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Marie Corelli was a Christian mystic/spiritualist and the author of many other Victorian fantasy-romances including ''Literature/ARomanceOfTwoWorlds''. Her stories often had strong [[AnAesop Aesops]] about the hypocrisy of society, unfairness towards women, and cold rationality without compassion or spirituality. She believed in universal health care and women's right to vote. She wrote of drug addiction in ''Wormwood'', illegitimacy in ''Innocent'' and adapted the Theatre/{{Faust}} legend in ''The Sorrows of Satan'', which was made into a film. She was a friend of Creator/{{Ouida}}.

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Marie Corelli was a Christian mystic/spiritualist and the author of many other Victorian fantasy-romances including ''Literature/ARomanceOfTwoWorlds''. Her stories often had strong [[AnAesop Aesops]] about the hypocrisy of society, unfairness towards women, and cold rationality without compassion or spirituality. She believed in universal health care and women's right to vote. She wrote of drug addiction in ''Wormwood'', illegitimacy in ''Innocent'' ''Innocent'', child suicide in ''The Mighty Atom'', internal combustion engines in ''The Devil's Motor''[[note]]this didn't stop her from buying a Daimler[[/note]], the benefits of atomic energy in ''The Secret Power'', and adapted the Theatre/{{Faust}} legend in ''The Sorrows of Satan'', which was made into a film. She was a friend of Creator/{{Ouida}}.
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* MarySuetopia: Al-Kyris is a place where poets are very highly regarded members of society, although Sah-luma is considered ''the'' poet, kind of the Prince of Poets.
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* BeautyEqualsGoodness: Averted, powerfully, with Lysia. And while Sah-luma is a good guy, he's also a spoiled, selfish brat who is blind to Lysia's evil and thus contributes to the downfall of Al-Kyris. He also doesn't see his true love (and possible twin flame, although Corelli only hints at this) when she's right in front of his nose, because she's just a shy servant girl.


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* MarySuetopia: Al-Kyris is a place where poets are very highly regarded members of society, although Sah-luma is considered ''the'' poet, kind of the Prince of Poets.
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* TakeThatCritics: In ''spades''. Al-Kyris even has a professional Critic whose job is to snark at Sah-luma's work, call it maudlin, sentimental and so forth -- in short, all the charges that had been leveled at Corelli's own work.

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* TakeThatCritics: In ''spades''. Al-Kyris even has a professional Critic StrawCritic whose job is to snark at Sah-luma's work, call it maudlin, sentimental and so forth -- in short, all the charges that had been leveled at Corelli's own work.
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* TakeThatCritics: In ''spades''. Al-Kyris even has a professional Critic whose job is to snark at Sah-luma's work, call it maudlin, sentimental and so forth -- in short, all the charges that had been leveled at Corelli's own work.
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Marie Corelli was a Christian mystic/spiritualist and the author of many other Victorian fantasy-romances. Her stories often had strong [[AnAesop Aesops]] about the hypocrisy of society, unfairness towards women, and cold rationality without compassion or spirituality. She believed in universal health care and women's right to vote. She wrote of drug addiction in ''Wormwood'', illegitimacy in ''Innocent'' and adapted the Theatre/{{Faust}} legend in ''The Sorrows of Satan'', which was made into a film. She was a friend of Creator/{{Ouida}}.

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Marie Corelli was a Christian mystic/spiritualist and the author of many other Victorian fantasy-romances.fantasy-romances including ''Literature/ARomanceOfTwoWorlds''. Her stories often had strong [[AnAesop Aesops]] about the hypocrisy of society, unfairness towards women, and cold rationality without compassion or spirituality. She believed in universal health care and women's right to vote. She wrote of drug addiction in ''Wormwood'', illegitimacy in ''Innocent'' and adapted the Theatre/{{Faust}} legend in ''The Sorrows of Satan'', which was made into a film. She was a friend of Creator/{{Ouida}}.
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Marie Corelli was the author of ''Literature/ARomanceOfTwoWorlds'' and many other Victorian fantasy-romances. Her stories often had strong [[AnAesop Aesops]] about the hypocrisy of society, unfairness towards women, and cold rationality without compassion or spirituality. She believed in universal health care and women's right to vote. She wrote of drug addiction in ''Wormwood'', illegitimacy in ''Innocent'' and adapted the Theatre/{{Faust}} legend in ''The Sorrows of Satan'', which was made into a film.

