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*** [[PluckyMiddie Richard is stripped of everything he had in the original continuity.]] [[ThePowerOfLove He gets by now on his willingness to risk himself for other]], [[ImmuneToFate how high the odds against success are, and how horrible the consequences will be for him if he fails.]] [[ShellShockedVeteran Each time he does this]], [[EveryScarHasAStory he takes a physical and/or emotional injury.]]

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*** [[PluckyMiddie Richard is stripped of everything he ever had in the original continuity.]] [[ThePowerOfLove He gets by now on his willingness to risk himself for other]], [[ImmuneToFate how high the odds against success are, and how horrible the consequences will be for him if he fails.]] [[ShellShockedVeteran Each time he does this]], [[EveryScarHasAStory he takes a physical and/or emotional injury.]]
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*** [[PluckyMiddie Richard is stripped of everything he had in the original continuity.]] [[ThePowerOfLove He gets by now on his willingness to risk himself for other]], [[ImmuneToFate how high the odds against success are, and how horrible the consequences will be for him if he fails.]] [[ShellShockedVeteran Each time he does this, he takes a physical and/or emotional injury.]]

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*** [[PluckyMiddie Richard is stripped of everything he had in the original continuity.]] [[ThePowerOfLove He gets by now on his willingness to risk himself for other]], [[ImmuneToFate how high the odds against success are, and how horrible the consequences will be for him if he fails.]] [[ShellShockedVeteran Each time he does this, this]], [[EveryScarHasAStory he takes a physical and/or emotional injury.]]
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*** Martin is stripped of direct access to his fortune. His dad controls it instead.

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*** Martin is stripped of direct access to his fortune. His dad controls it instead.



*** BackStory: [[BadassNormal Dorothy]] is [[RockStar given]] [[CowGirl abilities]] [[EverythingIsBiggerInTexas based from]] [[DeepSouth hints]] [[ActionGirl provided]] by the original continuity. Of all the teens she's now also the only one who is willing to kill.

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*** BackStory: [[BadassNormal Dorothy]] is [[RockStar given]] [[CowGirl abilities]] [[EverythingIsBiggerInTexas based from]] [[DeepSouth hints]] [[ActionGirl provided]] by the original continuity. Of all the teens she's now also the only one who is willing to kill.
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*** BackStory: Dorothy is [[RockStar given]] [[CowGirl abilities]] [[EverythingIsBiggerInTexas based from]] [[DeepSouth hints]] [[ActionGirl provided]] by the original continuity.

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*** BackStory: Dorothy [[BadassNormal Dorothy]] is [[RockStar given]] [[CowGirl abilities]] [[EverythingIsBiggerInTexas based from]] [[DeepSouth hints]] [[ActionGirl provided]] by the original continuity.continuity. Of all the teens she's now also the only one who is willing to kill.
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*** BackStory: [[EverythingIsBiggerInTexas Dorothy is [[RockStar given]] abilities based from [[DeepSouth hints]] [[ActionGirl provided]] by the original continuity.

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*** BackStory: [[EverythingIsBiggerInTexas Dorothy is [[RockStar given]] abilities [[CowGirl abilities]] [[EverythingIsBiggerInTexas based from from]] [[DeepSouth hints]] [[ActionGirl provided]] by the original continuity.
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*** [[BackStory Dorothy is given abilities based from hints provided by the old continuity.]]

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*** [[BackStory BackStory: [[EverythingIsBiggerInTexas Dorothy is given [[RockStar given]] abilities based from hints provided [[DeepSouth hints]] [[ActionGirl provided]] by the old original continuity.]]
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*** [[PluckyMiddie Richard is completely stripped of everything he had in the original continuity.]] [[ImmuneToFate He gets by now on just how willing he is to risk himself for others, how high the odds against success are, and how horrible the consequences will be for him if he fails.]] [[ShellShockedVeteran Each time he does this, he pays a price.]]

