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Conciseness (although I'm working on that myself)
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The BigBad's NumberTwo; often the penultimate challenge that TheHero must face before confronting the BigBad.
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The BigBad's NumberTwo; often the penultimate challenge that TheHero must face before confronting the BigBad.NumberTwo.
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-->[-If you wish to visit my master, the unabridged version, [[TheDragon HERE]], you will have to get through me first!-]
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-->[-If you wish to visit my master, the unabridged version, [[TheDragon HERE]], you will you'll have to get through me first!-]
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->[-Visit the unabridged version [[TheDragon HERE]].-]
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The BigBad's NumberTwo; often the penultimate challenge that TheHero must face before confronting the BigBad
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The BigBad's NumberTwo; often the penultimate challenge that TheHero must face before confronting the BigBadBigBad.
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[TheDragon HERE]].-]
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The penultimate challenge that TheHero must face before confronting the BigBad; usually the BigBad's NumberTwo.
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The BigBad's NumberTwo; often the penultimate challenge that TheHero must face before confronting the BigBad; usually the BigBad's NumberTwo.BigBad
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The penultimate challenge that TheHero must face before confronting the BigBad.
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The penultimate challenge that TheHero must face before confronting the BigBad.BigBad; usually the BigBad's NumberTwo.
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[TheDragon HERE]]-]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[TheDragon HERE]]-]HERE]].-]
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The main villain's second-in-command.
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The main villain's second-in-command.penultimate challenge that TheHero must face before confronting the BigBad.
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The BigBad's second-in-command.
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The BigBad's main villain's second-in-command.
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[Main/TheDragon HERE]].-]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[Main/TheDragon HERE]].-]
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The BigBad's right hand.
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The BigBad's right hand.second-in-command.
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[Main/TheDragon HERE]].-]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[Main/TheDragon HERE]].-]
