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I attempted making this more concise (which I'm also trying to work on with my writing) and link for Muscles Are Meaningless as that trope doesn't always apply here.
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A skinny character looks harmless and [[MusclesAreMeaningless is incredibly strong.]]
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A skinny weak-looking character looks harmless and [[MusclesAreMeaningless is incredibly who's actually strong.]]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[StrongerThanTheyLook HERE]] and pick up a car to scare off terrorists!!-]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[StrongerThanTheyLook HERE]] and pick up a car to scare off armed terrorists!!-]
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minor edit
Changed line(s) 3 (click to see context) from:
-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[StrongerThanYouLook HERE]] and pick up a car to scare off terrorists!!-]
to:
-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[StrongerThanYouLook [[StrongerThanTheyLook HERE]] and pick up a car to scare off terrorists!!-]
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creating a Laconic
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A skinny character looks harmless and [[MusclesAreMeaningless is incredibly strong.]]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[StrongerThanYouLook HERE]] and pick up a car to scare off terrorists!!-]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[StrongerThanYouLook HERE]] and pick up a car to scare off terrorists!!-]
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