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*** [[PluckyMiddie Richard is completely stripped of everything he had in the original continuity.]] [[ImmuneToFate [[ThePowerOfLove He gets by now on just how willing he is his willingness to risk himself for others, other]], [[ImmuneToFate how high the odds against success are, and how horrible the consequences will be for him if he fails.]] [[ShellShockedVeteran Each time he does this, he pays takes a price.physical and/or emotional injury.]]
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*** [[PluckyMiddie Richard is completely stripped of everything he had in the original continuity.]] [[ImmuneToFate He gets by now on just how willing he is to sacrifice himself for the benefit of others, how high the odds are, and how horrible the consequences will be for him if he fails.]]

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*** [[PluckyMiddie Richard is completely stripped of everything he had in the original continuity.]] [[ImmuneToFate He gets by now on just how willing he is to sacrifice risk himself for the benefit of others, how high the odds against success are, and how horrible the consequences will be for him if he fails.]] [[ShellShockedVeteran Each time he does this, he pays a price.]]
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*** [[PluckyMiddie Richard is completely stripped of everything he had in the original continuity.]] He gets by now on sheer force of personality.

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*** [[PluckyMiddie Richard is completely stripped of everything he had in the original continuity.]] [[ImmuneToFate He gets by now on sheer force just how willing he is to sacrifice himself for the benefit of personality.others, how high the odds are, and how horrible the consequences will be for him if he fails.]]
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** The MessChief: Richard gave his parole to his captor, [=DuQuesne=], in exchange for his promise to spare Margaret's and Martin's lives once he hijacks the ship. [=DuQuesne=] [[IGaveMyWord then restricts him to the galley.]] Demands official command of the galley from Margaret [[YouNeedToGetLaid as an alternative reward]] from her after playing [[FryingPanOfDoom the most important support role in retaking the ship]].

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** The MessChief: Richard gave his parole to his captor, [=DuQuesne=], in exchange for his promise to spare Margaret's and Martin's lives once he hijacks the ship. [=DuQuesne=] [[IGaveMyWord then restricts him to the galley.]] [[FieldPromotion Demands official command of the galley from Margaret Margaret]] [[YouNeedToGetLaid as an a face-saving alternative reward]] reward from her after playing her]] [[FryingPanOfDoom after playing the most important support role in retaking the ship]].

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*** Richard is completely stripped of everything he had in the original continuity.

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*** [[PluckyMiddie Richard is completely stripped of everything he had in the original continuity.]] He gets by now on sheer force of personality.



* TheCaptain: Margaret Spencer Crane, on the basis of a coin flip between herself and her husband done by her new father-in-law just before launch.
* TheScientist: [=DuQuesne=], after his protege' Margaret makes a deal with him so he can earn his freedom after losing his bid to hijack the ship. Also doubles as TheNavigator.
* TheEngineer: Martin Crane III, Margaret's husband. Also doubles as TheHeart.
* TheMarine: Dorothy, although she's actually a U.S. Deputy Marshal by direction of [[TheInvisiblePresident The President]] to recover the Alouette and either bring back or execute [=DuQuesne=]. Her only training is from childhood to kill predators of the four-legged kind to guard her father's ranch, but she was the only choice available. Earns the position by attacking [=DuQuesne=] by surprise and defeating him with Richard's help. [[GoodShepherd Doubles as The Chaplain.]]
* The MessChief: Richard gave his parole to his captor, [=DuQuesne=], in exchange for his promise to spare Margaret's and Martin's lives once he hijacks the ship. Demands official command of the galley from Margaret [[YouNeedToGetLaid as an alternative reward]] from her after playing [[FryingPanOfDoom the most important support role in retaking the ship]].

