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[[https://conquerorserial.wordpress.com Conqueror]] by [[MRouzbanian MRouzbanian]] [[Redacted]] is an ongoing dark fantasy, originally released on May 2015. The serial gets updated every week on Wednesdays.
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* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler: We learn that Mara's father physically hurt Mara in a discreet manner whenever she does things that displeased him.]]
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* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler: We learn that Mara's father physically hurt Mara in a discreet manner whenever she does did things that displeased him.]]
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* KillThePoor: Throughout the first arc of the story, we see poor people who have no other means of eating but by stealing.
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* KillThePoor: Throughout the first arc of the story, even though it is not explicitly said so, we see poor people who have no other means of eating but by stealing. get killed. [[spoiler: The captured prisoners, whom are more like slaves, mine in lethal toxic environments.]]
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* VillainProtagonist: [[spoiler: While others don't think of Mara as an evil entity that they should be cautious of, they do after when she starts to become a little more aggressive.]]
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* VillainProtagonist: [[spoiler: While others don't think of Mara as an evil entity that they should be cautious of, they do so after when she starts to become a little more aggressive.aggressive. It is implied that she has always been evil but that may not have been the case. It is lightly implied that Mara grew to be cold when she started to get abused by her father.]]
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* VillainProtagonist: [[spoiler: While others don't think of Mara Stone.as an evil entity that they should be cautious of, they do after when she starts to become a little more aggressive.]]
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* AbustiveParents: [[spoiler: We learn that Mara's father physically hurt Mara in a discreet manner whenever she does things that displeased him.]]
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* AbustiveParents: AbusiveParents: [[spoiler: We learn that Mara's father physically hurt Mara in a discreet manner whenever she does things that displeased him.]]
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[[https://conquerorserial.wordpress.com Conqueror]] by [[MRouzbanian MRouzbanian]] is an ongoing dark fantasy, originally released on May 2015.
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[[https://conquerorserial.wordpress.com Conqueror]] by [[MRouzbanian MRouzbanian]] is an ongoing dark fantasy, originally released on May 2015.
2015. The serial gets updated every week on Wednesdays.
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* Hellhole Prison: This is technically what Ender's Mine is.
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* Hellhole Prison: HellholePrison: This is technically what Ender's Mine is.
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* AbustiveParents: [[spoilers: We learn that Mara's father physically hurt Mara in a discreet manner whenever she does things that displeased him.]]
* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoilers: While attempting to teach Mara how to torture, Tom finds out that he had been lied to by the prisoner. He decides to keep hurting the prisoner even after he finally gets all the information that he had been looking for.]]
* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoilers: While attempting to teach Mara how to torture, Tom finds out that he had been lied to by the prisoner. He decides to keep hurting the prisoner even after he finally gets all the information that he had been looking for.]]
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* AbustiveParents: [[spoilers: [[spoiler: We learn that Mara's father physically hurt Mara in a discreet manner whenever she does things that displeased him.]]
* ColdBloodedTorture:[[spoilers: [[spoiler: While attempting to teach Mara how to torture, Tom finds out that he had been lied to by the prisoner. He decides to keep hurting the prisoner even after he finally gets all the information that he had been looking for.]]
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* ITsAllAboutMe: [[spoilers: Mara Stone.]]
* InevitableMutualBetrayal: [[spoilers: Jester was obviously going to betray her, but at the time Mara hadn't gone full on crazy. She relied on her brother most of the time.]]
* InevitableMutualBetrayal: [[spoilers: Jester was obviously going to betray her, but at the time Mara hadn't gone full on crazy. She relied on her brother most of the time.]]
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* ITsAllAboutMe: [[spoilers: [[spoiler: Mara Stone.]]
* InevitableMutualBetrayal:[[spoilers: [[spoiler: Jester was obviously going to betray her, but at the time Mara hadn't gone full on crazy. She relied on her brother most of the time.]]
