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** A recent story from another author hints that Neal might be something more like 300+.

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** A recent story from another author hints that Neal might be something more like 300+.300+, as he was recognized by one of his former neighbors, ''who cryogenically froze herself in the 21st century''.
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* PathOfInspiration: The Holy Christian Kingdom of North America is basically this; the whole kingdom is set up as a twisted mega-fundamentalist nation where all the FantasticRacism HolierThanThou gather to debase and insult all non-humans. In reality, it's ''someone's'' Task Force X on KnightTemplar, as terrorist cells within the country are put to work using untested technologies to kill non-humans, most not realizing they're advancing military science and killing key political figures for organization(s) that ''definitely'' don't give two yiffs about their [[TheScapegoat racist operatives inevitably getting arrested or killed]].
-->'''Disguised Mastermind''': Ah, for every puppet, we put on a different face. *disables priest holo-disguise*
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If you've become a fan of Doove's writing, see also: FanFic/GoldfursStoriesAboutPonies.
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A WebOriginal SharedUniverse UsefulNotes/{{Furry|Fandom}} setting, based on a WebSerialNovel, "Forest Tales", by Bernard Doove, ([[http://www.chakatsden.com available here (NSFW)]], [[http://furry.org.au/chakat/FT-index.html Mirror]], [[http://www.chakat.com/ Mirror 2]]. You might need to check all three as the site occasionally goes down for one reason or another.) that started as a ''Franchise/StarTrek'' FanFic and became its own series. "Forest Tales" was the first series in the setting, but others have been written, by Doove and an army of Chakat fans. Some of these fans are better writers than others.

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A WebOriginal SharedUniverse UsefulNotes/{{Furry|Fandom}} setting, based on a WebSerialNovel, "Forest Tales", by Bernard Doove, ([[http://www.chakatsden.com available here (NSFW)]], [[http://furry.org.au/chakat/FT-index.html Mirror]], [[http://www.chakat.com/ net/ Mirror 2]]. You might need to check all three as the site occasionally goes down for one reason or another.) that started as a ''Franchise/StarTrek'' FanFic and became its own series. "Forest Tales" was the first series in the setting, but others have been written, by Doove and an army of Chakat fans. Some of these fans are better writers than others.
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* {{Crossover}}: Doove went full Brony in October of 2013 and began posting Pony stories over on Website/FimfictionDotNet. In June of 2017, he started posting a story called ''Cosmic Lotus''. On 22 Oct. 2017, ponies and Chakats met each other face to face in chapter 17.

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* {{Crossover}}: Doove went full Brony in October of 2013 and [[FanFic/GoldfursStoriesAboutPonies began posting Pony stories stories]] over on Website/FimfictionDotNet. In June of 2017, he started posting a story called ''Cosmic Lotus''. On 22 Oct. 2017, ponies and Chakats met each other face to face in chapter 17.

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* AirVentPassageway: ''Tales of the Folly'' chapter 4 features 6 Chakat cubs surviving having their station being taken over by pirates by hiding in an air duct.

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* AirVentPassageway: A few of these have popped up so far.
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''Tales of the Folly'' chapter 4 features 6 Chakat cubs surviving having their station being taken over by pirates by hiding in an air duct.
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** When Leanna (herm fennec morph, originally believed sterile thanks to a lying, [[ManipulativeBastard bastard]] [[{{Jerkass}} owner]]) joins their mating group shi quickly conceives kits with both Trina and Kris.

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** *** When Leanna (herm fennec morph, originally believed sterile thanks to a lying, [[ManipulativeBastard bastard]] [[{{Jerkass}} owner]]) joins their mating group shi quickly conceives kits with both Trina and Kris.



** A Rakshani hermaphrodite gets this due to having a relationship with a Terran anthro cat.

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** A Rakshani hermaphrodite gets this due to having a relationship with a (also herm) Terran anthro cat. cat due to, again, fertility deities.



* LongevityTreatment: Neal Foster was accidentally subjected to experimental gene therapies during (or even before) the Gene Wars, increasing his longevity. Later he is subjected to a form of rejuvenation via transporters that have been TouchedByVorlons.