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TheCaptain: Margaret Spencer Crane, on the basis of a coin flip between herself and her husband done by her new father-in-law just before launch.
* ** TheScientist: [=DuQuesne=], after his protege' Margaret makes a deal with him so he can earn his freedom after losing his bid to hijack the ship. Also doubles as TheNavigator.
* ** TheEngineer: Martin Crane III, Margaret's husband. Also doubles as TheHeart.
* ** TheMarine: Dorothy, although she's actually a U.S. Deputy Marshal by direction of [[TheInvisiblePresident The President]] to recover the Alouette and either bring back or execute [=DuQuesne=]. Her only training is from childhood to kill predators of the four-legged kind to guard her father's ranch, but she was the only choice available. Earns the position by attacking [=DuQuesne=] by surprise and defeating him with Richard's help. [[GoodShepherd Doubles as The Chaplain.]]
* ** The MessChief: Richard gave his parole to his captor, [=DuQuesne=], in exchange for his promise to spare Margaret's and Martin's lives once he hijacks the ship. [=DuQuesne=] [[IGaveMyWord then restricts him to the galley.]] Demands official command of the galley from Margaret [[YouNeedToGetLaid as an alternative reward]] from her after playing [[FryingPanOfDoom the most important support role in retaking the ship]].
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*** [[BackStory Dorothy is given on based from hints provided by the old continuity.]]

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*** [[BackStory Dorothy is given on abilities based from hints provided by the old continuity.]]
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*** [[EverythingIsBiggerInTexas Dorothy is given a complete backstory based on hints provided by the old continuity.]]
*** [[WeCanRebuildHim Margaret is no longer a secretary in [=DuQuesne=]'s company.]] [[TeenGenius She's instead a graduate student in mathematics]] [[BrokenPedestal with him as her thesis adviser]] [[PunchClockVillain when he's not out working in the field.]] [[BrokenPedestal He also cared for her and trained her]] [[FosterKid when no-one else really wanted to.]]

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*** [[EverythingIsBiggerInTexas [[BackStory Dorothy is given a complete backstory on based on from hints provided by the old continuity.]]
*** [[WeCanRebuildHim [[BreakOutCharacter Margaret is no longer a secretary in [=DuQuesne=]'s company.]] [[TeenGenius She's instead a graduate student in mathematics]] [[BrokenPedestal with him as her thesis adviser]] [[PunchClockVillain when he's not out working in the field.]] [[BrokenPedestal He also cared for her and trained her]] [[FosterKid when no-one else really wanted to.]]
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** Depower: Greater challenge for the boys and greater urgency for them working together.

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** Depower: DePower: Greater challenge for the boys and greater urgency for them working to work together.



** BroughtToEleven: Greater ability for the girls and greater urgency for them working together.

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** BroughtToEleven: Greater ability for the girls and greater urgency for them working together.to contribute.



*** [[WeCanRebuildHim Margaret is no longer a secretary in [=DuQuesne=]'s company.]] [[TeenGenius She's instead a graduate student in mathematics]] [[PerkyFemaleMinion with him as her thesis adviser]] [[PunchClockVillain when he's not out working in the field.]] [[MadScientistsBeautifulDaughter He also provided her some care]] [[FosterKid where no-one else really wanted to.]]

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*** [[WeCanRebuildHim Margaret is no longer a secretary in [=DuQuesne=]'s company.]] [[TeenGenius She's instead a graduate student in mathematics]] [[PerkyFemaleMinion [[BrokenPedestal with him as her thesis adviser]] [[PunchClockVillain when he's not out working in the field.]] [[MadScientistsBeautifulDaughter [[BrokenPedestal He also provided cared for her some care]] and trained her]] [[FosterKid where when no-one else really wanted to.]]
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*** [[WeCanRebuildHim Margaret is no longer secretary for [=DuQuesne=]'s company. [[TeenGenius She's instead a graduate student in mathematics]] with him as her thesis adviser [[PunchClockVillain when he's not out working in the field.]] [[MadScientistsBeautifulDaughter He also provided her some care [[FosterKid where no-one else would.]]

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*** [[WeCanRebuildHim Margaret is no longer a secretary for in [=DuQuesne=]'s company. company.]] [[TeenGenius She's instead a graduate student in mathematics]] [[PerkyFemaleMinion with him as her thesis adviser adviser]] [[PunchClockVillain when he's not out working in the field.]] [[MadScientistsBeautifulDaughter He also provided her some care care]] [[FosterKid where no-one else would.really wanted to.]]

