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* DirtyCop; Quite a few lawmen are corrupt or abuse their authority, but Inspector Mahoney in ''The Black Dove'' stands out.

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* DirtyCommies: The haughty antagonists in [[spoiler:the short story "Bad News"]] are embezzlers out to finance their dream of funding a communist [[spoiler:daily paper.]]
* DirtyCop; Quite a few lawmen are corrupt or abuse their authority, but Inspector Mahoney in ''The Black Dove'' stands out.out for his sheer, unabashed viciousness.


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** In "Partners in Crime", Marshal Bewley tries to run the brothers out of town due to paranoia that they will run against him [[spoiler:and because he is taking bribes from a bootlegger in a dry state,]] and won’t even try to investigate a crime (albeit one slightly outside his jurisdiction) he could conceivably pin on them but knows they are innocent of.

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# ''Partners in Crime'': A second short story collection of five of the brothers’ adventures set prior to the eighth book.

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# ''Partners in Crime'': A second short story collection of five of the brothers’ adventures set prior to between the fifth and eighth book.
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* ClothingConcealedInjury: A dog-napper in "Curious Incidents" is partially exposed due to not taking off a pair of muddy gloves that he needs to hide a fresh dog bite.
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* CoincidentalAccidentalDisguise: In the short story "Bad News," a newspaperman is robbed by a white-robed man who he insists must be a [=KKK=] member from the local StillFightingTheCivilWar Democratic Party, out to strike against him due to his Republican politics. The robber encourages this impression afterward to divert the investigation but really only wore the white robe (likely stolen from a church choir closet) and hood because he didn't have time to change out of his distinctive clothes or find something else to hide his locally well-known face before the unplanned robbery and needed something to to completely cover his features and clothes.


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* PhotoOpWithTheDog: A plot point in the short story "My Christmas Story" is two railroad executives and an employee dressed as Santa Claus planning to have themselves photographed donating a bunch of Christmas trees to a CompanyTown without many trees.


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* SouthernGentleman: Julius Horatio Riggs from the short story "Bad News" is a well-dressed man with a thick Southern accent and a gracious, good-humored manner. The "Southern" part outweighs the "gentleman", though, as his demeanor can quickly get colder (although still relatively civil) toward anyone who disagrees with his politics, which includes sitting around a saloon with a Confederate flag proudly displayed in it.
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* BaitAndSwitch: The eponymous short story in ''Partners in Crime'' draws attention to how the oily Mr. Dishanne owns a real estate company that buys up a lot of property whose owners leave town or die and also owns an insurance company that is getting more business due to the bad luck of the townspeople. Actually, Dishane apparently runs both companies honestly and his real criminal secret is owning a speakeasy.

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* BaitAndSwitch: The eponymous short story in ''Partners in Crime'' draws attention to how the oily Mr. Dishanne owns a real estate company that buys up a lot of property whose owners leave town or die and also owns an insurance company that is getting more business due to the bad luck of the townspeople. Actually, Dishane apparently runs both companies honestly (in the legal if not moral sense) and his real criminal secret is owning a speakeasy.
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* BaitAndSwitch: The eponymous short story in ''Partners in Crime'' draws attention to how the oily Mr. Dishanne owns a real estate company that buys up a lot of property whose owners leave town or die and also owns an insurance company that is getting more business due to the bad luck of the townspeople. Actually, Dishane apparently runs both companies honestly and his real criminal secret is owning a speakeasy.


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* ChristmasEpisode: The short story "My Christmas Story" in ''Partners in Crime'' features the Amlingneyer Brothers setting out to find a Christmas tree for their landlady and stumbling into a case involving a man who was shot while dressed as Krampus.


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* GracefulLoser:
** In ''Hunters of the Dead'', [[spoiler:Mead makes no effort to deny the accusations against him or escape after being exposed as an accomplice to murder and shows some tired relief that the deception is over.]]
** The eponymous short story in ''Partners in Crime'' ends with one of the culprits laughing merrily after being exposed and facing public censure but (probably) not jail time. It helps that the summation also humiliated some other characters that person dislikes.

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* PoliceAreUseless: Often averted, although the brothers are the ones to do the real mystery-solving, the actual authorities are generally competent at their jobs (although there are exceptions).