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Marie Corelli was a Christian mystic/spiritualist and the author of ''Literature/ARomanceOfTwoWorlds'' and many other Victorian fantasy-romances. Her stories often had strong [[AnAesop Aesops]] about the hypocrisy of society, unfairness towards women, and cold rationality without compassion or spirituality. She believed in universal health care and women's right to vote. She wrote of drug addiction in ''Wormwood'', illegitimacy in ''Innocent'' and adapted the Theatre/{{Faust}} legend in ''The Sorrows of Satan'', which was made into a film. \n She was a friend of Creator/{{Ouida}}.
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Marie Corelli was the author of ''Literature/ARomanceOfTwoWorlds'' and many other Victorian fantasy-romances. Her stories often had strong [[AnAesop Aesops]] about the hypocrisy of society, unfairness towards women, and cold rationality without compassion or spirituality. She believed in universal health care and women's right to vote. She wrote of drug addiction in ''Wormwood'', illegitimacy in ''Innocent'' and adapted the Theatre/{{Faust}} legend in ''The Sorrows of Satan'', which was made into a film.
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* CelebrityIsOverrated: Theos wants to be remembered, but after his Al-Kyris experience he learns that fame is worthless and only love matters [[spoiler:besides the fact that half the stuff he wrote, he didn't really write]]. As superficial socialites and gossip columnists invite him to their parties he accepts so he can try to talk them into understanding his new perspective. Good luck, T.A.

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* CelebrityIsOverrated: Theos wants to be remembered, but after his Al-Kyris experience he learns that fame is worthless and only love matters [[spoiler:besides the fact that half the stuff he wrote, he didn't really write]].write -- or he did, but he was Sah-luma when he wrote it]]. As superficial socialites and gossip columnists invite him to their parties he accepts so he can try to talk them into understanding his new perspective. Good luck, T.A.
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* BoltOfDivineRetribution: The scene in which the city's gigantic central obelisk spontaneously crashes to the ground is still horrifying to read. There's another when an earthquake destroys the Temple of the Snake God.

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* BoltOfDivineRetribution: The scene in which the city's gigantic central obelisk spontaneously crashes to the ground is still horrifying to read. There's another when an earthquake destroys the Temple of the Snake God.Goddess and then the entire city (possibly the whole continent, if this is meant to be {{Atlantis}}).



* CrystalSpiresAndTogas: Al-Kyris is all about this. There are hints that it is the capitol of Atlantis.

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* CrystalSpiresAndTogas: Al-Kyris is all about this. There are hints that it is the capitol of Atlantis.{{Atlantis}}.



* FantasticReligiousWeirdness: The temple and ceremonies for the snake god Nagaya are described in momentous detail.

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* FantasticReligiousWeirdness: The temple and ceremonies for the snake god goddess Nagaya are described in momentous detail.
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[[http://www.victorianweb.org/authors/corelli/index.html Marie Corelli]]'s ''Ardath'' is a Victorian fantasy about Theos Alwyn, a Creator/LordByron {{Expy}} with WritersBlock. At a mysterious [[ShangriLa monastery]] he seeks help from the master Heliobas, whom he's been told can induce AstralProjection in willing subjects. When Heliobas refuses to do this, Theos exerts his own considerable PsychicPowers (which he's unaware he has) and puts himself into this state. Upon waking he writes a new poem, ''Nourhalma'', and says he has met an angelic woman, Edris, who asks him to meet her at "Ardath"[[note]]An open field close to Babylon, in the [[Literature/TheBible Apocryphal Book of Esdras]].[[/note]]. He feels he's known and loved her since before the beginning, but once he gets there she ascends to heaven before his eyes. Bereft, he passes out in the middle of the field, and this is where the story really starts.