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* KidHero: [[[BoringInvincibleHero In the original 1930's continuity, Richard, Margaret, Martin, and Dorothy were all in their mid to late thirties.]] In this continuity they are a 16, 17, 18, and 19 year old TeenGenius respectively.
** Depower: Greater challenge for characters and greater urgency for them working togeter.

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* KidHero: [[[BoringInvincibleHero [[BoringInvincibleHero In the original 1930's continuity, Richard, Margaret, Martin, and Dorothy were all in their mid to late thirties.]] In this continuity they are a 16, 17, 18, and 19 year old TeenGenius respectively.
** Depower: Greater challenge for characters the boys and greater urgency for them working togeter.together.




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** BroughtToEleven: Greater ability for the girls and greater urgency for them working together.
*** [[EverythingIsBiggerInTexas Dorothy is given a complete backstory based on hints provided by the old continuity.]]
*** [[WeCanRebuildHim Margaret is no longer secretary for [=DuQuesne=]'s company. [[TeenGenius She's instead a graduate student in mathematics]] with him as her thesis adviser [[PunchClockVillain when he's not out working in the field.]] [[MadScientistsBeautifulDaughter He also provided her some care [[FosterKid where no-one else would.]]

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''The Skylark of Space'' was the first space opera series read in high school by Creator/AndrewJonathanFine while still attending high school during the 1970's. Fine had always been fascinated by the possibilities of how the story might have unfolded had it begun in the post-World-War-II era, with changes in the issues in culture and sensibilities that had taken place long since the Depression Era.

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''Alouette's Song'' is a self-published novel by [[Troper\the_eternal_squire]].


''The Skylark of Space'' was the first space opera series read in high school by Creator/AndrewJonathanFine the author while still attending high school during the 1970's. Fine The author had always been fascinated by the possibilities of how the story might have unfolded had it begun in the post-World-War-II era, with changes in the issues in culture and sensibilities that had taken place long since the Depression Era.



* KidHero: In the original 1930's continuity, Richard, Margaret, Martin, and Dorothy were all in their mid to late thirties. In this continuity they are a 16, 17, 18, and 19 year old TeenGenius respectively. WordOfGod says there are two reasons: First, each of the characters needed to become much less powerful to provide for greater challenge and greater urgency in working together; Second, the 1930's-style dialogue in that story sounds juvenile to modern ears. De-aging the main characters was the easiest solution, keeping them profoundly (but not superhumanly aside from Margaret, who is a narrowly-defined case) gifted for their age the best way to keep the team capable.

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* KidHero: [[[BoringInvincibleHero In the original 1930's continuity, Richard, Margaret, Martin, and Dorothy were all in their mid to late thirties. thirties.]] In this continuity they are a 16, 17, 18, and 19 year old TeenGenius respectively. WordOfGod says there are two reasons: First, each of the respectively.
** Depower: Greater challenge for
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*** Richard is completely stripped of everything he had in the original continuity.
*** Martin is stripped of direct access to his fortune. His dad controls it instead.

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Second, the 1930's-style dialogue in that story sounds juvenile to modern ears. De-aging the main characters was the easiest solution, keeping them profoundly (but not superhumanly aside from Margaret, who is a narrowly-defined case) gifted for their age the best way to keep the team capable.
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** CrowningMomentOfAwesome: As the younger died, he killed the older with a palm strike to the nose, tore the symbols of Overlordship off the older's next, and threw them to the Lady's feet. The lady set sail on the final ship. She was now a widow after only having known her wonderful young man for such a short time, who died before seeing his own son. But for Dunark the Martyr's sacrifice, Kondal would never have been established.

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** [[invoked]] CrowningMomentOfAwesome: As the younger died, he killed the older with a palm strike to the nose, tore the symbols of Overlordship off the older's next, and threw them to the Lady's feet. The lady set sail on the final ship. She was now a widow after only having known her wonderful young man for such a short time, who died before seeing his own son. But for Dunark the Martyr's sacrifice, Kondal would never have been established.

