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* AmbiguousDisorder: Corvallis seems to be somewhere on the autism spectrum. He's a genius who loves data and facts, but he's somewhat socially awkward and he tends to speak in a blunt and stiff manner when trying to relate emotionally to people. Pluto, on the other hand, is very clearly autistic.
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* TakeThat: Early on, while Dodge is contemplating his favorite band (see {{Expy}} above), he takes a moment to think about how use of the song [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GXFSK0ogeg4 O Fortuna]] in media is stale and cliche. He prefers new music in the ''style'' of that song.
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* TakeThat: Early on, while Dodge is contemplating his favorite band (see {{Expy}} above), band, he takes a moment to think about how use of the song [[https://www."[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GXFSK0ogeg4 O Fortuna]] Fortuna]]" in media is stale and cliche. He prefers new music in the ''style'' of that song.
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* {{Expy}}: Dodge's favorite band, who gets attention as the last thing he listened to before his death, is a single electronic-music composer who set out to make a lot of music that sounds like [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GXFSK0ogeg4 O Fortuna]] (see TakeThat below). This is probably a deliberate Expy of Music/ESPosthumus.
** Instead of the real-world DiedDuringProduction of half of Posthumus, said artist gets a single big break, loses the money, and later turns up as a transgender woman in terrible health who is suddenly again rich as a result of Bitworld playing her music and paying enormous royalties.
** Instead of the real-world DiedDuringProduction of half of Posthumus, said artist gets a single big break, loses the money, and later turns up as a transgender woman in terrible health who is suddenly again rich as a result of Bitworld playing her music and paying enormous royalties.
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* {{Expy}}: Dodge's favorite band, musician, who gets attention as the last thing he listened to before his death, is a single an electronic-music composer who set out to make a lot of music that sounds like [[https://www."[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GXFSK0ogeg4 O Fortuna]] (see TakeThat below). Fortuna]]." This is probably a deliberate Expy of Music/ESPosthumus.
** Instead of the real-world DiedDuringProduction of half of Posthumus, said artist gets a single big break, loses the money, and later turns up as a transgender woman in terrible health who is suddenly again rich as a result of Bitworld playing her music and paying enormous royalties.Music/ESPosthumus.
** Instead of the real-world DiedDuringProduction of half of Posthumus, said artist gets a single big break, loses the money, and later turns up as a transgender woman in terrible health who is suddenly again rich as a result of Bitworld playing her music and paying enormous royalties.
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ES Posthumus Expy
* {{Expy}}: Dodge's favorite band, who gets attention as the last thing he listened to before his death, is a single electronic-music composer who set out to make a lot of music that sounds like [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GXFSK0ogeg4 O Fortuna]] (see TakeThat below). This is probably a deliberate Expy of Music/ESPosthumus.
** Instead of the real-world DiedDuringProduction of half of Posthumus, said artist gets a single big break, loses the money, and later turns up as a transgender woman in terrible health who is suddenly again rich as a result of Bitworld playing her music and paying enormous royalties.
** Instead of the real-world DiedDuringProduction of half of Posthumus, said artist gets a single big break, loses the money, and later turns up as a transgender woman in terrible health who is suddenly again rich as a result of Bitworld playing her music and paying enormous royalties.
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* TakeThat: Dodge has a moment where he thinks about how use of the song "O Fortuna" in media is stale and cliche. He likes a musician who makes new music in the style of that song instead.
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* TakeThat: Early on, while Dodge has is contemplating his favorite band (see {{Expy}} above), he takes a moment where he thinks to think about how use of the song "O Fortuna" [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GXFSK0ogeg4 O Fortuna]] in media is stale and cliche. He likes a musician who makes prefers new music in the style ''style'' of that song instead.song.
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Asskicking Leads To Leadership is the new name of the trope.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Dodge rules Bitworld because his ability to change it is greater than anyone else's. Other souls simply have to follow his lead. When El usurps him, it's because El is even stronger in Bitworld than Dodge, having conditioned his mind for years prior to entering.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: Dodge rules Bitworld because his ability to change it is greater than anyone else's. Other souls simply have to follow his lead. When El usurps him, it's because El is even stronger in Bitworld than Dodge, having conditioned his mind for years prior to entering.
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** Dodge dies from eating an apple after being told not to eat anything. Apples are commonly used to illustrate the forbidden "fruit of knowledge" in the Bible.
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** Dodge dies from eating an apple pastry after being told not to eat anything. Apples are commonly used to illustrate the forbidden "fruit of knowledge" in the Bible.