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[[http://www.victorianweb.org/authors/corelli/index.html Marie Corelli]]'s ''Ardath'' (1889) is a Victorian fantasy about Theos Alwyn, a Creator/LordByron {{Expy}} with WritersBlock. At a mysterious [[ShangriLa monastery]] he seeks help from the master Heliobas, whom he's been told can induce AstralProjection in willing subjects. When Heliobas refuses to do this, Theos exerts his own considerable PsychicPowers (which he's unaware he has) and puts himself into this state. Upon waking he writes a new poem, ''Nourhalma'', and says he has met an angelic woman, Edris, who asks him to meet her at "Ardath"[[note]]An open field close to Babylon, in the [[Literature/TheBible Apocryphal Book of Esdras]].[[/note]]. He feels he's known and loved her since before the beginning, but once he gets there she ascends to heaven before his eyes. Bereft, he passes out in the middle of the field, and this is where the story really starts.
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* ArcWords: ''"Kyrie eleison! Kyrie eleison!"'' Theos knows when he hears this hymn that he is in the modern world, but in a sacred place. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KDJtBh3LGJg Here's how he might have heard it at Heliobas' monastery]], and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J-S3cW8ltJI what he might have heard at the cathedral]] near Ardath.
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* HaveAGayOldTime: The door to Lysia's banquet hall looks like a solid wall. Theos is wondering how they'll proceed past the "huge erection". Lysia, we've been told, is an unbelievably beautiful woman who inspires desperate lust in every man she gazes upon. Draw your own conclusions as to whether Corelli was having a little fun there. (Hint: She was a huge fan of [[CountryMatters Shakespeare]].)

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* HaveAGayOldTime: The door to Lysia's banquet hall looks like a solid wall. Theos is wondering how they'll proceed past the "huge erection". Lysia, we've been told, is an unbelievably beautiful woman who inspires desperate lust in every man she gazes upon. Draw your own conclusions as to whether Corelli was [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar having a little fun there.there]]. (Hint: She was a huge fan of [[CountryMatters Shakespeare]].)

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* HappilyEverAfter: For real in the last chapter, although YMMV, possibly an EsotericHappyEnding since they're most likely a ChastityCouple.



* IWillWaitForYou: Edris will sit in heaven and wait for Theos to do whatever it takes to become worthy of her. After all, she's "God's Maiden".



* RageAgainstTheHeavens: Theos is ''really'' good at this.

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* RageAgainstTheHeavens: Theos is ''really'' good at this.this, bordering on SmiteMeOMightySmiter, especially in the opening chapters.


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** Edris is the one who really has this, since she's "God's Maiden" and seems to remain so after she joins with Theos.
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* EngagementChallenge: Theos loves Edris, but has to undergo a huge amount of CharacterDevelopment to prove himself worthy to be her mate. After a few episodes of this, he expects her to vanish while he goes and [[AnAesop learns another valuable lesson]]; when she shows up in the church at the end he takes one look and says "What do I have to do this time?"
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Marie Corelli's ''Ardath'' is a Victorian fantasy about Theos Alwyn, a Creator/LordByron {{Expy}} with WritersBlock. At a mysterious [[ShangriLa monastery]] he seeks help from the master Heliobas, whom he's been told can induce AstralProjection in willing subjects. When Heliobas refuses to do this, Theos exerts his own considerable PsychicPowers (which he's unaware he has) and puts himself into this state. Upon waking he writes a new poem, ''Nourhalma'', and says he has met an angelic woman, Edris, who asks him to meet her at "Ardath"[[note]]An open field close to Babylon, in the [[Literature/TheBible Apocryphal Book of Esdras]].[[/note]]. He feels he's known and loved her since before the beginning, but once he gets there she ascends to heaven before his eyes. Bereft, he passes out in the middle of the field, and this is where the story really starts.