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* PoliceAreUseless: Often averted, averted or zigzagged, although the brothers are the ones to do the real mystery-solving, the actual authorities are generally competent at their jobs (although there are exceptions).



** Played completely straight with Marshal Nickles, from one of the short stories in ''Dear Mr. Holmes.'' Nickles is a bullying, bigoted man who is quick to seize the obvious solution and reluctant to admit that he's wrong

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** Played completely straight Larry Hellyer from ''Hunters of the Dead'' is a blacksmith who is a part-time constable for extra cash and shows absolutely no courage or imagination in investigating crimes or keeping the peace, with much of his constituency rightfully viewing him as a complete moron. He is also a passive BigotWithABadge who is quick to believe the worst of Native Americans.
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Marshal Nickles, from one of the short stories in ''Dear Mr. Holmes.'' Nickles Holmes'' is a bullying, bigoted man who is quick to seize the obvious solution and reluctant to admit that he's wrongwrong.
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* ThoseTwoGuys: Wentworth and Mead, the junior paleontologists in ''Hunters of the Dead''. Wentworth is always making stupid or condescending comments and being told to shut up by Mead. [[spoiler:This takes on a darker turn after TheReveal that Wentworth is the killer and Mead is his GuiltRiddenAccomplice who hates him for turning them into criminals and being too selfish and stupid to even care.]]
* ThoughtTheyKnewAlready: Late in ''Hunters of the Dead'', Big Red reveals his suspicions that [[spoiler:Professor Durgin found the dinosaur skeleton during a previous dig where he was still working for someone else but hid his discovery until later, when he was an independent operator who could keep it for himself.]] Eskaminzim confirms this theory by commenting that his scouting of digs around the area made it obvious that [[spoiler:Durgin had marked the area on his previous dig]], but it was so obvious to him that he assumed everyone else knew.
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* NomDeMom: In ''Hunters of the Dead'' [[spoiler:Peanut butter tycoon Olivia Pertewee uses her mother’s maiden name, Haynes, while travelling with an expedition she sponsored under her male alter ego Professor Pertwee, an identity she assumed because no one would loan start-up capital to a woman.]]
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: People’s awkwardness about swearing in front of women and the severe amount of racism and sexism in the Wild West are frequently at play, although the Amlingmeyer brothers themselves and many of their friends are above these attitudes. In both ''The Double-A Western Detective Agency'' and ''Hunters of the Dead'', Apache detective Eskaminzim has to hide his involvement in shootouts with outlaws because a Native American killing a white man under any circumstances might get him lynched, with his black associate Hoop also showing such concern, albeit to a lesser degree.


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* NotSoDifferentRemark: Two such comments are made in ''Hunters of the Dead''.
** While Old Red is willing to concede that shady fossil hunter Walter Glaze was an AssholeVictim, he admits that he could emphasize with Glaze in that they were both talented members of their professions who struggled to get people to take them seriously due to being self-taught and a little rough behind the edges.
** Shoshone {{Mook}} Doyadukubichi comments that he only hangs out with and helps a group of white gunmen because blending in with them is the only way for a tough adult Native American to "stay off the reservation without getting shot for it" and comments that Eskaminzim (the half-Apache detective working for the Double-A Western Detective Agency) should be able to understand that.
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* BeastInTheBuilding: In ''Hunters of the Dead'', two well-behaved pigs are inside the local bar. The bartender explains that hungry thieves kept stealing his pigs when he kept them in a pen outside.


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* BrokenPedestal: In ''Hunters of the Dead'', novice paleontologist Miss Haynes has just said that no paleontologist would ever destroy a fossil when her boss and rumored lover, Professor Durgin, admits that when he worked for them, his rivals Loveland and Glaze dynamited multiple skeletons rather than let another scientist get them and that he stood by under protest and let it happen. Miss Hayes is somewhat disillusioned with everyone involved after this reveal, a sentiment which grows after it turns out both Durgin and Loveland have other secrets.

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# ''Hunters of the Dead'': The brothers are hired as guards at a fossil dig in Wyoming, where shady academic politics become much more serious when a body is found in one of the dig pits.

# ''Partners in Crime'': A second short story collection of five of the brothers’ adventures set prior to the eighth book.