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* LongevityTreatment: Neal Foster was accidentally subjected to experimental gene therapies during (or even before) the Gene Wars, increasing his longevity. Later he is subjected to a form of rejuvenation via transporters that have been TouchedByVorlons. Although the longevity treatments are kept when he resets, his bones still age normally, thus aging faster than the rest of his body.
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* FosterKid: Captain Foster has a history of adopting youngsters. he first time, it was at a young colony planet that had just suffered a catastrophic loss of parents and other adults. The current batch had simply wanted to visit an orbiting ship and stowed away in the wrong shipping container. See also: HappilyAdopted, below.

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* FosterKid: Captain Foster has a history of adopting youngsters. he The first time, it was at a young colony planet that had just suffered a catastrophic loss of parents and other adults. The current batch had simply wanted to visit an orbiting ship and stowed away in the wrong shipping container. See also: HappilyAdopted, below.

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* ButForMeItWasTuesday: During the rewritten ''Tales of the Folly'' Part 2, Captain Foster pulls an unusual heroic variant of this. Then again, [[RoadTripPlot trouble seems to follow him around]], and the locals are very aware of this fact.

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* ButForMeItWasTuesday: During the rewritten ''Tales of the Folly'' Part 2, Captain Foster pulls an unusual heroic variant of this. Then again, [[RoadTripPlot trouble seems to follow him around]], and the locals are [[GenreSavvy very aware aware]] of this fact.


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* GenreSavvy: See: ButForMeItWasTuesday above.
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* FosterKid: Captain Foster has a history of adopting youngsters. he first time, it was at a young colony planet that had just suffered a catastrophic loss of parents and other adults. The current batch had simply wanted to visit an orbiting ship and stowed away in the wrong shipping container. See also: HappilyAdopted, below.


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* HappilyAdopted: Most of Captain Foster's first group of adopted, furry children look up to Neal with a variety of positive emotions, and view their time aboard the Folly as a good thing. His current group is leaning this way as well. Especially Cindy Grayson.
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* MyGrandsonMyself: Contributing author Allen Fessler gives us the ''Tales of the Folly'' series. The ''Folly's'' captain, Neil Foster is somewhere north of 200 and due to his teleporters having been TouchedByVorlons, he gets occasional "fountain of youth" makeovers and is able to pull off this trope convincingly. Other characters assume that the older version of foster they knew / see pictures of and the one they now see are grandfather and grandson respectively. At least one non-human character is convinced it's the same man.

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* StacysMom: Neal Foster encounters a little of this in one chapter when he accompanies Zhane to her parents' house.
--> And if their mother, Yelest, was any indication of what the girls would look like when they got older, all Neal could think was ‘wow!’. Like her daughters, she was just over seven feet tall, and ‘stacked’ was the only word that fit. Not the kind of thoughts to be having of one’s ‘mother-in-law’ when ‘daddy-in-law’ was giving you the look that suggests that he’s wondering how small a box he could squeeze you into.



** For some reason, Neal Foster has access to relays he shouldn't otherwise have access to.

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** For some reason, Neal Foster has access to relays he shouldn't otherwise have access to. But he's also laying down his own network of relays that the big commercial interstellar communications carriers won't be able to turn off.
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* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: Mike, Alex and Roseberry find a crooked gambling hall. The in-house roulette wheel cheater calls security, (a telepath) who backs down when confronted by Alex, who could probably take out the two much larger musclebound bouncers with him. The three Folly teens also engage the security type in some PsychicStatic mindgames.

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* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: While on shore leave from the Folly, Mike, Alex and Roseberry find a crooked gambling hall. The in-house roulette wheel cheater gets caught and calls security, (a telepath) who backs down when confronted by Alex, who could probably take out the two much larger musclebound bouncers with him. The three Folly teens also engage the security type in some PsychicStatic mindgames.
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* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: Mike, Alex and Roseberry find a crooked gambling hall. The in-house roulette wheel cheater calls security, (a telepath) who backs down when confronted by Alex, who could probably take out the two much larger musclebound bouncers with him.