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[[http://www.victorianweb.org/authors/corelli/index.html Marie Corelli's Corelli]]'s ''Ardath'' is a Victorian fantasy about Theos Alwyn, a Creator/LordByron {{Expy}} with WritersBlock. At a mysterious [[ShangriLa monastery]] he seeks help from the master Heliobas, whom he's been told can induce AstralProjection in willing subjects. When Heliobas refuses to do this, Theos exerts his own considerable PsychicPowers (which he's unaware he has) and puts himself into this state. Upon waking he writes a new poem, ''Nourhalma'', and says he has met an angelic woman, Edris, who asks him to meet her at "Ardath"[[note]]An open field close to Babylon, in the [[Literature/TheBible Apocryphal Book of Esdras]].[[/note]]. He feels he's known and loved her since before the beginning, but once he gets there she ascends to heaven before his eyes. Bereft, he passes out in the middle of the field, and this is where the story really starts.
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* MoneyDearBoy: Theos has never written for money, to the amusement of his friend Frank Villiers.

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Marie Corelli's ''Ardath'' is a Victorian fantasy about Theos Alwyn, a Creator/LordByron {{Expy}} with WritersBlock. At a mysterious [[ShangriLa monastery]] he seeks help from the master Heliobas, whom he's been told can induce AstralProjection in willing subjects. When Heliobas refuses to do this, Theos exerts his own considerable PsychicPowers (which he's unaware he has) and puts himself into this state. His experience not only gives him a new poem, ''Nourhalma'', but leads him to a field called Ardath, where he meets Edris, an angelic woman. He feels he's known and loved her since before the beginning, but she ascends to heaven before his eyes. Bereft, he passes out in the middle of the field, and this is where the story really starts.

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Marie Corelli's ''Ardath'' is a Victorian fantasy about Theos Alwyn, a Creator/LordByron {{Expy}} with WritersBlock. At a mysterious [[ShangriLa monastery]] he seeks help from the master Heliobas, whom he's been told can induce AstralProjection in willing subjects. When Heliobas refuses to do this, Theos exerts his own considerable PsychicPowers (which he's unaware he has) and puts himself into this state. His experience not only gives him Upon waking he writes a new poem, ''Nourhalma'', but leads him to a field called Ardath, where and says he meets Edris, has met an angelic woman. woman, Edris, who asks him to meet her at "Ardath"[[note]]An open field close to Babylon, in the [[Literature/TheBible Apocryphal Book of Esdras]].[[/note]]. He feels he's known and loved her since before the beginning, but once he gets there she ascends to heaven before his eyes. Bereft, he passes out in the middle of the field, and this is where the story really starts.



Upon awaking, Edris is there and assures him it wasn't AllJustADream -- but then she vanishes again, so he returns to London. ''Nourhalma'' is a huge hit, but he experiences SoWhatDoWeDoNow and constantly compares what he's learned and experienced in Al-Kyris with modern life in London. He goes wandering through Europe, comes to believe in Christ -- though not in Christianity as we know it -- and eventually finds Edris again.

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Upon awaking, Edris is there back and assures him it wasn't AllJustADream -- but then she vanishes again, so he returns to London. ''Nourhalma'' is a huge hit, but he experiences SoWhatDoWeDoNow and constantly compares what he's learned and experienced in Al-Kyris with modern life in London. He goes wandering through Europe, comes to believe in Christ -- though not in Christianity as we know it -- and eventually finds Edris again.



* CelebrityIsOverrated: Theos wants to be remembered, but after his Al-Kyris experience he learns that fame is worthless and only love matters [[spoiler:besides the fact that half the stuff he wrote, he didn't really write]]. As superficial socialites invite him to their parties he accepts so he can try to talk them into understanding it. Good luck, T.A.

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* CelebrityIsOverrated: Theos wants to be remembered, but after his Al-Kyris experience he learns that fame is worthless and only love matters [[spoiler:besides the fact that half the stuff he wrote, he didn't really write]]. As superficial socialites and gossip columnists invite him to their parties he accepts so he can try to talk them into understanding it.his new perspective. Good luck, T.A.



* CrystalSpiresAndTogas: Al-Kyris is all about this. There are hints that it is the capitol of Atlantis.



* DeadpanSnarker: Heliobas. He goes into SarcasmMode often, as he did in ''A Romance of Two Worlds''. Theos is pretty good at this too, and one of Sah-luma's maidens, Irenya, uses sarcasm to disguise that she likes him.



