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That's too long to be a laconic.
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A clearly cowardly/inexperienced/selfish/promotion-seeking/unstable {{Jerkass}} military leader who treats his own troops as disposables, who loathe the leader intensely right back.
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A clearly cowardly/inexperienced/selfish/promotion-seeking/unstable military leader who treats their his own troops as disposables, who loathe them the leader intensely right back.
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An insane military leader who treats his own troops as disposables, who loathe him intensely right back.
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Laconics are hard to keep both short and accurate, but this is kinda misleading, since a leader could be unjustly hated
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A leader his own troops loathe intensely.
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A leader his whose own troops loathe him intensely.
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