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* TearJerker: The story of Kondal's founding six thousand years ago. Had Lady Kondal of Mardonale not discovered monotheism, she would not have won the heart of young prince Dunark The Martyr, and not have founded a new nation with him.

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* [[invoked]] TearJerker: The story of Kondal's founding six thousand years ago. Had Lady Kondal of Mardonale not discovered monotheism, she would not have won the heart of young prince Dunark The Martyr, Martyr.
** DuelToTheDeath: When the old ruler of Mardonale died, it was traditional for his sons to duel each other for his title. Dunark the Martyr was the youngest brother still surviving after the eldest killed all the others.
** BadassNormal: Dunark the Martyr had finished studying at the feet of all the major philosophers of Mardonale, while his brothers were all hunting, raiding,
and wenching. [[IKnowKarate One of his teachers was a master of empty-handed combat.]]
** SeekingSanctuary: After finishing his education, at about Richard's age, Dunark the Martyr sought sanctuary with Lady Kondal, the Oracle of Fate and Mercy. There he learned the principles of monotheism she discovered, also known as the First Cause, and the principles of love directly from her.
** TheGreatEscape: Lady Kondal, being the Oracle of Fate, had access to many unseen things through the power of the First Cause. One was Dunark's heart. The other was the son Dunark the Martyr had placed inside her. They decided to take a a secret following the Lady had gathered across and escape across the sea. They found a secret cove and built ships.
** DelayingAction: The oldest brother discovered them and would exterminate the people and set fire to the ships, but his army would
not follows those orders until he first killed Dunark in a proper duel. As the challenged party, Dunark the Martyr chose bare hands. Both brothers met on the sand and began fighting. The visibly pregnant Lady gave the order for all ships to set sail and take to the sea. The oldest brother expected an easy fight, but the younger brother used his skills to delay and humiliate the older for as long as possible.
** DirtyCoward: The elder brother only cared about being the ruler, not about winning honorably. He had a picked archer shoot the younger in the chest.
** CrowningMomentOfAwesome: As the younger died, he killed the older with a palm strike to the nose, tore the symbols of Overlordship off the older's next, and threw them to the Lady's feet. The lady set sail on the final ship. She was now a widow after only having known her wonderful young man for such a short time, who died before seeing his own son. But for Dunark the Martyr's sacrifice, Kondal would never
have founded a new nation with him.been established.



* HoYay: [[spoiler: Martin believes Richard would be extremely attractive if he just lost 30 pounds...]]

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* AlphaCouple: Richard and Dorothy
* BetaCouple: Martin and Margaret



* TheMarine: Dorothy, although she's actually a U.S. Deputy Marshal by direction of [[TheInvisiblePresident The President]] to recover the Alouette and either bring back or execute [=DuQuesne=]. Her only training is from childhood to kill predators of the four-legged kind to guard her father's ranch, but she was the only choice available. Earns the position by attacking [=DuQuesne=] by surprise and defeating him with Richard's help.

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* TheMarine: Dorothy, although she's actually a U.S. Deputy Marshal by direction of [[TheInvisiblePresident The President]] to recover the Alouette and either bring back or execute [=DuQuesne=]. Her only training is from childhood to kill predators of the four-legged kind to guard her father's ranch, but she was the only choice available. Earns the position by attacking [=DuQuesne=] by surprise and defeating him with Richard's help. [[GoodShepherd Doubles as The Chaplain.]]

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''The Skylark of Space'' was the first space opera series read in high school by [[Creator/Andrew Jonathan Fine]] while still attending high school during the 1970's. Fine had always been fascinated by the possibilities of how the story might have unfolded had it begun in the post-World-War-II era, with changes in the issues in culture and sensibilities that had taken place long since the Depression Era.