* FantasticReligiousWeirdness: The temple and ceremonies for the snake god Nagaya are described in momentous detail.



* ItSucksToBeTheChosenOne: The prophet Khosrul. He has seen a vision of God taking the form of an ordinary man who preaches love and sanctifies humanity, is persecuted and crucified, but rises from the dead. This will happen about 5000 years from the time he saw it.[[note]]As Corelli points out, many early civilizations really had a prophecy of God being born as a world-redeeming child.[[/note]] For this and other prophecies, Khosrul is condemned to death.
** When Theos shouts that this already happened over 1800 years ago (it did, from his perspective), Sah-luma smooths it over as a BigLippedAlligatorMoment.



* MyGirlIsNotASlut: Sah-luma is in love with Lysia, and hopes to marry her. Snake priestesses are supposed to be maidens, but Lysia betrayed that vow long ago. Despite massive evidence to the contrary, he believes she's as pure as the driven snow.



* ReligionIsRight: Christianity really isn't stupid after all! At least in Corelli's more spiritualized version.
* ItSucksToBeTheChosenOne: The prophet Khosrul. He has seen a vision of God taking the form of an ordinary man who preaches love and sanctifies humanity, is persecuted and crucified, but rises from the dead. This will happen about 5000 years from the time he saw it.[[note]]As Corelli points out, many early civilizations really had a prophecy of God being born as a world-redeeming child.[[/note]] For this and other prophecies, Khosrul is condemned to death.
** When Theos shouts that this already happened over 1800 years ago (it did, from his perspective), Sah-luma smooths it over as a BigLippedAlligatorMoment.

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* ReligionIsRight: Christianity really isn't stupid after all! At least in Corelli's more spiritualized version.
* ItSucksToBeTheChosenOne: The prophet Khosrul. He has seen a vision of God taking the form of an ordinary man who preaches love and sanctifies humanity, is persecuted and crucified, but rises from the dead. This will happen about 5000 years from the time he saw it.[[note]]As Corelli points out, many early civilizations really had a prophecy of God being born as a world-redeeming child.[[/note]] For this and other prophecies, Khosrul is condemned to death.
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version. Theos shouts insists that this already happened over 1800 years ago (it did, from his perspective), Sah-luma smooths it over no church has real Christianity and he denounces St. Paul as a BigLippedAlligatorMoment.muddling Jesus' message with confusion and discord.



* SceneryPorn: Corelli is at her best with her lush descriptions of wild storms over stern forbidding mountains, peaceful gardens and exquisite palaces and shrines. Like all her writing, it's extremely cinematic.



* VisionQuest: Theos is on one initially.

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* VisionQuest: Theos is on one initially.initially.
* WorldBuilding: Corelli outdid herself with Al-Kyris. Many chapters are filled with explanations of Kyrisian culture, education, dress, crafts and entertainment.
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* AndManGrewProud: Basically the whole point of the Al-Kyris part of the story.


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* BreakTheHaughty: What Theos learns on his visit to Al-Kyris is that he must "crucify SELF forever!"


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* CelebrityIsOverrated: Theos wants to be remembered, but after his Al-Kyris experience he learns that fame is worthless and only love matters [[spoiler:besides the fact that half the stuff he wrote, he didn't really write]]. As superficial socialites invite him to their parties he accepts so he can try to talk them into understanding it. Good luck, T.A.


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* DeadArtistsAreBetter: Part of the reason ''Nourhalma'' takes off like a rocket. Theos was briefly believed dead, so his poem was initially published as "a work of PERISHED GENIUS!" As soon as they find out he's alive, the newspapers pronounce the poem a trainwreck, making even more people buy it!


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* MoneyDearBoy: Theos has never written for money, to the amusement of his friend Frank Villiers.


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* SpoiledSweet: Sah-luma. A bit more on the spoiled side, which ends up costing him dearly.
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* 100AdorationRating: What Sah-luma has. He is not just respected and admired, but deeply loved by all. In fact, the Poet Laureate actually ranks equal or higher with the King.

