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* LadyKillerInLove: Kanan will flirt with anyone or thing female, but upon just ''hearing'' Hera's voice he falls head over heels for her.
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* LadyKillerInLove: LadykillerInLove: Kanan will flirt with anyone or thing female, but upon just ''hearing'' Hera's voice he falls head over heels for her.
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''A New Dawn'' is a Franchise/StarWarsExpandedUniverse novel by John Jackson Miller (author of previous ''[[Franchise/StarWarsLegends Legends]]'' works including numerous comic books and ''[[Literature/StarWarsKenobi Kenobi]]''), and the first novel to be included as a part of Disney's ContinuityReboot of the ''Star Wars'' franchise. It serves as a prequel to ''[[WesternAnimation/StarWarsRebels Rebels]]''. Taking place six years before the show, it details how hotshot pilot Hera Syndulla and rogue Jedi Kanan Jarrus meet, leading to a small-scale uprising against the Empire on the DeathWorld Gorse when the Empire's efficiency expert Count Denetrius Vidian arrives for an inspection.
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''A New Dawn'' is a Franchise/StarWarsExpandedUniverse ''Franchise/StarWars'' [[Franchise/StarWarsExpandedUniverse Expanded Universe]] novel by John Jackson Miller (author of previous ''[[Franchise/StarWarsLegends Legends]]'' works including numerous comic books and ''[[Literature/StarWarsKenobi Kenobi]]''), and the first novel to be included as a part of Disney's ContinuityReboot of the ''Star Wars'' franchise. It serves as a prequel to ''[[WesternAnimation/StarWarsRebels Rebels]]''. Taking place six years before the show, it details how hotshot pilot Hera Syndulla and rogue Jedi Kanan Jarrus meet, leading to a small-scale uprising against the Empire on the DeathWorld Gorse when the Empire's efficiency expert Count Denetrius Vidian arrives for an inspection.
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* UncannyValley: Thanks to how his cybernetics are presented, Count Vidian comes off as this in-universe (we have yet to get official artwork to go along with this). He doesn't even seem remotely human anymore. He only has his face left, he doesn't move his mouth when he talk and instead speaks through a vocabulator attached to his throat. The most human thing he seems to ever do is breathe. As the story describes him from Kanan's perspective, he looks like "a war droid playing a human at a masquerade party" instead of a typical cyborg.
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* ChivalrousPervert: Kanan. There isn't a female he won't flirt with, including Zaluna and [[FoeYay Sloane]]; he even mentions that the rule the Jedi had about not forming romantic attachments is something he happily threw away, but he is still always willing to help anyone regardless of gender. His constant stating that he's only helping Hera because she's pretty isn't believed by anyone.
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* ChivalrousPervert: Kanan. There isn't a female he won't flirt with, including Zaluna and [[FoeYay Sloane]]; Sloane; he even mentions that the rule the Jedi had about not forming romantic attachments is something he happily threw away, but he is still always willing to help anyone regardless of gender. His constant stating that he's only helping Hera because she's pretty isn't believed by anyone.
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* SkewedPriorities: Sloane is ALighterShadeOfBlack, but that by no means makes her a heroic character, heeling save the day largely out of self-interest. After figuring out Vidian's plan, she notes
--> he would destroy Gorse's population in the process. And worse, we would ruin Sloane's career.
--> he would destroy Gorse's population in the process. And worse, we would ruin Sloane's career.
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** During a minor scene, Kanan gets asked to do something. He doesn't really feel like doing it, and says this:
** During a minor scene, Kanan gets asked to do something. He doesn't really feel like doing it, and says this:
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**CallForward: During a minor scene, Kanan gets asked to do something. He doesn't really feel like doing it, and says this:
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* ChivalrousPervert: Kanan, there isn't a female he wont flirt with, including Zaluna and [[FoeYay Sloane]]; he even mentions that the rule the Jedi had about not forming romantic attachments is something he happily threw away, but he is still always willing to help anyone regardless of gender. His constant stating that he's only helping Hera because she's pretty isn't believed by anyone.
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* ChivalrousPervert: Kanan, there Kanan. There isn't a female he wont won't flirt with, including Zaluna and [[FoeYay Sloane]]; he even mentions that the rule the Jedi had about not forming romantic attachments is something he happily threw away, but he is still always willing to help anyone regardless of gender. His constant stating that he's only helping Hera because she's pretty isn't believed by anyone.