Because ''The Skylark of Space'', the first novel of E. E. Smith's [[Literature/SkylarkSeries]] had fallen into the public domain by the time Fine finally had a comprehensive vision for a reboot in 2013, this actually is a legally non-infringing piece of literature. Some names are the same, but the motivations for the characters are completely different: see tropes below and character sheet for specifics.


!!Alouette's Song contains examples of:

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''The Skylark of Space'' was the first space opera series read in high school by [[Creator/Andrew Jonathan Fine]] Creator/AndrewJonathanFine while still attending high school during the 1970's. Fine had always been fascinated by the possibilities of how the story might have unfolded had it begun in the post-World-War-II era, with changes in the issues in culture and sensibilities that had taken place long since the Depression Era.

Because ''The Skylark of Space'', the first novel of E. E. Smith's [[Literature/SkylarkSeries]] Literature/SkylarkSeries had fallen into the public domain by the time Fine finally had a comprehensive vision for a reboot in 2013, this actually is a legally non-infringing piece of literature. Some names are the same, but the motivations for the characters are completely different: see tropes below and character sheet for specifics.


!!Alouette's Song
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* EvolutionaryLevels: The Kondalians of this continuity now ignorant of this and [=DuQuesne=] needs to explain to the ruler why [[RainMan Margaret]] was able to develop the math for interstellar travel in the first place. [[spoiler: He conjectures that the autism spectrum is actually a genetic mechanism responsible for accelerating the evolutionary development of human beings with enhanced visual thinking and spatial reasoning, but since nature is often cruel a great many children are left by the wayside. Only a lucky few actually win the GeneticJackpot of intelligence and creativity and still be even at most only slightly unaffected by behavioral problems. He explains Margaret is most likely one of a handful of the most intelligent children in her generation, and he's extremely proud of her. Even her parents had thrown her in the trash, but using her abilities, resolve, and honor she has managed to defeat him in opposing an [[HumansAreMonsters undeserving humanity's]] right to explore the stars.]]

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* EvolutionaryLevels: The Kondalians of this continuity now ignorant of this and [=DuQuesne=] needs to explain to the ruler why [[RainMan Margaret]] was able to develop the math for interstellar travel in the first place. Even her parents had left in her the trash, but using her abilities, resolve, and honor she managed to defeat him in opposing an [[HumansAreMonsters undeserving humanity's]] right to explore the stars. [[spoiler: He conjectures that the autism spectrum is actually a genetic mechanism responsible for accelerating the evolutionary development of human beings with for enhanced visual thinking and spatial reasoning, but since nature is often cruel a great many children are left by the wayside. Only a lucky few actually win the GeneticJackpot of intelligence and creativity and still be even at most only slightly unaffected by behavioral problems. He explains Margaret is most likely one of a handful of the most intelligent children in her generation, and he's extremely proud of her. Even her parents had thrown her in the trash, but using her abilities, resolve, and honor she has managed to defeat him in opposing an [[HumansAreMonsters undeserving humanity's]] right to explore the stars.]]]]
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* EvolutionaryLevels: The Kondalians of this continuity now ignorant of this and [=DuQuesne=] needs to explain to the ruler why [[RainMan Margaret]] was able to develop the math for interstellar travel in the first place. [[spoiler: He conjectures that the autism spectrum is actually a genetic mechanism responsible for accelerating the evolutionary development of human beings with enhanced visual thinking and spatial reasoning, but since nature is often cruel a great many children are left by the wayside. Only a lucky few actually win the GeneticJackpot of intelligence and creativity and still be even at most only slightly unaffected by behavioral problems. He explains Margaret is most likely one of a handful of the most intelligent children in her generation, and he's extremely proud of her. Even her parents had thrown her in the trash, but from her abilities, resolve, and honor she has won from him on behalf of an undeserving humanity the right to explore the stars.]]