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* 100AdorationRating: OneHundredPercentAdorationRating: What Sah-luma has. He is not just respected and admired, but deeply loved by all. In fact, the Poet Laureate actually ranks equal or higher with the King.
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** There's also the Servants of the Secret Doctrine of the Temple, who use [[LightningCanDoAnything electricity]] not only to create special effects for temple festivals, but for [[SinisterSurveillance]]. Lysia seems omniscient because she ''is''.

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** There's also the Servants of the Secret Doctrine of the Temple, who use [[LightningCanDoAnything electricity]] not only to create special effects for temple festivals, but for [[SinisterSurveillance]].SinisterSurveillance. Lysia seems omniscient because she ''is''.

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Upon awaking, he's sure it wasn't AllJustADream but since he still can't find Edris he returns to London. ''Nourhalma'' is a huge hit, but he experiences SoWhatDoWeDoNow and constantly compares what he's learned and experienced in Al-Kyris with modern life in London. He goes wandering through Europe, comes to believe in Christ -- though not in Christianity as we know it -- and eventually finds Edris again.

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Upon awaking, he's sure Edris is there and assures him it wasn't AllJustADream -- but since he still can't find Edris then she vanishes again, so he returns to London. ''Nourhalma'' is a huge hit, but he experiences SoWhatDoWeDoNow and constantly compares what he's learned and experienced in Al-Kyris with modern life in London. He goes wandering through Europe, comes to believe in Christ -- though not in Christianity as we know it -- and eventually finds Edris again.



* 100%AdorationRating: What Sah-luma has. He is not just respected and admired, but deeply loved by all. In fact, the Poet Laureate actually ranks equal or higher with the King.

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* 100%AdorationRating: 100AdorationRating: What Sah-luma has. He is not just respected and admired, but deeply loved by all. In fact, the Poet Laureate actually ranks equal or higher with the King.



* BoltOfDivineRetribution: The scene in which the city's gigantic central obelisk spontaneously crashes to the ground is still horrifying to read.

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* BoltOfDivineRetribution: The scene in which the city's gigantic central obelisk spontaneously crashes to the ground is still horrifying to read. There's another when an earthquake destroys the Temple of the Snake God.



* RageAgainstTheHeavens: Theos is good at this.

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* RageAgainstTheHeavens: Theos is ''really'' good at this.


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** There's also the Servants of the Secret Doctrine of the Temple, who use [[LightningCanDoAnything electricity]] not only to create special effects for temple festivals, but for [[SinisterSurveillance]]. Lysia seems omniscient because she ''is''.
* [[spoiler:SelfPlagiarism]]: Theos, unwittingly. Most of his poems, especially the most beautiful and well received [[spoiler: were originally written by Sah-luma]].
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* VirginPower: Traditionally, the High Priestess must be a maiden so she can have this. However, Lysia broke her VowOfChastity long ago and has had many lovers. The fact that she is now having it off with the King seals the doom of Al-Kyris.

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* 100%AdorationRating: What Sah-luma has. He is not just respected and admired, but deeply loved by all. In fact, the Poet Laureate actually ranks equal or higher with the King.



* ByronicHero: Theos Alwyn. Marie Corelli was fascinated with Lord Byron and a good friend of his widow Isabella. Knowing ol'George questioned God and Christianity (he was at best a Deist) Marie sought to redeem him on paper at least, figuring it would take an immensely dramatic experience to convert him.

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* BeliefMakesYouStupid: What Theos thinks at the outset because he's OutgrownSuchSillySuperstitions. He finds out that faith doesn't have to be like that.
* BoltOfDivineRetribution: The scene in which the city's gigantic central obelisk spontaneously crashes to the ground is still horrifying to read.
* ByronicHero: Theos Alwyn. Marie Corelli was fascinated with Lord Byron and a good friend of his widow Isabella. Knowing ol'George questioned God and Christianity (he was at best a Deist) Marie sought to redeem him on paper at least, figuring it would take an immensely dramatic experience to convert him.