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* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: Mike, Alex and Roseberry find a crooked gambling hall. The in-house roulette wheel cheater calls security, (a telepath) who backs down when confronted by Alex, who could probably take out the two much larger musclebound bouncers with him. The three Folly teens also engage the security type in some PsychicStatic mindgames.

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* ICallItVera: Neal Foster's shotgun, ''Betsy''.

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* ICallItVera: Neal Foster's shotgun, ''Betsy''. Also Mike's version, ''Thumper''.
* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: Mike, Alex and Roseberry find a crooked gambling hall. The in-house roulette wheel cheater calls security, (a telepath) who backs down when confronted by Alex, who could probably take out the two much larger musclebound bouncers with him.
--> '''Roseberry:'''“Whatever you two were thinking it was sufficient to almost make hym piss hymself. Me, I was wondering if Tess was already telling Neal we’d run into a little problem.”
--> Mike grinned at hir. “And hy knew that we knew that they’re rigging their games.”
--> Alex grinned as well. “Ruined hys whole day being able to read us and know we didn’t think we were bluffing.”

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* AbusiveParents: Cindy Grayson's father, Charles, has managed to make his daughter fear father figures.
** Charles was also skimming from accounts left to her by her grandmother to pay his own gambling debts.

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* AbusiveParents: Cindy Grayson's father, Charles, has managed to make his daughter fear father figures. \n** Charles was also skimming from accounts left to her by her grandmother to pay his own gambling debts.
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Rouge Angles Of Satin indeed… Also other improvements.


--> '''Neil''': If (the Bunny Brothers) do say yes, you just might find out from docs Kelly or M’Lai first." At (Stew's) confused look, he smiled. "Unless you want them coming after you with a turkey baster!"
--> [Stew] stared at him moment, then closed her eyes. After another moment, she groaned. "Thanks a lot! Now I can’t get that image out of my head!"

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--> '''Neil''': If (the Bunny Brothers) do say yes, you just might find out from docs Kelly or M’Lai first." At (Stew's) confused look, he smiled. "Unless you want them coming after you with a turkey baster!"
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baster!"\\
[Stew] stared at him moment, then closed her eyes. After another moment, she groaned. "Thanks a lot! Now I can’t get that image out of my head!"



--> Brajet shook her head. “Not even lunchtime and you’ve already got some of the local cops mad at you. Why do I have the bad feeling that this will be one of your more interesting visits?”
--> Neal grinned. “I have no idea what you’re talking about; it’s just another day in the life for me.”
--> Looking at his young ‘crew’, Brajet muttered, “That’s what I’m afraid of.”

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--> Brajet shook her head. “Not even lunchtime and you’ve already got some of the local cops mad at you. Why do I have the bad feeling that this will be one of your more interesting visits?”
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visits?”\\
Neal grinned. “I have no idea what you’re talking about; it’s just another day in the life for me.
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”\\
Looking at his young ‘crew’, Brajet muttered, “That’s what I’m afraid of.”



---> "Wait a minute, the only reason to be sending some of these types of hardware to an unknown destination is if you’re…" Everyone turned to look at M’Lai as she stared at Neal. "You’re supporting a colony!"
--->'''Neal:''' "Nice try, but I am not supporting ''a'' colony."
--->'''M'Lai:''' "But, that’s the only thing that fits! Unless you like throwing expensive equipment out the airlock while hiding for long periods of time!"
---> Midnight laughed. "Easy M’Lai, the key word he’s jerking you around with is ''‘a’''. He said he’s not supporting ''‘a’'' colony." Looking at Neal, shi asked, "So just how many colonies are dependent on you and the Folly?"

