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Renamed trope
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[CoitusEnsues HE]]--hey! Are those two doing it?-]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[CoitusEnsues [[SexStartsStoryStops HE]]--hey! Are those two doing it?-]
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This doesn't have to be a Big Lipped Alligator Moment and I added a detail from the main page. I also tried tweaking part of this.
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A sex scene that comes [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment completely out of nowhere.]]
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A sex scene that comes [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment completely out of nowhere.]]nowhere and stops the narrative.
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-->[-Visit the [[CoitusEnsues unabridged page]] he--hey! Are those two doing it?-]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[CoitusEnsues unabridged page]] he--hey! HE]]--hey! Are those two doing it?-]
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-->[-Visit the [[CoitusEnsues unabridged page]] he---hey! Are those two doing it?-]
to:
-->[-Visit the [[CoitusEnsues unabridged page]] he---hey! he--hey! Are those two doing it?-]
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Changed line(s) 3 (click to see context) from:
-->[-Visit the [[CoitusEnsues unabridged page]] he---hey! Are those two doing it?-]
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-->[-Visit the [[CoitusEnsues unabridged page]] he---hey! Are those two doing it?-]it?-]
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