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* AnOddPlaceToSleep: Justified, when the supposed killer Sirius Black is suddenly discovered in Hogwarts, the entire school has to sleep that night in the Great Hall, for their own safety, in squashy sleeping bags which Dumbledore conjures out of thin air.
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* MaamShock: [[spoiler:During the confrontation in the Sleeping Shack, once Scabbers is exposed as Peter Pettigrew, Hermione speaks up to ask Sirius a question, addressing him as "Mr. Black", then by his given name; Sirius is visibly taken aback at being addressed as such, having not been spoken to with such politeness for the better part of thirteen years.]]
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* MaamShock: [[spoiler:During the confrontation in the Sleeping Shrieking Shack, once Scabbers is exposed as Peter Pettigrew, Hermione speaks up to ask Sirius a question, addressing him as "Mr. Black", then by his given name; Sirius is visibly taken aback at being addressed as such, having not been spoken to with such politeness for the better part of thirteen years.]]
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** Minor one but when Aunt Marge begins asking about the Potters, Harry notes that Dudley has stopped eating, having noticed the brewing tension in the room.
*** On a related note, Harry, who has learned how to survive abuse from Petunia, Vernon, and Dudley, struggles to stick to Vernon's story when Aunt Marge is verbally abusing him, and when she starts [[SpeakIllOfTheDead badmouthing his parents,]] "he had never felt angrier in his life''. He ignores Vernon's advice to go to bed, tries to correct her, [[PowerIncontinence blows]] her [[ItMakesSenseInContext up]] like a balloon, [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere packs his Hogwarts bags]], ''threatens Vernon'' and ''runs away from home'' in "a reckless rage''. After seeing [[AbusiveParents what he was able to tolerate in previous books]], and [[AllLovingHero how kind and understanding he is capable of being]], seeing him snap, ''threaten a family member'', and ''dip'' is a horror to behold.
*** On a related note, Harry, who has learned how to survive abuse from Petunia, Vernon, and Dudley, struggles to stick to Vernon's story when Aunt Marge is verbally abusing him, and when she starts [[SpeakIllOfTheDead badmouthing his parents,]] "he had never felt angrier in his life''. He ignores Vernon's advice to go to bed, tries to correct her, [[PowerIncontinence blows]] her [[ItMakesSenseInContext up]] like a balloon, [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere packs his Hogwarts bags]], ''threatens Vernon'' and ''runs away from home'' in "a reckless rage''. After seeing [[AbusiveParents what he was able to tolerate in previous books]], and [[AllLovingHero how kind and understanding he is capable of being]], seeing him snap, ''threaten a family member'', and ''dip'' is a horror to behold.
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** Minor one but when Aunt Marge begins asking about the Potters, Harry notes that Dudley Dudley, normally a BigEater, has stopped eating, having noticed the brewing tension in the room.
*** On a related note, ** Harry, who has learned how to survive abuse from Petunia, Vernon, and Dudley, struggles to stick to Vernon's story when Aunt Marge is verbally abusing him, and when she starts [[SpeakIllOfTheDead badmouthing his parents,]] "he ''he had never felt angrier in his life''. He ignores Vernon's advice to go to bed, tries to correct her, [[PowerIncontinence blows]] her [[ItMakesSenseInContext up]] like a balloon, [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere packs his Hogwarts bags]], ''threatens Vernon'' and ''runs away from home'' in "a ''a reckless rage''. After seeing [[AbusiveParents what he was able to tolerate in previous books]], and [[AllLovingHero how kind and understanding he is capable of being]], seeing him snap, ''threaten a family member'', and ''dip'' is a horror to behold.