# Unreleased tenth book: The brothers go to Galveston, Texas, to investigate a murder related to a food tycoon's business.

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1. ''Holmes On the Range'': The brothers are hired by a ranch, owned by absent English aristocrats, and observe lots of mysterious behavior from the regular employees. Then the ranch manager dies in a mysterious stampede, the owners of the ranch arrive for an inspection, and the brothers find themselves investigating their first big case.

2. ''On the Wrong Track'': Working as railroad detectives, the Amlingmeyers' encounter train robbers, a famed PinkertonDetective, a woman who is not what she seems, a Chinese archaeologist trying to bring home some priceless artifacts, and more.

3. ''The Black Dove'': A friend's murder in Chinatown has the brothers and their new associate Diana looking into DirtyCops', [[TriadsAndTongs Tongs]], and a mysterious missing prostitute.

4. ''The Crack in the Lens'': The brothers journey to look into the years old death of Old Red's fiancee, encountering a resentful lawman, sinister pimps, and strong indications of a local SerialKiller.

5. ''World's Greatest Sleuth'': The brothers find themselves competing with lots of other detectives, including their old friend Diana, to win a $10,000 prize, and some much needed publicity. Instead, they get involved in a deeper mystery when the contest organizer turns up dead.

6. ''The Double-A Western Detective Agency'': Now working as part of a larger agency, the brothers journey to take a job that lands them in the middle of a race-fueled range war.

7. ''Dear Mr. Holmes'': A short story collection, with stories set at various points in the brothers lives.

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1. # ''Holmes On the Range'': The brothers are hired by a ranch, owned by absent English aristocrats, and observe lots of mysterious behavior from the regular employees. Then the ranch manager dies in a mysterious stampede, the owners of the ranch arrive for an inspection, and the brothers find themselves investigating their first big case.

2. # ''On the Wrong Track'': Working as railroad detectives, the Amlingmeyers' encounter train robbers, a famed PinkertonDetective, a woman who is not what she seems, a Chinese archaeologist trying to bring home some priceless artifacts, and more.

3. # ''The Black Dove'': A friend's murder in Chinatown has the brothers and their new associate Diana looking into DirtyCops', [[TriadsAndTongs Tongs]], and a mysterious missing prostitute.

4. # ''The Crack in the Lens'': The brothers journey to look into the years old death of Old Red's fiancee, encountering a resentful lawman, sinister pimps, and strong indications of a local SerialKiller.

5. # ''World's Greatest Sleuth'': The brothers find themselves competing with lots of other detectives, including their old friend Diana, to win a $10,000 prize, and some much needed publicity. Instead, they get involved in a deeper mystery when the contest organizer turns up dead.

6. # ''Dear Mr. Holmes'': A short story collection, with stories set at various points in the brothers lives before or between the first five books.

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''The Double-A Western Detective Agency'': Now working as part of a larger agency, the brothers journey to take a job that lands them in the middle of a race-fueled range war.

7. ''Dear Mr. Holmes'': A short story collection, with stories set at various points in the brothers lives.



* ATrueStoryInMyUniverse: Exaggerated. ''Every'' detective story published in magazines, from ''Literature/SherlockHolmes'', to ''Literature/NickCarter'' is presented as having been sold as factual memoirs (although many such as Carter and the fictional "Billy Steele, Boy Detective" are fabrications by the authors), with the Alingmeyer brothers publishing their own.

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* ATrueStoryInMyUniverse: Exaggerated. ''Every'' detective story published in magazines, from ''Literature/SherlockHolmes'', to ''Literature/NickCarter'' is presented as having been sold as factual memoirs (although many such as Carter and the fictional "Billy Steele, Boy Detective" are fabrications by the authors), with the Alingmeyer brothers publishing their own.own autobiographical mystery tales.



* TheAtoner: In ''The Crack in the Lens'' Bob and Lottie are helping them partially out of friendship, and partially because [[spoiler: They took the money that Old Red and Adeline were going to use to start a new life together after she died and used it to buy themselves a fresh start]].

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* TheAtoner: In ''The Crack in the Lens'' Bob and Lottie are helping them the brothers partially out of friendship, and partially because [[spoiler: They took the money that Old Red and Adeline were going to use to start a new life together after she died and used it to buy themselves a fresh start]].