* {{Seeker}}: Theos, although he doesn't realize it until he goes to Ardath.
* ItSucksToBeTheChosenOne: The prophet Khosrul. He has seen a vision of God taking the form of an ordinary man who preaches love and sanctifies humanity, is persecuted and crucified, but rises from the dead. This will happen about 5000 years from the time he saw it.[[note]]As Corelli points out, there really was a prophecy of God being born as a world-redeeming child in many early civilizations.[[/note]] For this and other prophecies, Khosrul is condemned to death.

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* {{Seeker}}: Theos, although he doesn't realize it until he goes to Ardath.
ReligionIsRight: Christianity really isn't stupid after all! At least in Corelli's more spiritualized version.
* ItSucksToBeTheChosenOne: The prophet Khosrul. He has seen a vision of God taking the form of an ordinary man who preaches love and sanctifies humanity, is persecuted and crucified, but rises from the dead. This will happen about 5000 years from the time he saw it.[[note]]As Corelli points out, there many early civilizations really was had a prophecy of God being born as a world-redeeming child in many early civilizations.child.[[/note]] For this and other prophecies, Khosrul is condemned to death.



* VirginSacrifice: What the snake goddess Nagaya demands as the price of her favor. Niphrata, the court musican whose unrequited love for Sah-luma has broken her heart, volunteers to be one.

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* RageAgainstTheHeavens: Theos is good at this.
* SecretCircleOfSecrets: The Mystic Brethren. A rare good version, they are aware of the corruption in Al-Kyris. Theos is overjoyed to see that they wear a cross emblem, even though it's just to show they believe Khosrul's prophecy.
* VirginSacrifice: What the snake goddess Nagaya demands as the price of her favor. Niphrata, the court musican whose unrequited love for Sah-luma has broken her heart, volunteers to be one.one.
* VisionQuest: Theos is on one initially.
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* SucksToBeTheChosenOne: The prophet Khosrul. He has seen a vision of God taking the form of an ordinary man who preaches love and sanctifies humanity, is persecuted and crucified, but rises from the dead. This will happen about 5000 years from the time he saw it.[[note]]As Corelli points out, there really was a prophecy of God being born as a world-redeeming child in many early civilizations.[[/note]] For this and other prophecies, Khosrul is condemned to death.

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* SucksToBeTheChosenOne: ItSucksToBeTheChosenOne: The prophet Khosrul. He has seen a vision of God taking the form of an ordinary man who preaches love and sanctifies humanity, is persecuted and crucified, but rises from the dead. This will happen about 5000 years from the time he saw it.[[note]]As Corelli points out, there really was a prophecy of God being born as a world-redeeming child in many early civilizations.[[/note]] For this and other prophecies, Khosrul is condemned to death.

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* {{Bromance}}: Bordering on HoYay between Theos and Sah-luma. They seem to fall in love on sight, and there's a good reason. [[spoiler: Theos is Sah-luma reincarnated. He has met himself.]]
* ChastityCouple: It's implied that Theos and Edris may be this, since the narrator says they have a "spiritual love" that "far exceeds material passion" and that Edris is "unclouded by any shadow of sin."
* HaveAGayOldTime: The door to Lysia's banquet hall looks like a solid wall. Theos is wondering how they'll proceed past the "huge erection". Lysia, we've been told, is an unbelievably beautiful woman who inspires desperate lust in every man she gazes upon. Draw your own conclusions as to whether Corelli was having a little fun there.

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* {{Bromance}}: Bordering on HoYay between Theos and Sah-luma. They seem to fall in love on sight, and there's a good reason. [[spoiler: Theos is Sah-luma reincarnated. He has The two have met himself.themselves in each other.]]
* ChastityCouple: It's implied that Theos and Edris may be this, since the narrator says they have a "spiritual love" that "far exceeds material passion" and that Edris is "unclouded by any shadow of sin."
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* DejaVu: Theos occasionally has the powerful impression that he's seen certain things and met certain people in Al-Kyris before. And so he has, since [[spoiler: he is the reincarnation of Sah-luma.]]
* HaveAGayOldTime: The door to Lysia's banquet hall looks like a solid wall. Theos is wondering how they'll proceed past the "huge erection". Lysia, we've been told, is an unbelievably beautiful woman who inspires desperate lust in every man she gazes upon. Draw your own conclusions as to whether Corelli was having a little fun there. (Hint: She was a huge fan of [[CountryMatters Shakespeare]].)



