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* NonHumanUndead: Needle monsters (infected 'animals' from the other dimension) are the original vectors for the needle symbiote.
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* RaisingTheSteaks: The needle monsters are the original vectors for the needle symbiote; Tedrin was infected in an attack.
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---> When utterly baffled, go for a joke. “And then you bit her neck and sucked out all her blood, right?”
---> He blinks at me, looking genuinely annoyed. “Vampires? Really?”
---> My hands go up. “Hey, I’m just working with what you’re describing.”
---> He blinks at me, looking genuinely annoyed. “Vampires? Really?”
---> My hands go up. “Hey, I’m just working with what you’re describing.”
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---> “Let’s just say I keep a shotgun around for a reason. Doesn’t matter if you’re a Juggalo or an [[{{Twilight}} Edward Cullen]] wannabe.”
---> He laughs, startling me. “You and vampires. You have some kind of obsession.”
---> He laughs, startling me. “You and vampires. You have some kind of obsession.”
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* MilesToGoBeforeISleep: Eden eventually longs for permanent death, but first seeks to destroy Tedrin and save Earth.
-->''“I don’t want to hear your fucking excuses!”'' I shout in his face. I point back in the general direction of the portals. “We’re going back to Earth and stopping this invasion, and then after that, believe me, I’ll be next in line behind you for a goddamn mercy kill! When, and only when, no one else has to suffer for ''your'' fuck-ups!”
-->''“I don’t want to hear your fucking excuses!”'' I shout in his face. I point back in the general direction of the portals. “We’re going back to Earth and stopping this invasion, and then after that, believe me, I’ll be next in line behind you for a goddamn mercy kill! When, and only when, no one else has to suffer for ''your'' fuck-ups!”
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---> Tedrin knew about this great big curse that the needles bring with them. He was terrified that Ron and I would find out about [[spoiler:his memory issues]]. He had no plan to mitigate or cope with [[spoiler:his own loss]], and he didn’t see fit to warn us ... In one morning of quiet preparation, I’ve conquered something that has weighed on him since his transformation. What other problems can I fix?
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: Eden is forced to remain through the night on the alien planet because she can't get back to the portals.
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* WhoWantsToLiveForever
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* AlienSky
* AnotherDimension
* BattleInTheRain: Eden and Ron [[spoiler:return to Earth on a motorcycle in the middle of a storm]].
* DeathSeeker: [[spoiler:Eden]] becomes suicidal shortly after being infected, and her goals tend to end with '... after which I'll find a way to destroy myself'.
* [[HeroicHost Heroic Hosts]]
* ImmortalityHurts
* InstantMassJustAddWater: The needles (in human hosts) replenish their numbers after an injury by consuming water.
* MageInManhattan: A lot of Eden's initial planning involves keeping the monsters and infection a secret. The next morning, [[spoiler:needle monsters destroy part of the city center and make international news]]. Also the theme of the related web serial, ''[[http://homework.never-ends.net/city/ City on the Edge of Nowhere]]''.
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* MonsterProgenitor: Tedrin; Eden plays with the theory that because he was the first, he may be stronger than those he infects.
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* MonsterProgenitor: Tedrin; Eden plays with the theory that because he Tedrin was the first, first human infectee, he may be stronger than those he infects.
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* KilledMidSentence: Several, but especially [[spoiler:the ending, although the sequel reveals it to be an AvertedTrope]].
* [[spoiler:KillEmAll: Implied in this book, but revealed to be averted in the sequel.]]
* [[spoiler:KillEmAll: Implied in this book, but revealed to be averted in the sequel.]]
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* KilledMidSentence: Several, but especially [[spoiler:the ending, although the sequel reveals it to be an AvertedTrope]].
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* KilledMidSentence: Several, but especially [[spoiler:the ending]].
ending, although the sequel reveals it to be an AvertedTrope]].
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The sequel, ''[[Literature/NewNight New Night]],'' takes place nine months after the events of ''Eden Green.''
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The author has since started a free online serial, ''[[Literature/CityOnTheEdgeOfNowhere City on the Edge of Nowhere]],'' recapping the events of ''Eden Green'' from the perspective of a reporter affected by events.
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* WhenItAllBegan: Tedrin was infected and converted to needles before the start of the story.
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* SensoryAbuse: The audiobook (narrated by the audio) interprets [[spoiler:the scratch of Eden's infection as a long, irritating noise]].
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* SensoryAbuse: The audiobook (narrated by the audio) interprets [[spoiler:the scratch of Eden's infection as a long, irritating noise]].
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* KilledMidSentence: Several, but especially [[spoiler:the ending]].
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* NeckSnap: Played straight.
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* DrugsAreGood: Eden and Ron regularly smoke marijuana together, including once in-story; Eden also smokes some (given to her by Ron) in the deer stand. However, Eden judges Tedrin for smoking cigarettes, and isn't too happy that Ron [[spoiler:injected her with heroin to ease her transformation]].
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* NoOSHACompliance: The ledges on [[spoiler:the mountain in the other world]]. Called out by Eden.
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* SleptThroughTheApocalypse: When Eden and company return from [[spoiler:the other world, Gothic has been evacuated and the military is battling needle monsters]].
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* ShownTheirWork: Eden's methodical explorations of the needle symbiote, monsters, and [[spoiler:alien world]].
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* [[HunterOfHisOwnKind Hunter Of Her Own Kind]]: [[spoiler:Eden]] after being infected.
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* PhlebotinumRebel: [[spoiler:Tedrin infects Eden thinking she will become an ally, find a cure, or even (as one reviewer put it) join his harem. She immediately makes it her mission in life to destroy him.]]
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* CursedWithAwesome: **[[spoiler: Eden's]] complaints about being CURSED to grow back missing body parts often feels like this.
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* CursedWithAwesome: CursedWithAwesome:
**[[spoiler: Eden's]] complaints about being CURSED to grow back missing body parts often feels like this.
**[[spoiler: Eden's]] complaints about being CURSED to grow back missing body parts often feels like this.
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* CursedWithAwesome: Ron, at least, seems to know how to have fun with the needles.
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* CursedWithAwesome: Ron, **[[spoiler: Eden's]] complaints about being CURSED to grow back missing body parts often feels like this.
**Ron, at least, seems to know how to have fun with the needles.
**Ron, at least, seems to know how to have fun with the needles.
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---> [[spolier: Eden's]] complaints about being CURSED to grow back missing body parts often feels like this.
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* FinalSolution: Eden develops a plan to [[spoiler:destroy all needle life, including Veronica and Tedrin, in the city]].
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* CurseThatCures
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* CrazyPrepared: Ron and Tedrin mock Eden for arming herself to the nines before a hunt. Later, she meticulously (even excessively) kits herself out for her expedition.
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* MyBloodRunsHot: Fully-transformed human hosts have an elevated body temperature that, to an uninfected person, feels like an extreme fever.
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* ArtifactOfDeath: Eden eventually goes on a hunt for a way to destroy needle monsters/humans more efficiently, and discovers [[spoiler:Mjolnir, a blue orb, on the other side of the portals. Of course, it works on Eden, too...]].
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