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* EvolutionaryLevels: The Kondalians of this continuity now ignorant of this and [=DuQuesne=] needs to explain to the ruler why [[RainMan Margaret]] was able to develop the math for interstellar travel in the first place. [[spoiler: He conjectures that the autism spectrum is actually a genetic mechanism responsible for accelerating the evolutionary development of human beings with enhanced visual thinking and spatial reasoning, but since nature is often cruel a great many children are left by the wayside. Only a lucky few actually win the GeneticJackpot of intelligence and creativity and still be even at most only slightly unaffected by behavioral problems. He explains Margaret is most likely one of a handful of the most intelligent children in her generation, and he's extremely proud of her. Even her parents had thrown her in the trash, but from using her abilities, resolve, and honor she has won from managed to defeat him on behalf of in opposing an [[HumansAreMonsters undeserving humanity the humanity's]] right to explore the stars.]]
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* EvolutionaryLevels: The Kondalians of this continuity now ignorant of this and [=DuQuesne=] needs to explain to the ruler why [[RainMan Margaret]] was able to develop the math for interstellar travel in the first place. [[spoiler: He conjectures that the autism spectrum is actually a set of genes responsible for accelerating the evolution in visual thinking and spatial reasoning in human beings, but since nature is often cruel a great many children are left by the wayside. Only a lucky few win the GeneticJackpot of intelligence and creativity which it can offer.]]

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* EvolutionaryLevels: The Kondalians of this continuity now ignorant of this and [=DuQuesne=] needs to explain to the ruler why [[RainMan Margaret]] was able to develop the math for interstellar travel in the first place. [[spoiler: He conjectures that the autism spectrum is actually a set of genes genetic mechanism responsible for accelerating the evolution in evolutionary development of human beings with enhanced visual thinking and spatial reasoning in human beings, reasoning, but since nature is often cruel a great many children are left by the wayside. Only a lucky few actually win the GeneticJackpot of intelligence and creativity which it can offer.and still be even at most only slightly unaffected by behavioral problems. He explains Margaret is most likely one of a handful of the most intelligent children in her generation, and he's extremely proud of her. Even her parents had thrown her in the trash, but from her abilities, resolve, and honor she has won from him on behalf of an undeserving humanity the right to explore the stars.]]
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* EvolutionaryLevels: The Kondalians of this continuity now ignorant of this and [=DuQuesne=] needs to explain to the ruler why [[RainMan Margaret]] was able to develop the math for interstellar travel in the first place.

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* EvolutionaryLevels: The Kondalians of this continuity now ignorant of this and [=DuQuesne=] needs to explain to the ruler why [[RainMan Margaret]] was able to develop the math for interstellar travel in the first place. [[spoiler: He conjectures that the autism spectrum is actually a set of genes responsible for accelerating the evolution in visual thinking and spatial reasoning in human beings, but since nature is often cruel a great many children are left by the wayside. Only a lucky few win the GeneticJackpot of intelligence and creativity which it can offer.]]



* StatuesqueStunner: Not so statuesque but still an absolute stunner. Dorothy at 5 foot 8 inches and having a perfect hard-body from being a kosher range-hand makes her according to Word of God easily one of the most beautiful Terrans of her generation. [[spoiler: As a probable tell-tale that Martin is potentially bisexual rather than purely homosexual, Martin remarks if Dotty were walking in the middle of downtown wearing only a bikini she could cause cars to plow into fire hydrants]]

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* StatuesqueStunner: Not so statuesque but still an absolute stunner. Dorothy at 5 foot 8 inches and having a perfect hard-body from being a kosher range-hand [[spoiler: from her mother's kosher meat-packing business working under her father the rancher]] makes her according to Word of God easily one of the most beautiful Terrans of her generation.generation in the story's continuity. [[spoiler: As a probable tell-tale that Martin is potentially bisexual rather than purely homosexual, Martin remarks if Dotty were walking in the middle of downtown wearing only a bikini she could cause cars to plow into fire hydrants]]

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* CallARabbitASmeep: The term for horse manure sounds really different in Kondalian. Further, "First Cause" remains the Kondolian term equivalent term for God.

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"First Cause" remains from the original continuity the Kondolian term equivalent term for God.



* TearJerker: The story of Kondal's founding six thousand years ago by the Lady Kondal and Dunark the Martyr. It also contains within it the discovery of monotheism by the Lady Kondal, the impetus forall the events which unfolded since.