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---> "Wait a minute, the only reason to be sending some of these types of hardware to an unknown destination is if you’re…" Everyone turned to look at M’Lai as she stared at Neal. "You’re supporting a colony!"
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colony!"\\
'''Neal:'''
"Nice try, but I am not supporting ''a'' colony."
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"\\
'''M'Lai:'''
"But, that’s the only thing that fits! Unless you like throwing expensive equipment out the airlock while hiding for long periods of time!"
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time!"\\
Midnight laughed. "Easy M’Lai, the key word he’s jerking you around with is ''‘a’''. He said he’s not supporting ''‘a’'' colony." Looking at Neal, shi asked, "So just how many colonies are dependent on you and the Folly?"



** Another Rakshani gets some of this due to a different Deity or two.

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** Another A Rakshani hermaphrodite gets some of this due to having a different Deity or two.relationship with a Terran anthro cat.



-->'''Kestrel''': "Well?" she snapped, "What is it? A few hundred? Or a few thousand?"
-->'''Neal''': "Yes" with a smile.

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-->'''Kestrel''': "Well?" she snapped, "What is it? A few hundred? Or a few thousand?"
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thousand?"\\
'''Neal''':
"Yes" with a smile.



--> '''Penelope Windsor''': "I didn’t have to stay hidden for the entire trip,"..."Only for as long as it took for it to be too late to turn back."

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--> '''Penelope Windsor''': "I didn’t have to stay hidden for the entire trip,"...trip," [...] "Only for as long as it took for it to be too late to turn back."



--> '''Neal:''' “I’ve been trying not to make the same mistakes that I made with Chase’s group. I just keep forgetting your group’s dynamics and reasoning are different from what theirs was.”
--> '''Weaver:''' “I guess that helps explain why you always seem to be putting your foot in your mouth…”
--> '''Neal:''' “… and wiggling my toes. Yes, I know. Each of your accounts has more than enough to get you home in style. The only reason to hang around any longer is because you want to.”

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--> '''Neal:''' “I’ve been trying not to make the same mistakes that I made with Chase’s group. I just keep forgetting your group’s dynamics and reasoning are different from what theirs was.
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'''Weaver:''' “I guess that helps explain why you always seem to be putting your foot in your mouth…”
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mouth…”\\
'''Neal:''' “… and “…and wiggling my toes. Yes, I know. Each of your accounts has more than enough to get you home in style. The only reason to hang around any longer is because you want to.”



* RougeAnglesOfSatin: Crops up now and than. Moreso in the older stores and form the less-talented writers.

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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: Crops up now and than. Moreso in the older stores stories and form the less-talented writers.



-->'''Stew''': "I want a raise."
-->'''Neal''': ..."Monetary, title, or altitude?"
-->'''Stew''': "The first two would be nice, but they are not what I’m after. I’m not sure what you mean by the third. The fourth option please."

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-->'''Stew''': "I want a raise."
-->'''Neal''': ...
"\\
'''Neal''': ...
"Monetary, title, or altitude?"
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altitude?"\\
'''Stew''':
"The first two would be nice, but they are not what I’m after. I’m not sure what you mean by the third. The fourth option please."



** Shi and hir process also get featured in several other different stories in the 'verse.

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** *** Shi and hir process also get featured in several other different stories in the 'verse.
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* YoureDrinkingBreastMilk: Played with in some stories, subverted or played straight in others. Chakats, particularly pregnant Chakats, drink their own or other Chakats' breast milk. A hormone in it leads Chakats who drink it to lactate themselves. Played the straightest in a story in which the college roommate of a chakat wet nurse drinks the milk she leaves in the fridge without inquiring after its source.

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* YoureDrinkingBreastMilk: Played with in some stories, subverted or played straight in others. Chakats, particularly pregnant Chakats, drink their own or other Chakats' breast milk. A hormone in it leads Chakats who drink it to lactate themselves. Played the straightest in a story in which the college roommate of a chakat wet nurse drinks the milk she shi leaves in the fridge without inquiring after its source.
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* MachineEmpathy: Goldfur is just ''made'' of this trope. Shi even [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] it at one point. Swiftwalk points it out again, later.

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* MachineEmpathy: Goldfur is just ''made'' of this trope. Shi even [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] it at one point. Swiftwalk points it out again, later. Hir abilities in this area reach for, but don't quite hit {{Technopath}} territory.
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* LongevityTreatment: Neal Foster was accidentally subjected to experimental gene therapies during the Gene Wars. Later he is subjected to a form of rejuvenation via transporters that have been TouchedByVorlons.