* ComicallyCrossEyed: Averted with the cross-eyed Swivel-Eye Smith in the first book, who is the least comical of their fellow cowboys.
* DirtyCop; Quite a few, but Inspector Mahoney in ''The Black Dove'' stands out.

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* ComicallyCrossEyed: Averted with the cross-eyed Swivel-Eye Smith in the first book, who is cross-eyed but is the least comical of their fellow cowboys.
* DirtyCop; Quite a few, few lawmen are corrupt or abuse their authority, but Inspector Mahoney in ''The Black Dove'' stands out.



* FarmersDaughter: Fiona and Eileen from the short story ''The Water Indian'' showing the brothers quite a bit of attention while their stopped at the farmhouse.

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* FarmersDaughter: Fiona and Eileen from the short story ''The Water Indian'' showing show the brothers quite a bit of attention while their stopped at the their family farmhouse.



* HardBoiledDetective: King Brady is considered one, although he strikes the brothers as being too much of a dandy, until [[spoiler: until they meet the real King Brady]]. ''Literature/NickCarter'' is also mentioned, disdainfully, a few times.

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* HardBoiledDetective: King Brady is considered one, although he strikes the brothers as being too much of a dandy, until [[spoiler: until they meet the real King Brady]].Brady and learn the other man is his far less
Competent body double]].
''Literature/NickCarter'' is also mentioned, disdainfully, a few times.



* HookerWithAHeartOfGold: All of the ones seen or mentioned in, ''The Crack In the Lens'' and ''The Black Dove'' are god-natured and trustworthy, except for [[spoiler: Big Bess]], although it's made clear that UnproblematicProstitution is ''not'' a phrase they would use to describe their lives.

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* HookerWithAHeartOfGold: All of the ones prostitutes seen or mentioned in, ''The Crack In the Lens'' and ''The Black Dove'' are god-natured and trustworthy, except for [[spoiler: Big Bess]], although it's made clear that UnproblematicProstitution is ''not'' a phrase they would use to describe their lives.



** In the first short story, Old Red observes that a suspicious drifter taken in by the cattle drive kept demanding everyone stay away from his saddle bags, which naturally made everyone more curious about them. Said saddle bags turn out to contain [[spoiler: Proof that the man is a wanted fugitive]]. This is inverted when Old Red deduces that [[spoiler:he was deliberately baiting them into looking into his saddlebags as part of a BatmanGambit to trick the cattle drive into taking him to the nearest town to turn him in for the reward, when a party of bushwhackers planning to kill them and steal the herd were waiting outside of said town]].
** In ''World's Greatest Sleuth,'' [[spoiler:Boothby Greene and Blackheath-Murray discard their European shoes and buy replacements from a local shoemaker after realizing the brothers know that Curtis's killer wore European shoes.]] Almost all of the suspects own [[spoiler:European shoes]] and [[spoiler:Old Red becomes suspicious of how they just happen to have locally sold shoes]], so that cover-up backfires.

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** In the first short story, Old Red observes that a suspicious drifter taken in by the cattle drive kept demanding everyone stay away from his saddle bags, which naturally made everyone more curious about them. Said saddle bags turn out to contain [[spoiler: Proof proof that the man is a wanted fugitive]]. This is inverted when Old Red deduces that [[spoiler:he was deliberately baiting them into looking into his saddlebags as part of a BatmanGambit to trick the cattle drive into taking him to the nearest town to turn him in for the reward, when a party of bushwhackers planning to kill them and steal the herd were waiting outside of said town]].
** In ''World's Greatest Sleuth,'' [[spoiler:Boothby Greene and Blackheath-Murray discard their European shoes and buy replacements from a local shoemaker after realizing the brothers know that Curtis's killer wore European shoes.]] Almost all of the innocent suspects own [[spoiler:European shoes]] and [[spoiler:Old Red becomes suspicious of how they the Englishmen just happen to have come to Chicago wearing locally sold shoes]], so that cover-up backfires.



