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-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Smile, darn ya, smile]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad You know this hole world is a great world after all]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Smile, darn ya, smile]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad And right away watch lady luck pay you a call]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Things are never black as they are painted]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Time for you and joy to get acquainted]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Make life worthwhile]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad You know this hole world is a great world after all]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Smile, darn ya, smile]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad And right away watch lady luck pay you a call]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Things are never black as they are painted]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Time for you and joy to get acquainted]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Make life worthwhile]]-]
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-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Smile, darn ya, smile]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMadsmile]]\\
[[WorldGoneMad You know this hole world is a great world afterall]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMadall]]\\
[[WorldGoneMad Smile, darn ya,smile]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMadsmile]]\\
[[WorldGoneMad And right away watch lady luck pay you acall]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMadcall]]\\
[[WorldGoneMad Things are never black as they arepainted]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMadpainted]]\\
[[WorldGoneMad Time for you and joy to getacquainted]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMadacquainted]]\\
[[WorldGoneMad Make life worthwhile]]-]
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[[WorldGoneMad You know this hole world is a great world after
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[[WorldGoneMad Smile, darn ya,
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[[WorldGoneMad Things are never black as they are
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The first paragraph on the unabridged version suggests this world is dangerous. Also, Denser And Wackier applies to a Tone Shift.
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A world where everyone and everything is [[DenserAndWackier dense and wacky]].
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A dangerous world where everyone and everything is [[DenserAndWackier dense and wacky]].wacky.
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A world where everyone and everything is DenserAndWackier.
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A world where everyone and everything is DenserAndWackier.[[DenserAndWackier dense and wacky]].
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A world where everyone and everything is DenserAndWackier.
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-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Smile, darn ya, smile]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad You know this hole world is a great world after all]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Smile, darn ya, smile]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad And right away watch lady luck pay you a call]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Things are never black as they are painted]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Time for you and joy to get acquainted]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Make life worthwhile]]-]
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-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Smile, darn ya, smile]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad You know this hole world is a great world after all]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Smile, darn ya, smile]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad And right away watch lady luck pay you a call]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Things are never black as they are painted]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Time for you and joy to get acquainted]]-]
-->[-[[WorldGoneMad Make life worthwhile]]-]
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