human body.]]
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* PrinceCharmless: Caspar.
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%%%* TraumaInducedAmnesia: [[spoiler: Finn [[spoiler:Finn had this]].this.]]
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: John Arlex is the Warden of Incarceron. Very rarely does anyone call him anything else.
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* FaintingSeer: Finn's visions come with seizures, unless he's already asleep.
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* ActionGirl: Attia.
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* AlienSky: A few of Incarceron's wings have these.
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* AntiHero: Finn and Keiro.
* ArtificialHuman: If the cell-born actually exist, they would be this.
* ArtificialHuman: If the cell-born actually exist, they would be this.
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* [[spoiler:BadFuture]]: TheReveal near the end of Book 1.
* BelligerentSexualTension: Between Keiro and Attia.
* BigBad: Queen Sia.
* BiggerBad: While Queen Sia is the main threat in the Realm, the true evil is Incarceron.
* BelligerentSexualTension: Between Keiro and Attia.
* BigBad: Queen Sia.
* BiggerBad: While Queen Sia is the main threat in the Realm, the true evil is Incarceron.
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* [[spoiler:BadFuture]]: BadFuture [[spoiler: TheReveal near the end of Book 1.
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* BiggerBad: WhileQueen Sia is the main threat in the Realm, the true evil is Incarceron.realm.
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* BrainComputerInterface: The Glove.
* BreakingSpeech: Incarceron is very proficient at this.
* BreakingSpeech: Incarceron is very proficient at this.
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* CommLinks: One of the properties of the keys.
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* ColdBlueEyes: The Warden, a cold and calculating man, has gray eyes, one of which actually appears in Incarceron's sky at one point. Queen Sia is also noted to have creepily pale eyes and is a terrible person.
* CommLinks: One of the properties of thekeys.keys is communication.
* CommLinks: One of the properties of the
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* CosmicPlaything: The prisoners.
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Evian when his assassination attempt fails.]]
* {{Dystopia}}: Incarceron became one when men lost control over it.
* {{Dystopia}}: Incarceron became one when men lost control over it.
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** Incarceron became one when men lost control over it.
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* EldritchAbomination: Incarceron itself is pretty much this, albeit created by man.
* EvilTwin: [[spoiler:The fake Giles (the Pretender)]].
* EvilTwin: [[spoiler:The fake Giles (the Pretender)]].
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* EldritchAbomination: Incarceron itself is pretty much this, a living prison with alien skies and a twisted mentality, albeit it was created by man.
* EvilTwin: [[spoiler:The fake Giles (thePretender)]].Pretender) is evil in contrast to the real Giles]].
* EvilTwin: [[spoiler:The fake Giles (the
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* GeniusLoci: Incarceron.
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: Incarceron.
* [[spoiler: GoodAllAlong]]: [[spoiler:Lord Evian, though "good" [[WellIntentionedExtremist may be a speculative term.]]]]
* [[spoiler: GoodAllAlong]]: [[spoiler:Lord Evian, though "good" [[WellIntentionedExtremist may be a speculative term.]]]]
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* GrayEyes: The Warden, a cold and calculating man, has gray eyes, one of which actually appears in Incarceron's sky at one point. Queen Sia is also noted to have creepily pale gray eyes and is a terrible person.
* GreatEscape
* GreatEscape
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* GrayEyes: GreatEscape: The Warden, main characters are trying to escape from a cold and calculating man, has gray eyes, one of which actually appears in Incarceron's sky at one point. Queen Sia GeniusLoci prison. It is also noted to have creepily pale gray eyes and is quite a terrible person.
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* IJustWantToBeHuman: [[spoiler:Incarceron's goal in ''Sapphique''.]]
* ImpaledPalm: Keiro uses it to steal Jormandric's rings.
* IncurableCoughOfDeath: Jared.
* ImpaledPalm: Keiro uses it to steal Jormandric's rings.
* IncurableCoughOfDeath: Jared.
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* IJustWantToBeHuman: [[spoiler:Incarceron's goal in ''Sapphique''.''Sapphique'' is to acquire a human body.]]
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Keiro.
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* LaserHallway: Incarceron can make them when it locks down.
* LiteralSurveillanceBug: A creation of Jared's.
* LiteralSurveillanceBug: A creation of Jared's.