* SummationGathering: Old Red naturally does these at the end of each case (although often with the clear indication that it's building up to some kind of fight), most impressively when does so in front a crowd of hundreds of people (along with the Crowes, and the various suspects) in ''World's Greatest Sleuth''. Subverted in ''A Crack in the Lens'' where first he and Big Red are alone with the sheriff and try to convince him of what they have figured out so far (which isn't everything), and later, once they have a complete picture, the brothers are AloneWithThePsycho and desperately trying to stall while being held at gunpoint. ''World's Greatest Sleuth'' also has M. Valmont do this, but he's largely bluffing, not having any definite conclusion of his own yet, and hoping to stir things up.

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* SummationGathering: Old Red naturally does these reveals the culprit in the presence of all of the suspects at the end of each case (although often with the clear indication that it's building up to some kind of fight), most impressively when does so in front a crowd of hundreds of people (along with the Crowes, and the various suspects) in ''World's Greatest Sleuth''. Subverted in ''A Crack in the Lens'' where first he and Big Red are alone with the sheriff and try to convince him of what they have figured out so far (which isn't everything), and later, once they have a complete picture, the brothers are AloneWithThePsycho and desperately trying to stall while being held at gunpoint. ''World's Greatest Sleuth'' also has M. Valmont do this, hist such a gathering, but he's largely bluffing, not having any definite conclusion of his own yet, and hoping to stir things up.

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* BoyfriendBlockingDad: Colonel Crowe is this to his adoptive daughter Diana, and shows some irritation in the brothers interest in her.



* OverprotectiveDad: Colonel Crowe is this to his adoptive daughter Diana, and shows some irritation in the brothers interest in her.
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Otto "Big Red" Amlingmeyer, a German-American cowboy in the 1890's, finds himself stuck as TheWatson to his brother Gustav "Old Red", a taciturn (yet illiterate) detective studying the methods of ''Literature/SherlockHolmes''. The brothers gradually make both friends and enemies throughout their cases, which provide a mix of action-adventure, comedy, and detective fiction. The novels follow the brothers' journey from wannabe sleuths to near GreatDetective status.

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Otto "Big Red" Amlingmeyer, a German-American cowboy in the 1890's, 1890s, finds himself stuck as TheWatson to his brother Gustav "Old Red", a taciturn (yet illiterate) detective studying the methods of ''Literature/SherlockHolmes''.Literature/SherlockHolmes. The brothers gradually make both friends and enemies throughout their cases, which provide a mix of action-adventure, comedy, and detective fiction. The novels follow the brothers' journey from wannabe sleuths to near GreatDetective status.
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-->'''Old Red:''' Who'd you think we were, anyway?\\

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''"You mean [[spoiler:[[AmbiguousSyntax The man who took 'em?" I pantominined pressing a camera button with my thumb. Or the man who took 'em? I swiped an imaginary picture off the wall and tucked it under my jacket.]]]]''\\
'''Old Red:''' Good God, Otto--don't you see how it all fits together? [[spoiler:They're the same man.]]

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''"You mean [[spoiler:[[AmbiguousSyntax The man who took 'em?" I pantominined pressing a camera button with my thumb. Or "Or the man who took 'em? 'em?" I swiped an imaginary picture off the wall and tucked it under my jacket.]]]]''\\
'''Old Red:''' Good God, Otto--don't you see how it all fits together? [[spoiler:They're They're the same man.]]
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3. ''The Black Dove'': A friend's murder in Chinatown has the brothers and their new associate Diana looking into DirtyCops' [[TriadsAndTongs Tongs]], and a mysterious missing prostitute.

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3. ''The Black Dove'': A friend's murder in Chinatown has the brothers and their new associate Diana looking into DirtyCops' DirtyCops', [[TriadsAndTongs Tongs]], and a mysterious missing prostitute.



5. ''World's Greatest Sleuth'': The brothers find themselves competing with lots of others detectives, including their old friend Diana, to win a $10,000 prize, and some much needed publicity, only to get involved in a deeper mystery when the contest organizer turns up dead.

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5. ''World's Greatest Sleuth'': The brothers find themselves competing with lots of others other detectives, including their old friend Diana, to win a $10,000 prize, and some much needed publicity, only to publicity. Instead, they get involved in a deeper mystery when the contest organizer turns up dead.

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2. ''On the Wrong Track'', working as railroad detectives, the Amlingmeyers' encounter train robbers, a famed PinkertonDetective, a woman who is not what she seems, a Chinese archaeologist trying to bring home some priceless artifacts, and more.