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* LongevityTreatment: Neal Foster was accidentally subjected to experimental gene therapies during (or even before) the Gene Wars.Wars, increasing his longevity. Later he is subjected to a form of rejuvenation via transporters that have been TouchedByVorlons.
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* AdultsAreUseless: The Faleshkarti. (This gets its own story justifying it in an unusual way.) [[spoiler: When they mature a hormone makes them stupid and only want to have sex and breed. Due to the overpopulation problems this encourages the comparatively genius-level children to accept Federation help in counteracting that particular aspect of their biology.]]

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* AdultsAreUseless: The Faleshkarti. (This gets its own story justifying it in an unusual way.) [[spoiler: When they mature mature, a hormone makes them stupid and only want to have sex and breed. Due to the overpopulation problems this encourages the comparatively genius-level children to accept Federation help in counteracting that particular aspect of their biology.]]
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* MarshmallowHell: Appears in one of the associated illustrations. If you read carefully, there are others scattered around.

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* MarshmallowHell: Appears in one chapter of the ''Tales of the Folly'' series. It gets reinforced by the associated illustrations.illustration. If you read carefully, there are others scattered around.
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* LegacyCharacter: Other characters think this way about Captain Foster. They think the older Foster is the father or grandfather of the current Captain of the [[CoolStarship Folly]]. Captain Foster [[InvertedTrope inverts]] it by being the Fountain-of-Youth-Makeover-enhanced Original.

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* LegacyCharacter: Other characters think this way about Captain Foster. They think the older Foster is the father or grandfather of the current Captain of the [[CoolStarship Folly]]. Captain Foster [[InvertedTrope inverts]] it by being the Fountain-of-Youth-Makeover-enhanced Original. (See LongevityTreatment below.)
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* LegacyCharacter: Other characters think this way about Captain Foster. They think the older Foster is the father or grandfather of the current Captain of the [[CoolStarship Folly]]. Captain Foster [[InvertedTrope inverts]] it by being the Fountain-of-Youth-Makeover-enhanced Original.
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*** The carriers are later shown to contain several decks filled with smaller cargo carriers, which are in turn comparable to contemporary shipping containers so it's a).

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*** The carriers pods are later shown to contain several decks filled with smaller cargo carriers, which are in turn comparable to contemporary shipping containers so it's a).
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: At one point, Captain Foster posts a tongue-twister of a call for recruits to crew a cargo run he needs to make.
--> The Folly is looking for a few fools foolish enough to want to work long hours on their time off from Star Fleet.

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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: At one point, Captain Foster posts a tongue-twister of a call for recruits to crew a cargo run he needs to make. \n (emphasis added)
--> The Folly is looking for ''for a few fools foolish foolish'' enough to want to work long hours on their time off from Star Fleet.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: At one point, Captain Foster posts a tongue-twister of a call for recruits for a cargo run he needs to make.

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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: At one point, Captain Foster posts a tongue-twister of a call for recruits for to crew a cargo run he needs to make.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: At one point, Captain Foster posts a tongue-twister of a call for recruits for a cargo run he needs to make.
--> The Folly is looking for a few fools foolish enough to want to work long hours on their time off from Star Fleet.
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--->'''Neal:''' "Nice try, but I am not supporting a colony."

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--->'''Neal:''' "Nice try, but I am not supporting a ''a'' colony."



---> Midnight laughed. "Easy M’Lai, the key word he’s jerking you around with is ‘a’. He said he’s not supporting ‘a’ colony." Looking at Neal, shi asked, "So just how many colonies are dependent on you and the Folly?"

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---> Midnight laughed. "Easy M’Lai, the key word he’s jerking you around with is ‘a’. ''‘a’''. He said he’s not supporting ‘a’ ''‘a’'' colony." Looking at Neal, shi asked, "So just how many colonies are dependent on you and the Folly?"

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