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* LaserHallway: Incarceron can make them fill halls with lazers when it locks down.
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* MacGuffin: [[spoiler:The keys.]]
** [[spoiler:Sapphique's glove in the sequel.]]
** [[spoiler:Sapphique's glove in the sequel.]]
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* MadeOfIron: A bit literally for Half-Men [[spoiler:and Keiro]].
* MalevolentArchitecture: Incarceron, naturally.
* MalevolentArchitecture: Incarceron, naturally.
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* NothingPersonal: The assassin sent after Jared emphasizes this.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: Incarceron's eyes are red.
* SatisfiedStreetRat: Keiro ''oozes'' this.
* ScavengerWorld: Both inside and outside the prison.
* ScienceFantasy: The novel has both fantasy and sci-fi elements.
* ShroudedInMyth: Sapphique.
* SilkHidingSteel: Claudia
* SinisterSurveillance: Incarceron's Eyes.
* SatisfiedStreetRat: Keiro ''oozes'' this.
* ScavengerWorld: Both inside and outside the prison.
* ScienceFantasy: The novel has both fantasy and sci-fi elements.
* ShroudedInMyth: Sapphique.
* SilkHidingSteel: Claudia
* SinisterSurveillance: Incarceron's Eyes.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Jared. See UnderestimatingBadassery below.
* TraumaInducedAmnesia: [[spoiler: Finn had this]].
* TraumaInducedAmnesia: [[spoiler: Finn had this]].
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Well, many of them. They're the Steel Wolves.
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* SuperIntelligent: The Sapients, who created Incarceron and now hold all the advanced knowledge of the past before Era.
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* SuperIntelligent: SuperIntelligence: The Sapients, who created Incarceron and now hold all the advanced knowledge of the past before Era.
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* TheUnreveal: Throughout the books, there's some tension over whether Finn is ''really'' Giles, or is a cellborn who has some of the prince's memories and the tattoo because Giles was recycled into him. The Warden repeatedly evades the question--the closest thing he gives to a straight answer is that once Claudia claims Finn is the prince, they must make him be or they're all screwed. [[spoiler: Finn gets all his memories back, but the Warden's refusal to come down on one side or the other calls this into question.]]
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* NoHuggingNoKissing: No romance, although Claudia and Finn were engaged and [[spoiler: get married]].
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* TheUnreveal: Throughout the books, there's some tension over whether Finn is ''really'' Giles, or is a cellborn who has some of the prince's memories and the tattoo because Giles was recycled into him. The Warden repeatedly evades the question--the closest thing he gives to a straight answer is that once Claudia claims Finn is the prince, they must make him be or they're all screwed. [[spoiler: Finn gets all his memories back, but the Warden's refusal to come down on one side or the other calls this into question.]]
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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: Everyone's visions/hallucinations of Sapphique, particularly when Jared dreams that Sapphique is taking care of him during a bad episode of his illness that comes on [[spoiler: during his flight from the Academy after an attempted assassination.]] He wakes up alone in the woods, but as recovered as if somebody really ''did'' take care of him.
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* GrayEyes: The Warden, a cold and calculating man, has gray eyes, one of which actually appears in Incarceron's sky at one point. Queen Sia is also noted to have creepily pale gray eyes and is a terrible person.
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* ConnectedAllAlong: Turns out that [[spoiler: Claudia and Incarceron]] already know each other, although one of them doesn't remember it, and that [[spoiler: "Blaize", the Sapiens who rescues Finn and crew, is the Warden, so he actually meets Finn in person ''before'' Claudia does.]]
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Most nobles, especially Queen Sia, are happy to enforce the rules of Protocol on others while using all kinds of advanced technology behind the scenes.
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* ArtisticLicenseHistory: In-universe; not everyone is terribly good at maintaining Era, and Jared notes upon watching a game of croquet (from the mid-1800s, when they seem to be aiming for the 1700s at the latest) that Queen Sia cherrypicks whatever she likes best rather than going for accuracy.
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* MeaningfulName: The name of Martor Sapiens, the original leader of the Sapienti who willingly entered Incarceron with the intent to guide and care for the inmates, is homonymous with "martyr".
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* {{Gnosticism}}: Present. The most obvious Gnostic motif is, of course, Incarceron itself, a created sentient malevolent superbeing ruling over its own world and playing God while not actually being one.