3. ''The Black Dove'', a friend's murder in Chinatown has the brothers and their new associate Diana looking into DirtyCops' [[TriadsAndTongs Tongs]], and a mysterious missing prostitute.

4. ''The Crack in the Lens'', the brothers journey to look into the years old death of Old Red's fiancee, encountering a resentful lawman, sinister pimps, and strong indications of a local SerialKiller.

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2. ''On the Wrong Track'', working Track'': Working as railroad detectives, the Amlingmeyers' encounter train robbers, a famed PinkertonDetective, a woman who is not what she seems, a Chinese archaeologist trying to bring home some priceless artifacts, and more.

3. ''The Black Dove'', a Dove'': A friend's murder in Chinatown has the brothers and their new associate Diana looking into DirtyCops' [[TriadsAndTongs Tongs]], and a mysterious missing prostitute.

4. ''The Crack in the Lens'', the Lens'': The brothers journey to look into the years old death of Old Red's fiancee, encountering a resentful lawman, sinister pimps, and strong indications of a local SerialKiller.



6. ''The Double-A Western Detective Agency'', now working as part of a larger agency, the brothers journey to take a job that lands them in the middle of a race-fueled range war.

7. ''Dear Mr. Holmes'', a short story collection, with stories set at various points in the brothers lives.

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6. ''The Double-A Western Detective Agency'', now Agency'': Now working as part of a larger agency, the brothers journey to take a job that lands them in the middle of a race-fueled range war.

7. ''Dear Mr. Holmes'', a Holmes'': A short story collection, with stories set at various points in the brothers lives.



* AccidentalAimingSkills: In [[spoiler: '''World's Greatest Sleuth'']] Big Red shoots the gun out of a bad guys hand, but later whispers to Old Red that he was aiming for his head.

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* AccidentalAimingSkills: In [[spoiler: '''World's [[spoiler:''World's Greatest Sleuth'']] Big Red shoots the gun out of a bad guys hand, but later whispers to Old Red that he was aiming for his head.



* ImpersonationExclusieCharacter: In the [[spoiler: first]] book, [[spoiler: Perkins]] was murdered well before the events of the series by a man who needed to impersonate him, [[spoiler: Clara's husband, Nathaniel]].
* ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies: In a non-romantic version, in ''The Crack in the Lens'', Old Red pretends to suspect [[spoiler: Bob and Lottie]]] of the murder to angrily drive them away at a key point in the investigation and get them out of approaching danger.

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* ImpersonationExclusieCharacter: ImpersonationExclusiveCharacter: In the [[spoiler: first]] book, [[spoiler: Perkins]] was murdered well before the events of the series by a man who needed to impersonate him, [[spoiler: Clara's husband, Nathaniel]].
* ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies: In a non-romantic version, in ''The Crack in the Lens'', Old Red pretends to suspect [[spoiler: Bob and Lottie]]] Lottie]] of the murder to angrily drive them away at a key point in the investigation and get them out of approaching danger.



* JackTheRipoff: The long ago murder of a prostitute in ''The Crack in the Lens'' has some resemblance to this. [[spoiler: and then it turns out there were a bunch of similar murders, and indeed the killer has a bunch of books on Jack the ripper in his house]].

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* JackTheRipoff: The long ago murder of a prostitute in ''The Crack in the Lens'' has some resemblance to this. [[spoiler: and [[spoiler:And then it turns out there were a bunch of similar murders, and indeed the killer has a bunch of books on Jack the ripper Ripper in his house]].



* NarrativeProfanityFilter: The series isn't shy about swear words but uses the word "fudge" instead of fuck. It's even a running gag with [[SirSwearsALot Gus Bock]]) while noting that "fudge" isn't the actual word being used.

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* NarrativeProfanityFilter: The series isn't shy about swear words but uses the word "fudge" instead of fuck. It's even a running gag with [[SirSwearsALot Gus Bock]]) Bock]] while noting that "fudge" isn't the actual word being used.



** Jack Martin is a bit of a blunderer and somewhat cowardly in the first book, but is introduced out searching for an escaped killer, and during Old Red's summation, gradually shows signs of believing him. He spends the final shootout that follows this cowering in a corner, but does get off a couple shots, one of which might have hit [[spoiler: Ully [[=McPherson=]]].