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* TearJerker: The story of Kondal's founding six thousand years ago by the ago. Had Lady Kondal and of Mardonale not discovered monotheism, she would not have won the heart of young prince Dunark the Martyr. It also contains within it the discovery of monotheism by the Lady Kondal, the impetus forall the events which unfolded since.The Martyr, and not have founded a new nation with him.
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* TheScientist: [=DuQuesne=], after his protege' Margaret makes a deal with him so he can earn his freedom after losing his bid to hijack the ship.
* TheEngineer: Martin Crane III, Margaret's husband.

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* TheScientist: [=DuQuesne=], after his protege' Margaret makes a deal with him so he can earn his freedom after losing his bid to hijack the ship.
ship. Also doubles as TheNavigator.
* TheEngineer: Martin Crane III, Margaret's husband. Also doubles as TheHeart.



* The MessChief: Richard gave his parole to his captor, [=DuQuesne=], in exchange for his promise to spare Margaret's and Martin's lives once he hijacks the ship. Demands official command of the galley from Margaret after playing [[FryingPanOfDoom the most important support role in retaking the ship.]]

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* The MessChief: Richard gave his parole to his captor, [=DuQuesne=], in exchange for his promise to spare Margaret's and Martin's lives once he hijacks the ship. Demands official command of the galley from Margaret [[YouNeedToGetLaid as an alternative reward]] from her after playing [[FryingPanOfDoom the most important support role in retaking the ship.]]ship]].



* TearJerker: The story of Kondal's founding six thousand years ago by the Lady Kondal and Dunark the Martyr. It also contains within it the discovery of monotheism.

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* TearJerker: The story of Kondal's founding six thousand years ago by the Lady Kondal and Dunark the Martyr. It also contains within it the discovery of monotheism.monotheism by the Lady Kondal, the impetus forall the events which unfolded since.
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* TheMarine: Dorothy, although she's actually a U.S. Deputy Marshal by direction of [[TheInvisiblePresident The President to recover the Alouette and either bring back or execute [=DuQuesne=]. Almost non-existent training aside from her father having her guard her ranch, but she was the only choice available. Earns the position by attacking [=DuQuesne=] by surprise and defeating him with Richard's help.

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* TheMarine: Dorothy, although she's actually a U.S. Deputy Marshal by direction of [[TheInvisiblePresident The President President]] to recover the Alouette and either bring back or execute [=DuQuesne=]. Almost non-existent Her only training aside is from her father having her childhood to kill predators of the four-legged kind to guard her father's ranch, but she was the only choice available. available. Earns the position by attacking [=DuQuesne=] by surprise and defeating him with Richard's help.
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* TheMarine: Dorothy, although she's actually a U.S. Deputy Marshal by direction of POTUS to recover the Alouette and either bring back or execute [=DuQuesne=]. Almost non-existent training aside from her father having her guard her ranch, but she was the only choice available. Earns the position by attacking [=DuQuesne=] by surprise and defeating him with Richard's help.

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* TheMarine: Dorothy, although she's actually a U.S. Deputy Marshal by direction of POTUS [[TheInvisiblePresident The President to recover the Alouette and either bring back or execute [=DuQuesne=]. Almost non-existent training aside from her father having her guard her ranch, but she was the only choice available. Earns the position by attacking [=DuQuesne=] by surprise and defeating him with Richard's help.
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* MessChief: Richard gave his parole to his captor, [=DuQuesne=], in exchange for him sparing Margaret's and Martin's lives once he hijacks the ship. Demands official command of the galley from Margaret after playing [[FryingPanOfDoom the most important support role in retaking the ship.]]

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* The MessChief: Richard gave his parole to his captor, [=DuQuesne=], in exchange for him sparing his promise to spare Margaret's and Martin's lives once he hijacks the ship. Demands official command of the galley from Margaret after playing [[FryingPanOfDoom the most important support role in retaking the ship.]]

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