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* NearRapeExperience: [[spoilers: Hassan, an apprentice for the torture master, tries to do this to Mara. He fails to do so because Tom finishes her abusive lessons early.]]
* VillainProtagonist: [[spoilers: While Mara Stone.]]
* VillainProtagonist: [[spoilers: While Mara Stone.]]
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* NearRapeExperience: [[spoilers: [[spoiler: Hassan, an apprentice for the torture master, tries to do this to Mara. He fails to do so because Tom finishes her abusive lessons early.]]
* VillainProtagonist:[[spoilers: [[spoiler: While Mara Stone.]]
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* AbustiveParents - AbustiveParents: [[spoilers: We learn that Mara's father physically hurt Mara in a discreet manner whenever she does things that displeased him.]]
* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoilers: While attempting to teach Mara how to torture, Tom finds out that he had been lied to by the prisoner. He decides to keep hurting the prisoner even after he finally gets all the information that he had been looking for.]]
* HellholePrison - Prison: This is technically what Ender's Mine is.
*VillainProtagonist - Mara
ITsAllAboutMe: [[spoilers: Mara Stone.]]
* InevitableMutualBetrayal: [[spoilers: Jester was obviously going to betray her, but at the time Mara hadn't gone full on crazy. She relied on her brother most of the time.]]
* KillThePoor: Throughout the first arc of the story, we see poor people who have no other means of eating but by stealing.
* NearRapeExperience: [[spoilers: Hassan, an apprentice for the torture master, tries to do this to Mara. He fails to do so because Tom finishes her abusive lessons early.]]
* VillainProtagonist: [[spoilers: While Mara Stone.]]
* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoilers: While attempting to teach Mara how to torture, Tom finds out that he had been lied to by the prisoner. He decides to keep hurting the prisoner even after he finally gets all the information that he had been looking for.]]
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* InevitableMutualBetrayal: [[spoilers: Jester was obviously going to betray her, but at the time Mara hadn't gone full on crazy. She relied on her brother most of the time.]]
* KillThePoor: Throughout the first arc of the story, we see poor people who have no other means of eating but by stealing.
* NearRapeExperience: [[spoilers: Hassan, an apprentice for the torture master, tries to do this to Mara. He fails to do so because Tom finishes her abusive lessons early.]]
* VillainProtagonist: [[spoilers: While Mara Stone.]]
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[[https://conquerorserial.wordpress.com Conqueror]] is an ongoing dark fantasy that is created by [[MRouzbanian MRouzbanian]] and originally released on May 2015. A new chapter gets posted every week.
The story follows Mara Stone, a twisted and cruel girl in a dark fantasy world. When she get’s betrayed, she finds herself in one of the worst prison’s in her empire.
The story follows Mara Stone, a twisted and cruel girl in a dark fantasy world. When she get’s betrayed, she finds herself in one of the worst prison’s in her empire.
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[[https://conquerorserial.wordpress.com Conqueror]] is an ongoing dark fantasy that is created by [[MRouzbanian MRouzbanian]] and is an ongoing dark fantasy, originally released on May 2015. A new chapter gets posted every week.
2015.
The story follows Mara Stone, a twisted and cruel girl living in a dark fantasy world.When In the beginning of the story, all we know is that she get’s betrayed, she finds herself and her brother got betrayed. They both land themselves in one of the worst prison’s prison's in her empire.
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The story follows Mara Stone, a twisted and cruel girl living in a dark fantasy world.
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[Conqueror https://conquerorserial.wordpress.com] is an ongoing dark fantasy that is created by MRouzbanian and originally released on May 2015.
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The story follows Mara Stone, a twisted and cruel girl in a dark fantasy world. When she get’s betrayed, she finds herself in one of the worst prison’s in her empire.
She makes a choice that allows her the slight chance to live, but how many sacrifices will she make?
This is a story about a anti-heroine that journeys in to villainous territory.
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[Conqueror https://conquerorserial.wordpress.com] is an ongoing dark fantasy that is created by MRouzbanian and originally released on May 2015.