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* CrystalDragonJesus: Sapphique, who is said to have been the only known escapee, is worshiped as a god, and is sometimes called "The Nine-Fingered One" by his followers. He gained this nickname [[spoiler:as the result of losing one of his fingers to a beast within the Prison.]]
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* CrystalDragonJesus: Sapphique, who is said to have been the only known escapee, is worshiped as a god, and is sometimes called "The Nine-Fingered One" by his followers. He gained this nickname [[spoiler:as as the result of losing one of his fingers to a beast within the Prison.]]
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* ThrowingDownTheGauntlet: Finn challenges the Pretender to a duel by doing the traditional "chuck a glove at him".
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* CharacterTitle: Both books. A bit clearer in ''Sapphique'' since Incarceron is a GeniusLoci.
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* CharacterTitle: Both books. A bit clearer in ''Sapphique'' since Incarceron is a GeniusLoci.GeniusLoci and could also fall under ThePlace.
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* CharacterTitle: ''Sapphique''.
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* CharacterTitle: ''Sapphique''.Both books. A bit clearer in ''Sapphique'' since Incarceron is a GeniusLoci.
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* GildedCage: The Realm at first looks like a perfect place (for the rich at least), but it's actually ruled by a tyrannical elite who enforces Protocol. Just like in Incarceron, people are not free.
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* GildedCage: The Realm at first looks like a perfect place (for the rich at least), but it's actually ruled by a tyrannical elite who enforces enforce Protocol. Just like in Incarceron, people are not free.
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* HedgeMaze: The Wardenry, in keeping with its fancy manor house status, has one. It's mostly portrayed positively, as a place Claudia and Jared can get privacy.
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* TrickedOutGloves: Sapphique's Glove in, well, ''Sapphique''. Rix also has several gloves that sparkle and are filled with acid.
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* LaserHallway: Incarceron can make them when it locks down.
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* AnimalMotifs: Birds, in keeping with the freedom theme. The Havaarna inheritance is symbolized by an eagle, and the Wardenry by a swan. Jared's blue feathers show up multiple times in ''Sapphique'', and Sapphique is almost always represented winged. The motif is not always used positively, though: the Pretender's eagle mask underscores his usurpation, Incarceron threatens its prisoners with the metaphor of Prometheus eaten by the eagle, and "bird with a broken wing" is used for [[the Maestra's]] death.
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* AnimalMotifs: Birds, in keeping with the freedom theme. The Havaarna inheritance is symbolized by an eagle, and the Wardenry by a swan. Jared's blue feathers show up multiple times in ''Sapphique'', and Sapphique is almost always represented winged. The motif is not always used positively, though: the Pretender's eagle mask underscores his usurpation, Incarceron threatens its prisoners with the metaphor of Prometheus eaten by the eagle, and "bird with a broken wing" is used for [[the [[spoiler:the Maestra's]] death.
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* AnimalMotifs: Birds, in keeping with the freedom theme. The Havaarna inheritance is symbolized by an eagle, and the Wardenry by a swan. Jared's blue feathers show up multiple times in ''Sapphique'', and Sapphique is almost always represented winged. The motif is not always used positively, though: the Pretender's eagle mask underscores his usurpation, Incarceron threatens its prisoners with the metaphor of Prometheus eaten by the eagle, and "bird with a broken wing" is used for [[the Maestra's]] death.
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* MalevolentArchitecture: Incarceron, naturally.
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* ArtificialHuman: If the cell-born actually exist, they would be this.
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* NothingPersonal: The assassin sent after Jared emphasizes this.
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* IcarusAllusion: Another Sapphique tale involves him building artificial wings to try and Escape via Incarceron's sky/ceiling. Incarceron doesn't approve and casts him down.
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* PsychicDreamsForEveryone: By ''Sapphique'', not only is Finn still getting visions, but Attia and Jared have started having dreams about Sapphique too.
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* Fingore: With a title like "Nine-Fingered One", what were you really expecting?
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* Fingore: {{Fingore}}: With a title like "Nine-Fingered One", what were you really expecting?
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* Fingore: With a title like "Nine-Fingered One", what were you really expecting?
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* TookALevelInBadass: Jared. See UnderestimatingBadassery below.