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** Jack Martin is a bit of a blunderer and somewhat cowardly in the first book, but is introduced out searching for an escaped killer, and during Old Red's summation, gradually shows signs of believing him. He spends the final shootout that follows this cowering in a corner, but does get off a couple shots, one of which might have hit [[spoiler: Ully [[=McPherson=]]].[[spoiler:Ully [=McPherson=]]].



* SiblingsInCrime: Ully and Spider [[=McPherson=] are brothers in the first book who are pretty blatantly up to ''something'' criminal from the moment they appear. The same is trued of hired gunmen Knute and Konrad Karlsvik in the sixth book.

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* SiblingsInCrime: Ully and Spider [[=McPherson=] [=McPherson=] are brothers in the first book who are pretty blatantly up to ''something'' criminal from the moment they appear. The same is trued of hired gunmen Knute and Konrad Karlsvik in the sixth book.



* SummationGathering: Old Red naturally does these at the end of each case (although often with the clear indication that it's building up to some kind of fight), most impressively when does so in front a crowd of hundreds of people (along with the Crowes', and the various suspects) in ''World's Greatest Sleuth''. Subverted in ''A Crack in the Lens'' where first he and Big Red are alone with the sheriff and try to convince him of what they have figured out so far (which isn't everything), and later, once they have a complete picture, the brothers are AloneWithThePsycho and desperately trying to stall while being held at gunpoint. ''World's Greatest Sleuth'' also has M. Valmont do this, but he's largely bluffing, not having any definite conclusion of his own yet, and hoping to stir things up.

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* SummationGathering: Old Red naturally does these at the end of each case (although often with the clear indication that it's building up to some kind of fight), most impressively when does so in front a crowd of hundreds of people (along with the Crowes', Crowes, and the various suspects) in ''World's Greatest Sleuth''. Subverted in ''A Crack in the Lens'' where first he and Big Red are alone with the sheriff and try to convince him of what they have figured out so far (which isn't everything), and later, once they have a complete picture, the brothers are AloneWithThePsycho and desperately trying to stall while being held at gunpoint. ''World's Greatest Sleuth'' also has M. Valmont do this, but he's largely bluffing, not having any definite conclusion of his own yet, and hoping to stir things up.



* UnholyMatrimony: The murderers from [[spoiler:''The Crack in the Lens'']] are a sadistic married couple.



* UnholyMatrimony: The murderers from [[spoiler: ''The Crack in the Lens'']] are a sadistic married couple.



--> '''Big Red:''' That's [[spoiler:Perkins, the VR's manager.]]
--> '''Brackwell:''' No, it's not. It's [[spoiler: Nathaniel Horne.]]

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--> ---> '''Big Red:''' That's [[spoiler:Perkins, the VR's manager.]]
-->
]]\\
'''Brackwell:''' No, it's not. It's [[spoiler: Nathaniel Horne.]]



--> '''Kip:''' [[spoiler:Sorry, fellers. I can't have you messin' with that gold. I was [[ApologeticAttacker hoping' I wouldn't have to do this, but..well...]]]]

to:

--> '''Kip:''' --->'''Kip:''' [[spoiler:Sorry, fellers. I can't have you messin' with that gold. I was [[ApologeticAttacker hoping' I wouldn't have to do this, but..well...]]]]



--> '''Old Red:''' Who'd you think we were, anyway?
--> '''Squirrel Tooth Annie:''' I thought it was my time to go. Like Adeline. [[SerialKiller And the others.]]

to:

--> '''Old -->'''Old Red:''' Who'd you think we were, anyway?
-->
anyway?\\
'''Squirrel Tooth Annie:''' I thought it was my time to go. Like Adeline. [[SerialKiller And the others.]]



