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A character, furious because he lost, physically assaults his rival but things end worse for him.
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A character, furious because he they lost, physically assaults his their rival but things end worse for him.them.
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A character, furious because he lost, physically aaasults his rival but things end worse for him.
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A character, furious because he lost, physically aaasults assaults his rival but things end worse for him.
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A character, furious because he lost, physically aaasults his rival but things end worse for him.
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