* {{Seeker}}: Theos, although he doesn't realize it until he goes to Ardath.

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* {{Seeker}}: Theos, although he doesn't realize it until he goes to Ardath.Ardath.
* SucksToBeTheChosenOne: The prophet Khosrul. He has seen a vision of God taking the form of an ordinary man who preaches love and sanctifies humanity, is persecuted and crucified, but rises from the dead. This will happen about 5000 years from the time he saw it.[[note]]As Corelli points out, there really was a prophecy of God being born as a world-redeeming child in many early civilizations.[[/note]] For this and other prophecies, Khosrul is condemned to death.
** When Theos shouts that this already happened over 1800 years ago (it did, from his perspective), Sah-luma smooths it over as a BigLippedAlligatorMoment.
* VirginSacrifice: What the snake goddess Nagaya demands as the price of her favor. Niphrata, the court musican whose unrequited love for Sah-luma has broken her heart, volunteers to be one.

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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Edris, although once Theos has seen the error of his ways she is re-embodied and he finds her as an ordinary mortal.



* ChastityCouple: It's implied that Theos and Edris may be this, since the narrator says they have a "spiritual love" that "far exceeds material passion" and that Edris is "unclouded by any shadow of sin."
* HaveAGayOldTime: The door to Lysia's banquet hall looks like a solid wall. Theos is wondering how they'll proceed past the "huge erection". Lysia, we've been told, is an unbelievably beautiful woman who inspires desperate lust in every man she gazes upon. Draw your own conclusions as to whether Corelli was having a little fun there.



* {{Seeker}}: Theos, although he doesn't realize it until he goes to Ardath.
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Marie Corelli's ''Ardath'' is a Victorian fantasy about Theos Alwyn, a Creator/LordByron {{Expy}} with WritersBlock. At a mysterious [[ShangriLa monastery]] he seeks help from the master Heliobas, whom he's been told can induce AstralProjection in willing subjects. When Heliobas refuses to do this, Theos exerts his own considerable PsychicPowers (which he's unaware he has) and puts himself into this state. His experience not only gives him a new poem, ''Nourhalma'', but leads him to a field called Ardath, where he meets Edris, an angelic woman. He feels he's known and loved her since before the beginning, but she ascends to heaven before his eyes. Bereft, he passes out in the middle of the field, and this is where the story really starts.

The majority of the novel is dedicated to a NestedStory in the form of an intensely detailed dream-vision. Theos finds himself in a beautiful city-state called Al-Kyris where poets are very respected. The poet laureate, Sah-luma, befriends him and invites him to share in the glories of Kyrisian high life. But all is not well in the great city, and Theos discovers corruption and betrayal even in the holiest places.

Upon awaking, he's sure it wasn't AllJustADream but since he still can't find Edris he returns to London. ''Nourhalma'' is a huge hit, but he experiences SoWhatDoWeDoNow and constantly compares what he's learned and experienced in Al-Kyris with modern life in London. He goes wandering through Europe, comes to believe in Christ -- though not in Christianity as we know it -- and eventually finds Edris again.

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* ByronicHero: Theos Alwyn. Marie Corelli was fascinated with Lord Byron and a good friend of his widow Isabella. Knowing ol'George questioned God and Christianity (he was at best a Deist) Marie sought to redeem him on paper at least, figuring it would take an immensely dramatic experience to convert him.
* {{Bromance}}: Bordering on HoYay between Theos and Sah-luma. They seem to fall in love on sight, and there's a good reason. [[spoiler: Theos is Sah-luma reincarnated. He has met himself.]]
* RecurringCharacter: Heliobas, who made his debut in ''Literature/ARomanceOfTwoWorlds'' as a holistic medical practitioner.
* {{Seeker}}: Theos, although he doesn't realize it until he goes to Ardath.
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