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''[[https://talesfantastic.wordpress.com/about-2/ Ash and Cinders - An Epic Fairy Tale]]'' by Connor M. Perry is a Epic Fantasy/Fairy Tale WebSerialNovel that follows the half-Nymph Cinder, her brother Azoc, and [[MentorArchetype their mentor]] as they race through the [[AlienGeometries Ever-Changing Land]] to rescue their half-brother from the Wizard that's abducted him.
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''[[https://talesfantastic.wordpress.com/about-2/ Ash and Cinders - An Epic Fairy Tale]]'' by Connor M. Perry is a an Epic Fantasy/Fairy Tale WebSerialNovel that follows the half-Nymph Cinder, her brother Azoc, and [[MentorArchetype their mentor]] as they race through the [[AlienGeometries Ever-Changing Land]] to rescue their half-brother from the Wizard that's abducted him.
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* EvilMinions:[[OurOrcsAreDifferent The Stonewights]].
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* EvilMinions:[[OurOrcsAreDifferent EvilMinions: [[OurOrcsAreDifferent The Stonewights]].
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* BladeEnthusiast: Thavian has yet to be seen with any less than six knives looped through his belt. He's quite fond of using them for intimidation.
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* KnifeNut: Thavian has yet to be seen with any less than six knives looped through his belt. He's quite fond of using them for intimidation.
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* StuffedIntoTheFridge: Cinder and Azoc's mother was killed before the story even starts. As if being orphaned wasn't bad enough, Cinder later discovered her mother, a Nymph, ''was going to be used for firewood''. Her death breeds animosity between Cinder/Azoc and their WickedStepmother Phira.
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* CrazyAwesome: Thavian. He does stuff like fake a limp to make his entrance ''that much cooler'', summon a whiskey bottle out of thin air, make a rapidly-disintegrating copy of himself to tell in innkeep that he'll be arriving shortly, wears objectively too many rings, yet still manages to be effective and intimidating by being evil through his own ridiculousness.
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* EvilIsCool: Thavian is constantly shown with tremendous powers, an eccentric personality and can snap on a whim. He can make anything out of smoke or gases. He's a KnifeNut, and can even ''burn himself to dust in the middle in a goddamn fireplace,'' eyes melting and all, and emerge from the chimney is a trail of smoke [[EvilLaugh laughing maniacally.]]
* EvilMinions:[[OurOrcsAreDifferent The Stonewights]]
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** Additionally, when Cinder sees a Shift for the first time, it is while [[spoiler: she, Orym and Azoc are in the middle of a forest that is in the process of turning into a mountain.
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** Additionally, when Cinder sees a Shift for the first time, it is while [[spoiler: she, Orym and Azoc are in the middle of a forest that is in the process of turning into a mountain. mountain]].
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* WickedStepmother: Phira treats Cinder and Azoc like workers and threatens to kill Cinder after Benn is abducted.
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* WickedStepmother: Phira treats Cinder and Azoc like workers and threatens to kill Cinder after Benn is abducted.abducted.
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* CoolSword: Cinder gets a blade that's made out of enchanted ice that can freeze people. She's also nicknamed Orym's sword the giant's dagger.
* ElementalPowers: Everything in the Ever-Changing Land has some level of control over the element that they are. Even Cinder has the ability to control wood.
* ElementalPowers: Everything in the Ever-Changing Land has some level of control over the element that they are. Even Cinder has the ability to control wood.
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* CoolSword: Cinder gets a blade that's made out of enchanted ice that can freeze people. She's also nicknamed Orym's
**Orym has his own sword that has a red-eyed wolf at thegiant's dagger.
pommel. When Cinder first saw it, she thinks its looking at her, and when Orym begins to use it, she thinks its alive.
* ElementalPowers: Everything in the Ever-Changing Land has some level of control over the element that they are. EvenCinder Cinder, who is only a quarter Woodenwight (her mother being a Nymph--a combination of human and Woodenwight) has the ability to control wood.
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* ElementalPowers: Everything in the Ever-Changing Land has some level of control over the element that they are. Even
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* ICallItVera: It is revealed in the longest CrypticConversation to date in the series, that Orym named his wolfsword Sharpwand because he wasn't very good with names.
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* OhCrap: Cinder, multiple times throughout the story. Most notably when she's whining about having to go into the Ever-Changing Land, and is interrupted by the Traveling Dark knocking on her front door.
** Additionally, when Cinder sees a Shift for the first time, it is while [[spoiler: she, Orym and Azoc are in the middle of a forest that is in the process of turning into a mountain.
** Additionally, when Cinder sees a Shift for the first time, it is while [[spoiler: she, Orym and Azoc are in the middle of a forest that is in the process of turning into a mountain.