--> '''Old Red:''' I'm talkin' about [[spoiler:the man who took 'em.]]
--> ''"You mean [[spoiler:[[AmbiguousSyntax The man who took 'em?" I pantominined pressing a camera button with my thumb. Or the man who took 'em? I swiped an imaginary picture off the wall and tucked it under my jacket.]]]]
--> '''Old Red:''' Good God, Otto--don't you see how it all fits together? [[spoiler:They're the same man.]]

to:

--> '''Old --->'''Old Red:''' I'm talkin' about [[spoiler:the man who took 'em.]]
-->
]]\\
''"You mean [[spoiler:[[AmbiguousSyntax The man who took 'em?" I pantominined pressing a camera button with my thumb. Or the man who took 'em? I swiped an imaginary picture off the wall and tucked it under my jacket.]]]]
-->
]]]]''\\
'''Old Red:''' Good God, Otto--don't you see how it all fits together? [[spoiler:They're the same man.]]
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* WhamLine: Like most mystery stories, the series has quite a few twists and villains revealed with startling lines, but a few stand out.
** In the first book, when Big Red shows several other characters the body of a villain he's just killed and [[spoiler:Lady Clara lets out a shriek and starts crying, with it being revealed that the dead man is her secret husband.]]
--> '''Big Red:''' That's [[spoiler:Perkins, the VR's manager.]]
--> '''Brackwell:''' No, it's not. It's [[spoiler: Nathaniel Horne.]]
** In ''On the Wrong Track'', Old Red gives a summation to his brother and TagalongKid Kip, while admitting that there are still a few missing pieces in his reconstruction of the crime. Excited at bing able to help close the case, Kip reveals that he knows something that Old Red has overlooked. "Something that would explain ''everything.''" [[spoiler:Kip is the real killer, which he demonstrates by pulling a gun on them and gloating about how smart and ruthless he's been as he prepares to close the case by killing them.]]
--> '''Kip:''' [[spoiler:Sorry, fellers. I can't have you messin' with that gold. I was [[ApologeticAttacker hoping' I wouldn't have to do this, but..well...]]]]
** In ''The Crack and the Lens'', the brothers discover Old Red's SoiledDove fiancee wasn't killed in a robbery or a simple crime of passion five years earlier when they arrange a meeting with one of her old coworkers, who freaks out when they surprise her.
--> '''Old Red:''' Who'd you think we were, anyway?
--> '''Squirrel Tooth Annie:''' I thought it was my time to go. Like Adeline. [[SerialKiller And the others.]]
** The villain of "The Crack in The Lens'' is revealed when Old Red takes notice of some missing photographs.
--> '''Old Red:''' I'm talkin' about [[spoiler:the man who took 'em.]]
--> ''"You mean [[spoiler:[[AmbiguousSyntax The man who took 'em?" I pantominined pressing a camera button with my thumb. Or the man who took 'em? I swiped an imaginary picture off the wall and tucked it under my jacket.]]]]
--> '''Old Red:''' Good God, Otto--don't you see how it all fits together? [[spoiler:They're the same man.]]

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* RevealingCoverUp: In the first short story, Old Red observes that a suspicious drifter taken in by the cattle drive kept demanding everyone stay away from his saddle bags, which naturally made everyone more curious about them. Said saddle bags turn out to contain [[spoiler: Proof that the man is a wanted fugitive]]. This is inverted when Old Red deduces that [[spoiler:he was deliberately baiting them into looking into his saddlebags as part of a BatmanGambit to trick the cattle drive into taking him to the nearest town to turn him in for the reward, when a party of bushwhackers planning to kill them and steal the herd were waiting outside of said town]].

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* RevealingCoverUp: RevealingCoverUp:
**
In the first short story, Old Red observes that a suspicious drifter taken in by the cattle drive kept demanding everyone stay away from his saddle bags, which naturally made everyone more curious about them. Said saddle bags turn out to contain [[spoiler: Proof that the man is a wanted fugitive]]. This is inverted when Old Red deduces that [[spoiler:he was deliberately baiting them into looking into his saddlebags as part of a BatmanGambit to trick the cattle drive into taking him to the nearest town to turn him in for the reward, when a party of bushwhackers planning to kill them and steal the herd were waiting outside of said town]].
** In ''World's Greatest Sleuth,'' [[spoiler:Boothby Greene and Blackheath-Murray discard their European shoes and buy replacements from a local shoemaker after realizing the brothers know that Curtis's killer wore European shoes.]] Almost all of the suspects own [[spoiler:European shoes]] and [[spoiler:Old Red becomes suspicious of how they just happen to have locally sold shoes]], so that cover-up backfires.

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